| 33.33% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She glanced back [back]" | | 1 | "She stepped back [back]" | | 2 | "Isolde said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.529 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.167 | |
| 92.80% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1388 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 74.78% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1388 | | totalAiIsms | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "could feel" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "stomach" | | 3 | "velvet" | | 4 | "grave" | | 5 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 90 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 45 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1400 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 77.40% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 47 | | wordCount | 1102 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.45 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 1 | | Seer | 2 | | Rory | 16 | | London | 3 | | Isolde | 9 | | Nyx | 8 | | Hel | 1 | | Grove | 4 | | Shade | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Seer" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Grove" | | 5 | "Shade" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Hel" |
| | globalScore | 0.774 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like nothing from the road" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1400 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 37.84 | | std | 29.11 | | cv | 0.769 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 67 | | 1 | 3 | | 2 | 71 | | 3 | 68 | | 4 | 35 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 29 | | 7 | 32 | | 8 | 32 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 53 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 38 | | 14 | 117 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 95 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 47 | | 19 | 84 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 51 | | 22 | 38 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 99 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 62 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 30 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 50 | | 31 | 63 | | 32 | 31 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 37 | | 36 | 8 |
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| 91.23% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "get used" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "been opened" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 177 | | matches | | 0 | "weren't standing" | | 1 | "were passing" | | 2 | "was waiting" | | 3 | "was standing" | | 4 | "were pointing" | | 5 | "was pointing" | | 6 | "were not wilting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 90 | | ratio | 0.133 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, standing at the treeline in the blue hour after sunset, she could feel it in her teeth — a low hum, like a tuning fork pressed to bone." | | 1 | "Seven oaks stood in a rough ring ahead — except they weren't standing oaks, not really." | | 2 | "Rory touched the pendant at her throat — the deep crimson stone on its silver chain, warm as a held breath." | | 3 | "There was no other word for it — a sensation like walking through a curtain of warm water, and then the park was gone, and Rory was standing somewhere that had never heard of Richmond." | | 4 | "Not the moon — three, in different phases, arranged in a lazy arc like coins tossed onto velvet." | | 5 | "The air smelled of honey and cold stone and something underneath both, older — the smell of a cathedral, or a cellar, or a grave that had been opened politely." | | 6 | "Rory had seen the Shade do a lot of things — pour themselves through a keyhole, flatten into a stain on a wall, once hold a door shut by becoming the shadow beneath it." | | 7 | "That was the only way she could describe it — the trees at the clearing's edge weren't stationary, they leaned apart to make room, their branches knitting overhead into arches that hadn't been there a moment ago." | | 8 | "Birds repeated themselves; this didn't." | | 9 | "Their three shadows were pointing in three different directions now, and one of them — Rory was almost sure — was pointing at something in the trees." | | 10 | "Deeper in, the clearing narrowed into a path of pale flagstones worn smooth in the middle, the way church steps were worn, by feet — except there were no footprints on the soft earth anywhere, not even hers." | | 11 | "It was slender, leaf-shaped, and it shone with its own faint luminescence — moonsilver, catching the light of three moons and giving back a glow that belonged to none of them." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1094 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 42 | | adverbRatio | 0.038391224862888484 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007312614259597806 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 90 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 90 | | mean | 15.56 | | std | 11.29 | | cv | 0.726 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 39 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 35 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 45 | | 37 | 30 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 34 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 39 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 29 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 77.41% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.4777777777777778 | | totalSentences | 90 | | uniqueOpeners | 43 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere high above, something sang." | | 1 | "Then at the flowers, all" | | 2 | "Somewhere overhead, the singing stopped." |
| | ratio | 0.046 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "They had been once, centuries" | | 1 | "Their voice was its usual" | | 2 | "She looked at Isolde, who" | | 3 | "It had been warm since" | | 4 | "She stepped between two of" | | 5 | "It was deep violet, shading" | | 6 | "Their light came down silver" | | 7 | "She had never seen them" | | 8 | "It defined them." | | 9 | "She had already drifted ten" | | 10 | "Her voice came out hushed," | | 11 | "She glanced back, and there" | | 12 | "Their three shadows were pointing" | | 13 | "She looked back and saw" | | 14 | "Her mouth was dry" | | 15 | "It was slender, leaf-shaped, and" | | 16 | "She stepped back from the" | | 17 | "She reached out and closed" |
| | ratio | 0.277 | |
| 75.38% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 50 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones looked like" | | 1 | "Rory had passed Richmond Park" | | 2 | "The Seer moved ahead of" | | 3 | "That was the thing Rory" | | 4 | "Rory kept glancing down at" | | 5 | "They had been once, centuries" | | 6 | "The grain of the wood" | | 7 | "Their voice was its usual" | | 8 | "Rory didn't make it a" | | 9 | "Nyx's silhouette rippled at the" | | 10 | "That landed in her stomach" | | 11 | "She looked at Isolde, who" | | 12 | "A pale lavender eye settled" | | 13 | "Rory touched the pendant at" | | 14 | "It had been warm since" | | 15 | "She stepped between two of" | | 16 | "The world folded." | | 17 | "The sky above the Grove" | | 18 | "It was deep violet, shading" | | 19 | "Their light came down silver" |
| | ratio | 0.769 | |
| 76.92% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, standing at the treeline" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 27.03% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Their voice was its usual whisper, but it carried strangely here, as if the trees were passing it between them." | | 1 | "She looked at Isolde, who had stopped at the ring's edge and turned, silver hair drifting around her despite the stillness of the air." | | 2 | "Their light came down silver and faintly green, and it pooled in a clearing carpeted with wildflowers Rory had never seen bloom in her life: white ones that glo…" | | 3 | "The air smelled of honey and cold stone and something underneath both, older — the smell of a cathedral, or a cellar, or a grave that had been opened politely." | | 4 | "It was slender, leaf-shaped, and it shone with its own faint luminescence — moonsilver, catching the light of three moons and giving back a glow that belonged t…" | | 5 | "She reached out and closed her hand around the hilt, and the cold ran up her arm like a promise, and every flower in the Grove opened wider, all at once, as if …" |
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| 97.22% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 61.76% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Nyx repeated (repeat)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.353 | | leniency | 0.706 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.176 | |