Run: 2026-09-23-01M37PDF81PX9Y4D0EC1Q0726X

Run Details

Duration:
45.6s
Cost:
$0.015004
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain had turned Frith Street into a strip of broken neon, every puddle holding a piece of Soho's signage in pieces. Harlow Quinn stood beneath the awning of a shuttered bookshop, collar up, watching the green glow of the Raven's Nest three doors down. The sign buzzed and stuttered, and under it, a man in a bomber jacket ducked out into the weather. Tomás Herrera. Third night running. He turned south toward Charing Cross Road, head bent against the rain, one hand pressed to his chest as if keeping something under his jacket dry. Quinn counted to ten, then followed. She kept a half-street gap between them, matching his pace through the thinning theatre crowd, past the shuttered market stalls, past a pair of women sharing an umbrella the size of a satellite dish. Herrera walked like a man who knew he was being followed — too casual, checking reflections in darkened shopfronts, pausing at corners he didn't need to pause at. Eighteen years of this work had taught her the difference between a man lost in thought and a man running a counter-surveillance drill without breaking stride. At the corner of Old Compton Street, he broke. One second he was walking, the next he was sprinting, cutting across the wet road between two black cabs, one of which leaned on its horn long enough to cover the sound of his trainers slapping the pavement. "Herrera!" Quinn's shout vanished into the rain. She ran. He had the lighter frame and the head start, but she had the stride and the anger, and she'd learned long ago which of those mattered more on wet asphalt. He vaulted a delivery bike chained outside a kebab shop, sending it clattering into a bin. She hurdled the same bike without touching it and gained three paces on him for it. "Met Police!" she called out. "Stop!" He laughed. Actually laughed, breathless, over his shoulder, rain streaming off his curls. "You're a long way from your beat, Detective!" He knew her rank. He knew her. That landed somewhere under her ribs and stayed there, a cold little weight, as he cut left down an alley that stank of fryer grease and wet cardboard. She followed him over a waist-high gate, felt the leather of her watch strap catch and wrench her wrist, kept going. Behind her, someone yelled from a window. She didn't look. The alley spat them out onto a side street where a night bus groaned past, and Herrera threaded between its rear lights and the kerb so close the bus clipped his sleeve. Quinn went around, through a knot of club smokers who cursed and scattered, and by the time she cleared them he had half a street on her again. "Officer needs assistance, Soho, foot pursuit heading north—" She had her radio out, thumb on the button, when the static came back thick and wrong, a wet crackling that swallowed her own voice. She looked at the display. No signal. Full bars, no signal. That happened the night Morris died, too. She shoved the radio back on her belt and ran harder. The city changed under her feet. Soho's neon gave way to shuttered shopfronts, then to scaffolding shrouded in plastic that snapped and bellied in the wind. Somewhere in the last ten minutes she'd stopped recognising the streets, and the rain had thickened into a curtain that turned every light into a smear. Herrera was a dark shape ahead, and then a darker one, and then he was gone. Quinn slowed. No — she didn't slow, her body slowed, the street ending at a hoarding of chipboard and spray paint where he'd been standing a second before. She approached it with her hand near her sidearm and found the seam: a sheet of board cut loose at the bottom, hinged with gaffer tape, big enough for a man to crawl through. Big enough for her, if she didn't mind what was on the other side. She minded. She went anyway. The board swung shut behind her and the noise of the city dropped away like someone had pulled a plug. Below her stretched a stairwell, its railing rusted to lace, its steps slick with rain that ran down from somewhere above and pooled at the bottom around a tiled sign she could just make out in the light of Herrera's phone, bobbing far below. A station roundel, the enamel chipped to grey. The letters had worn away but the shape was unmistakable. An Underground station. A dead one. Camden had half a dozen of them, sealed off and forgotten, and she was standing at the top of one with her pulse hammering in her ears. Down the steps, the darkness swallowed Herrera's light, then gave it back at the bottom, where a shape detached itself from the wall. Big. Patient. A man built like a delivery van, holding an umbrella that did nothing because they were already underground. Herrera stopped in front of him. Quinn pressed herself against the cold tile of the stairwell wall, two flights up, and listened. "Bit late, Tomasito." The voice came up the stairs like smoke. "Market's half packed already." "Couldn't shake the weather. Or the company." Herrera glanced back up the stairs, straight at the patch of shadow where she stood, and she felt the look like a hand on the back of her neck. "Anything I should know?" "Full moon's Friday. You know where it goes next." Herrera said something quieter, and his hand came out of his jacket — and Quinn saw it, the small pale thing he'd been keeping dry all night. A token, bone-white, carved with something she couldn't read from this distance. The doorman took it, turned it over once, and stepped aside. The wall behind him didn't have a door in it. Then it did, and warm amber light spilled out of it onto the wet tiles, and there was music, faint and tinny, and the murmur of a crowd, and the smell of incense and hot solder and something sweet that had no business being underground. Herrera went through. The door closed. The wall was a wall again. The doorman stayed, arms folded, staring up the stairwell at her shadow. "Oi," he rumbled. "You lost, love?" Quinn didn't answer. Her hand had gone to her left wrist without her deciding anything, thumb finding the worn leather of the watch band, the cracked face, the hands stopped at 11:47 three years ago. She'd stopped winding it the morning after. She wore it the way other people wore scars. Morris had gone through a door like that. Not this one — a door like it, a place that shouldn't have been there, a case file that ended in a single line about an unexplained absence of evidence. She'd read that line so many times the words had come apart in her hands. Eighteen years of commendations, and the only case that mattered had a file number and nothing else. She thought about backup. The radio was dead weight on her hip. She thought about the doorman, who had shifted his weight now, unhurried, the way men do when they know you're not going anywhere. She thought about Herrera's laugh in the street, the ease of it, a man who'd been told exactly who was following him and hadn't bothered to run properly until it was convenient. Bait, some old instinct whispered. Trap, said another. And beneath both of those, quieter and more stubborn: the truth. That she could walk back up those stairs, back into the rain, back to a station and a cold desk and a file with a number on it — and spend the rest of her eighteen years reading that same line about the absence of evidence. Or she could walk down. The doorman tilted his head. "Last chance, love. Stairs only go one way after this." Quinn came off the wall and descended, her footsteps ringing off the tiles, and stopped an arm's length from him. The smell from behind the wall was stronger here, and under the sweetness there was something else — old stone, and rain, and the faint electric hum of a city that kept its second self hidden. "You know who I am," she said. It wasn't a question. The doorman's mouth moved under his beard. "Detective." He said it the way you'd say the word wasp. "Then you know I'm coming in." She pulled the watch strap tight, one sharp tug, and rolled her shoulders back. "One way suits me fine." He looked at her for a long moment, and something in his face shifted — not friendliness, but a kind of grudging arithmetic, like a man recalculating a price. Then he reached out and pressed his palm flat against the tiles, and the door was there again, amber light flooding the steps, the crowd noise swelling up around her like water. Quinn breathed once, deep, tasting incense and rain and old stone on the back of her throat. Then she stepped through.
created_at"2026-09-23T17:53:31.922Z" 9/23/2026, 5:53:31 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.529
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1508
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
76.79% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1508
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"streaming"
count1
1
word"weight"
count3
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"electric"
count1
highlights
0"streaming"
1"weight"
2"pulse"
3"footsteps"
4"electric"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences98
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"know"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences106
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1515
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount1437
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.77
worstName"Herrera"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Herrera"
discoveredNames
Frith1
Street2
Soho2
Quinn10
Raven1
Nest1
Herrera11
Charing1
Cross1
Road1
Old1
Compton1
Morris2
Underground1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Raven"
2"Herrera"
3"Morris"
places
0"Frith"
1"Street"
2"Soho"
3"Charing"
4"Cross"
5"Road"
6"Old"
7"Compton"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if keeping something under his jacket dry"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.66
wordCount1515
matches
0"not friendliness, but a kind of grudging arithmetic, like a man recalculating a pr"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences106
matches
0"read that line"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean37.88
std30.07
cv0.794
sampleLengths
064
15
232
388
49
538
69
762
86
921
1066
1160
1244
137
1411
1568
1676
175
18115
1943
2022
2115
2240
239
24105
2512
2612
276
2851
2970
3075
3162
3215
3356
3411
3518
3625
3761
3817
394
94.52% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences98
matches
0"being followed "
1"was gone"
2"been told"
85.55% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs233
matches
0"was walking"
1"was sprinting"
2"was standing"
3"was following"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences106
ratio0.066
matches
0"Herrera walked like a man who knew he was being followed — too casual, checking reflections in darkened shopfronts, pausing at corners he didn't need to pause at."
1"No — she didn't slow, her body slowed, the street ending at a hoarding of chipboard and spray paint where he'd been standing a second before."
2"Herrera said something quieter, and his hand came out of his jacket — and Quinn saw it, the small pale thing he'd been keeping dry all night."
3"Not this one — a door like it, a place that shouldn't have been there, a case file that ended in a single line about an unexplained absence of evidence."
4"That she could walk back up those stairs, back into the rain, back to a station and a cold desk and a file with a number on it — and spend the rest of her eighteen years reading that same line about the absence of evidence."
5"The smell from behind the wall was stronger here, and under the sweetness there was something else — old stone, and rain, and the faint electric hum of a city that kept its second self hidden."
6"He looked at her for a long moment, and something in his face shifted — not friendliness, but a kind of grudging arithmetic, like a man recalculating a price."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1434
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.028591352859135284
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.002789400278940028
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences106
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences106
mean14.29
std11.73
cv0.821
sampleLengths
022
123
219
32
43
526
66
734
828
926
109
1138
127
132
1430
1516
1616
175
181
192
2011
218
224
233
2428
2521
267
273
2832
2928
3033
315
322
334
347
3511
366
3720
3826
3916
402
4126
4234
4314
442
453
4620
4744
488
4910
63.21% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.42452830188679247
totalSentences106
uniqueOpeners45
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences88
matches
0"Actually laughed, breathless, over his"
1"Somewhere in the last ten"
2"Then it did, and warm"
3"Then he reached out and"
4"Then she stepped through."
ratio0.057
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences88
matches
0"He turned south toward Charing"
1"She kept a half-street gap"
2"He had the lighter frame"
3"He vaulted a delivery bike"
4"She hurdled the same bike"
5"she called out"
6"He knew her rank."
7"He knew her."
8"She followed him over a"
9"She didn't look."
10"She had her radio out,"
11"She looked at the display."
12"She shoved the radio back"
13"She approached it with her"
14"She went anyway."
15"Her hand had gone to"
16"She'd stopped winding it the"
17"She wore it the way"
18"She'd read that line so"
19"She thought about backup."
ratio0.295
67.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences88
matches
0"The rain had turned Frith"
1"Harlow Quinn stood beneath the"
2"The sign buzzed and stuttered,"
3"He turned south toward Charing"
4"Quinn counted to ten, then"
5"She kept a half-street gap"
6"Herrera walked like a man"
7"One second he was walking,"
8"Quinn's shout vanished into the"
9"He had the lighter frame"
10"He vaulted a delivery bike"
11"She hurdled the same bike"
12"she called out"
13"He knew her rank."
14"He knew her."
15"That landed somewhere under her"
16"She followed him over a"
17"She didn't look."
18"The alley spat them out"
19"Quinn went around, through a"
ratio0.784
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
26.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"He turned south toward Charing Cross Road, head bent against the rain, one hand pressed to his chest as if keeping something under his jacket dry."
1"Herrera walked like a man who knew he was being followed — too casual, checking reflections in darkened shopfronts, pausing at corners he didn't need to pause a…"
2"One second he was walking, the next he was sprinting, cutting across the wet road between two black cabs, one of which leaned on its horn long enough to cover t…"
3"Below her stretched a stairwell, its railing rusted to lace, its steps slick with rain that ran down from somewhere above and pooled at the bottom around a tile…"
4"Camden had half a dozen of them, sealed off and forgotten, and she was standing at the top of one with her pulse hammering in her ears."
5"Not this one — a door like it, a place that shouldn't have been there, a case file that ended in a single line about an unexplained absence of evidence."
6"She thought about Herrera's laugh in the street, the ease of it, a man who'd been told exactly who was following him and hadn't bothered to run properly until i…"
7"The smell from behind the wall was stronger here, and under the sweetness there was something else — old stone, and rain, and the faint electric hum of a city t…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.118
leniency0.235
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.5866%