Run: 2026-09-23-01M37PH473B126WTW1PCM0JT64

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
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Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

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The third deadbolt stuck, the way it always did, and I had to lean my hip into the door to force it. It gave with a crack. The door swung inward six inches before the chain caught, and through the gap I saw a charcoal lapel, a silver tie pin, and a hand wrapped round an ivory cane. I knew that hand. I knew the ring on the little finger, the pale line where he'd once caught a knife meant for my throat. "Non." Lucien's voice came low through the gap. "Don't close it. Please." I closed it. Or I meant to. His cane slid into the gap faster than I could move, the ivory handle wedged between door and frame. Behind me, Ptolemy thumped down from the bookshelf and trotted over to inspect the intruder, tail high, the traitor. "Six weeks," I said through the crack. "Six weeks, and you pick half two on a Tuesday." "I picked the only hour you'd be alone." "That's not the comfort you think it is." "Aurora." He never called me Rory. Not once, not even in the car outside Southwark that night, with the rain drumming on the roof and his mouth an inch from mine. *Aurora*, like my name was something fragile he'd been handed and told not to drop. I slipped the chain. He looked worse than I'd ever seen him. That said something, because I'd seen him after the thing in the Hackney tunnels, when he'd picked shards of glass out of his own scalp and complained about the state of his cuffs. His hair, normally slicked back so neatly it could've been lacquered, hung loose over one eye. The black one. The amber one watched me, steady and too bright. A wet stain darkened his waistcoat just above the hip. "You're bleeding on Eva's doormat." "I'll buy her another." "She made that one. Crocheted it. Took her a year." I stepped back to let him in. "She'll curse you. Properly, with candles." "Then I'll deserve it." He crossed the threshold the way he did everything, as if the floor had been laid down specifically for him. It would've worked better if he hadn't swayed. I caught his elbow without thinking, and he went still under my hand. So did I. Eva's flat didn't have room for two people standing that close. It barely had room for one. Every wall bowed under shelves of books, and the ones that didn't fit sat stacked in towers across the floor, bristling with coloured tabs. Scrolls poked out of a hatbox by the radiator. The whole place smelled of old paper and cumin, because the curry house downstairs never really closed, and the heat of its ovens rose through the floorboards like breath. I steered him to the sofa. He lowered himself onto it with a hiss he tried to swallow, and Ptolemy leapt up beside him and began kneading his thigh. "He likes you." "Cats have poor judgement." Lucien stroked the tabby's ear with one finger. "It's why I admire them." I fetched the first aid kit from under the sink. Eva kept it stocked for exactly this sort of night, although I doubted she'd pictured a half-demon fixer sprawled across her cushions. When I came back, he'd unbuttoned the waistcoat and was peeling his shirt away from the wound with the care of a man defusing a bomb. Four parallel slashes ran across his side. Not a knife. Too even. Too deep at the ends. "Claws," I said. "Observant." "Whose?" He didn't answer. I knelt on the floor in front of him and tore open a packet of antiseptic wipes with my teeth. The first touch made his jaw tighten. The second made his hand close over my wrist, right over the scar there, the little crescent I'd got falling off a garden wall in Llandaff when I was seven. His thumb found it. Rested on it. "You remember that," I said. "I remember everything you've told me." "Shame you didn't return the favour." There it was. The thing we'd been circling since the door opened, fat and ugly in the middle of the room. He let go of my wrist. "You're angry," he said. "I'm cleaning claw marks out of a man who was paid to follow me." I pressed harder than I needed to. He didn't flinch this time, which annoyed me more. "Three months, Lucien. Three months of coffees and favours and you telling me which alleys to avoid, and the whole time someone was paying you to keep an eye on me. And when I asked who, you walked out." "I walked out because the answer would have got you killed." "You don't get to decide that." "Someone had to." He said it softly, which was worse than if he'd shouted. "You'd have gone after them. You'd have gone straight to their door with that clever mouth and that ridiculous lock pick set you think I don't know about, and they'd have taken you apart. *Je le sais.* I've seen what they do." "So you left." "So I left." "And now you're back. Bleeding." I reached for the gauze. My hands were steady. Good. "What changed?" He looked at me for a long moment. The amber eye caught the lamplight. The black one swallowed it. "They cancelled my contract." A cold, slow feeling settled in my stomach. "People in your line don't get cancelled," I said. "They get paid off." "Or they get replaced." He touched the edge of the wound. "By someone less sentimental." I taped the gauze in place and sat back on my heels. My knees ached against the floorboards. Downstairs, someone dropped a pan, and a man swore in Bengali, and the ordinary noise of it felt a thousand miles away. "You came here to warn me." "I came here," he said, "because I couldn't think of anywhere else to go." It was the most honest thing he'd ever said to me, and he said it to his own knees. I stood up. I had to. If I stayed down there, close enough to smell the rain and cedar on him, close enough to see the pulse ticking in his throat, I'd have done something stupid, like forgive him. Or kiss him. Or both, in whichever order came first. "Tell me who hired you." "Aurora..." "No. You've had six weeks to be noble about it. I've had six weeks to think you'd sold me out." My voice cracked on the last word, and I hated it. "Eva's in Edinburgh. I've been sleeping on this sofa because I didn't want to be in my own flat, because every time I heard feet on the stairs above Silas' bar I thought it was you coming to explain, and it never was. So you tell me. Now. Or you can take your cane and your bloody waistcoat and bleed on somebody else's doormat." He stood too. Slower than he'd have liked, one hand on the arm of the sofa. Ptolemy spilled off his lap with an offended chirp. We were eye to eye, near enough. He'd always hated that, I think. That he couldn't look down at me. "You think I didn't come," he said. "Every night. I stood across the road from Silas' and watched your window until the light went off. Every night, *chérie*, until you stopped going home, and then I nearly tore this city apart before I found you here." My breath went somewhere and didn't come back. "That's not an apology," I managed. "No. It's a confession." He lifted a hand, hesitated, and then tucked a strand of hair behind my ear. His fingers were cold. "The apology is longer. It has several parts. I rehearsed it in three languages on the way over and none of them were adequate." "Try the fourth." "The fourth is Avarosi. It doesn't have a word for sorry." A ghost of a smile. "Only for debt." "Then tell me who you owe." His hand dropped. The smile went with it. "The ones who hired me don't use names," he said. "They use titles. And they didn't want me watching Aurora Carter." He paused. "They wanted me watching for someone called Malphora." The name landed wrong. Heavy. Like a key turning in a lock I didn't know I had. "I don't know anyone called that." "I know." He took a breath. "That's what frightens me." Ptolemy hissed. We both turned. The cat stood on the windowsill, back arched, every hair on end, staring out at the dark above Brick Lane. The glass behind him had fogged over. Not from the heat of the ovens. The fog spread from the outside in, feathered and white, the way frost creeps across a windscreen in January. Only it was August. Letters formed in the frost. Slow and neat, as though a fingertip were drawing them from the other side. *M. A. L.* Lucien's cane was in his hand. I hadn't seen him reach for it. He twisted the ivory handle, and six inches of thin steel whispered free. "Aurora," he said, very quietly. "How many deadbolts did you lock behind me?" I thought back. The chain. The first bolt. The second. The third one always stuck. Behind us, in the narrow hallway, the front door creaked open.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"I stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.35
leniency0.7
rawRatio0.048
effectiveRatio0.033
90.38% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1559
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"softly"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
93.59% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1559
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences118
filterMatches
0"think"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences156
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen64
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords8
totalWords1559
ratio0.005
matches
0"Aurora"
1"Je le sais."
2"chérie"
3"M. A. L."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions24
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount1058
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.38
worstName"Ptolemy"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Ptolemy"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy4
Rory1
Southwark1
Hackney1
Llandaff1
Bengali1
Brick1
Lane1
January1
August1
Lucien3
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Rory"
2"Lucien"
places
0"Southwark"
1"Llandaff"
2"Bengali"
3"Brick"
4"Lane"
5"January"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1559
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences156
matches
0"knew that hand"
1"hated that, I"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
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std20.56
cv1.055
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225
312
43
542
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88
91
1045
114
1269
1310
145
154
1623
174
1844
1979
2029
213
2217
2358
2417
253
261
271
2860
297
305
316
326
3321
346
354
3669
3711
386
3956
403
413
4217
4319
444
458
4613
4715
4840
496
96.34% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences118
matches
0"been handed"
1"been lacquered"
2"been laid"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs181
matches
0"was peeling"
1"were drawing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences156
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1059
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.036827195467422094
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.009442870632672332
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences156
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences156
mean9.99
std9.61
cv0.961
sampleLengths
022
15
231
34
421
58
64
73
84
919
1019
117
1210
138
148
151
165
1725
1815
194
208
2133
2216
233
249
2510
265
274
2817
296
304
3120
328
3313
343
3511
366
3724
389
3929
406
4123
423
4312
445
4510
4622
4726
487
493
49.36% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.36538461538461536
totalSentences156
uniqueOpeners57
66.67% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences100
matches
0"Too deep at the ends."
1"Only it was August."
ratio0.02
28.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount48
totalSentences100
matches
0"It gave with a crack."
1"I knew that hand."
2"I knew the ring on"
3"I closed it."
4"His cane slid into the"
5"I said through the crack"
6"He never called me Rory."
7"I slipped the chain."
8"He looked worse than I'd"
9"His hair, normally slicked back"
10"I stepped back to let"
11"He crossed the threshold the"
12"It would've worked better if"
13"I caught his elbow without"
14"It barely had room for"
15"I steered him to the"
16"He lowered himself onto it"
17"I fetched the first aid"
18"He didn't answer."
19"I knelt on the floor"
ratio0.48
55.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount81
totalSentences100
matches
0"The third deadbolt stuck, the"
1"It gave with a crack."
2"The door swung inward six"
3"I knew that hand."
4"I knew the ring on"
5"Lucien's voice came low through"
6"I closed it."
7"His cane slid into the"
8"I said through the crack"
9"He never called me Rory."
10"*Aurora*, like my name was"
11"I slipped the chain."
12"He looked worse than I'd"
13"That said something, because I'd"
14"His hair, normally slicked back"
15"The black one."
16"The amber one watched me,"
17"A wet stain darkened his"
18"I stepped back to let"
19"He crossed the threshold the"
ratio0.81
50.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences100
matches
0"If I stayed down there,"
ratio0.01
99.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Every wall bowed under shelves of books, and the ones that didn't fit sat stacked in towers across the floor, bristling with coloured tabs."
1"Slow and neat, as though a fingertip were drawing them from the other side."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"I pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.183
leniency0.367
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.033
90.9633%