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Run: 2026-09-23-01M37PHH8ZGCDSQ2G4G9NB1HFP
Run Details
Model:
Aion 3.5 (Reasoning, High)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
1m 12s
Cost:
$0.025705
Provider:
AionLabs
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
96.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
76.02%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
81.20%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
90.71%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
70.51%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
100.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
58.10%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
43.33%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
86.54%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
93.4136%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
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Meta
AI
The chain was still swinging
when Rory knew she'd made a mistake.
Lucien Moreau stood in the
doorway of Eva's flat with rain darkening the shoulders of his charcoal suit, his ivory-handled cane planted on the landing like he owned it. One amber eye caught the hallway bulb.
The black one stayed fixed
on her. It always did. "Ptolemy let me in downstairs." "The cat can't work a latch." "The curry house owner can. Charming man. We discussed football."
He tilted his head, and
the movement made the rain slide off his collar in a single silver line. "You look well, Laila." "Don't."
She gripped the edge of
the door. "Three months, Lucien. Not a word, not a note, not so much as a wrongly delivered bouquet. And you climb my stairs at eleven at night to use the name you invented for me?" "The name suits you better than the one your father gave you." "My father gave me a lot of things. Most of them come with conditions."
She went to close the
door.
The tip of his cane
slotted into the gap, patient as a held breath, and she felt the pressure of it against the wood, gentle and
absolutely
immovable. "He's out." Two words.
Her whole body went somewhere
else for a moment, somewhere with a Cardiff postcode and a door she'd once kicked open from the inside. "Say that again." "Evan Marsh. Released four days ago. His lawyer found a procedural error the size of a cathedral, and the Crown let him walk."
Lucien's voice stayed level, the
way it always did when he
was handing
someone a live grenade. "By Tuesday evening he had visited two pubs I own and one I merely frequent. He was asking after a girl. Black hair. Blue eyes. Welsh, he said, though I suspect he enjoys being wrong about you as much as anything else."
The stairwell behind him smelled
of tamarind and frying onions, drifting up from the curry house below.
Somewhere on Brick Lane a
bottle smashed and men laughed.
Rory became aware that her
knuckles had gone white on the door. "You knew." "I knew when he was released. I did not know before, if that is what you are accusing me of. The courts guard their paperwork better than I do." "That's not what I'm accusing you of."
She stepped back from the
doorway,
not to let him in, but because she needed the wall behind her
. "You had a file on him. In Southwark, I saw it. Photographs, dates, the names of every man he'd bought a drink for since I left Wales. You sat on it for six weeks while you decided how to use it." "I sat on it,"
he said, and crossed the
threshold anyway, drawing the door shut behind him with a soft click, "because the alternative was telling a woman I, and I choose my words with care here, did not wish to see hurt, that the man who broke her was still spending money on her name."
The flat was Eva's chaos
around them.
Books stood in towers on
every surface, scrolls spilled from a wardrobe left open, and research notes fanned across the sofa in Eva's cramped handwriting, half of it in languages Rory didn't recognise and one page, she suspected, in no language at all.
Ptolemy watched from atop the
tallest book stack, pupils
blown wide
.
Lucien removed his gloves finger
by finger, and the cat dropped down and wound around his ankles like a traitor taking foreign coin. "Even the cat," Rory said. "He has excellent taste." "He has a food bowl and no loyalty. You two should compare notes."
She watched him take in
the flat, his gaze moving over Eva's notes the way a surgeon reads an X-ray.
He paused on a page
near the window. Something
flickered
across his face, there and gone, and he turned back to her before she could read it. "You are staying here." "Eva's in Dublin for the week. I'm feeding the cat." "You are hiding." "I'm feeding the cat." "Rory."
Her actual name, and it
landed heavier than Laila ever did, heavier than the cane on the floorboards. "He has money. He has a grudge, which in my experience outlasts money by decades. And he has spent four days purchasing information in establishments where the answers are sold to whoever pays first. Do you understand what I am telling you?" "That Evan's shopping."
She lifted her chin
. "He shopped before. You told me yourself he'd never find me under Silas' roof, that your people watch the bar, that I was a ghost. You promised." "I promised," Lucien said quietly, "before a procedural error the size of a cathedral."
He crossed the room to
her. Not fast, never fast, that was the thing about him, he moved like a man who had never once needed to hurry. When he stopped, the space between them had shrunk to something a single deep breath would erase. Rain still clung to his jaw.
She could smell wet wool
and underneath it something older, something faintly
scorched that she
had never been able to name and had, on one unforgivable night in his office above the Silver Quill, decided she didn't want to.
His gaze dropped to her
left wrist.
To the small crescent scar
there. "You still wear long sleeves." "It's cold." "It is June." "It's a British June. Look it up, you speak four languages, one of them must have a word for it." Something almost like a smile touched the corner of his mouth, and she
hated that she
had put it there, and she hated more that some traitorous part of her chest had lifted at the sight of it. He raised one hand,
slowly
, and she watched it come, and she did not step back, and that was the confession she would never say aloud.
His fingers stopped a breath
above the scar. Hovered. Fell away. "There are things," he said, "that I should have said in Southwark." "Like what?" "That the file was not leverage. That I have never once, in nine years of selling other people's secrets, sold yours."
His voice dropped, and the
amber eye burned. "That when you walked out of that warehouse, I let you, which I have never done before or since, and I have spent three months deciding whether it was the finest or the stupidest thing I have ever done." "Lucien." "He did not just ask after you, Rory." The words came out flat now, all the
silk
stripped from them. "Asking gets you a description and a wrong address. Evan did not ask. Evan bought a contract." The room went cold in a way that had nothing to do with the window latch. Ptolemy had gone still by the bookshelf, tail low. "Four days ago," Lucien said, "a man walked into a private room in Soho and paid in full, in cash, for the location of Aurora Carter. He wanted the best. He was advised, correctly, that there is only one broker in this city who finds people who do not wish to be found." "Who took it?" "You are looking at him." The bulb in the hallway
flickered
through the frosted glass of the door.
Somewhere below, the curry house
bell chimed, and
footsteps
started up the stairs, unhurried, patient, the way a man walks when he has already paid for what he came to collect.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
13
adverbTagCount
2
adverbTags
0
"She stepped back [back]"
1
"Lucien said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences
43
tagDensity
0.302
leniency
0.605
rawRatio
0.154
effectiveRatio
0.093
96.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1251
totalAiIsmAdverbs
1
found
0
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
highlights
0
"slowly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
76.02%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1251
totalAiIsms
6
found
0
word
"absolutely"
count
1
1
word
"blown wide"
count
1
2
word
"flickered"
count
2
3
word
"silk"
count
1
4
word
"footsteps"
count
1
highlights
0
"absolutely"
1
"blown wide"
2
"flickered"
3
"silk"
4
"footsteps"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
48
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
48
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
78
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
repeatedSegmentCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
56
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1251
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
12
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
20
wordCount
665
uniqueNames
10
maxNameDensity
0.75
worstName
"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity
1.5
worstWindowName
"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory
4
Moreau
1
Eva
4
Cardiff
1
Brick
1
Lane
1
Laila
1
Lucien
5
Silver
1
Quill
1
persons
0
"Rory"
1
"Moreau"
2
"Eva"
3
"Laila"
4
"Lucien"
5
"Quill"
places
0
"Cardiff"
1
"Brick"
2
"Lane"
globalScore
1
windowScore
1
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
39
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
1
per1kWords
0.799
wordCount
1251
matches
0
"not to let him in, but because she needed the wall behind her"
81.20%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
2
totalSentences
78
matches
0
"scorched that she"
1
"hated that she"
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
48
mean
26.06
std
24.68
cv
0.947
sampleLengths
0
12
1
46
2
5
3
6
4
33
5
42
6
12
7
14
8
34
9
2
10
26
11
3
12
82
13
39
14
2
15
29
16
67
17
56
18
61
19
23
20
5
21
4
22
13
23
47
24
4
25
10
26
3
27
4
28
61
29
34
30
14
31
90
32
13
33
5
34
2
35
3
36
20
37
75
38
12
39
2
40
68
41
1
42
37
43
25
44
53
45
3
46
5
47
44
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
48
matches
(empty)
90.71%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
2
totalVerbs
122
matches
0
"was still swinging"
1
"was handing"
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
78
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
666
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
26
adverbRatio
0.03903903903903904
lyAdverbCount
4
lyAdverbRatio
0.006006006006006006
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
78
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
78
mean
16.04
std
13.66
cv
0.852
sampleLengths
0
12
1
29
2
7
3
7
4
3
5
5
6
6
7
29
8
4
9
8
10
34
11
12
12
14
13
6
14
28
15
2
16
2
17
24
18
3
19
40
20
42
21
17
22
10
23
12
24
2
25
29
26
26
27
41
28
56
29
7
30
43
31
11
32
23
33
5
34
4
35
13
36
20
37
8
38
19
39
4
40
10
41
3
42
4
43
19
44
42
45
7
46
27
47
14
48
6
49
22
70.51%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
5
diversityRatio
0.46153846153846156
totalSentences
78
uniqueOpeners
36
100.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
2
totalSentences
42
matches
0
"Somewhere on Brick Lane a"
1
"Somewhere below, the curry house"
ratio
0.048
58.10%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
17
totalSentences
42
matches
0
"It always did."
1
"He tilted his head, and"
2
"She gripped the edge of"
3
"She went to close the"
4
"Her whole body went somewhere"
5
"She stepped back from the"
6
"he said, and crossed the"
7
"She watched him take in"
8
"He paused on a page"
9
"Her actual name, and it"
10
"She lifted her chin"
11
"He crossed the room to"
12
"She could smell wet wool"
13
"His gaze dropped to her"
14
"He raised one hand, slowly,"
15
"His fingers stopped a breath"
16
"His voice dropped, and the"
ratio
0.405
43.33%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
35
totalSentences
42
matches
0
"The chain was still swinging"
1
"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
2
"The black one stayed fixed"
3
"It always did."
4
"He tilted his head, and"
5
"She gripped the edge of"
6
"She went to close the"
7
"The tip of his cane"
8
"Her whole body went somewhere"
9
"Lucien's voice stayed level, the"
10
"The stairwell behind him smelled"
11
"Rory became aware that her"
12
"She stepped back from the"
13
"he said, and crossed the"
14
"The flat was Eva's chaos"
15
"Books stood in towers on"
16
"Ptolemy watched from atop the"
17
"Lucien removed his gloves finger"
18
"She watched him take in"
19
"He paused on a page"
ratio
0.833
100.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
1
totalSentences
42
matches
0
"To the small crescent scar"
ratio
0.024
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
20
technicalSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
86.54%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
13
uselessAdditionCount
1
matches
0
"He tilted, and the movement made the rain slide off his collar in a single silver line"
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
5
fancyCount
0
fancyTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
43
tagDensity
0.116
leniency
0.233
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
93.4136%