Run: 2026-09-23-01M37PJ9SSZRN020651HCR4ZYK

Run Details

Duration:
1m 18s
Cost:
$0.025734
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt always stuck. Rory wrenched it free, already rehearsing her complaint — Eva had a key, she'd told her a dozen times to use it — and pulled the door open onto the Brick Lane landing. Lucien Moreau stood in the rain. Water darkened the shoulders of his charcoal suit and beaded along the ivory handle of his cane. No umbrella. His tie was gone, his collar open, and his platinum hair — always so immaculate, always slicked back as if nothing in the world could touch him — had fallen loose across his forehead. One amber eye caught the light from her hallway. The black one drank it. For a long moment neither of them moved. "You look like a drowned magazine advert," she said. "It's the best thing that's happened to me all week." "Hello, Aurora." The sound of her full name in his mouth did something unpleasant to her ribs. She gripped the edge of the door. "You don't get to do that." "Do what?" "Turn up. Eleven at night. Unannounced." Her knuckles whitened. "Six months, Lucien. Six months of nothing, and you knock on Eva's door like we're mates who do this." "Former colleagues do occasionally share information." "Then text it. You're a broker. Brokering is your entire personality." He shifted his weight, and she caught it — the small tell, the half-second where his composure slipped and something raw looked out from behind it. "Evan's solicitor got the charges dropped this morning. He boarded a train to London before noon." The landing seemed to tilt. Rory braced a hand against the doorframe, and Ptolemy wound between her ankles, purring up at the stranger as if he'd brought the cat treats himself. "Say that again." "He's here. In the city. I thought you'd want to hear it from a person rather than a screen." Lucien's jaw tightened. "I thought — correctly, as it turns out — that you'd want to hear it from me even less. But here I am." The rain hammered the metal awning above the landing. Downstairs, the curry house vented cardamom and fried onion into the night, and somewhere a bicycle bell rang twice. Rory became aware that she was standing in Eva's doorway in an old rugby shirt with her hair in a ruin, and that she did not care even slightly. "You could have called." "Yes." "You could have sent one of your ominous little notes. You're fond of those. 'Moreau' embossed at the bottom, no signature, very dramatic." "Yes." "So why didn't you?" Ptolemy abandoned her ankles and trotted straight to Lucien, headbutting his shin with the shameless enthusiasm of a cat who had never once been loyal to anyone. Lucien glanced down at him, and the corner of his mouth lifted despite everything. "Your friend's cat has taste." "Don't flatter yourself. He headbutts the radiator too." "Aurora." Her name again, softer this time, and she hated that she heard the Marseille in it now, the harbour salt under the polished London vowels. "It's pelting down and your neighbour across the landing has opened her door three centimetres and is currently memorising my face. May I come in?" Rory looked over her shoulder. Mrs. Rahman's door stood ajar, one eye visible in the gap. "He's a criminal," Rory told her. "An information broker," Lucien corrected. "That's a criminal with a thesaurus." Mrs. Rahman's door closed. Rory exhaled through her nose, stepped back, and jerked her chin toward the sofa. Lucien crossed the threshold like a man entering a courtroom where he already knew the verdict. Books covered every surface of the flat — stacked on the coffee table, wedged sideways in the shelves, fanned across the kitchen counter beside a cooling mug of tea. Lucien's gaze travelled the room, cataloguing it the way he catalogued everything, and stopped on the second mug sitting untouched beside the kettle. "Expecting someone?" "Eva's in Edinburgh. I'm watering the plants and feeding the traitor." She folded her arms. "Talk. Evan. Dropped charges. How?" "A witness developed an enthusiasm for recanting. The Crown had nothing left but a scared ex-girlfriend with a crescent scar on her wrist who never wanted to testify in the first place." His voice stayed level, but his thumb worked the head of the cane, circling, circling. "I found out this morning. I've spent the day making certain he'll regret the train ticket." "I don't want your protection." "You've made that exceptionally clear. Twice. In writing, once." "Oh, we're doing this?" She laughed, and it came out with an edge that cut her own throat on the way out. "Fine. Let's do this. You kissed me in your office. Standing by the window, mid-sentence, you kissed me — and then two days later I found out you'd known for a month that Evan had hired someone to track me, and you said nothing, because a source was more valuable than I was. And then you vanished to the continent without a word. So forgive me if I don't curtsey." "I never said the source was more valuable." "You didn't have to. I did the arithmetic." "The source," Lucien said, each word laid down like a card, "was inside Evan's card club. The night I found out he'd hired the tracker, I went to see him myself." The flat went quiet enough that she could hear rain dripping off Lucien's sleeve onto Eva's floorboards. "You went —" "I bought his debts. All of them. Every ugly marker he'd signed in every basement in East London, for a sum that made even my father wince, and I made him understand — in the specific, unhurried way I understand things — that London had become a very expensive city for him." The amber eye held hers. "He left within the week. That's why you were safe. Not luck. Not the police. Me." Rory's arms had come uncrossed without her noticing. Her hands hung at her sides, useless. "You let me believe —" "What? That I'd gambled with your life for profit? Yes." He set the cane against the arm of the sofa. "Because if I told you the truth, you'd have looked at me the way you're looking at me right now. And I'd had a taste of that look already, from the window, and I knew I'd do anything to keep it. Anything at all. Which made me exactly the kind of man you'd already fled once." "That's not — you don't get to decide that for me." "I'm aware. It's the single worst decision I've ever made, and I speak four languages, so I've had it translated and confirmed in all of them." A sound escaped her that was half laugh, half something more dangerous. Ptolemy leapt onto the sofa and settled on a stack of Eva's research notes as though arranging himself for a performance. "Six months," she said. "Six months," he agreed. "I wrote you eleven letters. I burned ten. The eleventh is in my coat pocket, and it's raining, and the ink is likely ruined, so you'll have to settle for the live version: I'm sorry. I was a coward. You frightened me — not the danger of you, the other thing. The thing where I stopped calculating." He stood three feet away, soaked through, without his armour of tailoring and distance, and Rory found that the anger she'd carried for six months had gone quiet in her hands like a bird she'd forgotten she was holding. She could put it down. She wasn't ready to say she would. "You look terrible," she said. "I walked from the station. I didn't want to arrive composed. You'd have held it against me." "You're right. I would have." The kettle clicked on the counter, the element ticking as it cooled. Rory looked at the two mugs, then at him, then at the rain still streaming past the window in long silver threads. She crossed to the door, pushed it shut, and turned the first deadbolt. Then the second. The third one stuck, and she wrenched it free. When she looked back, Lucien hadn't moved, but something in his face had — that raw thing behind the composure, closer to the surface now than she'd ever been allowed to see. "Sit down," she said. "I'm making tea, and you're going to tell me everything Evan did this morning, in order, and then—" She pulled a second mug from the shelf. "Then we'll see about the letter."
created_at"2026-09-23T17:56:10.186Z" 9/23/2026, 5:56:10 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.315
leniency0.63
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.31% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1403
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
89.31% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1403
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"calculating"
count1
2
word"streaming"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"calculating"
2"streaming"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences59
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences59
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences96
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen70
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1417
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
80.56% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount720
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.39
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva4
Brick1
Lane1
Moreau1
Ptolemy3
Lucien10
Marseille1
London1
Rory9
Mrs2
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Lucien"
4"Rory"
5"Mrs"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Marseille"
3"London"
globalScore0.806
windowScore0.833
84.21% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences38
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as though arranging himself for a performance"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1417
matches(empty)
97.22% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences96
matches
0"hated that she"
1"found that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs59
mean24.02
std22.94
cv0.955
sampleLengths
038
16
267
38
419
52
622
76
82
928
106
1111
1242
1331
143
1545
1657
174
181
1923
201
214
2241
235
248
2551
2616
276
285
296
3034
3152
322
3320
3463
355
369
3792
388
398
4031
4117
423
4373
4415
455
4676
4711
4826
4933
93.37% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences59
matches
0"was gone"
1"been allowed"
95.01% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs127
matches
0"was standing"
1"was holding"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences96
ratio0.052
matches
0"Rory wrenched it free, already rehearsing her complaint — Eva had a key, she'd told her a dozen times to use it — and pulled the door open onto the Brick Lane landing."
1"His tie was gone, his collar open, and his platinum hair — always so immaculate, always slicked back as if nothing in the world could touch him — had fallen loose across his forehead."
2"He shifted his weight, and she caught it — the small tell, the half-second where his composure slipped and something raw looked out from behind it."
3"Books covered every surface of the flat — stacked on the coffee table, wedged sideways in the shelves, fanned across the kitchen counter beside a cooling mug of tea."
4"When she looked back, Lucien hadn't moved, but something in his face had — that raw thing behind the composure, closer to the surface now than she'd ever been allowed to see."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount760
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.031578947368421054
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.002631578947368421
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences96
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences96
mean14.76
std13.63
cv0.923
sampleLengths
05
133
26
317
42
534
69
75
88
99
1010
112
1215
137
146
152
169
1719
186
1911
2026
2116
225
2326
243
2522
2623
279
2819
2929
304
311
3223
331
344
3527
3614
375
388
3926
4025
415
421
4310
446
455
466
471
483
4914
72.22% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4583333333333333
totalSentences96
uniqueOpeners44
66.67% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences50
matches
0"Then the second."
ratio0.02
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences50
matches
0"His tie was gone, his"
1"She gripped the edge of"
2"Her knuckles whitened"
3"He shifted his weight, and"
4"Her name again, softer this"
5"She folded her arms"
6"His voice stayed level, but"
7"She laughed, and it came"
8"Her hands hung at her"
9"He set the cane against"
10"He stood three feet away,"
11"She could put it down."
12"She wasn't ready to say"
13"She crossed to the door,"
14"She pulled a second mug"
ratio0.3
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount46
totalSentences50
matches
0"The third deadbolt always stuck."
1"Rory wrenched it free, already"
2"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
3"Water darkened the shoulders of"
4"His tie was gone, his"
5"The black one drank it."
6"The sound of her full"
7"She gripped the edge of"
8"Her knuckles whitened"
9"He shifted his weight, and"
10"The landing seemed to tilt."
11"Rory braced a hand against"
12"Lucien's jaw tightened"
13"The rain hammered the metal"
14"Downstairs, the curry house vented"
15"Rory became aware that she"
16"Ptolemy abandoned her ankles and"
17"Lucien glanced down at him,"
18"Her name again, softer this"
19"Rory looked over her shoulder."
ratio0.92
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
ratio0
49.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Rory braced a hand against the doorframe, and Ptolemy wound between her ankles, purring up at the stranger as if he'd brought the cat treats himself."
1"Ptolemy abandoned her ankles and trotted straight to Lucien, headbutting his shin with the shameless enthusiasm of a cat who had never once been loyal to anyone…"
2"A sound escaped her that was half laugh, half something more dangerous."
36.76% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she hated, the harbour salt under the polished London vowels"
1"His voice stayed, but his thumb worked the head of the cane, circling, circling"
2"Lucien said, each word laid down like a card,"
94.44% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Lucien corrected (correct)"
1"She laughed (laugh)"
2"he agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.111
81.6258%