| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "they said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.531 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.059 | | effectiveRatio | 0.059 | |
| 88.65% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1322 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "utterly" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 54.61% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1322 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "wavered" | | 4 | "comforting" | | 5 | "could feel" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "footsteps" | | 8 | "sense of" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 71 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 87 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 51 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1337 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 34 | | wordCount | 967 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.34 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 13 | | December | 2 | | Silas | 2 | | Nyx | 7 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Isolde | 6 | | Richmond | 1 | | Seer | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Silas" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Seer" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.828 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.748 | | wordCount | 1337 | | matches | | 0 | "not always kind, but it is rarely boring" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 39 | | mean | 34.28 | | std | 26.72 | | cv | 0.779 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 29 | | 1 | 41 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 32 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 44 | | 6 | 84 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 76 | | 11 | 72 | | 12 | 47 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 94 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 44 | | 18 | 45 | | 19 | 107 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 33 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 28 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 56 | | 26 | 43 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 64 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 62 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 41 | | 35 | 30 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 48 | | 38 | 34 |
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| 95.38% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "been carved" | | 1 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 168 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 87 | | ratio | 0.115 | | matches | | 0 | "There was no other word for it — the shadow they wore as a body went watery at the edges, violet eyes flickering like candles in a draught." | | 1 | "Not the faint, apologetic warmth it gave off near the bar's cellar door — this was a steady, insistent pulse, like a second heartbeat trying to sync with hers." | | 2 | "The deep crimson gem sat in her palm, its inner glow quickening, brightening, dimming — in time, she realised, with the shimmer hanging between the stones." | | 3 | "Not warmed — vanished, the way pain vanishes when you wake from a bad dream, leaving you unsure it was ever there at all." | | 4 | "The traffic noise, the grey sky, the frost-bitten oaks of Richmond — gone." | | 5 | "\"Rory.\" Nyx poured through the stones behind her — there was no other way to describe it, their shadow-body sliding across the gap like ink tipped from a bottle before gathering itself back into a tall, faintly glowing silhouette." | | 6 | "Rory had done enough deliveries to know when a building's interior didn't match its exterior, and this was that sensation multiplied a thousandfold — an entire valley of wildflowers, a stream running with water that chimed, actually chimed, over stones that sang back in harmony." | | 7 | "The flowers parted for them — actually parted, stems leaning aside like a polite crowd — and Rory felt the pendant's pulse slow as they moved deeper, settling into something gentler." | | 8 | "Then it was the flowers themselves — past the second willow, the white stars gave way to blooms the colour of old bruises, and one of them turned as she passed." | | 9 | "It was cold the way the first night of winter is cold — clean, sharp, awake." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 794 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 31 | | adverbRatio | 0.03904282115869018 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010075566750629723 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 87 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 87 | | mean | 15.37 | | std | 11.67 | | cv | 0.76 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 29 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 28 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 29 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 26 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 30 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 24 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 30 | | 29 | 39 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 45 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 31 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 31 |
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| 71.65% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.47126436781609193 | | totalSentences | 87 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere deeper in, chimes or" | | 1 | "Almost a welcome." | | 2 | "Then it was the standing" | | 3 | "Then it was the flowers" |
| | ratio | 0.063 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "She pointed at the nearest" | | 1 | "Their voice arrived as it" | | 2 | "She drew the pendant out" | | 3 | "She'd read enough of Isolde's" | | 4 | "She stepped between the stones." | | 5 | "She looked down at herself," | | 6 | "They stared upward." | | 7 | "She checked her phone." | | 8 | "she murmured, reciting the letter" | | 9 | "She chose not to examine" | | 10 | "Their eyes flared brighter" | | 11 | "She left no prints." | | 12 | "Her pale lavender eyes moved" | | 13 | "they said softly" | | 14 | "She turned to Rory, and" | | 15 | "Her fingers closed on the" | | 16 | "It was cold." | | 17 | "It was cold the way" | | 18 | "Her smile deepened" |
| | ratio | 0.297 | |
| 92.81% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 47 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose out" | | 1 | "She pointed at the nearest" | | 2 | "Silas never mentioned a lot" | | 3 | "That was rather the point" | | 4 | "Their voice arrived as it" | | 5 | "Rory pressed a hand to" | | 6 | "She drew the pendant out" | | 7 | "The deep crimson gem sat" | | 8 | "She'd read enough of Isolde's" | | 9 | "The air between the oaks" | | 10 | "She stepped between the stones." | | 11 | "The cold vanished." | | 12 | "Rory's next breath came out" | | 13 | "She looked down at herself," | | 14 | "The park was gone." | | 15 | "The traffic noise, the grey" | | 16 | "The larger one wore a" | | 17 | "Nyx poured through the stones" | | 18 | "They stared upward." | | 19 | "The grove was bigger inside" |
| | ratio | 0.734 | |
| 78.13% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "Before Rory could answer, the" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 15.31% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 28 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The larger one wore a ring of pale silver, and beneath that light, everything in the clearing shone faintly, as though the grove remembered sunlight and reprodu…" | | 1 | "Rory had done enough deliveries to know when a building's interior didn't match its exterior, and this was that sensation multiplied a thousandfold — an entire …" | | 2 | "Somewhere deeper in, chimes or birds or something that was neither repeated a five-note phrase that her mind kept trying to finish." | | 3 | "Isolde stood in the centre of the path as if she'd grown there, silver hair pooling to her waist, bare feet on the flowering grass." | | 4 | "Rory watched, unable to stop herself, as the Seer stepped toward them and the grass simply was, unpressed, unbent, as though the ground declined to acknowledge …" |
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| 95.59% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "She turned, and the sorrow folded away behind a smile that was all riddle" |
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| 87.50% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx poured (pour)" | | 1 | "she murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.188 | | leniency | 0.375 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.125 | |