| 91.89% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said slowly [slowly]" | | 1 | "Nyx's form rippled briefly [briefly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 37 | | tagDensity | 0.459 | | leniency | 0.919 | | rawRatio | 0.118 | | effectiveRatio | 0.108 | |
| 85.60% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1389 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 71.20% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1389 | | totalAiIsms | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "footsteps" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "resolved" | | 6 | "unsettled" | | 7 | "perfect" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 82 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 102 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 45 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1405 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 32 | | wordCount | 1087 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.1 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 12 | | Park | 1 | | Roehampton | 1 | | Nyx | 11 | | Hel | 3 | | December | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Seer | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Seer" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.948 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 16.07% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like a distant shore" | | 1 | "something close to a tall man wrapped in smoke" | | 2 | "felt like walking through a curtain of" |
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| 57.65% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.423 | | wordCount | 1405 | | matches | | 0 | "not carved, not imagined, but surfacing, the way a face surfaces in a dream" | | 1 | "not imagined, but surfacing, the way a face surfaces in a dream" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 47 | | mean | 29.89 | | std | 25.11 | | cv | 0.84 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 56 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 42 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 51 | | 7 | 50 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 95 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 60 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 76 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 45 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 48 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 29 | | 26 | 89 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 84 | | 32 | 32 | | 33 | 28 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 57 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 54 | | 39 | 41 | | 40 | 61 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 31 | | 44 | 28 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 59 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 92.47% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 186 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't looking" | | 1 | "was standing" | | 2 | "was like watching" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 102 | | ratio | 0.137 | | matches | | 0 | "Richmond Park at night was a different animal — the deer were shadows among shadows, and the streetlights from Roehampton looked like a distant shore." | | 1 | "Rory touched the pendant at her throat without thinking — the little crimson stone on its silver chain, cold as ever." | | 2 | "The city sounds fell away in pieces — first the traffic, then the distant drone of planes, then even the wind, until the silence pressed against her ears like water." | | 3 | "Seven oaks stood in a ring where no oaks should have been — Rory had delivered to half the houses bordering this park, and she knew its maps, knew its paths." | | 4 | "The change hit all of her senses at once — the smell of honey and crushed green things, the hum of insects where no insects should survive a December night, and light." | | 5 | "They carpeted the clearing beyond the oaks and rolled down into a valley that hadn't existed thirty seconds ago — heartsease and foxgloves, bluebells nodding in a wind she couldn't feel, pale blossoms she had no names for that glowed faintly, like coals banked under ash." | | 6 | "She noticed it on the third step — every bluebell turning its face to track her, the glow brightening where her boots pressed the earth and dimming behind her." | | 7 | "The grass gave way to moss so thick it swallowed sound entirely; her footsteps went mute, and she realised she could hear her own pulse." | | 8 | "Somewhere ahead, water ran — she could hear it singing, actually singing, a melody without words that almost resolved into speech whenever she stopped concentrating on it." | | 9 | "The stream led them through a stand of trees whose bark was smooth and pale, and Rory swore she saw faces in the wood — not carved, not imagined, but surfacing, the way a face surfaces in a dream." | | 10 | "Her breath fogged in the air — so it was winter here after all, winter wearing a costume of spring." | | 11 | "The singing stream widened into a pool at the centre of a perfect circle of open grass, and the moonlight — from that unmoving moon — lay across the water like a dropped ribbon." | | 12 | "No footprints marked the moss anywhere — not where the woman stood, not in any direction she could have walked from, as though she had simply been set down upon this spot." | | 13 | "\"The Seer,\" they whispered, and for the first time since Cardiff, since Evan, since everything — Nyx sounded afraid." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1077 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 38 | | adverbRatio | 0.035283194057567316 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008356545961002786 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 102 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 102 | | mean | 13.77 | | std | 10.46 | | cv | 0.759 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 31 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 31 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 37 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 32 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 46 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 23 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 23 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 29 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 81.85% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.5148514851485149 | | totalSentences | 101 | | uniqueOpeners | 52 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Soft, sourceless light, gold and" | | 1 | "Somewhere ahead, water ran —" | | 2 | "Strangely, that unsettled her more" |
| | ratio | 0.042 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Their voice arrived on the" | | 1 | "It had pulsed like a" | | 2 | "She watched it." | | 3 | "She pocketed the phone and" | | 4 | "It stopped being just a" | | 5 | "They were old in a" | | 6 | "They carpeted the clearing beyond" | | 7 | "She watched it." | | 8 | "It stayed put, pinned to" | | 9 | "Their silhouette had sharpened, solidified," | | 10 | "She noticed it on the" | | 11 | "she said slowly" | | 12 | "They descended into the valley." | | 13 | "They found the stream at" | | 14 | "She stood over it and" | | 15 | "She kept her eyes on" | | 16 | "Her breath fogged in the" | | 17 | "She wore grey that shifted" | | 18 | "they whispered, and for the" | | 19 | "She tilted her head, and" |
| | ratio | 0.278 | |
| 50.28% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 59 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "The frost crunched under Rory's" | | 1 | "Richmond Park at night was" | | 2 | "Nyx drifted ahead of her," | | 3 | "Their voice arrived on the" | | 4 | "Rory touched the pendant at" | | 5 | "It had pulsed like a" | | 6 | "Tonight it lay dormant." | | 7 | "Whatever waited in this park," | | 8 | "The city sounds fell away" | | 9 | "Rory checked her phone." | | 10 | "The clock read 11:47." | | 11 | "She watched it." | | 12 | "The seconds refused to tick" | | 13 | "She pocketed the phone and" | | 14 | "It stopped being just a" | | 15 | "These trees weren't on any" | | 16 | "They were old in a" | | 17 | "The patterns moved when she" | | 18 | "Every time she turned her" | | 19 | "Nyx passed between two of" |
| | ratio | 0.819 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 69.60% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "They were old in a way that made the word inadequate, trunks wider than her arms could circle, bark spiralled with patterns that looked carved but had grown tha…" | | 1 | "Crossing the boundary felt like walking through a curtain of warm water that left her skin dry." | | 2 | "They carpeted the clearing beyond the oaks and rolled down into a valley that hadn't existed thirty seconds ago — heartsease and foxgloves, bluebells nodding in…" | | 3 | "Silver hair fell to her waist, and her pale lavender eyes regarded them with the patience of someone who had been waiting a very long time and had not minded th…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 95.95% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx observed (observe)" | | 1 | "they whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 37 | | tagDensity | 0.27 | | leniency | 0.541 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.108 | |