Run: 2026-09-23-01M37PM8B27FB8F0T69BT1DWJV

Run Details

Duration:
49.6s
Cost:
$0.018029
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The frost crunched under Rory's boots as she climbed the park's perimeter fence, and the cold bit through her jacket before her feet even touched the grass on the other side. Richmond Park at night was a different animal — the deer were shadows among shadows, and the streetlights from Roehampton looked like a distant shore. "You're certain this is the place?" she asked. Nyx drifted ahead of her, a smear of darkness against darker trees. In the city they held a shape, something close to a tall man wrapped in smoke. Out here, under the bare oaks, their edges frayed like cloth in the wind. "The oaks remember me." Their voice arrived on the breeze rather than from any mouth. "We are close." "Oaks don't remember anything. They're oaks." "You would be surprised what remembers, Aurora Carter." Rory touched the pendant at her throat without thinking — the little crimson stone on its silver chain, cold as ever. It had pulsed like a second heartbeat the night she'd first crossed paths with a Hel portal. Tonight it lay dormant. Whatever waited in this park, it wasn't from Hel. They walked. The city sounds fell away in pieces — first the traffic, then the distant drone of planes, then even the wind, until the silence pressed against her ears like water. Rory checked her phone. The clock read 11:47. She watched it. 11:47. The seconds refused to tick over. "Your time is broken," Nyx observed. "No. This is why you don't buy refurbished." She pocketed the phone and refused to let her hands shake. "Keep moving. It's just a park." It stopped being just a park at the rise of the hill. Seven oaks stood in a ring where no oaks should have been — Rory had delivered to half the houses bordering this park, and she knew its maps, knew its paths. These trees weren't on any of them. They were old in a way that made the word inadequate, trunks wider than her arms could circle, bark spiralled with patterns that looked carved but had grown that way, grooves deep enough to hide a hand. The patterns moved when she wasn't looking directly at them. Every time she turned her head, they'd settled somewhere new. "There's no frost inside the ring," she said. Nyx passed between two of the oaks without breaking stride. "Then come inside." Crossing the boundary felt like walking through a curtain of warm water that left her skin dry. The change hit all of her senses at once — the smell of honey and crushed green things, the hum of insects where no insects should survive a December night, and light. Soft, sourceless light, gold and violet, rising from the ground itself. Rory stood ankle-deep in wildflowers. They carpeted the clearing beyond the oaks and rolled down into a valley that hadn't existed thirty seconds ago — heartsease and foxgloves, bluebells nodding in a wind she couldn't feel, pale blossoms she had no names for that glowed faintly, like coals banked under ash. Above the valley, the moon hung fat and low, and it did not move. She watched it. It stayed put, pinned to the amber-dark sky like a moth to cork. "In London it's winter," she said. "It is winter here too. The flowers simply haven't been informed." Nyx had changed. Their silhouette had sharpened, solidified, and their violet eyes burned brighter in this place, casting faint light of their own down the slope. "I walked through forests like this once. Before." "Before 1643, you mean." "Forests keep old promises. Mortals break them." Nyx drifted down the slope, and where they passed, the flowers leaned after them like spectators. Rory followed, and the flowers leaned after her too. She noticed it on the third step — every bluebell turning its face to track her, the glow brightening where her boots pressed the earth and dimming behind her. She stopped. Several hundred small luminous faces stopped with her. "Okay," she said slowly. "That's a new one." "Do not eat anything." Nyx's whisper sharpened. "Do not accept gifts. And if anything asks your name, refuse it twice before you consider answering once." "Twice?" "The first refusal costs you nothing. The second costs them patience. The third question, if it comes, will cost you something real — so make sure you've already left." They descended into the valley. The grass gave way to moss so thick it swallowed sound entirely; her footsteps went mute, and she realised she could hear her own pulse. Somewhere ahead, water ran — she could hear it singing, actually singing, a melody without words that almost resolved into speech whenever she stopped concentrating on it. They found the stream at the valley floor, and it flowed uphill. She stood over it and watched the current climb the slope, defying the ground, small silver fish swimming against nothing. "The stream flows to the heart of the Grove," Nyx said. "Follow it." "Is that wise? Following the singing, backwards-running water deeper into the pocket dimension?" "No. It is, however, correct." "Wonderful. My favourite combination." But she followed it, because the alternative was standing alone in a field of watching flowers. The stream led them through a stand of trees whose bark was smooth and pale, and Rory swore she saw faces in the wood — not carved, not imagined, but surfacing, the way a face surfaces in a dream. One of them had closed eyes and a serene mouth. Another appeared to be laughing at something below the branches. She kept her eyes on the water after that. The pendant stayed cold against her chest. Strangely, that unsettled her more than anything glowing in the undergrowth. This place didn't want anything from Hel. This place was older than that argument. "How long have we been walking?" she asked. Her breath fogged in the air — so it was winter here after all, winter wearing a costume of spring. "Twenty minutes. Or four hours." Nyx's form rippled, briefly uncertain. "The Grove takes its tithe in time rather than blood. Consider it generous." "Consider it theft." The trees thinned. The singing stream widened into a pool at the centre of a perfect circle of open grass, and the moonlight — from that unmoving moon — lay across the water like a dropped ribbon. Wildflowers ringed the pool in bands of colour, arranged too neatly, blues giving way to whites giving way to silver. And on the far bank stood a woman. Rory hadn't seen her arrive. Silver hair fell to her waist, and her pale lavender eyes regarded them with the patience of someone who had been waiting a very long time and had not minded the wait. She wore grey that shifted like morning fog, and her feet were bare in the frost-rimed grass. Rory glanced behind the woman. The grass was untouched. No footprints marked the moss anywhere — not where the woman stood, not in any direction she could have walked from, as though she had simply been set down upon this spot. "You crossed the old oaks at the turning of the year," the woman said, and her voice carried across the water without rising, each word arriving whole and cool as a stone placed in Rory's palm. "One of shadow and sorrow, one of scars and stolen sleep. The Veil thins, the stones remember, and still the question walks in wearing boots." Rory looked at Nyx. Nyx's eyes had gone very bright. "The Seer," they whispered, and for the first time since Cardiff, since Evan, since everything — Nyx sounded afraid. Rory turned back to the silver-haired woman and found her much closer, standing at the pool's near edge now, though the water showed no ripple and the moss showed no print. "I'm Aurora," she said. "Aurora Carter. And I've come a long way in the cold, so if you know what I am, maybe you could tell me why." The Seer smiled, and it was like watching a door open onto a lit room. "A name freely given is a rare coin in this Grove, Aurora Carter. Spend it slowly." She tilted her head, and the moonlight bent with her. "You carry a cold heart at your throat and a colder blade you have not yet earned. You came asking one question — but the Grove, I am afraid, only ever answers three."
created_at"2026-09-23T17:57:14.227Z" 9/23/2026, 5:57:14 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
91.89% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said slowly [slowly]"
1"Nyx's form rippled briefly [briefly]"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.459
leniency0.919
rawRatio0.118
effectiveRatio0.108
85.60% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1389
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
71.20% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1389
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"resolved"
count1
6
word"unsettled"
count1
7
word"perfect"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"silence"
2"whisper"
3"footsteps"
4"pulse"
5"resolved"
6"unsettled"
7"perfect"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences82
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences102
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1405
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount1087
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.1
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory12
Park1
Roehampton1
Nyx11
Hel3
December1
Cardiff1
Evan1
Seer1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Nyx"
2"Evan"
3"Seer"
places
0"Park"
1"Hel"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0.948
windowScore0.833
16.07% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like a distant shore"
1"something close to a tall man wrapped in smoke"
2"felt like walking through a curtain of"
57.65% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.423
wordCount1405
matches
0"not carved, not imagined, but surfacing, the way a face surfaces in a dream"
1"not imagined, but surfacing, the way a face surfaces in a dream"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences102
matches
0"grown that way"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean29.89
std25.11
cv0.84
sampleLengths
056
18
242
318
46
58
651
750
86
925
1012
1195
128
1313
1460
155
1676
176
1845
194
2023
2148
228
2325
241
2529
2689
2713
2813
295
304
3184
3232
3328
3423
353
3657
378
3854
3941
4061
4110
4219
4331
4428
4515
4659
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
92.47% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs186
matches
0"wasn't looking"
1"was standing"
2"was like watching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences14
totalSentences102
ratio0.137
matches
0"Richmond Park at night was a different animal — the deer were shadows among shadows, and the streetlights from Roehampton looked like a distant shore."
1"Rory touched the pendant at her throat without thinking — the little crimson stone on its silver chain, cold as ever."
2"The city sounds fell away in pieces — first the traffic, then the distant drone of planes, then even the wind, until the silence pressed against her ears like water."
3"Seven oaks stood in a ring where no oaks should have been — Rory had delivered to half the houses bordering this park, and she knew its maps, knew its paths."
4"The change hit all of her senses at once — the smell of honey and crushed green things, the hum of insects where no insects should survive a December night, and light."
5"They carpeted the clearing beyond the oaks and rolled down into a valley that hadn't existed thirty seconds ago — heartsease and foxgloves, bluebells nodding in a wind she couldn't feel, pale blossoms she had no names for that glowed faintly, like coals banked under ash."
6"She noticed it on the third step — every bluebell turning its face to track her, the glow brightening where her boots pressed the earth and dimming behind her."
7"The grass gave way to moss so thick it swallowed sound entirely; her footsteps went mute, and she realised she could hear her own pulse."
8"Somewhere ahead, water ran — she could hear it singing, actually singing, a melody without words that almost resolved into speech whenever she stopped concentrating on it."
9"The stream led them through a stand of trees whose bark was smooth and pale, and Rory swore she saw faces in the wood — not carved, not imagined, but surfacing, the way a face surfaces in a dream."
10"Her breath fogged in the air — so it was winter here after all, winter wearing a costume of spring."
11"The singing stream widened into a pool at the centre of a perfect circle of open grass, and the moonlight — from that unmoving moon — lay across the water like a dropped ribbon."
12"No footprints marked the moss anywhere — not where the woman stood, not in any direction she could have walked from, as though she had simply been set down upon this spot."
13"\"The Seer,\" they whispered, and for the first time since Cardiff, since Evan, since everything — Nyx sounded afraid."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1077
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.035283194057567316
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.008356545961002786
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences102
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences102
mean13.77
std10.46
cv0.759
sampleLengths
031
125
28
312
416
514
615
73
86
98
1021
1117
124
139
142
1530
164
174
183
191
206
216
2219
236
2412
2531
267
2737
2810
2910
308
3110
323
3317
3432
3511
365
3746
3814
393
4013
416
4214
4323
448
454
4623
479
4829
492
81.85% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.5148514851485149
totalSentences101
uniqueOpeners52
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences72
matches
0"Soft, sourceless light, gold and"
1"Somewhere ahead, water ran —"
2"Strangely, that unsettled her more"
ratio0.042
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences72
matches
0"Their voice arrived on the"
1"It had pulsed like a"
2"She watched it."
3"She pocketed the phone and"
4"It stopped being just a"
5"They were old in a"
6"They carpeted the clearing beyond"
7"She watched it."
8"It stayed put, pinned to"
9"Their silhouette had sharpened, solidified,"
10"She noticed it on the"
11"she said slowly"
12"They descended into the valley."
13"They found the stream at"
14"She stood over it and"
15"She kept her eyes on"
16"Her breath fogged in the"
17"She wore grey that shifted"
18"they whispered, and for the"
19"She tilted her head, and"
ratio0.278
50.28% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences72
matches
0"The frost crunched under Rory's"
1"Richmond Park at night was"
2"Nyx drifted ahead of her,"
3"Their voice arrived on the"
4"Rory touched the pendant at"
5"It had pulsed like a"
6"Tonight it lay dormant."
7"Whatever waited in this park,"
8"The city sounds fell away"
9"Rory checked her phone."
10"The clock read 11:47."
11"She watched it."
12"The seconds refused to tick"
13"She pocketed the phone and"
14"It stopped being just a"
15"These trees weren't on any"
16"They were old in a"
17"The patterns moved when she"
18"Every time she turned her"
19"Nyx passed between two of"
ratio0.819
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
ratio0
69.60% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"They were old in a way that made the word inadequate, trunks wider than her arms could circle, bark spiralled with patterns that looked carved but had grown tha…"
1"Crossing the boundary felt like walking through a curtain of warm water that left her skin dry."
2"They carpeted the clearing beyond the oaks and rolled down into a valley that hadn't existed thirty seconds ago — heartsease and foxgloves, bluebells nodding in…"
3"Silver hair fell to her waist, and her pale lavender eyes regarded them with the patience of someone who had been waiting a very long time and had not minded th…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
95.95% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Nyx observed (observe)"
1"they whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.27
leniency0.541
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.108
83.1964%