Run: 2026-09-23-01M37PTRW7G9CTMHR770RMB0BT

Run Details

Duration:
1m 53s
Cost:
$0.022046
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ladder down into the disused station ran forty feet, and every rung whined under Detective Harlow Quinn's weight. She counted them out of habit. Eighteen years in the Met had taught her that numbers kept the mind clean. The platform below stretched into black, its tiled arches sweating with condensation. A generator chugged somewhere in the dark, feeding a string of work lights that turned the scene the colour of weak tea. White-suited scene-of-crime officers knelt in a loose ring around a body near the north end, where the tunnel mouth gaped like a throat. "Down here, guv." DS Callum Pike's voice bounced off the tiles. He stood at the edge of the light, hands jammed in his coat, breath fogging. Thirty-two, ambitious, the kind of detective who treated every case like a box to be ticked and filed. Quinn crossed the platform. Her torch beam swept the ground ahead of her — a habit Morris had drilled into her, back when drilling her had been his job. She pushed the thought down before it could finish forming. The dead man lay face-down beside a folding table, dressed in a moth-eaten overcoat. His throat had been opened from ear to ear. Quinn crouched. She held her torch close to the wound and studied the platform around it. No blood. Not a small amount of blood. Not a smear where rain or water had diluted it. Nothing. The tiles beneath his neck held nothing but dust and a pale ring where the pooling should have been — as if someone had lifted the body, scrubbed the floor, and laid him back down inside the outline of his own crime scene. "Cut himself shaving?" she asked. "Forensics reckon the blood drained out somewhere else and they dumped him here." Pike crouched opposite her, careful not to touch anything. "Squat territory, this. Kids get in through the maintenance shafts. Probably a drug debt. They off him in the tunnels, drag him down here to hide him, and the cold keeps him fresh. It's grim, but it's simple." "His shoes." Pike glanced at them. Brogues, cracked at the heel. "Spotless." Quinn angled her torch along the platform toward the tunnel mouth. Her beam found the flooded maintenance passage beyond the arch — six inches of standing water, black silt curled at its edges, thick handprints of mud on the railing where the SOCOs had come through. "There's one way in. Ankle-deep. You can see every footprint the team's made since they arrived. So how did he walk through that with clean shoes?" "Carried, then. Like I said." "On muddy ground? Where are the carrier's prints? There are two sets of prints on this platform, Pike — ours and the SOCOs'. Nobody dragged a grown man across this platform tonight." She stood and turned in a slow circle, torch low, reading the floor the way other people read a page. Candle stubs ringed the folding table, maybe a dozen of them, burned down to coins of wax. She crouched again and pressed two gloved fingers to the nearest pool of wax. Cold. Rigid. She scraped at the edge and the whole disc lifted away, brittle as toffee. "These candles burned out days ago. Maybe a week. But the body's fresh — rigor's barely started." She held up the disc of wax for Pike to see. "Somebody lit a ceremony down here, waited, and then put a dead man in the middle of it. He didn't die at a ritual. He was arranged for one." Pike's jaw worked. "Or the squatters had their candles, their little goth party, weeks back, and the killers just dumped him wherever the light was decent." "On a platform with no light?" Quinn walked the table's perimeter. Chalk marks dusted the tiles beneath it — arcs and strokes, half of them scrubbed away with something wet. One fragment survived near the table leg: a spiral, cut through with three slashes. The torch trembled in her hand. One degree. She locked her wrist. She had seen that mark before. Scratched into the leather cover of a notebook pulled from the River Thames three years ago, the notebook still in DS Morris's coat pocket, the coat still on DS Morris, the rest of him never recovered. The pathologist had called the spiral "possible gang insignia." She had spent eighteen months trying to prove it was, and failing, and then stopped sleeping properly. "Occult stuff." Pike had followed her gaze. "Kids and their Ouija boards." "Kids don't scrub their Ouija boards with bleach before the police arrive." She circled the body. The dead man's right hand was fisted shut. She nodded to the nearest SOCO, who worked the fingers open with tweezers and lifted out a small brass compass on a tarnished chain. Verdigris greened its casing. Sigils had been etched into the face around the needle. The needle pointed at the bricked-up wall at the end of the platform. Quinn pulled out her phone, opened the compass app, and turned a slow circle. The phone's needle swung to settle on north — behind her, up the platform, toward the river. The brass needle in the evidence bag ignored north. It strained toward the bricks like a dog at a door. "That's broken," Pike offered. "It's broken in one direction." Quinn walked to the wall. The bricks here were old, mortared over, sealed for decades — and yet the air coming off them cut colder than the rest of the station, cold enough that her breath thickened. She pressed her palm flat against the surface. The mortar was warm. "Pike. Come and feel this." He did, and pulled his hand back. "That's not right." "No," she said. "It isn't." Footsteps on the ladder. A young woman came down into the light, small, curly red hair squashed under a wool hat, round glasses fogging the instant she hit the humid air. A leather satchel hung off one shoulder, straining with books. She dug through it as she walked, tucking a loose curl behind her left ear. "You must be the consultant." Quinn had signed off on the request two hours ago — a researcher from the British Museum's restricted archives, attached to the Met's occult liaison file, a file that got opened perhaps once a decade and had gathered dust since the last time Quinn had needed it. "Eva Kowalski. They said you found markings." She stopped at the table, looked at the chalk spiral, and went the colour of the platform tiles. "Oh. Oh, no." "Talk to me." "This is a threshold sigil. Half of one — someone's tried to close it, badly, or open it, worse." Eva set her satchel on the platform and knelt, pulling out a notebook already ribboned with page markers. "Detective, what else was on him?" Quinn tilted the evidence bag holding the compass so Eva could see it. Eva's glasses slid down her nose. She shoved them up and tugged at her ear again. "That's a Veil Compass. They point at rifts. Thin places. Where—" She stopped, glanced at Pike, and lowered her voice as though the bricks might be listening. "Where the Veil Market sets up its door. And those—" She pointed at the SOCO's second bag, where a dozen small tokens of yellowed bone had been photographed and collected from the overcoat's pockets. "Those are entry tokens. Bone tokens. You can't get in without one." "In where?" "The Veil Market. It's a market, underground, it sells things that—" Eva flapped a hand, frustrated with the limits of English. "It moves. Every full moon, it packs itself up and reappears somewhere else. Detective, when was the body found?" "Four hours ago." "What was the date yesterday?" Pike checked his phone. "The ninth." "Full moon." Eva stood and turned a full circle, reading the platform the way Quinn had read it, and Quinn watched the same realisation land on a different face. "The market was here. Last night this platform was full — traders, stalls, dozens of people. And this morning it's gone, and it left him behind. He was found in the middle of a crime scene that has packed itself up and walked away." Quinn looked down the platform. The folding table. The candle ring. The scrubbed chalk. The warm wall with its cold, wrong air. A dead man carried in through mud he never walked through, laid in the centre of a ceremony that had ended a week before his heart did, with a compass in his fist pointing at a brick wall that had no business being warm. "He wasn't killed here," she said. "He wasn't even killed last night. He was killed somewhere else, kept somewhere cold, and delivered. Positioned. Somebody wanted him found exactly like this, in exactly this spot, on the one morning the market had gone and there was nothing left to hide." She turned the compass bag over in her hand and watched the needle hold its line. "Whoever did this knew the market's schedule. Knew when it would empty this place out. Knew we'd find a chalk spiral and a bone trinket and file it under squatters and superstition." She looked at Pike. "Which is almost exactly what you did." Pike's mouth opened, closed. "Detective." Eva had her notebook out, pencil hovering, freckles stark under the work lights. "The sigil on the floor — I've seen that spiral before, with the three cuts through it. In the archives. It isn't a threshold mark at all. Somebody's put it there to look like one." She tucked the curl back behind her ear for the fourth time. "I'd need a day with the restricted stacks to be certain, but if I'm right, the person who staged this wanted the market's people to think a door had been closed here. They wanted the market to run scared." Quinn slipped her watch free of her cuff and checked it, though she'd checked it on the ladder. An old habit, from a case that had never closed. "Get me everything the museum has on that spiral," she said. "And Pike — nobody files this as gang-related. Nobody files it at all until I say. I want that wall photographed, every brick catalogued, and I want to know who else in this city keeps a file on things that move when the moon is full." She looked at the compass needle, steady on the bricks, patient as a held breath. "Because somebody went to a great deal of trouble to leave us a signpost," she said. "And I intend to follow it."
created_at"2026-09-23T18:00:47.766Z" 9/23/2026, 6:00:47 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.49
leniency0.98
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1756
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
85.76% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1756
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"trembled"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"stark"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"trembled"
2"etched"
3"footsteps"
4"stark"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences94
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences120
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen59
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1769
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount1131
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity1.24
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn14
Met2
Callum1
Pike11
Morris3
Candle1
Chalk1
River1
Thames1
Footsteps1
British1
Museum1
Eva6
English1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Pike"
3"Morris"
4"Candle"
5"Museum"
6"Eva"
places
0"Met"
1"River"
2"Thames"
3"British"
globalScore0.881
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1769
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences120
matches
0"seen that mark"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean32.76
std26.92
cv0.822
sampleLengths
039
157
244
339
423
516
62
760
85
960
102
119
1273
135
1452
1531
1616
1757
1826
1944
2012
2168
2212
2312
2450
2513
2651
274
2854
295
3010
315
3256
3352
3428
353
3643
3713
3889
392
4040
413
425
436
4473
4566
4697
4711
484
49100
86.60% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences94
matches
0"been opened"
1"was fisted"
2"been etched"
3"got opened"
4"been photographed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs189
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences120
ratio0.058
matches
0"Her torch beam swept the ground ahead of her — a habit Morris had drilled into her, back when drilling her had been his job."
1"The tiles beneath his neck held nothing but dust and a pale ring where the pooling should have been — as if someone had lifted the body, scrubbed the floor, and laid him back down inside the outline of his own crime scene."
2"Her beam found the flooded maintenance passage beyond the arch — six inches of standing water, black silt curled at its edges, thick handprints of mud on the railing where the SOCOs had come through."
3"Chalk marks dusted the tiles beneath it — arcs and strokes, half of them scrubbed away with something wet."
4"The phone's needle swung to settle on north — behind her, up the platform, toward the river."
5"The bricks here were old, mortared over, sealed for decades — and yet the air coming off them cut colder than the rest of the station, cold enough that her breath thickened."
6"\"You must be the consultant.\" Quinn had signed off on the request two hours ago — a researcher from the British Museum's restricted archives, attached to the Met's occult liaison file, a file that got opened perhaps once a decade and had gathered dust since the last time Quinn had needed it."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1131
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, curly red hair"
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.014146772767462422
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0017683465959328027
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences120
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences120
mean14.74
std13.12
cv0.89
sampleLengths
019
16
214
312
422
523
611
715
818
94
1025
1110
1214
139
142
1514
162
176
1810
191
2043
215
2222
2338
242
254
265
2712
2835
2926
305
3152
3217
3314
341
351
3614
3728
3829
393
4023
4111
4219
4314
446
452
464
476
4836
4926
73.06% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.48333333333333334
totalSentences120
uniqueOpeners58
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
ratio0
88.29% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences82
matches
0"She counted them out of"
1"He stood at the edge"
2"Her torch beam swept the"
3"She pushed the thought down"
4"His throat had been opened"
5"She held her torch close"
6"Her beam found the flooded"
7"She stood and turned in"
8"She crouched again and pressed"
9"She scraped at the edge"
10"She held up the disc"
11"She locked her wrist."
12"She had seen that mark"
13"She circled the body."
14"She nodded to the nearest"
15"It strained toward the bricks"
16"She pressed her palm flat"
17"He did, and pulled his"
18"She dug through it as"
19"She stopped at the table,"
ratio0.329
2.68% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences82
matches
0"The ladder down into the"
1"She counted them out of"
2"The platform below stretched into"
3"A generator chugged somewhere in"
4"DS Callum Pike's voice bounced"
5"He stood at the edge"
6"Quinn crossed the platform."
7"Her torch beam swept the"
8"She pushed the thought down"
9"The dead man lay face-down"
10"His throat had been opened"
11"She held her torch close"
12"The tiles beneath his neck"
13"Pike crouched opposite her, careful"
14"Pike glanced at them."
15"Brogues, cracked at the heel."
16"Quinn angled her torch along"
17"Her beam found the flooded"
18"She stood and turned in"
19"Candle stubs ringed the folding"
ratio0.915
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
ratio0
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Thirty-two, ambitious, the kind of detective who treated every case like a box to be ticked and filed."
1"The tiles beneath his neck held nothing but dust and a pale ring where the pooling should have been — as if someone had lifted the body, scrubbed the floor, and…"
2"She nodded to the nearest SOCO, who worked the fingers open with tweezers and lifted out a small brass compass on a tarnished chain."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"The pathologist had (have)"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.118
leniency0.235
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.039
82.6798%