Run: 2026-09-23-01M37PTTH4QAWMTG3CR5QVW76F

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Duration:
1m 38s
Cost:
$0.029985
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain had settled in for the night, the kind that Soho wore like an old coat, and The Raven's Nest held only four customers: a couple of actors arguing in whispers by the window and two men at the end of the bar who had been nursing the same whiskies since before Rory's shift started. She polished glasses behind the counter, stacking them upside down on the rubber mat, and listened to the neon sign above the door buzz against the glass every time the wind pushed at it. Silas was in the back with the accounts. She could hear his pencil tapping against the ledger through the wall, a rhythm that stopped and started the way his sentences did when the numbers annoyed him. The door opened at half past nine. The man who came through it stood on the mat for a long moment, dripping, one hand still on the handle as if the street might pull him back out. He was somewhere in his fifties, hard to pin down, thin in the way that people get thin when the weight comes off them one worry at a time. He wore a black cab driver's fleece over a shirt gone soft at the collar, and he wasn't looking at the bar or at Rory. He was looking at the far wall. At the photographs. His eyes stopped on one of them. Rory knew the picture — three young people leaning against a railing somewhere foreign, caught mid-laugh, coats too big for them, Prague inked in white across the bottom corner of the mount. She'd dusted that frame a hundred times. The pencil tapping stopped. Silas came out through the back doorway, a ledger still in one hand, and stopped dead in the middle of the floor. His knee did what it always did on the first step, that small hitch, but he didn't take the second one. "Danny." The man turned. Up close, Rory could see the shape of a handsome face still living under the ruin of it, the cheekbones and the strong jaw gone hollow. "Si." He let go of the door handle. "I've been driving this street for eleven years. Eleven years, and I never once clocked the green sign." "You weren't meant to. That's rather the point of the place." Neither of them moved. The actors by the window paid up and left, and the two men at the end of the bar took their glasses and their argument somewhere else, and still Silas stood at his half-step and the man stood on the mat, and the rain filled in the silence for them. "I can go," Rory offered. "If you want the place to yourselves." "Stay." Silas finally took the second step and set the ledger on the end of the counter. "Pour the Talisker. Third shelf, behind the Pimm's, where the riff-raff can't find it." She reached up for the bottle, her sleeve sliding back off the crescent scar on her wrist, and caught the man watching her hands the way people watch card tricks — like the small motions were easier to follow than anything else in the room. She set out three glasses before she thought better of it, put one back, and carried the bottle and two glasses down to where Silas had finally arrived, opposite the man he'd called Danny. "Daniel Reeve," the man said to her, and stuck out a hand across the bar. His grip was careful, like he was afraid of his own strength or had once been taught to be. "Aurora. Rory." "You work here?" "She works above here and she pulls the odd pint when I'm short-handed and she skims the tips," Silas said. "Sit down, Danny." "I've got a fare in twenty minutes. I'm parked on the meter round the corner." "Then you've got twenty minutes." Danny sat. Silas poured. The whisky went down and Danny held his glass up to the green light bleeding from the window, reading the colour of it like a document. "You've gone grey," Silas said. "One of us had to." Danny set the glass down without drinking. His eyes went back to the wall. "You kept her up there." "Of course I kept her up there." "I used to think you'd have thrown it out. After. I used to picture your flat with nothing on the walls at all." "My flat has nothing on the walls at all. This is the walls I've got." Silas turned his signet ring once around his finger, a slow half-rotation, and Rory had worked there long enough to know that gesture meant something was costing him. "You look thin, Danny." "I'm six years sober. Turns out I was most of my body weight, back then." He said it flat, without a smile, the way people say things they've had to say in church basements until the words wore smooth. "Left the service two years after Prague. Couldn't do it. Every checkpoint, every car door, I'd hear it. You know what I mean." "I know what you mean." "You got the bullet." Danny's thumb worked at the rim of his glass. "I got the rest of my life. Nobody ever asks how the second one heals." The rain thickened against the window. Rory dried the same glass she'd dried three times already and didn't move away. "I came to the hospital," Danny said. "Twice. Both times they turned me away. I thought — for years I thought you blamed me. For Klára. For the call I made at the checkpoint." "I know what you thought." "Then tell me I was wrong. Go on. Nineteen years, Si, and I've rehearsed this in the cab about four thousand times, and every version starts with you telling me I was wrong." Silas looked at him for a long moment. Then he got up, crossed to the wall, and lifted the Prague photograph off its hook. He brought it back and laid it flat on the bar between the two glasses, and stood over it with both hands braced on the counter's edge. "The inquiry wanted a name for the abort call," he said. "I gave them mine. Signed the statement, took the knee, took the pension, opened a bar. That was the trade. You were thirty-four years old with a wife and a career, and I was already halfway out the door on this leg." He tapped the counter once with the ring. "You weren't wrong about the checkpoint. You were wrong about everything after. You married the drink instead of Marie. You wrote me letters I never answered." Danny's head came up. "You got them?" "First line of every one. 'Dear Si.' Couldn't get past the second word. Not once in nineteen years." Silas picked up his glass and looked at the photograph instead of at Danny. "That's mine to carry. Not yours." Danny put both hands over his face and dragged them down, and when they came away his eyes were wet and furious about being wet. "I drove past this street," he said, "four nights a week. Eleven years. And the whole time you were in here reading the first line of my letters and not answering." "Yes." "You're a bastard, Si." "I'm told." Rory turned to the shelf and took the third glass back down. She set it in front of the photograph, and Silas looked at her, and she looked back at him, and she poured it to the same height as the others without asking anybody's permission. Danny laughed then, a cracked sound, half out of him before he could stop it. "She's quick, this one." "She's the reason my till balances," Silas said, and lifted his glass. "To Klára. Who would have hated this place." "She'd have loved this place." Danny picked up his own glass, and his hands had stopped shaking somewhere in the last few minutes. "She'd have put her feet up on your bar and told the pair of us to stop sulking. In two languages." They drank. Danny checked the clock behind the bar, swore at the time, and reached for his fleece. "Tuesday nights I'm on this rank," he said, pulling it on. "Four nights a week, like I told you. I'll be the cab outside with the engine off." "Then knock next time," Silas said. "The sign's green for a reason."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.36
leniency0.72
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1398
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
89.27% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1398
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences58
matches
0"was afraid"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences58
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences89
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen56
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1401
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount886
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.58
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Rory8
Prague2
Silas14
Danny12
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
4"Danny"
places
0"Soho"
1"Prague"
globalScore0.71
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1401
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences89
matches
0"know that gesture"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean29.19
std24.59
cv0.843
sampleLengths
090
136
2101
346
44
543
61
729
826
911
1054
1112
1231
1379
1434
152
163
1723
1815
195
2030
215
2224
237
2423
2547
2662
275
2828
2920
3034
315
3233
3351
3487
357
3638
3756
381
394
402
4146
4219
4320
4444
4518
4628
4712
99.21% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences58
matches
0"been taught"
67.55% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs151
matches
0"wasn't looking"
1"was looking"
2"was costing"
78.65% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences89
ratio0.022
matches
0"Rory knew the picture — three young people leaning against a railing somewhere foreign, caught mid-laugh, coats too big for them, Prague inked in white across the bottom corner of the mount."
1"She reached up for the bottle, her sleeve sliding back off the crescent scar on her wrist, and caught the man watching her hands the way people watch card tricks — like the small motions were easier to follow than anything else in the room."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount887
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.02480270574971815
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0033821871476888386
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences89
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences89
mean15.74
std12.89
cv0.819
sampleLengths
056
134
28
328
47
530
629
725
87
93
107
1132
127
134
1422
1521
161
173
1826
198
2018
2111
224
2350
245
257
2617
2714
2845
2934
3015
3119
322
333
3420
353
3615
375
382
392
4026
415
4212
437
445
457
4623
4743
484
4939
53.18% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3595505617977528
totalSentences89
uniqueOpeners32
69.44% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences48
matches
0"Then he got up, crossed"
ratio0.021
70.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences48
matches
0"She polished glasses behind the"
1"She could hear his pencil"
2"He was somewhere in his"
3"He wore a black cab"
4"He was looking at the"
5"His eyes stopped on one"
6"She'd dusted that frame a"
7"His knee did what it"
8"He let go of the"
9"She reached up for the"
10"She set out three glasses"
11"His grip was careful, like"
12"His eyes went back to"
13"He said it flat, without"
14"He brought it back and"
15"He tapped the counter once"
16"She set it in front"
17"he said, pulling it on"
ratio0.375
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount45
totalSentences48
matches
0"The rain had settled in"
1"She polished glasses behind the"
2"Silas was in the back"
3"She could hear his pencil"
4"The door opened at half"
5"The man who came through"
6"He was somewhere in his"
7"He wore a black cab"
8"He was looking at the"
9"His eyes stopped on one"
10"Rory knew the picture —"
11"She'd dusted that frame a"
12"The pencil tapping stopped."
13"Silas came out through the"
14"His knee did what it"
15"The man turned."
16"He let go of the"
17"Neither of them moved."
18"The actors by the window"
19"Silas finally took the second"
ratio0.938
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
ratio0
80.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The rain had settled in for the night, the kind that Soho wore like an old coat, and The Raven's Nest held only four customers: a couple of actors arguing in wh…"
1"She reached up for the bottle, her sleeve sliding back off the crescent scar on her wrist, and caught the man watching her hands the way people watch card trick…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.2686%