Run: 2026-09-23-01M37PW58SV3EA2R3XW4F0FXDV

Run Details

Duration:
2m 28s
Cost:
$0.034041
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain had chased Rory halfway across Soho, and it was still hammering the pavement when she came down the back stairs from her flat, hair damp, jacket smelling of sesame oil and wet cardboard. Her last delivery had gone to a man on Wardour Street who tipped her in loose change and an apology. She counted neither as she pushed through into the Nest. The green neon bled through the window glass and pooled on the floorboards. Silas stood behind the bar with a cloth in one hand, working a smudge out of a whisky glass, his bad knee settled against the counter's edge like an old dog resting. "Slow night, Carter." "Slow everything." She hoisted herself onto her usual stool. "Whatever's open. And some of those peanuts that aren't actually peanuts." He set down a lager and the bowl without comment. The Tuesday crowd was three deep and none of them thirsty: a cabbie reading the racing pages, two students sharing one pint to make it last. Rain ticked against the window. One of the maps on the wall — the Czech one, framed above the booth by the fire — caught her eye the way it did most nights, the little red pin over Prague she'd never asked about. The door opened, letting in a cold breath and the sound of a bus groaning past. The woman who came in wore a cardigan buttoned to the throat, which was the first wrong thing, because it was June. The second wrong thing was her hair — mousy, flat, pinned back — because Rory had last seen that hair the color of a struck match, teased out like a bonfire the woman had been proud of. The woman stopped in the doorway. Water dripped off her shoulder. She stared at Rory across the room with the expression of someone who has walked into a stranger's dream. "Rory?" Rory's hand went still around the glass. Three years collapsed into the space between the door and the bar. "Eva." They didn't hug. Eva came forward in small steps, as though the floor might not hold her, and then they were standing in front of each other, and Eva's hands were shaking, and Rory took one of them because that was the only sensible thing to do with shaking hands. "You're — God, look at you." Eva's gaze moved over her, cataloguing. "You look well. You look solid." "I am, mostly." "Last time I saw you, you weighed about as much as your suitcase." "I remember the suitcase." Rory managed something close to a laugh. "You carried it up two flights of stairs and told me the rent was a crime." "It was a crime. Is Silas —?" Eva glanced at the bar. "Silas Blackwood." He didn't offer a hand, just inclined his head, and something in his hazel eyes did a slow, quiet arithmetic Rory couldn't see the whole sum of. "Sit anywhere. The corner booth's dry." They took the booth beneath the Prague map. Silas brought a glass of red over without being asked, and a lager for Rory, and a carafe of water that nobody had requested, and then he withdrew to the far end of the bar and became very interested in his glasses. "So." Eva wrapped both hands around the wine but didn't drink. "Fate, or what? I'm in town for a conference. Conveyancing law, of all the tedious things. I got out of the hotel and I couldn't face the minibar and I just walked." "You always said you'd rather chew glass than do property law." "People change." She said it lightly, but her eyes went somewhere else when she said it. "You're telling me. Last I heard you were in Edinburgh." "Two years now. Marcus got a post at the university there. It's — it's good. It's green. There's a hill." She turned the wine glass a quarter turn, then another, the stem ticking against the table. Her wedding ring caught the low light. She kept spinning it. "And you? Silas said you live upstairs?" "Above the bar, yeah. I do deliveries for a Chinese restaurant over on — it doesn't matter where. Golden Empress. The owner's called Yu-Fei and she's terrifying and I love her." Eva's face did something complicated. "You're delivering food." "It's mine." Rory kept her voice level. "The money's mine, the shift's mine, the bike's mine. Nobody checks my phone at the end of the night to see where I've been." The words landed in the space between them and sat there. Eva's thumb stopped on the ring. "I didn't mean it like a — I didn't mean anything by it." "I know." "I didn't." "Eva." Rory leaned back against the leather. "You carried my suitcase. You can say things to me." Eva's phone buzzed against the table. She snatched it up — snatched, that was the word for it, a movement with fear in its knuckles — read the screen, and typed something fast with her thumbs, a message with the cadence of a schoolgirl finishing homework before inspection. "Marcus likes to know I've got in somewhere safe," she offered, putting the phone face-down. "It's a rough city, London." "It's Tuesday in Soho." "SoHo has crime." A small, brittle laugh. "He worries." Rory looked at her. Eva looked at the wine she still hadn't drunk. The cardigan was buttoned to the throat and the bar was warm and the cabbie was folding his racing pages and the rain kept on. "He worries," Rory repeated. "You don't understand. He's under real pressure at work, and I — it's not — we're fine. We're good. He's brilliant, actually, everyone says so." "I used to say that exact sentence." The sentence hung. Eva's jaw worked. Her hand went to her cuff and straightened it, and as she did, the sleeve rode up half an inch, and there was a shadow at her wrist, yellow-green at the edges, older than a week and younger than a month. Rory didn't look at it. She looked at Eva's face and let her look at whatever she needed to look at. "Why did we stop?" Eva's voice came out thin. "Calling. I mean. Why did we stop?" "You moved to Edinburgh." "You stopped answering before that." Eva's eyes were wet and furious at being wet. "I pulled you out. I got on a train to Cardiff and I sat on your stairs while he shouted through the door and I got you on that train, and then you got here and you shut like a — like a shutter. And I told myself, give her space, she's got to learn to stand up. And then it was a month, and then it was a year, and then it was too late to know how to start." "I owed you everything." Rory's hands were flat on the table now. "Everything. And I couldn't stand being seen by the one person who'd seen me like that. It wasn't you I was hiding from. It was me, from before." "Fat lot of good that did either of us." Eva wiped her eyes with the heel of her hand, quick, efficient, like it was a task. "I lost you anyway." Down at the bar, Silas set a fresh bowl of not-peanuts by the cabbie without taking his eyes off the corner booth. He'd stopped polishing. Rory caught the shape of him in the mirror behind the bottles, watching the two of them the way he watched the door. "Your wine's gone warm," Rory said. "I'm not really drinking these days." "Then don't drink it." Rory slid her own lager aside. "Listen. There's a sofa upstairs. It folds out, and it's got a dent in it shaped like me, but it doesn't ask questions. Yu-Fei's kitchen is open till midnight and the noodles are worth walking through rain for. You could stay tonight. Look at the hill-less view. Borrow my terrible towels." "I have a hotel." "I know you have a hotel." Eva looked at the phone lying face-down on the table. Her fingers found the ring again and turned it, once, twice. Then she stopped turning it. She picked the phone up, and instead of checking the screen, she slid it into her bag, all the way to the bottom, and pressed the clasp shut. "One drink," she decided. She drew the cardigan's top button through its hole, and then the second one, and folded her bare hands around the warm glass as if they'd been cold a long time. "Tell me about Yu-Fei. Start at the beginning."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Rory leaned back [back]"
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.291
leniency0.582
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.036
89.47% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1424
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"lightly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"lightly"
2"really"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
89.47% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1424
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"racing"
count2
1
word"efficient"
count1
highlights
0"racing"
1"efficient"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences63
matches
0"t with fear"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences63
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen80
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1437
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount892
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.91
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory17
Soho1
Wardour1
Street1
Nest1
Tuesday1
Czech1
Prague2
June1
Eva14
Silas3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"Wardour"
2"Street"
3"Nest"
4"Prague"
globalScore0.547
windowScore0.5
95.65% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something close to a laugh"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1437
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences99
matches
0"seen that hair"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean26.13
std21.84
cv0.836
sampleLengths
065
145
23
320
479
516
659
730
81
919
101
1150
1218
133
1413
1527
1612
1735
1850
1943
2011
2116
2210
2354
2431
258
2631
2717
2813
292
302
3117
3248
3320
344
359
3638
374
3825
397
4047
4121
4216
434
4495
4540
4630
4748
486
496
94.12% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences63
matches
0"being asked"
1"was buttoned"
13.52% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs143
matches
0"was still hammering"
1"were standing"
2"were shaking"
3"was folding"
56.28% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences99
ratio0.03
matches
0"One of the maps on the wall — the Czech one, framed above the booth by the fire — caught her eye the way it did most nights, the little red pin over Prague she'd never asked about."
1"The second wrong thing was her hair — mousy, flat, pinned back — because Rory had last seen that hair the color of a struck match, teased out like a bonfire the woman had been proud of."
2"She snatched it up — snatched, that was the word for it, a movement with fear in its knuckles — read the screen, and typed something fast with her thumbs, a message with the cadence of a schoolgirl finishing homework before inspection."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount759
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.025032938076416336
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.003952569169960474
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean14.52
std13.53
cv0.932
sampleLengths
035
120
210
313
432
53
69
711
810
926
105
1138
1216
1322
1437
156
165
1719
181
197
2012
211
223
2347
2412
256
263
2713
2811
2916
3012
3129
326
338
3442
3511
3632
3711
3816
3910
4036
417
424
437
4431
455
463
477
4824
4911
47.47% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.36363636363636365
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners36
55.56% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences60
matches
0"Then she stopped turning it."
ratio0.017
86.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences60
matches
0"Her last delivery had gone"
1"She counted neither as she"
2"She hoisted herself onto her"
3"He set down a lager"
4"She stared at Rory across"
5"They didn't hug."
6"He didn't offer a hand,"
7"They took the booth beneath"
8"She said it lightly, but"
9"She turned the wine glass"
10"Her wedding ring caught the"
11"She kept spinning it."
12"She snatched it up —"
13"she offered, putting the phone"
14"Her hand went to her"
15"She looked at Eva's face"
16"He'd stopped polishing."
17"Her fingers found the ring"
18"She picked the phone up,"
19"She drew the cardigan's top"
ratio0.333
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences60
matches
0"The rain had chased Rory"
1"Her last delivery had gone"
2"She counted neither as she"
3"The green neon bled through"
4"Silas stood behind the bar"
5"She hoisted herself onto her"
6"He set down a lager"
7"The Tuesday crowd was three"
8"Rain ticked against the window."
9"The door opened, letting in"
10"The woman who came in"
11"The second wrong thing was"
12"The woman stopped in the"
13"Water dripped off her shoulder."
14"She stared at Rory across"
15"Rory's hand went still around"
16"They didn't hug."
17"Eva came forward in small"
18"Eva's gaze moved over her,"
19"Rory managed something close to"
ratio0.933
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Eva came forward in small steps, as though the floor might not hold her, and then they were standing in front of each other, and Eva's hands were shaking, and R…"
1"She drew the cardigan's top button through its hole, and then the second one, and folded her bare hands around the warm glass as if they'd been cold a long time…"
93.75% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She said, but her eyes went somewhere else when she said it"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.055
leniency0.109
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.036
81.3288%