| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx flowed back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.367 | | leniency | 0.733 | | rawRatio | 0.091 | | effectiveRatio | 0.067 | |
| 95.93% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1230 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 79.67% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1230 | | totalAiIsms | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "perfect" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 62 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 62 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 81 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 60 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1247 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 19 | | wordCount | 1007 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.6 | | worstName | "Nyx" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Hel | 1 | | Rory | 5 | | December | 1 | | Nyx | 6 | | One | 2 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 39.62% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.604 | | wordCount | 1247 | | matches | | 0 | "not the eager heat it gave off near a Hel rift, but a slow, steady warmth, like a coal banked for the night" | | 1 | "not water but faint chimes, as if a hundred wind-bells were being carried" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 39 | | mean | 31.97 | | std | 31.16 | | cv | 0.974 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 48 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 28 | | 4 | 52 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 41 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 59 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 81 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 95 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 54 | | 18 | 51 | | 19 | 63 | | 20 | 81 | | 21 | 47 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 125 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 71 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 81 | | 34 | 35 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 47 | | 38 | 29 |
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| 99.60% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 150 | | matches | | 0 | "was behaving" | | 1 | "were collecting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 16 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 81 | | ratio | 0.136 | | matches | | 0 | "The crimson gem hung warm against her sternum — not the eager heat it gave off near a Hel rift, but a slow, steady warmth, like a coal banked for the night." | | 1 | "It framed a stretch of ordinary park — bracken, a fallen branch, the distant wash of traffic on the A308." | | 2 | "Not muffled — gone, as though someone had unplugged the city." | | 3 | "They stood in a clearing ringed by the seven stones, but the stones had grown — or the clearing had grown around them — and beyond them stretched a forest that owed nothing to Richmond Park." | | 4 | "They stood at the clearing's edge, head tilted, and their shadow — the shadow that was their whole body — was behaving wrong." | | 5 | "Rory filed that away — the name, the past tense — and made herself move." | | 6 | "The path — there was a path, though no one had laid it; the flowers simply grew sparser along one winding line — curved between the great oaks, and the forest opened up around them in stages, each one a new impossibility." | | 7 | "Rory crouched at its edge and the surface reflected her face — and behind her reflected face, the clearing's stones, though the stones lay far behind them and out of sight." | | 8 | "Not carved — grown, the bark swelling into the suggestion of cheekbones, brow ridges, sleeping mouths." | | 9 | "The avenue ended at a rise, and from its crest the grove revealed itself whole: the forest curved away in a vast bowl of violet dusk and gold-lit flowers, the stream threading upward through it all toward a distant ridge where the standing stones stood again — visible from inside, impossibly, ringing the world like a fence around a garden." | | 10 | "The figure turned toward them — across half a mile of impossible forest, precise as a compass needle — and lifted one hand." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 718 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 22 | | adverbRatio | 0.03064066852367688 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006963788300835654 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 81 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 81 | | mean | 15.4 | | std | 12.63 | | cv | 0.82 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 32 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 33 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 29 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 36 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 36 | | 27 | 26 | | 28 | 33 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 32 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 29 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 31 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 74.26% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.46835443037974683 | | totalSentences | 79 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the digits jumped to" | | 1 | "Further on, the trees began" |
| | ratio | 0.035 | |
| 86.67% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "Her hand went to the" | | 1 | "She curled her fingers around" | | 2 | "It framed a stretch of" | | 3 | "She rolled her shoulders and" | | 4 | "It tasted of summer." | | 5 | "She breathed it more than" | | 6 | "They stood in a clearing" | | 7 | "It was December." | | 8 | "She had been cold ten" | | 9 | "Her voice came out smaller" | | 10 | "They stood at the clearing's" | | 11 | "It pooled and eddied around" | | 12 | "They didn't crush underfoot." | | 13 | "They parted, closing behind her" | | 14 | "She checked her phone out" | | 15 | "She watched it." | | 16 | "She put it away with" | | 17 | "She couldn't argue with that." | | 18 | "They went deeper." |
| | ratio | 0.333 | |
| 91.58% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 42 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones waited in" | | 1 | "Rory counted them twice." | | 2 | "Nyx drifted between the trunks" | | 3 | "Her hand went to the" | | 4 | "The crimson gem hung warm" | | 5 | "She curled her fingers around" | | 6 | "Nyx flowed back into the" | | 7 | "Rory looked at the gap" | | 8 | "It framed a stretch of" | | 9 | "She rolled her shoulders and" | | 10 | "The world turned inside out." | | 11 | "Sound vanished first." | | 12 | "The air changed too." | | 13 | "It tasted of summer." | | 14 | "She breathed it more than" | | 15 | "They stood in a clearing" | | 16 | "The oaks rose in silver-grey" | | 17 | "It was December." | | 18 | "She had been cold ten" | | 19 | "Her voice came out smaller" |
| | ratio | 0.737 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 31.25% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The oaks rose in silver-grey columns twice the height of any earthly tree, their canopies lost in a soft violet dusk that held no visible sun." | | 1 | "Between the trunks, wildflowers carpeted the ground in drifts: bluebells and foxgloves and things like orchids crossed with stained glass, petals translucent, l…" | | 2 | "They stood at the clearing's edge, head tilted, and their shadow — the shadow that was their whole body — was behaving wrong." | | 3 | "A stream crossed the path, and the water ran clear over stones of milky quartz, but it ran uphill, climbing the slope ahead of them in patient silver ropes, and…" | | 4 | "The wind changed direction, flowing against itself, carrying a single clear sentence down the slope to them as though she stood a foot away." |
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| 79.55% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx drifted, their silhouette thinning where the moonlight cut across it" |
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| 83.33% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "She breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "she muttered (mutter)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.1 | | leniency | 0.2 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.133 | |