Run: 2026-09-23-01M37Q19ZP11NM744ZDJR0ZP8D

Run Details

Duration:
1m 3s
Cost:
$0.014849
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones waited in the dead heart of Richmond Park, where the lamplight gave up and the footpaths dissolved into mud. Seven of them, arranged in a rough oval, each carved from oak so ancient it had turned to grey stone that still smelled, faintly, of sap. Rory counted them twice. "Six last night. I'm not imagining it." "You are not." Nyx drifted between the trunks of neighbouring trees, their silhouette thinning where the moonlight cut across it. "The seventh woke when you brought the stone." Her hand went to the pendant at her throat before she could stop it. The crimson gem hung warm against her sternum — not the eager heat it gave off near a Hel rift, but a slow, steady warmth, like a coal banked for the night. She curled her fingers around it. "It's not doing the portal thing. No pulse." "Then whatever waits beyond the stones is not of Hel." Nyx flowed back into the deeper shadow beside the oval's opening, solidifying until they stood at their full height, violet eyes burning low. "Which leaves the other side of the Veil." "The Fae side." "The Fae side." Rory looked at the gap between the two nearest stones. It framed a stretch of ordinary park — bracken, a fallen branch, the distant wash of traffic on the A308. Except when she tilted her head, the bracken shivered with colours that had no names, and the traffic noise arrived a half-second too late, like a badly dubbed film. "Right." She rolled her shoulders and stepped through. The world turned inside out. Sound vanished first. Not muffled — gone, as though someone had unplugged the city. In its place rose a hush so complete she could hear her own pulse, and under that, something else: a low, resonant hum, the sound a wine glass makes when a wet finger travels its rim. The air changed too. It tasted of summer. Of honeysuckle and warm earth and rain that had already passed, and it entered her lungs like a drink after a long thirst. "God." She breathed it more than said it. They stood in a clearing ringed by the seven stones, but the stones had grown — or the clearing had grown around them — and beyond them stretched a forest that owed nothing to Richmond Park. The oaks rose in silver-grey columns twice the height of any earthly tree, their canopies lost in a soft violet dusk that held no visible sun. Between the trunks, wildflowers carpeted the ground in drifts: bluebells and foxgloves and things like orchids crossed with stained glass, petals translucent, lit from within by a faint gold that had no source. It was December. She had been cold ten seconds ago. "Nyx." Her voice came out smaller than she intended. "Is it warm here, or am I hallucinating?" Nyx had gone still in a way that made her skin prickle. They stood at the clearing's edge, head tilted, and their shadow — the shadow that was their whole body — was behaving wrong. It pooled and eddied around their feet like ink in water, reaching toward the treeline in thin, questing tendrils. "The shadows here are alive." Awe had crept into the whisper. "On Earth, shadows follow. Here, they lead." One dark filament touched the root of an oak and the tree's own shadow leaned down to meet it, the two entwining like a handshake. "I have not felt this since Aldric walked." Rory filed that away — the name, the past tense — and made herself move. One step, then another, off the bare earth of the threshold and into the flowers. They didn't crush underfoot. They parted, closing behind her ankles with a sound like tiny bells, and where the blooms brushed her skin they left a shimmer of pollen that faded in seconds. "Okay. Okay, that's — fine. That's fine." She checked her phone out of pure reflex. The screen lit: 11:47 PM. She watched it. 11:47. 11:47. Then the digits jumped to 2:13 in the space of a breath, and the battery, half-full a second ago, sat at nine per cent with a low-power warning blinking at her. She put it away with hands that weren't quite steady. "Nyx. The time thing is real. My clock just lost two and a half hours." "Then we do not linger on the far side of the stones longer than we must." Nyx moved up beside her, and where they passed, the flowers' inner light dimmed, bowing their heads. "This place gives generously. It has never been said what it takes as payment." "That's exactly the kind of thing you mention before we walk in." "You would have walked in regardless." She couldn't argue with that. They went deeper. The path — there was a path, though no one had laid it; the flowers simply grew sparser along one winding line — curved between the great oaks, and the forest opened up around them in stages, each one a new impossibility. A stream crossed the path, and the water ran clear over stones of milky quartz, but it ran uphill, climbing the slope ahead of them in patient silver ropes, and the sound it made was not water but faint chimes, as if a hundred wind-bells were being carried upstream. Rory crouched at its edge and the surface reflected her face — and behind her reflected face, the clearing's stones, though the stones lay far behind them and out of sight. "Don't touch it," Nyx said. "I wasn't going to touch it." "You were going to touch it." She stood. "I was considering the physics of it. There's a difference." Further on, the trees began to have faces. Not carved — grown, the bark swelling into the suggestion of cheekbones, brow ridges, sleeping mouths. None of them had eyes, but every one of them had ears, long and pointed and perfect, and Rory walked the last stretch of that avenue with her own ears burning, certain that the trees were collecting every word she said and filing it somewhere for later. "Even the plants are eavesdropping here," she muttered. "Then say nothing you would not repeat to a queen." The avenue ended at a rise, and from its crest the grove revealed itself whole: the forest curved away in a vast bowl of violet dusk and gold-lit flowers, the stream threading upward through it all toward a distant ridge where the standing stones stood again — visible from inside, impossibly, ringing the world like a fence around a garden. Overhead, where a sky should have been, the hum concentrated into slow-moving bands of pale light, like the aurora's quiet cousin. And in the middle of the bowl, small with distance but unmistakable, a figure stood among the flowers. Silver hair to the waist. No footprints anywhere around her, though the grass bent in the wind. Nyx went very still. "She knows we are here." "Was there ever a moment she didn't?" The figure turned toward them — across half a mile of impossible forest, precise as a compass needle — and lifted one hand. The wind changed direction, flowing against itself, carrying a single clear sentence down the slope to them as though she stood a foot away. "You carry winter in your pocket and a dead man at your shoulder, Aurora Carter. Come down before the grove forgets you are guests and decides you are flowers."
created_at"2026-09-23T18:04:21.894Z" 9/23/2026, 6:04:21 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Nyx flowed back [back]"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.367
leniency0.733
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.067
95.93% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1230
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
79.67% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1230
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"whisper"
count1
3
word"perfect"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"pulse"
2"whisper"
3"perfect"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences62
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences62
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences81
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen60
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1247
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount1007
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.6
worstName"Nyx"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Hel1
Rory5
December1
Nyx6
One2
persons
0"Rory"
1"Nyx"
2"One"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Hel"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences44
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
39.62% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.604
wordCount1247
matches
0"not the eager heat it gave off near a Hel rift, but a slow, steady warmth, like a coal banked for the night"
1"not water but faint chimes, as if a hundred wind-bells were being carried"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean31.97
std31.16
cv0.974
sampleLengths
048
14
27
328
452
58
641
73
83
959
108
115
1281
138
1495
1510
1617
1754
1851
1963
2081
2147
2212
236
245
25125
265
276
286
2912
3071
318
3210
3381
3435
359
367
3747
3829
99.60% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"being carried"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs150
matches
0"was behaving"
1"were collecting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount16
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences81
ratio0.136
matches
0"The crimson gem hung warm against her sternum — not the eager heat it gave off near a Hel rift, but a slow, steady warmth, like a coal banked for the night."
1"It framed a stretch of ordinary park — bracken, a fallen branch, the distant wash of traffic on the A308."
2"Not muffled — gone, as though someone had unplugged the city."
3"They stood in a clearing ringed by the seven stones, but the stones had grown — or the clearing had grown around them — and beyond them stretched a forest that owed nothing to Richmond Park."
4"They stood at the clearing's edge, head tilted, and their shadow — the shadow that was their whole body — was behaving wrong."
5"Rory filed that away — the name, the past tense — and made herself move."
6"The path — there was a path, though no one had laid it; the flowers simply grew sparser along one winding line — curved between the great oaks, and the forest opened up around them in stages, each one a new impossibility."
7"Rory crouched at its edge and the surface reflected her face — and behind her reflected face, the clearing's stones, though the stones lay far behind them and out of sight."
8"Not carved — grown, the bark swelling into the suggestion of cheekbones, brow ridges, sleeping mouths."
9"The avenue ended at a rise, and from its crest the grove revealed itself whole: the forest curved away in a vast bowl of violet dusk and gold-lit flowers, the stream threading upward through it all toward a distant ridge where the standing stones stood again — visible from inside, impossibly, ringing the world like a fence around a garden."
10"The figure turned toward them — across half a mile of impossible forest, precise as a compass needle — and lifted one hand."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount718
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.03064066852367688
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.006963788300835654
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences81
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences81
mean15.4
std12.63
cv0.82
sampleLengths
022
126
24
37
420
58
614
732
86
98
1033
118
123
133
1410
1520
1629
178
185
193
2011
2136
224
234
2423
258
2636
2726
2833
293
307
319
328
3312
3423
3519
3611
3732
388
3915
4015
414
4229
4315
445
453
461
471
4831
4910
74.26% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.46835443037974683
totalSentences79
uniqueOpeners37
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences57
matches
0"Then the digits jumped to"
1"Further on, the trees began"
ratio0.035
86.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences57
matches
0"Her hand went to the"
1"She curled her fingers around"
2"It framed a stretch of"
3"She rolled her shoulders and"
4"It tasted of summer."
5"She breathed it more than"
6"They stood in a clearing"
7"It was December."
8"She had been cold ten"
9"Her voice came out smaller"
10"They stood at the clearing's"
11"It pooled and eddied around"
12"They didn't crush underfoot."
13"They parted, closing behind her"
14"She checked her phone out"
15"She watched it."
16"She put it away with"
17"She couldn't argue with that."
18"They went deeper."
ratio0.333
91.58% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount42
totalSentences57
matches
0"The standing stones waited in"
1"Rory counted them twice."
2"Nyx drifted between the trunks"
3"Her hand went to the"
4"The crimson gem hung warm"
5"She curled her fingers around"
6"Nyx flowed back into the"
7"Rory looked at the gap"
8"It framed a stretch of"
9"She rolled her shoulders and"
10"The world turned inside out."
11"Sound vanished first."
12"The air changed too."
13"It tasted of summer."
14"She breathed it more than"
15"They stood in a clearing"
16"The oaks rose in silver-grey"
17"It was December."
18"She had been cold ten"
19"Her voice came out smaller"
ratio0.737
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
31.25% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The oaks rose in silver-grey columns twice the height of any earthly tree, their canopies lost in a soft violet dusk that held no visible sun."
1"Between the trunks, wildflowers carpeted the ground in drifts: bluebells and foxgloves and things like orchids crossed with stained glass, petals translucent, l…"
2"They stood at the clearing's edge, head tilted, and their shadow — the shadow that was their whole body — was behaving wrong."
3"A stream crossed the path, and the water ran clear over stones of milky quartz, but it ran uphill, climbing the slope ahead of them in patient silver ropes, and…"
4"The wind changed direction, flowing against itself, carrying a single clear sentence down the slope to them as though she stood a foot away."
79.55% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Nyx drifted, their silhouette thinning where the moonlight cut across it"
83.33% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"She breathed (breathe)"
1"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.1
leniency0.2
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.133
85.3822%