Run: 2026-09-23-01M37Q1EJWGGEEG27K4E61AQ7B

Run Details

Duration:
1m 10s
Cost:
$0.021432
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Ptolemy heard it first. The tabby sat up on the windowsill, ears swivelling toward the door a full three seconds before the knock came. Rory looked up from Eva's notes, pen still in her teeth, and frowned at the cat. "It's two in the morning," she told him. "Nobody who knocks at two in the morning is anybody we want." The knock came again. Three raps, measured, patient. Ptolemy's tail lashed. She crossed the flat on cold feet, stepped over a stack of grimoaries Eva had left teetering by the bookcase, and pressed her eye to the peephole. The hallway light was broken again, so all she got was a shape — tall, narrow, pale hair catching what little glow the curry house downstairs threw through the stairwell window. Her stomach dropped before her brain caught up. "No," she said through the door. "Absolutely not." "Rory." His voice came muffled through wood and three deadbolts. "Ten minutes." "You had three months." She turned the first lock anyway, then hated herself for it, then turned the other two because her hands had apparently decided to negotiate without her. "You had my number. You had Silas'. You had—" She opened the door. Lucien Moreau stood in the hallway with rain wrecking him. Not a drizzle — a proper November downpour, the kind that turns Brick Lane into a river of chip grease and drowned leaves. His charcoal suit was ruined, his platinum hair had given up its slick and hung across his forehead in wet ropes, and his ivory cane dripped like everything else. She had never once seen him look anything less than tailored. The sight of it knocked something loose in her chest, and she stepped back before she could stop herself. He came in. "You're dripping on Eva's notes." "Your notes now, I hear." He glanced around the flat — the books, the scrolls, the cat now watching him from the windowsill with flat hostility. "She left you the whole menagerie?" "She left me a key and a warning label." Rory yanked a towel off the drying rack in the kitchenette corner and threw it at him. He caught it against his chest without looking. "Don't change the subject. The subject is that you walked out of Silas' in July and ceased to exist." "I was aware of the subject." He dragged the towel through his hair once, and it did nothing. He was still soaked, still standing in the middle of Eva's flat at two in the morning, and his amber eye caught the desk lamp while the black one swallowed it whole. That eye had always unsettled people. It had never unsettled her, which was part of the problem. "Ten minutes," she said, and dropped onto the edge of the desk chair, arms folded. "Talk." "My father kept debts." Lucien draped the towel over the back of a chair and didn't sit. "Not money. Avaros doesn't trade in money. He kept debts of a different kind, and when he died, those debts passed to a collector. The collector has spent nine years tracking down everything my father owed — and everything my father's blood might still be worth." "And this is the part where you tell me you skipped town to protect me, and I'm supposed to find that romantic instead of cowardly." "The kiss," he said, and the word dropped between them like a stone in a glass. "At Silas'. Someone saw it. Someone who sells what they see. Within a week, the collector knew that Lucien Moreau had a — " his mouth twisted around the word " — weakness. A delivery girl who lives above a bar and waters a stranger's cat. Do you understand what a weakness is worth, in my world? It's a lever. It's a blade with a handle for someone else's hand." "So you vanished." Her voice came out flatter than she wanted. "You let a demon's accountant decide what I meant to you. You could have told me. I'd have played along. I'd have cursed your name in every pub from here to Camden. I'm good at pretending, Lucien — I pretended for two years that I wanted to be a lawyer." "Would you have let go?" He turned, and the lamplight slid across his face, and there it was — the crack in all that tailoring. "If I had come to you and said, we must never be seen together, we must never speak of it, you must hate me loudly and publicly for your own good — would you have managed it?" She opened her mouth. Closed it. Because no. No, she wouldn't have. She'd have found loopholes. She'd have invented signals and dead drops and a whole secret architecture just to keep him, and she'd have been proud of it, and it would have gotten her killed. "You could have said something anyway," she managed. "You could have said nothing and I'd have taken the hint. Instead you said everything and then left. You kissed me like it was the last thing you'd ever do and then you made it true." "It was the hardest thing I have ever done." He said it quietly, and the rain filled the pause. "And I have done hard things. I was born doing hard things." Ptolemy chose that moment to abandon the windowsill, thread between Lucien's legs, and sit on his shoes. Traitor. "Three months," Rory said. "You were gone three months, and tonight you knock on Eva's door at two in the morning, soaked, looking like you ran here. So whatever you're about to tell me, it's not a social call. What happened tonight?" "The collector stopped hunting me." He reached into his ruined jacket and produced a folded paper, softened by the rain, and held it out. "Tonight he started hunting Eva's research. And the only person sitting in the middle of Eva's research is you." She took the paper. Unfolded it. It was a copy of a page from one of Eva's own notebooks — one of the ones on the shelf not two feet from her elbow — annotated in a spidery hand she didn't recognise. "He's been in the flat." Her voice went thin. "Or someone has." "No. He bought a copy from the same merchant who sold him the sighting of us in July. The trail that ends at this door." Lucien stepped closer, and she could smell the rain on him, and under it wool and smoke and something faintly like burnt sugar. "I burned every other copy. I burned the merchant's shop. I have been three months burning a road behind you, Rory, and it ends here, in this flat, tonight — because this is where you are, and I am done being somewhere else." "Done?" She looked up. He was close now. Too close. The amber eye burned; the black one held her like a held breath. "You don't get to stand there, dripping on Eva's notes, smelling like a London storm, and say done like it costs you nothing." "It cost me everything. I have been paying it in instalments." She laughed — one short, cracked sound — and then she was off the chair, and he was already reaching, and the kiss landed somewhere in the middle, rain and warmth and three months of slammed doors finally giving way. His hand came up to cradle the back of her head; hers fisted in his ruined lapel. Ptolemy yowled and knocked an ink pot off the desk. They broke apart. Ink spread across Eva's research notes in a black bloom. "You're paying for that," Rory breathed. "I'll buy her a library." His forehead rested against hers. "Ten minutes, I said. I intend to need far more than ten minutes." "Then you'd better sit down." She pulled back, dragged the chair out, and shoved him into it. "And start from the beginning. The real one this time."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
69.57% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"He glanced around [around]"
1"his mouth twisted around [around]"
2"She pulled back [back]"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.511
leniency1
rawRatio0.13
effectiveRatio0.13
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1311
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
73.30% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1311
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"absolutely"
count1
3
word"unsettled"
count2
4
word"the last thing"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"stomach"
2"absolutely"
3"unsettled"
4"the last thing"
5"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences62
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences62
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences84
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen66
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1327
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount726
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.69
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva5
Moreau1
November1
Brick1
Lane1
Rory4
Lucien4
Ptolemy4
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
3"Lucien"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
80.56% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences36
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"her hands had apparently decided to negotiat"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1327
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean35.86
std25.53
cv0.712
sampleLengths
040
120
211
366
48
512
639
74
892
93
105
1132
1253
1367
1416
1563
1625
1786
1861
1962
206
2140
2244
2331
2418
2542
2643
2742
2812
2991
3046
3111
3267
3313
346
3523
3627
93.94% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences62
matches
0"was broken"
1"got was"
2"was ruined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs127
matches
0"was already reaching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences84
ratio0.095
matches
0"The hallway light was broken again, so all she got was a shape — tall, narrow, pale hair catching what little glow the curry house downstairs threw through the stairwell window."
1"Not a drizzle — a proper November downpour, the kind that turns Brick Lane into a river of chip grease and drowned leaves."
2"\"Your notes now, I hear.\" He glanced around the flat — the books, the scrolls, the cat now watching him from the windowsill with flat hostility."
3"\"Would you have let go?\" He turned, and the lamplight slid across his face, and there it was — the crack in all that tailoring."
4"It was a copy of a page from one of Eva's own notebooks — one of the ones on the shelf not two feet from her elbow — annotated in a spidery hand she didn't recognise."
5"The amber eye burned; the black one held her like a held breath."
6"She laughed — one short, cracked sound — and then she was off the chair, and he was already reaching, and the kiss landed somewhere in the middle, rain and warmth and three months of slammed doors finally giving way."
7"His hand came up to cradle the back of her head; hers fisted in his ruined lapel."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount718
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"tall, narrow, pale hair"
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.03899721448467967
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.005571030640668524
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences84
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences84
mean15.8
std13.76
cv0.871
sampleLengths
04
120
216
38
412
54
64
73
827
931
108
116
122
1310
142
1530
169
174
1810
1923
2029
2111
2219
233
245
2526
266
2726
288
2919
3018
3132
326
3311
3415
351
3617
3746
3825
3916
4070
4111
4250
4325
4437
454
462
472
484
494
70.63% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4523809523809524
totalSentences84
uniqueOpeners38
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences54
matches
0"she told him"
1"She crossed the flat on"
2"Her stomach dropped before her"
3"she said through the door"
4"His voice came muffled through"
5"She turned the first lock"
6"She opened the door."
7"His charcoal suit was ruined,"
8"She had never once seen"
9"He came in."
10"He glanced around the flat"
11"He caught it against his"
12"He dragged the towel through"
13"He was still soaked, still"
14"It had never unsettled her,"
15"she said, and dropped onto"
16"he said, and the word"
17"his mouth twisted around the"
18"Her voice came out flatter"
19"He turned, and the lamplight"
ratio0.648
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount50
totalSentences54
matches
0"Ptolemy heard it first."
1"The tabby sat up on"
2"Rory looked up from Eva's"
3"she told him"
4"The knock came again."
5"Ptolemy's tail lashed."
6"She crossed the flat on"
7"The hallway light was broken"
8"Her stomach dropped before her"
9"she said through the door"
10"His voice came muffled through"
11"She turned the first lock"
12"She opened the door."
13"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
14"His charcoal suit was ruined,"
15"She had never once seen"
16"The sight of it knocked"
17"He came in."
18"He glanced around the flat"
19"Rory yanked a towel off"
ratio0.926
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences19
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
59.78% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"he said, and the word dropped between them like a stone in a glass"
1"He turned, and the lamplight slid across his face, and there it was — the crack in all that tailoring"
2"He said, and the rain filled the pause"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.156
leniency0.311
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.044
78.0595%