Run: 2026-09-23-01M37Q6M82P2NV4TJ0WP6JXXKK

Run Details

Duration:
1m 32s
Cost:
$0.016215
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The pendant had been burning for three nights before Rory gave in and followed it. She climbed the fence at Richmond Park a little after eleven, the wrought-iron spikes catching her jeans at the knee, and dropped into grass still wet from the afternoon rain. The lock on the gate had been a suggestion at best. Still, she crouched in the shadow of a hawthorn and counted the seconds until her heartbeat settled back into something reasonable. "Delivery for one," she muttered to the empty lane. "No tip." The joke landed in the dark and died there. She set off along the path toward Pen Ponds, following the tug of the Heartstone against her sternum. It had started as warmth. Then a pulse, faint as a second heartbeat, keeping time with nothing. Tonight it pulled like a hook behind her ribs, and every hour she'd ignored it, it had gotten warmer. By midnight it had felt less like a gift and more like a summons. She knew the way to the stones. She'd found the grove once before, in daylight, when Eva had dragged her out here with a thermos and a lecture about "recharging" that Rory had endured mostly for the fresh air. The standing stones had been a curiosity then — seven weathered oaks, shaped and set in a ring at the edge of a clearing no map bothered to mark. Now the pendant flared hot at the memory of them. The park at night was a different animal. The ponds lay flat and black, holding a smeared copy of the moon. Somewhere beyond the treeline, a car passed on the road, and the sound reached her thin and stretched, as if it had traveled much farther than the half mile it should have. The stones rose ahead of her. She stopped at the boundary and rested her palm on the nearest one. The oak was cold, but not cold enough for October. It felt the way skin feels — a fraction above the air around it. "Don't do this," she told it. "Don't be weird about it." She stepped between two of the trunks, and the world closed its door behind her. That was the only way she could describe it afterward, if there was an afterward. The traffic noise didn't fade — it ended, clipped off mid-hiss like a finger lifted from a string. The air inside the ring was warm and green and tasted of summer. Moonlight lay across the clearing in a flat silver wash, and the wildflowers were out, all of them, hundreds of them, pale blossoms scattered through the grass exactly as she remembered from June. Except they were all facing her. Rory stood still and let her eyes do the work. Every bloom in the clearing, white and violet and a soft arterial red, tilted on its stem toward the place where she stood. Not toward the moon. Not toward the warmth. Toward her, the way a crowd faces a stage. "Phototropism," she said aloud, because saying it made it a smaller thing. "They grow toward light. I'm not light." The flowers said nothing back. The pendant beat against her chest, quick and shallow now, a sparrow's pulse. She took out her phone. No signal — she'd expected that. But the clock read 11:47, and it had read 11:40 when she'd climbed the fence. She'd walked twenty minutes. She watched the display, and the minute figure turned over to 11:48, and then it sat there while she counted a hundred of her own heartbeats and it did not move again. "Fine." She pocketed the phone. "Time's broken. That's fine." A blackbird began to sing. The sound came from the far treeline, three liquid notes, rising. Lovely. Wrong. Blackbirds sang at dawn and dusk, not midnight, and no bird sang the same three notes, in the same order, at the same interval, over and over. She counted six repetitions. Seven. The eighth came a half-second late, as if the singer had needed a moment to remember what came next. "I know a loop when I hear one," Rory called across the clearing. Her voice sounded smaller than it should have, the way voices sound in a room with thick carpet. "Whatever you are — if you brought me here, come out and say so. I've had exes with better communication skills." Her words hung. Then they came back — an echo, which was its own problem, because the open clearing had no walls to bounce from. And the echo was wrong. She'd said communication skills. The echo gave her back communication, then a soft extra syllable she hadn't spoken, a trailing sound like a breath let out through teeth. She turned in a slow circle. The seven stones stood in their ring. She counted them twice. Seven. The blackbird stopped. The silence that followed wasn't empty. It was the silence of a held breath, of something that had been making noise and had chosen, deliberately, to stop because she was listening. Rory stood in the silver grass with her fists at her sides and heard the quiet underneath the quiet — a low, tidal sound, in and out, too slow to be wind and too steady to be water. Breathing. Something large, taking its time. "Okay." She kept her voice level, the courtroom voice her father had drilled into her, the one that said I am not afraid and made it true by force of grammar. "I came because this thing—" she lifted the pendant, and its crimson heart flared in her palm, "—has been dragging me here for three nights. Somebody gave it to me. I don't know who. If that's you, you've got my attention. Well done. Now show yourself." The flowers turned. All of them. Hundreds of pale heads rotating on their stems in one motion, a slow unified swivel away from her, toward the northern edge of the clearing where the trees stood darkest. Rory's stomach dropped through the warm summer grass and kept going. She didn't look. Not yet. She watched the grass instead, the path of crushed blossoms where she'd walked, and she saw the second set of footprints beside her own. They came out of the dark treeline, crossed the clearing to her, and stopped. Bare, narrow, pressed into the flowers. They had no prints leading back in — they simply began, ten feet behind her, as if the walker had condensed out of the air mid-stride. Rory's own footsteps had stopped when she'd stopped. She knew that. She remembered stopping. The breathing behind her — no, beside her now — slowed, and settled, and waited. The pendant pulsed once, hard, hot enough that she felt it through her fingers. Not like a heartbeat anymore. Like a knock. Like an answer. She turned her head, and the dark under the trees had a shape in it, tall and patient, and the shape was closer than the treeline could possibly allow.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
75.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said aloud [aloud]"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.615
leniency1
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.125
95.67% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1156
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.10% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1156
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"warmth"
count2
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"echo"
count3
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"footsteps"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"pulse"
2"echo"
3"silence"
4"stomach"
5"footsteps"
6"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences89
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences94
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1165
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount1102
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.64
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory7
Richmond1
Park1
Pen1
Ponds1
Heartstone1
Eva1
October1
June1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Ponds"
2"Eva"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Pen"
3"June"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1165
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean35.3
std25.53
cv0.723
sampleLengths
015
162
211
377
478
553
643
711
815
979
106
1150
1219
1318
1462
159
165
1764
1852
1958
2018
213
2269
236
2477
253
2644
2729
2846
2914
3015
3125
3229
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs171
matches
0"was listening"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences94
ratio0.096
matches
0"The standing stones had been a curiosity then — seven weathered oaks, shaped and set in a ring at the edge of a clearing no map bothered to mark."
1"It felt the way skin feels — a fraction above the air around it."
2"The traffic noise didn't fade — it ended, clipped off mid-hiss like a finger lifted from a string."
3"No signal — she'd expected that."
4"Then they came back — an echo, which was its own problem, because the open clearing had no walls to bounce from."
5"Rory stood in the silver grass with her fists at her sides and heard the quiet underneath the quiet — a low, tidal sound, in and out, too slow to be wind and too steady to be water."
6"\"I came because this thing—\" she lifted the pendant, and its crimson heart flared in her palm, \"—has been dragging me here for three nights. Somebody gave it to me. I don't know who. If that's you, you've got my attention. Well done. Now show yourself.\""
7"They had no prints leading back in — they simply began, ten feet behind her, as if the walker had condensed out of the air mid-stride."
8"The breathing behind her — no, beside her now — slowed, and settled, and waited."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount895
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.03128491620111732
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.00558659217877095
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean12.39
std10
cv0.807
sampleLengths
015
130
211
321
49
52
69
718
85
912
1019
1114
127
1332
1429
1510
168
1713
1832
196
2013
2110
2214
236
245
2515
2615
2718
2813
2933
306
3110
3223
334
344
359
3612
377
385
3913
405
416
4215
434
4432
455
464
475
4811
491
59.22% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.425531914893617
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners40
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences83
matches
0"Then a pulse, faint as"
1"Somewhere beyond the treeline, a"
2"Then they came back —"
ratio0.036
70.60% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences83
matches
0"She climbed the fence at"
1"she muttered to the empty"
2"She set off along the"
3"It had started as warmth."
4"She knew the way to"
5"She'd found the grove once"
6"She stopped at the boundary"
7"It felt the way skin"
8"she told it"
9"She stepped between two of"
10"she said aloud, because saying"
11"She took out her phone."
12"She'd walked twenty minutes."
13"She watched the display, and"
14"She pocketed the phone"
15"She counted six repetitions."
16"Her voice sounded smaller than"
17"Her words hung."
18"She'd said communication skills."
19"She turned in a slow"
ratio0.373
68.43% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences83
matches
0"The pendant had been burning"
1"She climbed the fence at"
2"The lock on the gate"
3"she muttered to the empty"
4"The joke landed in the"
5"She set off along the"
6"It had started as warmth."
7"Tonight it pulled like a"
8"She knew the way to"
9"She'd found the grove once"
10"The standing stones had been"
11"The park at night was"
12"The ponds lay flat and"
13"The stones rose ahead of"
14"She stopped at the boundary"
15"The oak was cold, but"
16"It felt the way skin"
17"she told it"
18"She stepped between two of"
19"That was the only way"
ratio0.783
60.24% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences83
matches
0"Now the pendant flared hot"
ratio0.012
73.17% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Somewhere beyond the treeline, a car passed on the road, and the sound reached her thin and stretched, as if it had traveled much farther than the half mile it …"
1"The eighth came a half-second late, as if the singer had needed a moment to remember what came next."
2"It was the silence of a held breath, of something that had been making noise and had chosen, deliberately, to stop because she was listening."
3"They had no prints leading back in — they simply began, ten feet behind her, as if the walker had condensed out of the air mid-stride."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
73.08% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.308
leniency0.615
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.154
87.4505%