Run: 2026-09-23-01M37Q7G4KYNBYZATGKZTFFXZB

Run Details

Duration:
1m 19s
Cost:
$0.016326
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came in threes. Slow, deliberate, spaced like a man who knew exactly how long it took to walk down a flight of stairs and reconsider. Rory set down Ptolemy's food bowl and listened. Eva had been in Dublin for two weeks, and the only visitors the flat ever got were takeaway drivers who couldn't read a door number. The knock came again. She crossed the book-strewn floor, stood on tiptoe to peer through the peephole, and felt the air go out of her lungs. Three deadbolts. She threw each one with more force than necessary, then pulled the door open and let the rain-drenched figure of Lucien Moreau stand there, dripping on Eva's welcome mat, looking like a portrait someone had left out in a storm. "No," she said. "Bonsoir to you as well, Rory." His platinum hair had collapsed out of its slick and hung in wet ropes across his forehead. The charcoal suit clung to him, ruined. One gloved hand pressed against his ribs, and the ivory handle of his cane was the only part of him that still gleamed. "You're bleeding." "Among other things." He offered a smile that didn't reach his mismatched eyes. "May I come in? The gentleman across the street has been photographing me for the last six minutes, and I would prefer he had nothing interesting to capture." She looked past his shoulder. A man in a rain jacket stood under the awning of the curry house below, phone raised, expression bored. When he clocked her staring, he pocketed the phone and walked off into the downpour. She stepped aside. Lucien limped past her, trailing water across the threshold, and Ptolemy took one look at him and vanished behind the sofa like a streak of tabby lightning. "Charmed," Lucien said. "He has taste." She shut the door and threw the deadbolts, one, two, three, keeping her back to him. "You have five minutes. Then I'm putting you out in the rain and letting your photographer finish his portfolio." "Fair terms." She turned. He had lowered himself onto the arm of Eva's reading chair, and now he peeled the glove from his right hand, revealing fingers slick with blood that wasn't entirely red. Too dark. Slightly iridescent, like oil on a puddle. "That's not yours." "It is now." He unbuttoned his waistcoat with his good hand and she saw the tear in the white shirt beneath, and beneath that, three long gashes scored across his ribs, already knitting at the edges in that too-fast way his father's blood allowed. "There is a ledger, Rory. A client of mine sold something he shouldn't have, and the buyer wants the sale erased. Which means the seller erased, which means me. Eva has the original in her collection. I need it." "Then you should have rung ahead." "You wouldn't have answered." "Correct." He laughed, a short, rough sound, and winced when it pulled at his side. "Still the fastest mind in London and the most stubborn." "Don't." She crossed to the kitchenette, yanked open the cupboard Eva kept the first aid kit in, and threw it down on the coffee table between them. "Don't sit there being charming at me like the last four months didn't happen." "I was under the impression nothing happened. That was rather the point of the last four months." The kit bounced. Bandages spilled across the table. She planted her hands on either side of it and leaned in. "You kissed me in the loading yard behind Silas' place. You kissed me, and you said, and I quote, 'this is a complication I intend to pursue at length.' And then you vanished. No calls. No messages. Yu-Fei stopped getting your takeaway orders. Even the underworld gossip dried up. I asked around, Lucien. People who owed you favours pretended they'd never heard your name. Do you know what that does to a person?" "You were meant to take it as an answer." "I was meant to take being ghosted as an answer? From you?" She straightened up. "I thought you were dead. I thought I'd find out you were dead from a stranger, at the bar, over someone's third pint." "I'm not dead." "Evidently." She jabbed a finger at his side. "Shirt off. If you're going to bleed on Eva's chair, the least you can do is hold still while I decide whether to patch you up or finish the job myself." He worked the buttons slowly, one-handed, and she didn't offer to help, because helping would mean touching him, and she wasn't ready for what her hands would remember. The shirt came off and she catalogued him like a scene she was processing — the old scar across his shoulder from a job in Marseille, the fresh claw-marks, the way his amber eye caught the lamp and his black one swallowed it. She knelt, cleaned the wounds with antiseptic, and refused to look at his face. "The client," she said. "The one who sold something he shouldn't have. That was me, wasn't it. Four months ago. The thing you had me courier to the collector in Kensington." His silence stretched long enough to be its own confession. "You cut me off because of a package." "Because of what came for the package." His voice dropped, and for once there was no polish on it. "The buyer was not a collector, Rory. It was a hound of the Avaros courts, wearing a man's skin badly. It traced the courier chain within a week. It sat in Silas' bar for three nights, drinking nothing, watching the door you come through. I put word out that you and I had parted ways. Loudly. In front of people who repeat things. And then I made certain the trail led to me instead." She sat back on her heels. Ptolemy emerged from behind the sofa and wound, traitorously, around Lucien's ankle. "So the ghosting," she said, "was bodyguard work." "It was the only protection I could offer that didn't require me to stand next to you." "And you couldn't have told me that?" "And given you the choice to refuse? You'd have refused. You'd have carried on delivering, out of spite, and it would have found you by Tuesday." He reached down and scratched Ptolemy behind the ears without breaking her gaze. "You are the cleverest person I know and the worst liar. The only way to keep you out of it was to make you hate me quickly." "Well done on that front." Her voice came out smaller than she wanted. She pressed a fresh pad to his ribs and taped it down, thumb smoothing the edge of the tape over warm skin, and let her hand linger a second past medical necessity. "You succeeded. I hated you. It was very efficient. I got an awful lot of reading done." "And now?" "Now you show up bleeding on Eva's doorstep, four months late, asking for a ledger, and I find out you spent the whole time standing between me and something with claws." She stood, and he was close, closer than she'd accounted for, and neither of them moved to fix it. "You don't get to be noble at me, Lucien. Not without consequences." "Name them." "You finish the sentence from the loading yard. The one you started before you kissed me and abandoned halfway through like everything else." His good hand rose, and she watched it come, and she watched it stop — hovering at her jaw, asking. Rain hammered the window. Somewhere below, the curry house clattered with the dinner rush, a whole ordinary world going on without them. "I intended," he said, "to pursue you. At length. Through every complication. For considerably longer than I have ever pursued anything, and I have pursued a great many things, Rory, with a great deal of success, and I have never once been frightened of the pursuit until it was you." Her breath unsteadied. "That's a very long sentence." "I have been drafting it for four months." "Terrible first draft." "I work better under deadline." She closed the distance herself. He tasted like rain and copper, and his hand finally landed, cradling her jaw like something he'd carried a long way and was afraid to set down. Ptolemy leapt onto the table and knocked the antiseptic onto the floor, and neither of them so much as flinched.
created_at"2026-09-23T18:07:44.803Z" 9/23/2026, 6:07:44 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.16% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1401
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"quickly"
3"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
89.29% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1401
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"traced"
count1
2
word"efficient"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"traced"
2"efficient"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences53
matches
0"was afraid"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences53
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences85
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen74
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1403
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount726
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.69
worstName"Ptolemy"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Ptolemy"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy5
Dublin1
Lucien4
Moreau1
Eva4
Marseille1
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Eva"
places
0"Dublin"
1"Marseille"
globalScore1
windowScore1
78.57% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences35
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"tasted like rain and copper, and his hand"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1403
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean26.98
std24.03
cv0.891
sampleLengths
027
133
24
322
442
53
653
72
841
939
1030
113
1238
132
1441
153
1683
176
184
191
2024
2141
2217
2320
2473
259
2638
273
2839
2971
3014
3131
3210
338
3493
3518
368
3717
387
3966
4062
412
4262
432
4423
4542
4650
478
488
493
98.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences53
matches
0"got were"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs135
matches
0"was processing "
75.63% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences85
ratio0.024
matches
0"The shirt came off and she catalogued him like a scene she was processing — the old scar across his shoulder from a job in Marseille, the fresh claw-marks, the way his amber eye caught the lamp and his black one swallowed it."
1"His good hand rose, and she watched it come, and she watched it stop — hovering at her jaw, asking."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount729
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.03429355281207133
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.010973936899862825
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences85
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences85
mean16.51
std15.05
cv0.912
sampleLengths
05
122
28
325
44
522
62
740
83
923
107
1123
122
1313
1428
155
1619
1715
183
1927
203
2119
2219
232
242
2530
262
277
283
2944
3039
316
324
331
3414
3510
3627
3714
3817
393
405
4112
4273
439
4415
4523
463
478
4831
4928
77.25% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.5058823529411764
totalSentences85
uniqueOpeners43
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences45
matches
0"Slightly iridescent, like oil on"
1"Somewhere below, the curry house"
ratio0.044
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences45
matches
0"She crossed the book-strewn floor,"
1"She threw each one with"
2"His platinum hair had collapsed"
3"He offered a smile that"
4"She looked past his shoulder."
5"She stepped aside."
6"She shut the door and"
7"He had lowered himself onto"
8"He unbuttoned his waistcoat with"
9"He laughed, a short, rough"
10"She crossed to the kitchenette,"
11"She planted her hands on"
12"She straightened up"
13"She jabbed a finger at"
14"He worked the buttons slowly,"
15"She knelt, cleaned the wounds"
16"His silence stretched long enough"
17"His voice dropped, and for"
18"She sat back on her"
19"He reached down and scratched"
ratio0.6
26.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount39
totalSentences45
matches
0"The knock came in threes."
1"Rory set down Ptolemy's food"
2"Eva had been in Dublin"
3"The knock came again."
4"She crossed the book-strewn floor,"
5"She threw each one with"
6"His platinum hair had collapsed"
7"The charcoal suit clung to"
8"He offered a smile that"
9"She looked past his shoulder."
10"A man in a rain"
11"She stepped aside."
12"Lucien limped past her, trailing"
13"She shut the door and"
14"He had lowered himself onto"
15"He unbuttoned his waistcoat with"
16"He laughed, a short, rough"
17"She crossed to the kitchenette,"
18"The kit bounced."
19"Bandages spilled across the table."
ratio0.867
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Slow, deliberate, spaced like a man who knew exactly how long it took to walk down a flight of stairs and reconsider."
1"He had lowered himself onto the arm of Eva's reading chair, and now he peeled the glove from his right hand, revealing fingers slick with blood that wasn't enti…"
2"His good hand rose, and she watched it come, and she watched it stop — hovering at her jaw, asking."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.104
leniency0.208
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.6344%