Run: 2026-09-24-01M39VEQXBPFJWSNKD0WP1VKQ6

Run Details

Duration:
5m 17s
Cost:
$0.017984
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came at half past midnight — three raps with a metronome's patience, the knock of a man who expected doors to apologize for being shut. Rory's pen stopped mid-word. On her knee, Ptolemy opened one eye, then the other, then rose with his ears flat. Nobody knocked on Eva's door at half past midnight. Friends rang the buzzer, which had been dead since spring, and then threw gravel at the window. Eva answered for no one, and for three weeks Rory had enforced that policy like scripture. She crossed the room without a sound and put her eye to the glass. Charcoal wool, rain-darkened across the shoulders. Platinum hair slicked back and losing the fight at one temple. The ivory head of a cane, catching the corridor's last living bulb. Her stomach went through the floor, through the curry house below it, and kept going. "Rory." Lucien's voice carried through the wood. "I know you're awake. The cat has been watching me through the window for ten minutes, and cats only stare at interesting things." She thumbed the first deadbolt back. Stopped. Threw it home again. "Go away, Lucien." "Context, then, before you consign me to the weather. Calloway is dead. His estate is being divided by vultures as we speak, and among his papers is a document with your name on it. Three parties are tearing the city apart to reach it first." Water ran off his cuff and ticked against the doormat. "I would rather discuss which party through an open door." "You have until the chain." She slid it and kept the chain. His face filled the gap. One amber eye, one black, both fixed on her with an attention that had undone her once before and was, clearly, prepared to do it again. "You tracked me." "Eleven days of Yu-Fei's east route. Eva's window faces the street. It was not difficult." He lifted his left hand into the gap and turned it over — knuckles split and crusted, a raw scrape down the wrist bone. "The chain, Rory. I've already lost one fight tonight. I would rather not lose the second to a hinge." She looked at the knuckles. At the rain coming down in silver rods under the streetlamp. At the cane, which meant he had dressed for something worse than weather. "Did the blade earn its keep?" "Twice." The chain came off. He stepped past her, and the smell of him arrived a half-second behind — wet wool, cigarette smoke that even rain couldn't drown, and under it something metallic and old, coins held too long in a closed fist. Ptolemy, traitor, wound around his ankle and purred. "Your cat has better manners than you do." "My cat is a whore for anyone with a pulse. Sit down before you flood Eva's thesis." Eva was in Oxford until Sunday, which was the only reason the door had opened at all, and they both knew it. Lucien lowered himself into the one chair without books stacked on it, laid the cane across his knees, and let the room look at him — the towers of paper, the scrolls pinned above the radiator, the three deadbolts she threw home behind him out of habit. "Don't flatter yourself. Those are for the vultures." "Naturally." Rainwater pooled off his hem onto Eva's rug. She noticed the wet hair at his temple, the order she had once restored with her own fingers in a doorway much like this one, and made herself look at the rug instead. He watched her fold her arms and waited her out, the way he always had, like a man who had read the last page of her in some language she couldn't. "Calloway's dead. My name's on a paper." She kept her voice level. "So start where I stopped listening. Page forty-one of your ledger. Blue ink. 'A. Carter — one name, one route, to C. — against claim.' I read it four times in case I'd hallucinated the word 'sold.'" "You read the price and not the goods." "I read enough." "You read four words and three weeks of silence into them." He leaned forward, elbows on his knees. "Evan signed a claim on you, Rory. Before you ever left Cardiff. His debts weren't the kind that collect in money, so he paid them with the only thing of value he ever held. You. Your name, your line, your future — sealed and notarized in a hand older than his alphabet. The claim came through my office in March with a buyer already circling. I bought it out of circulation before it reached him." The radiator ticked. Outside, a bus sighed past on the wet street. "Then why is my name written as the price?" "Because Calloway doesn't take gratitude. He took three entries from my ledger — nine years of collected names, each worth more than my office — and he wrote the receipt as he saw fit. 'A. Carter, one claim, extinguished. Paid in full.' You were never the goods. The claim was. I paid to burn it, and the burning put your name on the receipt." His thumb traveled the ivory handle, once. "You were the debt I refused to let anyone collect. Including the paper trail." "Then you should have told me." "You didn't stay to be told." The words landed and she let them, because they were true, and the truth had a shape she'd spent three weeks stepping around — she'd seen her own name priced against a stranger's initial and left before page forty-two could explain itself to her. "I know." She looked at the dark map his rain had made of Eva's rug. "I saw 'sold' next to my name and I was out the door before the sentence finished. That's not reading. That's flinching." "An efficient flinch, at least. You picked the one flat in London where the window faces a bus stop and the landlady keeps three deadbolts and a grudge." And there it was — the old rhythm, dry as tinder — and she hated how her mouth wanted to answer it. He reached inside his coat and produced a fold of vellum, creased, water-stained at one corner, tied with thread that had been black once. He held it out on an open palm. "Tonight's fight. The vultures reached the vault before me. I left with the prize anyway." A muscle jumped in his jaw. "It cost me the knuckles, a season of favors to a woman I despise, and the last of my anonymity with the Thorn's people. I'm telling you the price so you understand this isn't performance. I am square out of pride." She untied the thread. Her name ran down the page in a hand like frost — Aurora, and beneath it the older name, the one she never used, the one Evan had no right to know. Under both, his signature, jaunty as a schoolboy's. "What do I do with it?" "Burn it. The claim dies with fire and the hand it was written against. Yours." He nodded at the candle stub Eva kept by the sofa for power cuts. "Your name. Your match." She struck the match. The vellum caught, then went up all at once — her name blackening, curling, the older name lifting off the page in a breath of ash. Evan's signature went first and fastest. She held the fold until the fire licked her fingertips and dropped the last corner into the saucer. "Why didn't you come after me?" The ash settled. "Three weeks, Lucien. You knew where I was the entire time." "I was buying this. Every hour spent knocking on your door was an hour the claim spent alive in a dead man's vault. I chose the paper over the apology." He rose, and the cane took his weight without complaint. "It was not a difficult choice. It was only a lonely one." "I would have let you in." "After four words in blue ink?" "After four words in blue ink." She rubbed her thumb through the cool ash. "I didn't leave because of the ledger. I left because I read it and I was going to believe you anyway. I wanted your word to outweigh the page so badly I couldn't stand still in a room with how much that meant. I left because I was already yours and the page said I was currency, and I couldn't work out how to be both." He crossed the room. Two steps in a flat that small. He stopped close enough that rain still dripped from his sleeve onto her bare foot, and she didn't move back, and she watched him register that — one amber eye and one black, both of them doing the arithmetic of the distance between them. Then he took her left hand and turned it over. His thumb crossed the crescent scar, the small white seam from her father's study and a broken glass, nineteen years gone. He had traced it before, on a night she'd promised herself wouldn't repeat and had repeated four times. "You kept it." "People keep scars. They're attached." "You kept everything else too. The route. The deliveries. The lie about hating me." His other hand came up and settled along her jaw, cold from the rain, careful anyway. "Say the unsaid thing, Rory. I have carried mine since March and it has gotten heavy." "Which of us goes first?" "Ladies first is a French tradition." "You're from Marseille." "Marseille is in France. Argue later." She fisted his lapels and pulled him down the last inch. The kiss tasted of rain and copper and three wasted weeks. His hand slid from her jaw into her hair; Ptolemy yelled at both of them from the book pile; the last of the ash settled in the saucer.
created_at"2026-09-24T14:00:05.487Z" 9/24/2026, 2:00:05 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.28
leniency0.56
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1631
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
81.61% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1631
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"efficient"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"pulse"
2"silence"
3"efficient"
4"weight"
5"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences63
matches(empty)
97.51% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences63
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen74
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1646
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount907
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.66
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy3
Eva6
Rory2
Oxford1
Sunday1
Aurora1
Evan2
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Eva"
2"Rory"
3"Evan"
places
0"Oxford"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1646
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences99
matches
0"enforced that policy"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs62
mean26.55
std23.27
cv0.876
sampleLengths
027
120
242
314
429
515
630
711
83
965
105
117
1231
133
1458
1529
166
171
184
1946
208
2117
2222
2347
248
2573
2649
278
283
2993
3012
319
3285
336
346
3544
3637
3728
3822
3932
4062
4144
426
4333
4454
4520
4652
476
486
4980
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs142
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences99
ratio0.101
matches
0"The knock came at half past midnight — three raps with a metronome's patience, the knock of a man who expected doors to apologize for being shut."
1"\"Eleven days of Yu-Fei's east route. Eva's window faces the street. It was not difficult.\" He lifted his left hand into the gap and turned it over — knuckles split and crusted, a raw scrape down the wrist bone."
2"He stepped past her, and the smell of him arrived a half-second behind — wet wool, cigarette smoke that even rain couldn't drown, and under it something metallic and old, coins held too long in a closed fist."
3"Lucien lowered himself into the one chair without books stacked on it, laid the cane across his knees, and let the room look at him — the towers of paper, the scrolls pinned above the radiator, the three deadbolts she threw home behind him out of habit."
4"The words landed and she let them, because they were true, and the truth had a shape she'd spent three weeks stepping around — she'd seen her own name priced against a stranger's initial and left before page forty-two could explain itself to her."
5"And there it was — the old rhythm, dry as tinder — and she hated how her mouth wanted to answer it."
6"Her name ran down the page in a hand like frost — Aurora, and beneath it the older name, the one she never used, the one Evan had no right to know."
7"The vellum caught, then went up all at once — her name blackening, curling, the older name lifting off the page in a breath of ash."
8"He stopped close enough that rain still dripped from his sleeve onto her bare foot, and she didn't move back, and she watched him register that — one amber eye and one black, both of them doing the arithmetic of the distance between them."
9"His hand slid from her jaw into her hair; Ptolemy yelled at both of them from the book pile; the last of the ash settled in the saucer."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount902
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.03215077605321508
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0022172949002217295
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean16.63
std15.25
cv0.917
sampleLengths
027
14
216
39
417
516
614
76
811
912
1015
117
1223
136
141
154
163
1755
1810
195
207
215
2226
233
2439
2519
265
2711
2813
296
301
314
3238
338
348
3517
3622
3747
388
399
4033
4131
4212
4337
448
453
4618
4775
483
499
81.82% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.5151515151515151
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners51
53.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"Then he took her left"
ratio0.016
26.45% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences62
matches
0"She crossed the room without"
1"Her stomach went through the"
2"She thumbed the first deadbolt"
3"She slid it and kept"
4"His face filled the gap."
5"He lifted his left hand"
6"She looked at the knuckles."
7"He stepped past her, and"
8"She noticed the wet hair"
9"He watched her fold her"
10"She kept her voice level"
11"He leaned forward, elbows on"
12"His thumb traveled the ivory"
13"She looked at the dark"
14"He reached inside his coat"
15"He held it out on"
16"She untied the thread."
17"Her name ran down the"
18"He nodded at the candle"
19"She struck the match."
ratio0.484
40.65% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences62
matches
0"The knock came at half"
1"Rory's pen stopped mid-word."
2"Nobody knocked on Eva's door"
3"Friends rang the buzzer, which"
4"Eva answered for no one,"
5"She crossed the room without"
6"Charcoal wool, rain-darkened across the"
7"Platinum hair slicked back and"
8"The ivory head of a"
9"Her stomach went through the"
10"Lucien's voice carried through the"
11"She thumbed the first deadbolt"
12"Water ran off his cuff"
13"She slid it and kept"
14"His face filled the gap."
15"He lifted his left hand"
16"She looked at the knuckles."
17"The chain came off."
18"He stepped past her, and"
19"Ptolemy, traitor, wound around his"
ratio0.839
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
68.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The knock came at half past midnight — three raps with a metronome's patience, the knock of a man who expected doors to apologize for being shut."
1"He reached inside his coat and produced a fold of vellum, creased, water-stained at one corner, tied with thread that had been black once."
2"The vellum caught, then went up all at once — her name blackening, curling, the older name lifting off the page in a breath of ash."
89.29% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"His thumb traveled, once"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.6681%