| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 43 | | tagDensity | 0.419 | | leniency | 0.837 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 87.91% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1241 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 39.56% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1241 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "vibrated" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "shattered" | | 3 | "scanning" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "churning" | | 7 | "disrupt" | | 8 | "echoed" | | 9 | "beacon" | | 10 | "glint" | | 11 | "warmth" | | 12 | "maw" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 80.75% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 94 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1238 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 45.71% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 46 | | wordCount | 815 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 2.09 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Aurora | 17 | | London | 2 | | South | 1 | | West | 1 | | Shade | 2 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Nyx | 6 | | Isolde | 13 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Shade" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "South" | | 4 | "West" |
| | globalScore | 0.457 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 11.11% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "quite match the rustle of the winter leaves" | | 1 | "hour that seemed to leak from the very soil" | | 2 | "oak that seemed to be rotting from the inside out, despite the vibrant life around it" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.808 | | wordCount | 1238 | | matches | | 0 | "not wood, but a churning mass of darkness" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 82.37% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 44 | | mean | 28.14 | | std | 12.33 | | cv | 0.438 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 66 | | 1 | 40 | | 2 | 32 | | 3 | 36 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 45 | | 6 | 30 | | 7 | 35 | | 8 | 41 | | 9 | 57 | | 10 | 35 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 29 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 32 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 33 | | 19 | 35 | | 20 | 24 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 28 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 44 | | 25 | 37 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 22 | | 31 | 32 | | 32 | 28 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 35 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 28 | | 38 | 31 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 37 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 35 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 133 | | matches | | |
| 51.67% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 94 | | ratio | 0.032 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled of pine and distant woodsmoke, but as they drew closer to the cluster of ancient oaks, a different scent threaded through the cold—something floral, heavy, and cloying, like a greenhouse left to rot in the sun." | | 1 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground—violets the size of dinner plates, and roses that glowed with a faint, feverish heat." | | 2 | "A sound echoed from the rift—a wet, guttural clicking, like a beetle the size of a dog trying to chew through bone." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 823 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "dormant, cool against her" |
| | adverbCount | 21 | | adverbRatio | 0.02551640340218712 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009720534629404616 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 94 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 94 | | mean | 13.17 | | std | 7.21 | | cv | 0.547 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 39 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 26 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 43.97% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.3404255319148936 | | totalSentences | 94 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 10 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "Her hairs stood on end," | | 1 | "Her bare feet hovered inches" | | 2 | "They walked deeper." | | 3 | "she whispered, clutching the pendant" | | 4 | "It was warm now." | | 5 | "She pointed a pale finger" | | 6 | "They approached the tree." | | 7 | "She ripped the chain from" | | 8 | "She took a step back," | | 9 | "She grabbed Nyx’s solidifying arm" |
| | ratio | 0.154 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 62 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "The frost of Richmond Park" | | 1 | "The air smelled of pine" | | 2 | "Isolde stopped before a ring" | | 3 | "Isolde said, her voice a" | | 4 | "Aurora touched the pendant at" | | 5 | "The crimson gemstone sat dormant," | | 6 | "Isolde stepped over the threshold" | | 7 | "The shift was instantaneous." | | 8 | "The grey light of a" | | 9 | "The sky above was a" | | 10 | "Nyx melted out of Aurora’s" | | 11 | "The Shade’s violet eyes flared," | | 12 | "Nyx whispered, their voice a" | | 13 | "Aurora muttered, stepping over the" | | 14 | "The sensation was like walking" | | 15 | "Her hairs stood on end," | | 16 | "The grove opened up before" | | 17 | "Oaks with bark of polished" | | 18 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground—violets the" | | 19 | "Isolde moved without disturbing a" |
| | ratio | 0.954 | |
| 76.92% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "To the untrained eye, they" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 8.93% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The grey light of a London dusk shattered, replaced by a perpetual golden hour that seemed to leak from the very soil." | | 1 | "The sky above was a bruised purple, stitched with constellations that had no business hanging over South West London." | | 2 | "Oaks with bark of polished silver stretched toward a ceiling of woven branches, their leaves whispering secrets in a language that sounded suspiciously like rev…" | | 3 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground—violets the size of dinner plates, and roses that glowed with a faint, feverish heat." | | 4 | "She pointed a pale finger toward a massive oak that seemed to be rotting from the inside out, despite the vibrant life around it." | | 5 | "The bark was split open, revealing not wood, but a churning mass of darkness that swallowed the light around it." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx whispered, their voice a rustle of dry wind through a canyon" | | 1 | "Isolde paused, her lavender eyes widening" | | 2 | "Isolde replied, her ethereal composure cracking into a mask of worry" | | 3 | "Nyx reported, their whisper strained" | | 4 | "Isolde stepped, her silver hair floating around her head as if underwater" | | 5 | "Isolde turned, a glint of desperation in her pale eyes" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Aurora muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "Aurora observed (observe)" | | 3 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "Nyx reported (report)" | | 5 | "Isolde hissed (hiss)" | | 6 | "Isolde screamed (scream)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 43 | | tagDensity | 0.233 | | leniency | 0.465 | | rawRatio | 0.7 | | effectiveRatio | 0.326 | |