Run: 2026-09-24-01M39VKZ6ZC4BAE2W6T6VMZZ5Y

Run Details

Duration:
53.5s
Cost:
$0.004513
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The frost of Richmond Park clung to the grass in jagged white teeth, crunching under Aurora’s boots as she followed the silver-haired woman toward the tree line. The air smelled of pine and distant woodsmoke, but as they drew closer to the cluster of ancient oaks, a different scent threaded through the cold—something floral, heavy, and cloying, like a greenhouse left to rot in the sun. Isolde stopped before a ring of standing stones. To the untrained eye, they were just moss-covered monoliths, forgotten by history and swallowed by brambles. But the air around them vibrated, a low hum that tickled the back of Aurora’s throat. "We cross here," Isolde said, her voice a melody that didn’t quite match the rustle of the winter leaves. "The Veil is thin tonight. The winter sun has bled the barrier dry." Aurora touched the pendant at her neck. The crimson gemstone sat dormant, cool against her collarbone, but she knew better than to trust the silence. "And if it decides to snap shut while we're halfway through?" "Then you become a stain on the fabric of two worlds, and I become a very poor host." Isolde stepped over the threshold of the stones. The shift was instantaneous. The grey light of a London dusk shattered, replaced by a perpetual golden hour that seemed to leak from the very soil. The sky above was a bruised purple, stitched with constellations that had no business hanging over South West London. Nyx melted out of Aurora’s shadow, coalescing into their solid form. The Shade’s violet eyes flared, scanning the canopy where leaves of translucent jade pulsed with a soft, internal light. "The geometry is wrong," Nyx whispered, their voice a rustle of dry wind through a canyon. "The paths fold back on themselves. I can see the back of my own head three turns from now." "Then don't look," Aurora muttered, stepping over the boundary. The sensation was like walking through a curtain of static electricity. Her hairs stood on end, and a metallic taste flooded her mouth. "Isolde, lead the way. Nyx, keep the shadows tight." The grove opened up before them, defying the geography of the park outside. Oaks with bark of polished silver stretched toward a ceiling of woven branches, their leaves whispering secrets in a language that sounded suspiciously like reverse-recorded birdsong. Wildflowers carpeted the ground—violets the size of dinner plates, and roses that glowed with a faint, feverish heat. Isolde moved without disturbing a single blade of grass. Her bare feet hovered inches above the moss. "The Court of the Summer King once held revels in this clearing. The flowers still remember the music." "They sound like they're screaming," Aurora observed, ducking under a low-hanging branch that dripped a sap as thick as treacle. "Memory is a violent thing, Rory. It pulls and tears." They walked deeper. The path narrowed, flanked by roots that looked more like the ribcages of buried giants. The hum in the air grew louder, vibrating in Aurora’s molars. "Stay close," Isolde paused, her lavender eyes widening. "The paths are waking up. They know we aren't garden variety tourists." A branch snapped to their left. Aurora’s hand flew to her hip, gripping the hilt of the Fae-forged blade. The moonsilver bit into her palm, freezing cold even through the leather glove. "Nyx?" "I see it." The Shade dissolved into a puddle of ink on the grass, sliding silently toward the disturbance. Aurora watched the shadows, her breath pluming in the suddenly cold air. The temperature had dropped ten degrees in the span of a heartbeat. The golden light soured, turning a pale, sickly yellow. "Heartstone," she whispered, clutching the pendant. It was warm now. Warm and pulsing, throbbing against her chest like a second heart. "It’s active. Why is it active? There shouldn't be Hel-taint in a Fae grove." "The Veil is weak," Isolde replied, her ethereal composure cracking into a mask of worry. "Things leak. Things from the other side are hungry." The shadows ahead coalesced. Nyx reformed, their silhouette flickering like a candle in a draft. "There is a tear," Nyx reported, their whisper strained. "A jagged wound in the air. It smells of brimstone and old meat. The shadows are fleeing from it." "A rift?" Aurora drew the dagger. The blade caught the strange light, glowing with a luminescence that hurt to look at directly. "In Fae territory?" "The boundaries are bleeding into each other," Isolde said. She pointed a pale finger toward a massive oak that seemed to be rotting from the inside out, despite the vibrant life around it. "There. The wound is in the heart of the Old Father." They approached the tree. The bark was split open, revealing not wood, but a churning mass of darkness that swallowed the light around it. The air around the tear rippled like heat haze, but it radiated cold. Aurora stepped forward, the Heartstone hammering against her ribs. "It’s a Hel portal. A small one. A pinprick." "It is an infection," Isolde hissed. "The Fae Courts will sense this. If they think we brought this taint..." "Let them think what they want. We need to seal it." Aurora looked at Nyx. "Can you slip in and disrupt the anchor?" "And disrupt my own anchor? No. The shadows there are not mine. They belong to something with too many teeth and not enough eyes." A sound echoed from the rift—a wet, guttural clicking, like a beetle the size of a dog trying to chew through bone. Isolde grabbed Aurora’s arm, her grip surprisingly strong. "We cannot fight it here. The grove feeds on intention. If we spill blood in anger, the trees will drink it and grow mad." "Then what? We walk away?" Aurora brandished the moonsilver dagger at the darkness. "This thing is a beacon. Every imp and hellhound in the neighbour-hood felt it open." "We do not fight. We negotiate." Isolde stepped forward, her silver hair floating around her head as if underwater. "Or we barter." "Barter with what? That thing is Gluttony incarnate. Look at the way the roots are curling toward it. It’s eating the magic." "Then we feed it something else." Isolde turned to Aurora, a glint of desperation in her pale eyes. "The Heartstone. It pulses with warmth. It pulses with life. It is a battery of Dymasian energy." "You want me to throw my only guide into that meat grinder?" "I want you to toss it into the shadow so we can run the other way before the Fae Wild Hunt decides to use our spines as maypoles." The clicking grew louder. A pseudopod of black flesh, studded with suckers, lashed out from the rift, slapping against the silver bark with a sound like wet meat hitting a slab. Aurora grimaced. "Fine. But if this doesn't work, I’m haunting you specifically." She ripped the chain from her neck. The pendant glowed a furious red, hot enough to brand. She took a step back, wound up, and hurled the crimson gemstone directly into the churning maw of the rift. "Run!" Isolde screamed. The grove shuddered. The golden light flared blindingly white. The screaming of the birds hit a crescendo of pure noise. Aurora didn't need to be told twice. She grabbed Nyx’s solidifying arm and bolted down the path, following the blur of Isolde’s silver hair as the world behind them began to collapse in on itself.
created_at"2026-09-24T14:02:56.619Z" 9/24/2026, 2:02:56 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.419
leniency0.837
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.91% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1241
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
39.56% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1241
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"vibrated"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"shattered"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"churning"
count2
7
word"disrupt"
count2
8
word"echoed"
count1
9
word"beacon"
count1
10
word"glint"
count1
11
word"warmth"
count1
12
word"maw"
count1
highlights
0"vibrated"
1"silence"
2"shattered"
3"scanning"
4"pulsed"
5"whisper"
6"churning"
7"disrupt"
8"echoed"
9"beacon"
10"glint"
11"warmth"
12"maw"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences69
matches(empty)
80.75% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences69
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences94
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1238
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
45.71% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount815
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.09
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Aurora17
London2
South1
West1
Shade2
Fae-forged1
Heartstone1
Nyx6
Isolde13
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Shade"
2"Heartstone"
3"Nyx"
4"Isolde"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"South"
4"West"
globalScore0.457
windowScore0.5
11.11% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"quite match the rustle of the winter leaves"
1"hour that seemed to leak from the very soil"
2"oak that seemed to be rotting from the inside out, despite the vibrant life around it"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.808
wordCount1238
matches
0"not wood, but a churning mass of darkness"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
82.37% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean28.14
std12.33
cv0.438
sampleLengths
066
140
232
336
426
545
630
735
841
957
1035
1120
1210
1329
1420
1532
161
1719
1833
1935
2024
2115
2228
2325
2444
2537
2618
2719
2823
2924
3022
3132
3228
3322
3422
3535
3612
3728
3831
3912
4037
413
4220
4335
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs133
matches
0"was like walking"
51.67% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences94
ratio0.032
matches
0"The air smelled of pine and distant woodsmoke, but as they drew closer to the cluster of ancient oaks, a different scent threaded through the cold—something floral, heavy, and cloying, like a greenhouse left to rot in the sun."
1"Wildflowers carpeted the ground—violets the size of dinner plates, and roses that glowed with a faint, feverish heat."
2"A sound echoed from the rift—a wet, guttural clicking, like a beetle the size of a dog trying to chew through bone."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount823
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"dormant, cool against her"
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.02551640340218712
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.009720534629404616
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean13.17
std7.21
cv0.547
sampleLengths
027
139
28
316
416
519
613
77
818
911
1026
114
1222
1319
1411
1519
1616
1719
189
1911
2012
219
2213
2326
2418
259
268
2718
2820
2910
303
3115
3211
338
3412
356
3613
3713
381
3919
4012
4112
429
436
444
4511
4614
4715
489
494
43.97% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.3404255319148936
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners32
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount10
totalSentences65
matches
0"Her hairs stood on end,"
1"Her bare feet hovered inches"
2"They walked deeper."
3"she whispered, clutching the pendant"
4"It was warm now."
5"She pointed a pale finger"
6"They approached the tree."
7"She ripped the chain from"
8"She took a step back,"
9"She grabbed Nyx’s solidifying arm"
ratio0.154
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences65
matches
0"The frost of Richmond Park"
1"The air smelled of pine"
2"Isolde stopped before a ring"
3"Isolde said, her voice a"
4"Aurora touched the pendant at"
5"The crimson gemstone sat dormant,"
6"Isolde stepped over the threshold"
7"The shift was instantaneous."
8"The grey light of a"
9"The sky above was a"
10"Nyx melted out of Aurora’s"
11"The Shade’s violet eyes flared,"
12"Nyx whispered, their voice a"
13"Aurora muttered, stepping over the"
14"The sensation was like walking"
15"Her hairs stood on end,"
16"The grove opened up before"
17"Oaks with bark of polished"
18"Wildflowers carpeted the ground—violets the"
19"Isolde moved without disturbing a"
ratio0.954
76.92% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences65
matches
0"To the untrained eye, they"
ratio0.015
8.93% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The grey light of a London dusk shattered, replaced by a perpetual golden hour that seemed to leak from the very soil."
1"The sky above was a bruised purple, stitched with constellations that had no business hanging over South West London."
2"Oaks with bark of polished silver stretched toward a ceiling of woven branches, their leaves whispering secrets in a language that sounded suspiciously like rev…"
3"Wildflowers carpeted the ground—violets the size of dinner plates, and roses that glowed with a faint, feverish heat."
4"She pointed a pale finger toward a massive oak that seemed to be rotting from the inside out, despite the vibrant life around it."
5"The bark was split open, revealing not wood, but a churning mass of darkness that swallowed the light around it."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Nyx whispered, their voice a rustle of dry wind through a canyon"
1"Isolde paused, her lavender eyes widening"
2"Isolde replied, her ethereal composure cracking into a mask of worry"
3"Nyx reported, their whisper strained"
4"Isolde stepped, her silver hair floating around her head as if underwater"
5"Isolde turned, a glint of desperation in her pale eyes"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
1"Aurora muttered (mutter)"
2"Aurora observed (observe)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
4"Nyx reported (report)"
5"Isolde hissed (hiss)"
6"Isolde screamed (scream)"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.233
leniency0.465
rawRatio0.7
effectiveRatio0.326
70.7634%