Run: 2026-09-24-01M39VNRP6EXE5AV8QFW46ZH5K

Run Details

Duration:
2m 28s
Cost:
$0.007038
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt stuck, the way it always stuck when rain swelled the doorframe. Rory cursed it, jammed the heel of her hand against the wood, and shoved. The door swung open on Lucien Moreau. Rain ran off the ends of his platinum hair, plastered to his temple. His charcoal suit had gone black across the shoulders. The ivory cane stood planted on the mat, water pooling around its ferrule, and one amber eye and one black eye both held her face like he was memorising it. "You're not the biryani." "No." He raised his other hand. In it, a book, swollen and warped with damp. "You left this." She knew the spine without looking. Yeats. The cover had been held on with tape since her second year at Cardiff. Her stomach did something she decided to ignore. "How did you even find—" "Your friend Eva ordered from the Golden Empress on Tuesday. The delivery driver owed me a favour." A muscle moved in his jaw. "People often do." "You tracked me through a korma." "I tracked you through thirty quid of korma and a poppadom, which I paid for, incidentally." He tilted the book toward her. Water dripped from its corner onto the mat. "It's getting wet, Rory." "Then it can keep getting wet." She pushed the door. His shoe stopped it an inch from closing, and Ptolemy shot through the gap, a streak of tabby fur, and wound himself around the cane with the enthusiasm of a creature who had never once been asked to choose sides. "Ptolemy. Traitor." "He always liked me." "He likes the tuna man. He'd follow the tuna man into the sea." She looked down at the cat, then at the man, then at the stairwell behind him where rain came sideways through the broken skylight and the curry house below exhaled cardamom and fryer grease into the dark. "Three months, Lucien." "Three months and eleven days." He'd counted. She hated that some traitorous part of her chest registered the precision and filed it under *he thought about me*. "You don't get to do that. You don't get to stand on this landing dripping like a romantic lead and do arithmetic about us." Her thumb found the crescent scar on her left wrist and pressed. His eyes tracked the movement. He'd traced that scar once, in another life, with his mouth, and she could see him remembering it too. "May I come in?" "No." "Then I'll say it on the landing, and the man in 3C, who I believe deals in something he calls 'herbal supplements,' will hear every word about the Court of Ash." She glanced past him. The corridor light buzzed. Somewhere below, a pan clattered. "Two minutes." She stepped back and held the door wide enough for him, and only him. He ducked the frame and stood dripping on the mat inside while Eva's flat crowded around them—books in towers, scrolls pinned over the radiator, research notes taped to the window glass in overlapping sheets that turned the streetlights amber. "Sit if you want. Don't touch anything. Some of these pages are cursed." "I remember." He did not sit. He set the Yeats down on the only clear surface, a square of countertop the size of a saucer, and straightened. Water pooled off his coat onto her boots. "There was a contract on you." "I know that." "No. You know there *was* one. You don't know what it cost." He drew a breath that sounded like it had been rehearsed on a long walk through the rain. "The Court of Ash priced your name at nine hundred years of obligation. I traded." "You *sold* me." The words came out of her flat and cold. "Tallow showed me the ledger. Your mark, your seal, right next to 'Malphora, last seen Whitechapel.' I read it twice, Luc. You didn't even get a good price." "Read the entry again." "I read it." "You read the first column." He unbuttoned his coat, and she saw his knuckles—split across three fingers, scabbed dark, fresh enough that he'd come here straight from whatever did that. "The second column is the consideration. Nine hundred years of obligation, *discharged*. Not transferred. Not deferred. Ended. The contract on you died on a clerk's desk in Avaros while you were eating korma on Brick Lane." The rain filled the silence. Ptolemy headbutted his shin, and Lucien's hand dropped to the cat's ears without him seeming to decide it. "Why the silence?" Her voice cracked on it, which enraged her. "Three months. Three months I spent looking over my shoulder, sleeping with a knife under Eva's pillow, changing pubs every time a man in a nice coat looked at me twice. One message. One bloody *postcard*." "Anyone who knew became leverage. That's how the Court works—it can't touch the sealed, so it touches everyone who knows the sealed." His voice stayed level. His eyes didn't. "You were safest hating me." "You let me think—" "I let you be alive." He said it fast, like ripping a plaster. "Yes. I chose it. I'd choose it again. That's the part you should be angry about, and you are, and good." She turned away, because looking at him was doing something structural to her. She picked up the Yeats instead, thumbed it open, and found what she knew she'd find—pencil in the margins. Not her handwriting. Small, precise, slanted. "You read it." "Every night. The shop closes at eleven and the office above it is quiet, and I read it." He came a step closer. She heard the cane tap the floorboards, then stop. "You underlined things before I ever met you. 'The wildness of the wet night air.' 'I have spread my dreams under your feet.' I spent three months reading what you'd already loved and trying to work out why you loved it." "Tread softly," she said, without meaning to. "Because you, apparently, are dreams." He was close enough now that she could smell the rain on him and under it the warm, strange scent she'd never found anywhere else, cedar and smoke and something older. "I memorised your new number, by the way." "It's unlisted." "It's on a takeaway menu in your bin. You really should shred those." A pause. "I didn't ring. I told myself it was protocol. It wasn't. I was afraid you'd hang up, and I could survive a great many things, and that was never one of them." Her thumb was still on the crescent scar. He reached out—slowly, the way you'd reach for something that had bitten you before—and laid two split knuckles over it. His hand was cold. Lucien never ran cold. Whatever those three months had cost, he was still paying it. "You're bleeding." "It's mine. Mostly." "Lucien." "Rory." Her name in his mouth did the thing it always did. "The contract is dead. The ledger is ash. I'm not here to be forgiven—I'm here because I promised myself that when it was finished, I would stand in front of you and tell you the truth with my own mouth, and then whatever you chose, I'd carry it." Ptolemy, sensing the room's entire emotional budget was spent, flopped sideways across their feet. She looked at the door. Three deadbolts, all still thrown back, keeping nothing out now. She looked at the book in her hand, his pencil in her margins. She looked up at one amber eye and one black one, and the rain still running off him onto Eva's floor. "You're dripping on the carpet." "I'm aware." "The kettle's on." She stepped back, one step, two, until the doorway to the hall stood open behind her. "You get one cup. Then you tell me the rest. All of it. Starting with your knuckles." The corner of his mouth moved, the first thing on his face all night that wasn't guarded. "One cup," he agreed, and crossed the threshold.
created_at"2026-09-24T14:03:55.472Z" 9/24/2026, 2:03:55 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She stepped back [back]"
1"She stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.345
leniency0.69
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.069
88.72% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1330
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"really"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
84.96% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1330
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"traced"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
highlights
0"stomach"
1"traced"
2"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences63
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences100
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords8
totalWords1324
ratio0.006
matches
0"he thought about me"
1"was"
2"sold"
3"discharged"
4"postcard"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount736
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.41
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien3
Moreau1
Cardiff1
Water2
Ptolemy3
Eva2
Yeats3
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Water"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Eva"
5"Yeats"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
91.86% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences43
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like it had been rehearsed on a lo"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1324
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences100
matches
0"hated that some"
1"traced that scar"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean24.52
std20.98
cv0.856
sampleLengths
028
17
252
34
418
529
65
726
86
934
1050
112
124
1353
145
1522
1660
174
181
1931
2013
2155
2213
2341
243
2545
2640
274
283
2966
3023
3147
3234
334
3434
3538
363
3773
387
3944
402
4147
4247
432
443
451
4660
4714
4849
495
82.99% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences63
matches
0"been held"
1"been asked"
2"been rehearsed"
3"was spent"
47.33% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs131
matches
0"was memorising"
1"was doing"
2"was still paying"
28.57% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences100
ratio0.04
matches
0"He ducked the frame and stood dripping on the mat inside while Eva's flat crowded around them—books in towers, scrolls pinned over the radiator, research notes taped to the window glass in overlapping sheets that turned the streetlights amber."
1"\"You read the first column.\" He unbuttoned his coat, and she saw his knuckles—split across three fingers, scabbed dark, fresh enough that he'd come here straight from whatever did that."
2"She picked up the Yeats instead, thumbed it open, and found what she knew she'd find—pencil in the margins."
3"He reached out—slowly, the way you'd reach for something that had bitten you before—and laid two split knuckles over it."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount740
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.03648648648648649
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.004054054054054054
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences100
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences100
mean13.24
std11.62
cv0.878
sampleLengths
014
114
27
313
49
530
64
76
89
93
106
111
1214
138
145
1523
163
176
1822
198
204
2110
2240
232
244
2550
263
275
282
2920
3036
315
3219
334
341
3531
364
374
385
3916
4039
4113
426
4321
448
456
463
4730
4815
4912
56.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.38
totalSentences100
uniqueOpeners38
55.56% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences60
matches
0"Somewhere below, a pan clattered."
ratio0.017
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences60
matches
0"His charcoal suit had gone"
1"He raised his other hand"
2"She knew the spine without"
3"Her stomach did something she"
4"He tilted the book toward"
5"She pushed the door"
6"His shoe stopped it an"
7"She looked down at the"
8"She hated that some traitorous"
9"Her thumb found the crescent"
10"His eyes tracked the movement."
11"He'd traced that scar once,"
12"She glanced past him."
13"She stepped back and held"
14"He ducked the frame and"
15"He did not sit"
16"He set the Yeats down"
17"He drew a breath that"
18"He unbuttoned his coat, and"
19"Her voice cracked on it,"
ratio0.633
1.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences60
matches
0"The third deadbolt stuck, the"
1"Rory cursed it, jammed the"
2"The door swung open on"
3"Rain ran off the ends"
4"His charcoal suit had gone"
5"The ivory cane stood planted"
6"He raised his other hand"
7"She knew the spine without"
8"The cover had been held"
9"Her stomach did something she"
10"A muscle moved in his"
11"He tilted the book toward"
12"Water dripped from its corner"
13"She pushed the door"
14"His shoe stopped it an"
15"She looked down at the"
16"She hated that some traitorous"
17"Her thumb found the crescent"
18"His eyes tracked the movement."
19"He'd traced that scar once,"
ratio0.917
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences20
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He ducked the frame and stood dripping on the mat inside while Eva's flat crowded around them—books in towers, scrolls pinned over the radiator, research notes …"
1"He reached out—slowly, the way you'd reach for something that had bitten you before—and laid two split knuckles over it."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, without meaning to"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.052
leniency0.103
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.034
80.3138%