Run: 2026-09-24-01M39VQB1RZ9QYM5RAV3CBEBG0

Run Details

Duration:
1m 12s
Cost:
$0.005390
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came at half past midnight — three raps, spaced like a heartbeat skipping a beat. Rory set down the scroll she hadn't been reading anyway. Ptolemy lifted his head from a pile of Eva's research notes, ears swiveling toward the door. Nobody knocked on Eva's door at half past midnight. The curry house below had closed at eleven. Eva herself was still at the British Library, chasing a footnote through three floors of stacks. And the three deadbolts existed because Eva trusted no one — a policy Rory had adopted as her own. She crossed the room without a sound and put her eye to the peephole. Charcoal suit. Platinum hair slicked back despite the rain. An ivory cane planted on the doormat like a flag on claimed territory. Her stomach dropped through the floorboards, through the curry house, through Brick Lane itself. "No." She said it to the wood. "No. Absolutely not." The knock came again. Slower. Almost apologetic. She slid the deadbolts back before her brain could outvote her hands, opened the door on its chain, and then — because he only stood there, water beading on his shoulders, making no move to force anything — she unlatched that too. Stupid. Stupid, stupid. "Lucien." "Rory." His voice hadn't changed. Low, unhurried, that accent that put a curl on the end of every r. "You look well." "I look like someone who was about to go to bed." She cinched the belt of Eva's borrowed dressing gown. "Which I was. Goodnight." She pushed the door. His cane tapped forward and stopped it, the ivory handle fitting into the gap like it had been measured for the job. "We need to talk." "We had six months to talk. You spent them lying to me, so I'm going to assume the well's dry." "Five minutes." "Three deadbolts, Lucien. I installed the second one myself. What does that tell you?" Upstairs, a neighbor banged twice on the wall. Rory closed her eyes, counted to three, then yanked the door wide and hauled him in by the lapel before the whole landing woke up. He came without resistance, dripping onto the mat, and Ptolemy — the traitor — wound straight around his trouser leg, purring. "Unbelievable. Eight months of hissing at the postman, and you roll over for him." "Cats have taste." Lucien set the cane against the wall and surveyed the flat — the books stacked in towers, the scrolls pinned over the radiator, the reading lamp with its shade askew. "Eva's still cataloguing the Aldbourne papers, I see." "Don't change the subject." "I wasn't aware we had one yet." "You used me." She jabbed a finger at his chest, close enough to smell the rain on him, the cedar underneath it. "That night in March. The box. You knew what was in it, you knew who'd come for it, and you put me in the middle of it like I was furniture. Like I was disposable. I trusted you with—" Her voice cracked and she hated it, hated that he heard it. "I trusted you." He didn't flinch. He stood in his ruined suit, water pooling at his heels, and took it the way a wall takes a thrown stone. "Say the rest." "The rest? The rest is that I ran. I changed City, I changed my name, I slept with a knife under Eva's spare pillow for a month because I thought your people would come collect me. And you never came. You never explained. You just—" She turned away, arms crossed, staring at the scrolls on the wall without seeing them. "You just let me go." "Marcus Webb already had your name." The words landed in the room like a dropped glass. She turned. "What?" "Webb. The rival I told you didn't exist, because I was arrogant enough to believe I could end him before he ever touched you. I was wrong. He'd bought your description, your routes, your name — Laila — from a courier I'd trusted in January." Lucien's mismatched eyes held hers, one amber, one black, and for the first time in her life she watched him struggle to hold a gaze instead of win it. "By March, killing him quietly was impossible. He never left his house. He never met anyone. Except he had one habit he couldn't resist." "The box." "He'd pay anything, meet anyone, to intercept a shipment like that. It was the only door he would open. And the only person he would take a delivery from was a pretty stranger with no history in this world." He paused. "I couldn't have you refuse. You'd have refused." "So you lied to me. You put me in a room with a man who wanted me dead." "He was never going to reach the room." Lucien crossed to the window, put two fingers between the slats of the blind, looked down at the wet street as if Webb's ghost were still parked out there. "I was in the van behind you. I was in the van the whole time, Rory. The moment Webb's men took the box, I took him. It was over before your heart rate came down. You never knew because knowing would have changed nothing except how badly it hurt." The radiator ticked. Ptolemy batted at the cane's ivory handle and lost interest. Rory sat down slowly on the arm of the sagging chair. "You could have told me after. You could have knocked on this door in April and said all of that." "I went to your flat in April." He turned from the window. "It was empty. Your landlady said you'd left no forwarding address. Your friend Eva threatened me with a rolling pin, which was, I confess, educational." "You could have found me. You find anyone. It's what you do — you're the man who knows things." "I did find you." The words came out flat, stripped of accent, stripped of everything. "I've known where you were since May. I've known you deliver for the Golden Empress on Tuesdays and Fridays. I've known you came home late and slept badly, because the light above this window goes off at two in the morning when you can sleep and stays on till four when you can't." Her throat closed. "Then why—" "Because you closed the door." He crossed the room, stopping an arm's length away, close enough that she could see the rain had loosened a single strand of blond hair over his brow. "I open doors, Rory. I buy them, I pick them, I talk my way through them. But a door a person has closed — that one I don't touch. I told myself it was respect." His mouth twisted. "It was cowardice in a nicer suit." She looked at his hand resting on the chair back, at the thin white scar across the knuckles she'd once traced with her thumb. She looked at the crescent-shaped scar on her own wrist, the one he'd kissed once in a kitchen in March and never mentioned since. "You let me believe I was bait." Her voice came out steadier than she felt. "Eight months, Lucien. You let me believe I was nothing." "You were never nothing. You were the one thing in this city I refused to spend." He reached out — stopped himself, hand hovering over hers. "Say what you want me to do. I'll do it. Walk, stay, talk until dawn. Your door. Your rules." Outside, a bus hissed past on the wet road. The lamp above the window buzzed. Rory looked at his hovering hand, at the man who bought and picked every door in London and had waited five months outside hers. "Kettle's in the kitchen," she said. "You'll talk while it boils. And if I don't like what I hear—" "You'll throw me out into the rain." "I'll throw you out into the rain." His hand settled over hers, warm and careful, and she didn't pull it away.
created_at"2026-09-24T14:04:47.043Z" 9/24/2026, 2:04:47 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She turned away [away]"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.34
leniency0.68
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.04
96.22% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1324
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
84.89% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1324
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"absolutely"
count1
2
word"measured"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"absolutely"
2"measured"
3"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences55
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences55
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences88
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen72
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1336
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount678
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.74
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva5
British1
Library1
Rory5
Brick1
Lane1
Low1
Ptolemy3
Lucien3
Webb1
March1
London1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Low"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Lucien"
5"Webb"
places
0"British"
1"Library"
2"Brick"
3"Lane"
4"March"
5"London"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences39
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1336
matches(empty)
90.91% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences88
matches
0"unhurried, that accent"
1"hated that he"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean26.72
std23.98
cv0.897
sampleLengths
017
126
252
314
422
514
610
77
845
91
1022
1124
1226
134
1420
152
1614
1754
1814
1941
204
217
2276
2325
243
2565
266
2710
283
2998
302
3149
3218
3386
3413
3531
3637
3719
3868
395
4078
4148
4225
4345
4415
4524
4619
477
487
4914
98.88% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences55
matches
0"been measured"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs116
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences88
ratio0.068
matches
0"The knock came at half past midnight — three raps, spaced like a heartbeat skipping a beat."
1"And the three deadbolts existed because Eva trusted no one — a policy Rory had adopted as her own."
2"She slid the deadbolts back before her brain could outvote her hands, opened the door on its chain, and then — because he only stood there, water beading on his shoulders, making no move to force anything — she unlatched that too."
3"He came without resistance, dripping onto the mat, and Ptolemy — the traitor — wound straight around his trouser leg, purring."
4"\"Cats have taste.\" Lucien set the cane against the wall and surveyed the flat — the books stacked in towers, the scrolls pinned over the radiator, the reading lamp with its shade askew."
5"\"You were never nothing. You were the one thing in this city I refused to spend.\" He reached out — stopped himself, hand hovering over hers."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount671
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.03129657228017884
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0029806259314456036
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences88
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences88
mean15.18
std14.4
cv0.948
sampleLengths
017
110
216
39
48
516
619
714
82
97
1013
1114
127
133
144
151
162
1742
181
192
201
215
2214
233
2420
254
264
2722
284
2920
302
3114
328
3325
3421
3514
3633
378
384
397
4022
4151
423
433
4422
453
4660
475
486
4910
71.59% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.4772727272727273
totalSentences88
uniqueOpeners42
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences47
matches(empty)
ratio0
24.26% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences47
matches
0"She crossed the room without"
1"Her stomach dropped through the"
2"She said it to the"
3"She slid the deadbolts back"
4"His voice hadn't changed"
5"She cinched the belt of"
6"She pushed the door."
7"His cane tapped forward and"
8"He came without resistance, dripping"
9"She jabbed a finger at"
10"Her voice cracked and she"
11"He didn't flinch."
12"He stood in his ruined"
13"She turned away, arms crossed,"
14"He turned from the window"
15"Her throat closed."
16"He crossed the room, stopping"
17"His mouth twisted"
18"She looked at his hand"
19"She looked at the crescent-shaped"
ratio0.489
2.55% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount43
totalSentences47
matches
0"The knock came at half"
1"Rory set down the scroll"
2"Ptolemy lifted his head from"
3"Nobody knocked on Eva's door"
4"The curry house below had"
5"Eva herself was still at"
6"She crossed the room without"
7"Platinum hair slicked back despite"
8"An ivory cane planted on"
9"Her stomach dropped through the"
10"She said it to the"
11"The knock came again."
12"She slid the deadbolts back"
13"His voice hadn't changed"
14"She cinched the belt of"
15"She pushed the door."
16"His cane tapped forward and"
17"Rory closed her eyes, counted"
18"He came without resistance, dripping"
19"Lucien set the cane against"
ratio0.915
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences47
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She slid the deadbolts back before her brain could outvote her hands, opened the door on its chain, and then — because he only stood there, water beading on his…"
95.59% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Her voice cracked, hated that he heard it"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.04
leniency0.08
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.9410%