| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 20 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said softly [softly]" | | 1 | "bare feet drifted backward [backward]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.513 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.1 | |
| 88.58% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1314 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 42.92% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1314 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "furrowed" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "could feel" | | 4 | "chill" | | 5 | "footsteps" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "gloom" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "throb" | | 10 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 44 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1324 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 39 | | wordCount | 988 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.11 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Isolde | 10 | | Aurora | 11 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Fae | 1 | | December | 1 | | Wildflowers | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Shade | 1 | | Seer | 1 | | Frost | 3 | | Nyx | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "December" | | 4 | "Wildflowers" | | 5 | "Grove" | | 6 | "Shade" | | 7 | "Seer" | | 8 | "Frost" | | 9 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.943 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 95.65% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed thicker almost syrupy" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.755 | | wordCount | 1324 | | matches | | 0 | "not a wall but a doorway, an arch through" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 35.78 | | std | 25.78 | | cv | 0.721 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 35 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 38 | | 4 | 36 | | 5 | 29 | | 6 | 50 | | 7 | 57 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 74 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 74 | | 13 | 72 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 48 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 81 | | 18 | 53 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 107 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 52 | | 26 | 80 | | 27 | 31 | | 28 | 38 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 65 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 36 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 26 | | 35 | 31 | | 36 | 14 |
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| 99.51% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 145 | | matches | | 0 | "was already moving" | | 1 | "was facing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 80 | | ratio | 0.113 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the air — the pitch." | | 1 | "Wildflowers ringed the clearing in every direction — cowslips and violets and things she had no names for, blooms the color of bruised plums and pale fire, open and nodding in a wind she could not feel on her own face." | | 2 | "One, far across the clearing, had bark like hammered copper, and it breathed — the whole trunk swelling and shrinking, slow as a sleeping animal." | | 3 | "The clearing opened into paths that had not been visible from the stones, winding corridors of blossom and root, and the hum in her teeth changed key with every turn — minor, then major, then something with no equivalent her ears had ever been taught." | | 4 | "Isolde's hand closed on her wrist — cold, strong, no warmth in it at all." | | 5 | "The roots had formed not a wall but a doorway, an arch through which poured light of a color Aurora had no word for — not white, not silver, a shimmering distortion like heat off summer tarmac, rippling, alive." | | 6 | "Through it she could see the Grove continuing on the far side, the same trees, the same blossom, but wrong — the copper tree stood there, and it was on the wrong side of the path, and it was facing them." | | 7 | "Aurora felt it before she saw it — a warmth at her throat, sudden, insistent, the Heartstone beating against her sternum like a second pulse." | | 8 | "Her lavender eyes went to the stone, then past it, down, to the mossy ground beneath the arch — and for the first time since the standing stones, the Seer's expression broke its calm." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 979 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.03472931562819203 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007150153217568948 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 80 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 80 | | mean | 16.55 | | std | 11.65 | | cv | 0.704 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 35 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 29 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 28 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 29 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 33 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 41 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 32 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 25 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 32 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 45 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 32 | | 43 | 21 | | 44 | 24 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 23 | | 48 | 27 | | 49 | 36 |
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| 75.83% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.5 | | totalSentences | 80 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead the air tasted of" | | 1 | "Somewhere ahead, water moved." | | 2 | "Somewhere farther, chimes rang, though" |
| | ratio | 0.054 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 10 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, though her mouth" | | 1 | "It sat inert against her" | | 2 | "It came from everywhere and" | | 3 | "They went deeper." | | 4 | "They walked beneath a tunnel" | | 5 | "She gestured ahead, where the" | | 6 | "She fished it out of" | | 7 | "Her voice came out flat," | | 8 | "Her lavender eyes went to" | | 9 | "she said softly" |
| | ratio | 0.179 | |
| 31.43% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "Frost silvered the grass of" | | 1 | "she said, though her mouth" | | 2 | "Aurora zipped her jacket to" | | 3 | "Isolde turned toward the tallest" | | 4 | "Violet light kindled where eyes" | | 5 | "Nyx said, their voice a" | | 6 | "Isolde lifted her chin toward" | | 7 | "Aurora's fingers found the Heartstone" | | 8 | "It sat inert against her" | | 9 | "The Fae blade rode her" | | 10 | "Isolde smiled without humor and" | | 11 | "The moment Aurora crossed the" | | 12 | "A hum settled into her" | | 13 | "Grass underfoot gave way to" | | 14 | "Nyx had gone incorporeal the" | | 15 | "Aurora turned a slow circle" | | 16 | "Wildflowers ringed the clearing in" | | 17 | "Snow should have been here." | | 18 | "Frost should have been here." | | 19 | "The light was wrong, too." |
| | ratio | 0.857 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 57.14% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 25 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "It came from everywhere and nowhere, a sourceless gold like late afternoon that refused to become evening, and it fell through a canopy of oaks whose branches b…" | | 1 | "The clearing opened into paths that had not been visible from the stones, winding corridors of blossom and root, and the hum in her teeth changed key with every…" | | 2 | "They walked beneath a tunnel of living wood strung with blossoms that glowed faintly from within, each one a lantern the size of her thumbnail, and the warm gol…" |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 20 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, though her mouth had barely moved" | | 1 | "Nyx said, their voice a whisper dragged across still water" | | 2 | "Nyx had, a smear of darkness gliding at her shoulder" | | 3 | "Her voice came out, stripped" |
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| 98.72% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.205 | | leniency | 0.41 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.103 | |