Run: 2026-09-24-01M39VT8TAVG2Q68PGH58016SP

Run Details

Duration:
56.2s
Cost:
$0.003840
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Frost silvered the grass of Richmond Park, and Isolde stood among the standing stones as though she had grown there, silver hair pooling down her back to a hem that never quite touched the ground. "You're late," she said, though her mouth had barely moved. "It's four in the morning." Aurora zipped her jacket to her chin and blew warmth into her cupped hands. "The park doesn't even open till six." "The park opens when the park decides. You are the one who is late." Isolde turned toward the tallest of the oaks, bark gone black and furrowed with age. "The Grove opens for no one. It merely permits." Behind Aurora, a shadow detached itself from the shadow of the stone wall and rose into the shape of a tall man with no face to speak of. Violet light kindled where eyes should have been. "She's been like this since midnight," Nyx said, their voice a whisper dragged across still water. "I counted three separate riddles about doorways. None of them rhymed. I'm worried." "Riddles aren't for rhyming, little Shade. They are for chewing." Isolde lifted her chin toward the gap between two of the stones, where the air seemed thicker, almost syrupy. "Walk where I walk. Do not walk where I have walked. There is a difference, and your bones will know it." Aurora's fingers found the Heartstone at her throat. It sat inert against her skin, a cold crimson bead on its silver chain, and she took what comfort she could from its stillness. The Fae blade rode her hip under her coat, and even through the leather she could feel its moonsilver chill, patient as a held breath. "Right," she said. "Walk where you walk. Simple." "Nothing in the Grove is simple." Isolde smiled without humor and stepped between the stones. The moment Aurora crossed the line their footsteps had drawn, the world changed pitch. Not the air — the pitch. A hum settled into her back teeth, into the hollow behind her sternum, like standing inside a struck bell. Frost vanished. Grass underfoot gave way to moss so deep and springy her boots sank a knuckle's width into it, and the cold of December fell away from her skin like a coat shrugged off. "Do you feel that?" Nyx had gone incorporeal the instant they crossed, a smear of darkness gliding at her shoulder. "The ground is listening." "I felt it before you said it." Aurora turned a slow circle. Wildflowers ringed the clearing in every direction — cowslips and violets and things she had no names for, blooms the color of bruised plums and pale fire, open and nodding in a wind she could not feel on her own face. Snow should have been here. Frost should have been here. Instead the air tasted of honey and rain on hot stone. The light was wrong, too. It came from everywhere and nowhere, a sourceless gold like late afternoon that refused to become evening, and it fell through a canopy of oaks whose branches braided overhead into a roof. Some of the trunks were ordinary oak. Some were silver. One, far across the clearing, had bark like hammered copper, and it breathed — the whole trunk swelling and shrinking, slow as a sleeping animal. "Is that tree—" "Do not say it, and it will remain a tree." Isolde was already moving, her bare feet leaving nothing on the moss, not a print, not a bend in a single blade. "The Grove remembers what it is named. Naming things here is a door you cannot close." Aurora swallowed the rest of her question. They went deeper. The clearing opened into paths that had not been visible from the stones, winding corridors of blossom and root, and the hum in her teeth changed key with every turn — minor, then major, then something with no equivalent her ears had ever been taught. Somewhere ahead, water moved. Somewhere farther, chimes rang, though she could see no chimes, and beneath it all ran a sound like a great many voices singing very softly in a language made entirely of vowels. Nyx drifted ahead and back, in and out of tree shadows, testing each darkness like a tongue testing a sore tooth. "The shadows here are thick. Older than the ones I use. They don't want me in them." A pause, and the violet eyes flickered. "They don't want me out of them, either." "Then stay in the light with us," Aurora said. "The light here isn't for me. But I will stay near you. That is the same thing, as far as I am concerned." The path descended by degrees so gentle she didn't notice the slope until the walls of root and hedge rose above her head, arched, and knit together. They walked beneath a tunnel of living wood strung with blossoms that glowed faintly from within, each one a lantern the size of her thumbnail, and the warm gold light dimmed to something cooler, bluer, older. Moss carpeted the tunnel floor in a blue so deep it looked wet. Spores or seeds or something else entirely drifted down through the gloom, and where they touched the moss, small rings of light expanded outward and faded, like rain on a pond. Aurora reached out. Isolde's hand closed on her wrist — cold, strong, no warmth in it at all. "The pretty ones are the hungry ones." "I wasn't going to touch it." "You were." Isolde released her. "Everyone is. That is how the Grove has grown for three thousand years, on the reaching hands of the curious." She gestured ahead, where the tunnel ended in a wall of woven roots. "But this — this you may look at. This you were brought to see." The roots had formed not a wall but a doorway, an arch through which poured light of a color Aurora had no word for — not white, not silver, a shimmering distortion like heat off summer tarmac, rippling, alive. Through it she could see the Grove continuing on the far side, the same trees, the same blossom, but wrong — the copper tree stood there, and it was on the wrong side of the path, and it was facing them. "The Veil," Nyx breathed, and for the first time since Aurora had known them, the Shade sounded small. "It's not a barrier here. It's a curtain, and someone left it half-drawn." "Solstice comes in nine days," Isolde said. "The Veil thins. The Grove sits on the seam, as it has sat since before your city had a name. What slips through when it thins does not always slip back." And that was when the pendant moved. Aurora felt it before she saw it — a warmth at her throat, sudden, insistent, the Heartstone beating against her sternum like a second pulse. She fished it out of her collar. The crimson gem glowed from within, bright and brighter, throbbing in a rhythm far too much like a heartbeat, and each throb sent a pulse of heat up her neck into her jaw. "It's never done this." Her voice came out flat, stripped. "Isolde. It's never done this." Isolde turned. Her lavender eyes went to the stone, then past it, down, to the mossy ground beneath the arch — and for the first time since the standing stones, the Seer's expression broke its calm. "Ah," she said softly. "So that is what the Grove has been chewing on all winter." The pendant pulsed again, harder, and beneath their feet, somewhere far below the roots and the singing and the three thousand patient years, something answered it. "That rhythm," Nyx whispered, sinking out of the light until only their eyes remained, two violet coals in the blue gloom. "Aurora. That is not the Veil it is singing to." "No." Isolde's bare feet drifted backward, one silent step, then two. "It is not."
created_at"2026-09-24T14:06:23.062Z" 9/24/2026, 2:06:23 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said softly [softly]"
1"bare feet drifted backward [backward]"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.513
leniency1
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.1
88.58% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1314
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count2
highlights
0"very"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
42.92% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1314
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"warmth"
count3
1
word"furrowed"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count1
3
word"could feel"
count1
4
word"chill"
count1
5
word"footsteps"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"gloom"
count2
8
word"pulse"
count2
9
word"throb"
count1
10
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"furrowed"
2"whisper"
3"could feel"
4"chill"
5"footsteps"
6"flickered"
7"gloom"
8"pulse"
9"throb"
10"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences61
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences61
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences80
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1324
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
94.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount988
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.11
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Isolde"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Isolde10
Aurora11
Heartstone2
Fae1
December1
Wildflowers1
Grove1
Shade1
Seer1
Frost3
Nyx5
persons
0"Isolde"
1"Aurora"
2"Heartstone"
3"December"
4"Wildflowers"
5"Grove"
6"Shade"
7"Seer"
8"Frost"
9"Nyx"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.943
windowScore1
95.65% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed thicker almost syrupy"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.755
wordCount1324
matches
0"not a wall but a doorway, an arch through"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean35.78
std25.78
cv0.721
sampleLengths
035
110
226
338
436
529
650
757
88
915
1074
1124
1274
1372
143
1548
1610
1781
1853
199
2023
21107
2218
237
246
2552
2680
2731
2838
297
3065
3115
3236
3316
3426
3531
3614
99.51% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences61
matches
0"been taught"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs145
matches
0"was already moving"
1"was facing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences80
ratio0.113
matches
0"Not the air — the pitch."
1"Wildflowers ringed the clearing in every direction — cowslips and violets and things she had no names for, blooms the color of bruised plums and pale fire, open and nodding in a wind she could not feel on her own face."
2"One, far across the clearing, had bark like hammered copper, and it breathed — the whole trunk swelling and shrinking, slow as a sleeping animal."
3"The clearing opened into paths that had not been visible from the stones, winding corridors of blossom and root, and the hum in her teeth changed key with every turn — minor, then major, then something with no equivalent her ears had ever been taught."
4"Isolde's hand closed on her wrist — cold, strong, no warmth in it at all."
5"The roots had formed not a wall but a doorway, an arch through which poured light of a color Aurora had no word for — not white, not silver, a shimmering distortion like heat off summer tarmac, rippling, alive."
6"Through it she could see the Grove continuing on the far side, the same trees, the same blossom, but wrong — the copper tree stood there, and it was on the wrong side of the path, and it was facing them."
7"Aurora felt it before she saw it — a warmth at her throat, sudden, insistent, the Heartstone beating against her sternum like a second pulse."
8"Her lavender eyes went to the stone, then past it, down, to the mossy ground beneath the arch — and for the first time since the standing stones, the Seer's expression broke its calm."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount979
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.03472931562819203
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.007150153217568948
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences80
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences80
mean16.55
std11.65
cv0.704
sampleLengths
035
110
219
37
429
59
628
78
816
913
1029
1121
128
1324
1425
153
165
1715
1814
196
2019
212
2233
2320
244
2512
2641
275
285
2911
305
3132
327
333
3425
353
3632
3716
387
393
4045
414
4232
4321
4424
458
469
4723
4827
4936
75.83% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.5
totalSentences80
uniqueOpeners40
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences56
matches
0"Instead the air tasted of"
1"Somewhere ahead, water moved."
2"Somewhere farther, chimes rang, though"
ratio0.054
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount10
totalSentences56
matches
0"she said, though her mouth"
1"It sat inert against her"
2"It came from everywhere and"
3"They went deeper."
4"They walked beneath a tunnel"
5"She gestured ahead, where the"
6"She fished it out of"
7"Her voice came out flat,"
8"Her lavender eyes went to"
9"she said softly"
ratio0.179
31.43% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences56
matches
0"Frost silvered the grass of"
1"she said, though her mouth"
2"Aurora zipped her jacket to"
3"Isolde turned toward the tallest"
4"Violet light kindled where eyes"
5"Nyx said, their voice a"
6"Isolde lifted her chin toward"
7"Aurora's fingers found the Heartstone"
8"It sat inert against her"
9"The Fae blade rode her"
10"Isolde smiled without humor and"
11"The moment Aurora crossed the"
12"A hum settled into her"
13"Grass underfoot gave way to"
14"Nyx had gone incorporeal the"
15"Aurora turned a slow circle"
16"Wildflowers ringed the clearing in"
17"Snow should have been here."
18"Frost should have been here."
19"The light was wrong, too."
ratio0.857
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
ratio0
57.14% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"It came from everywhere and nowhere, a sourceless gold like late afternoon that refused to become evening, and it fell through a canopy of oaks whose branches b…"
1"The clearing opened into paths that had not been visible from the stones, winding corridors of blossom and root, and the hum in her teeth changed key with every…"
2"They walked beneath a tunnel of living wood strung with blossoms that glowed faintly from within, each one a lantern the size of her thumbnail, and the warm gol…"
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she said, though her mouth had barely moved"
1"Nyx said, their voice a whisper dragged across still water"
2"Nyx had, a smear of darkness gliding at her shoulder"
3"Her voice came out, stripped"
98.72% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Nyx breathed (breathe)"
1"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.205
leniency0.41
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.103
83.6375%