Run: 2026-09-24-01M39VX76RPKVPMPZ2XMYZ98ZW

Run Details

Duration:
1m 20s
Cost:
$0.005318
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The pendant had not stopped pulsing since Tuesday. Three days of warmth bleeding through cotton and wool, three days of that dull rhythm against her sternum like a second heart with opinions of its own, and Rory had run out of explanations that didn't end with Richmond Park after dark. Isolde hadn't answered in two weeks. No moth on the windowsill, no silver-tongued note tucked under the bar's back door. Just the pendant, hammering harder with every mile west, until the moment Rory's trainers hit the dirt track past Robin Hood Gate and it settled into something almost content. "Right." She spoke to the empty path because the alternative was listening to the silence. "Walk in, ask a few questions, walk out. Home by one. Simple." Her torch carved a cone out of the dark. Bare branches leaned over the track, and frost silvered the mud in a crust that crunched under her boots — proper winter frost, the kind February earned. Then the frost stopped. Drew a clean line across the path like someone had dragged a ruler through it, and past that line the ground bloomed. Bluebells. Poppies. Cow parsley standing hip-high. February flowers shoulder to shoulder with June ones, all of it nodding in a breeze she couldn't feel on her face. Her phone had died at the gate. Her watch — a wind-up thing, mechanical, reliable — had stopped at 11:47 and stayed there no matter how she shook it. She'd wound it that morning. She'd wound it in front of Eva, who'd told her to bin it and buy a Casio like a normal person. Somewhere behind her, a twig snapped. Rory turned. The torch beam swept mud, roots, the black wall of rhododendron. Nothing moved. She counted to five, listening, and the park gave her nothing back — no dog fox screaming, no traffic drone bleeding in from the A316. That was the part that crawled under her skin. Richmond Park sat under the Heathrow flight path. Planes came over every ninety seconds, all night, a low grumble you stopped hearing because it never stopped. She'd been standing here four minutes and hadn't heard one. "Planes," she said. "Where are the planes?" The pendant answered with a slow, warm throb. She walked. The track narrowed, curved, and the oaks rose out of the dark ahead — the standing stones, though she'd never once managed to think of them as anything but what Isolde called them: the boundary. Seven ancient oaks grown into human-ish shapes, trunks split and knotted into shoulders and hips, leaning inward over the grove like a council that never adjourned. Moonlight came down through their crowns in coins. Her footsteps sounded doubled. Not an echo. Echoes came back thinner, delayed, tinny. This was a second set of boots on frost, matching hers stride for stride, a half-tone lower. Rory stopped. The second set stopped — a half-beat late, the way a person stops when they've been counting your steps. She took three quick steps. Stopped. Spun with the torch up. Frost. Nothing. The beam trembled in her grip and she steadied it against her wrist. "Very funny," she told the dark. "Ha ha. Come out and I'll buy you a pint." The dark declined. She turned back to the oaks and her stomach dropped — the gap she'd walked through on a dozen previous visits, the wide opening between the second and third trees, had a low branch across it now. Gnarled, thick as her thigh, at chest height. She didn't remember ducking. She would have remembered ducking. The pendant went hot enough to bite. Rory ducked under the branch — of course she ducked under it, the alternative was standing in a frozen park arguing with wood — and the grove took her. Wildflowers to her knees, a carpet of them in colours that had no business coexisting, and the air inside the stones hung warm and thick, summer-weight, carrying a sweetness like overripe pears. Above the canopy the sky stayed hard and winter-clear, stars sharp as pins, and the disconnect between the two made her eyes water. "Isolde?" Her voice came out flat. Swallowed. In the city, her voice bounced off buildings and came back to her; here it just stopped, two feet from her mouth, like the grove ate sound. "Isolde, it's Rory. Your pendant's been going off for three days and you've gone quiet and I want to know why." Wind moved the flowers. She felt nothing on her skin. Under her boots, faint and steady, came a pulse. Not water in a pipe — she'd heard water in pipes, this was wetter, deeper, a beat in the soil itself that her bones picked up before her ears did. She crouched, pressed her palm flat to the ground between a poppy and a bluebell, and the earth knocked against her hand. Once. Twice. A resting heartbeat. "Isolde." Louder now, and the grove still ate it. "I know you're here. The stones only do this when—" "Rory." The voice came from the centre of the grove, from the deep grass, soft as a hymn. Isolde's voice — the exact pitch of it, that low Welsh lilt, the vowel she bent sideways in every second word. Rory's whole body went cold and then hot. She stood up too fast and the flowers swayed against her shins. "Isolde? God. Two weeks. Two weeks of nothing, and now I—" She stopped herself, planted her feet. "Show yourself. Properly. Where I can see you." "Come and sit, dear one. You're late." "I'm not late. It's not even midnight." She lifted her dead watch as proof and then felt stupid, because the thing in the grass couldn't see a stopped watch from thirty feet away in the dark, and anyway the watch was lying. "My watch stopped. Everything's stopped. What's happening to the grove?" "Time is soft here, little one. It has always been soft. Come. Sit. We have much to discuss." The voice was right. The words were right. Isolde said time is soft, said it the first day Rory ever stepped through the stones, hand on her shoulder, breath in her ear. And yet each sentence landed a half-second after it should, gaps where breath belonged, like a recording played through a mouth that had learned the shape of sound without ever needing air. Rory's fingers closed around the pendant. It throbbed against her palm — and the ground throbbed back, in time, the two rhythms locked together. "Say my name," she said. "Rory, dear one. Come and sit." "No." Her mouth had gone dry. "My name. All of it. Say all of it." The pause stretched. Somewhere behind her, among the oaks, the frost crunched — one step, deliberate, and then stillness. "Aurora," the voice said at last, and it smiled; she heard the smile in it, heard the shape of lips curving around the syllables. "Aurora Carter. Come and sit, Aurora." Isolde had never once used her full name. First lesson, first night, standing at the boundary with moonlight in her hair: Never give the grove your whole name, and never answer to it in here. Names are handles, cariad. Things in the dark pick you up by them. The grass at the centre of the grove parted. A figure rose out of it the way smoke rises — no hands pushing, no knees bending, just upward — and took Isolde's shape. Isolde's height, Isolde's silver braid, Isolde's long grey coat with the missing button. Moonlight fell on it from above. Its shadow stretched sideways. Away from the moon. "That's not—" Rory backed up a step, and the flowers turned with her. Not in the wind. All of them, the whole carpet of them, bluebells and poppies and cow parsley, swivelling on their stems so their faces tracked her across the grove. The Isolde-shaped thing tilted its head, and the braid swung wrong, a half-second behind the movement, and it spoke with the grove's stolen air. "You brought my heart back to me, Aurora. How thoughtful of you." The pendant burned against her chest like a coal — and beneath her boots, the heartbeat in the earth picked up speed, matching her own now, thudding up through her shins, her knees, her teeth. Rory turned for the boundary and the oaks stood where no oaks had stood, a tight unbroken ring of shoulder-shaped trunks, the gap with its low branch gone as if it had never been. Frost crunched behind her. Then to her left. Then, much closer, to her right. "Aurora," said four voices at once, all of them Isolde's. "You came so far. Stay."
created_at"2026-09-24T14:07:59.718Z" 9/24/2026, 2:07:59 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"said four voices at once [once]"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.407
leniency0.815
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.074
96.51% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1431
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
51.08% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1431
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"mechanical"
count1
3
word"throb"
count1
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"echo"
count1
6
word"echoes"
count1
7
word"trembled"
count1
8
word"stomach"
count1
9
word"weight"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count1
11
word"lilt"
count1
12
word"throbbed"
count2
highlights
0"warmth"
1"silence"
2"mechanical"
3"throb"
4"footsteps"
5"echo"
6"echoes"
7"trembled"
8"stomach"
9"weight"
10"pulse"
11"lilt"
12"throbbed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences104
filterMatches
0"watch "
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences119
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1447
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount1276
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity0.86
worstName"Isolde"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Isolde"
discoveredNames
Tuesday1
Rory10
Richmond2
Park2
Robin1
Hood1
Gate1
February2
June1
Eva1
Casio1
Heathrow1
Isolde11
Swallowed1
Welsh1
Isolde-shaped1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Robin"
2"Hood"
3"Gate"
4"February"
5"June"
6"Eva"
7"Isolde"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1447
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences119
matches
0"past that line"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean30.79
std25.19
cv0.818
sampleLengths
08
191
227
362
427
555
66
785
87
98
1071
114
1247
1311
1415
1516
163
1754
187
1984
2055
2110
2266
2319
241
2538
2620
2725
287
2952
3018
3164
3224
335
346
3515
3619
3730
3848
3952
408
4143
4224
4312
4469
4514
4615
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
98.48% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs197
matches
0"was listening"
1"was standing"
2"was lying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount16
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences15
totalSentences119
ratio0.126
matches
0"Bare branches leaned over the track, and frost silvered the mud in a crust that crunched under her boots — proper winter frost, the kind February earned."
1"Her watch — a wind-up thing, mechanical, reliable — had stopped at 11:47 and stayed there no matter how she shook it."
2"She counted to five, listening, and the park gave her nothing back — no dog fox screaming, no traffic drone bleeding in from the A316."
3"The track narrowed, curved, and the oaks rose out of the dark ahead — the standing stones, though she'd never once managed to think of them as anything but what Isolde called them: the boundary."
4"The second set stopped — a half-beat late, the way a person stops when they've been counting your steps."
5"She turned back to the oaks and her stomach dropped — the gap she'd walked through on a dozen previous visits, the wide opening between the second and third trees, had a low branch across it now."
6"Rory ducked under the branch — of course she ducked under it, the alternative was standing in a frozen park arguing with wood — and the grove took her."
7"In the city, her voice bounced off buildings and came back to her; here it just stopped, two feet from her mouth, like the grove ate sound."
8"Not water in a pipe — she'd heard water in pipes, this was wetter, deeper, a beat in the soil itself that her bones picked up before her ears did."
9"Isolde's voice — the exact pitch of it, that low Welsh lilt, the vowel she bent sideways in every second word."
10"It throbbed against her palm — and the ground throbbed back, in time, the two rhythms locked together."
11"Somewhere behind her, among the oaks, the frost crunched — one step, deliberate, and then stillness."
12"\"Aurora,\" the voice said at last, and it smiled; she heard the smile in it, heard the shape of lips curving around the syllables."
13"A figure rose out of it the way smoke rises — no hands pushing, no knees bending, just upward — and took Isolde's shape."
14"The pendant burned against her chest like a coal — and beneath her boots, the heartbeat in the earth picked up speed, matching her own now, thudding up through her shins, her knees, her teeth."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1271
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.02675059008654603
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences119
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences119
mean12.16
std10.16
cv0.836
sampleLengths
08
142
26
314
429
515
612
79
827
94
1022
111
121
134
1421
157
1622
175
1821
196
202
2111
222
2325
249
258
2618
2710
283
294
308
312
3235
3326
348
354
363
376
3817
392
4019
415
421
435
441
451
4613
476
4810
493
77.59% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.4957983193277311
totalSentences119
uniqueOpeners59
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount7
totalSentences90
matches
0"Just the pendant, hammering harder"
1"Then the frost stopped."
2"Somewhere behind her, a twig"
3"Somewhere behind her, among the"
4"Away from the moon."
5"Then to her left."
6"Then, much closer, to her"
ratio0.078
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences90
matches
0"She spoke to the empty"
1"Her torch carved a cone"
2"Her phone had died at"
3"Her watch — a wind-up"
4"She'd wound it that morning."
5"She'd wound it in front"
6"She counted to five, listening,"
7"She'd been standing here four"
8"Her footsteps sounded doubled."
9"She took three quick steps."
10"she told the dark"
11"She turned back to the"
12"She didn't remember ducking."
13"She would have remembered ducking."
14"Her voice came out flat"
15"She felt nothing on her"
16"She crouched, pressed her palm"
17"She stood up too fast"
18"She stopped herself, planted her"
19"She lifted her dead watch"
ratio0.256
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences90
matches
0"The pendant had not stopped"
1"Isolde hadn't answered in two"
2"She spoke to the empty"
3"Her torch carved a cone"
4"Cow parsley standing hip-high."
5"February flowers shoulder to shoulder"
6"Her phone had died at"
7"Her watch — a wind-up"
8"She'd wound it that morning."
9"She'd wound it in front"
10"The torch beam swept mud,"
11"She counted to five, listening,"
12"That was the part that"
13"Richmond Park sat under the"
14"She'd been standing here four"
15"The pendant answered with a"
16"The track narrowed, curved, and"
17"Moonlight came down through their"
18"Her footsteps sounded doubled."
19"Echoes came back thinner, delayed,"
ratio0.711
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
ratio0
67.67% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Three days of warmth bleeding through cotton and wool, three days of that dull rhythm against her sternum like a second heart with opinions of its own, and Rory…"
1"Bare branches leaned over the track, and frost silvered the mud in a crust that crunched under her boots — proper winter frost, the kind February earned."
2"And yet each sentence landed a half-second after it should, gaps where breath belonged, like a recording played through a mouth that had learned the shape of so…"
3"Rory turned for the boundary and the oaks stood where no oaks had stood, a tight unbroken ring of shoulder-shaped trunks, the gap with its low branch gone as if…"
79.55% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Rory backed up, and the flowers turned with her"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She spoke (speak)"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.222
leniency0.444
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.074
87.9180%