Run: 2026-09-24-01M39W2WV71B7DHZKR80GTSTJ9

Run Details

Duration:
1m 7s
Cost:
$0.005113
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt gave with a click, and Rory pulled the door open onto a foot of rain and Lucien Moreau. Water sheeted off the broken gutter above the curry house and hammered his shoulders. The charcoal suit had gone black at the seams. His platinum hair lay plastered to his brow, and the ivory cane planted on the landing held him steady while the other hand stayed empty at his side. One amber eye, one black, both fixed on her. "You," she said. "Me." She moved to shut the door. His cane caught the frame with a tap of wood, light as a chess piece being placed. "I know how the deadbolts work, Carter. I sold three of them to Eva myself." "Then you know the fourth one's a knife." Ptolemy appeared between his ankles, tabby tail looping his shin, purring loud enough to hear over the rain. Traitor. Rory glared down at him. "Don't encourage him." "He always liked me." "He likes anyone who feeds him. Eva's out. Whatever you're selling, come back when she's here to buy." "I'm not selling." He peeled his collar away from his neck. "I'm returning." She crossed her arms and leaned on the door, keeping the gap narrow. Rain dripped off the landing rail and pooled around his shoes. Behind her, the flat glowed amber with lamplight, Eva's books stacked in leaning towers, scrolls curling off the kitchen counter, the smell of last night's curry still hanging in the steam. Everything in its usual place. Everything except the space where her pulse had been sitting quietly for six weeks. "You tracked me here." She kept her voice flat. "Through Eva's three locks and a curry house full of witnesses. That took effort, Luc. Effort means you want something." "Effort means I wanted to do this in person." He reached into his breast pocket, slow, two fingers only, and drew out a folded page. Cream stock. Her stomach dropped before he even opened it, because she knew that cream stock. She'd slept a floor away from that ledger for a year. "I don't want it." "You haven't seen it." "I saw enough of it. Page forty-one. My name in your hand, a column beside it, a buyer's code underneath. I read it while you were downstairs signing for a delivery. I read it, and then I packed a bag and I left, and I didn't leave a note, and I've spent six weeks deciding whether that made me a coward or a survivor." The words came out faster than she'd planned, jammed up behind her teeth for a month and a half. She stopped, breathing hard, and the rain filled the silence. Lucien turned the page around and held it out. She didn't take it. He shook it once, patient, and the lamplight caught the ink, and she read it anyway, because she was weak in exactly one way and this was it. Carter, A. — not for sale. Below it, in his smaller, tighter script: *whatever the offer. whatever the cost.* "There's no buyer code," he said. "I saw one." "You saw the entry above yours. The Kestrel job. That was the sale." He folded the page in half, then quarters, precise as everything he did. "You read one line and left. You're the fastest reader in London when you're frightened." "Don't." Her voice cracked on it. She hated that it cracked. "Don't stand in the rain and make this my fault." "I'm not." Water ran off his chin. He wiped it with his knuckle. "I'm making it mine. I should have shown you the ledger. I should have walked you through every page, every debt, every name, and finished with yours. I told myself you'd trust me without the arithmetic. That was vanity, and vanity cost me six weeks." Ptolemy pushed past her ankle into the flat, tail high, done with the weather. Rory's hands had gone cold on the doorframe. The crescent scar on her wrist ached the way it did when the heating was off and the night came in, and she pressed her thumb against it without deciding to. "You let me walk out," she said. "I did." "You're a fixer. You fix things. People cross the room for you and you make them stop. I walked out of your office and you poured a drink and you watched the door." "Yes." "Why?" "Because I'd just read your file. The one you think I wrote." He stepped closer, and the rain noise shrank behind the width of him. "Evan's people compiled it. My city, my streets, my informant network, and a man who put a camera across from your building and a price on your head, and I never saw it until a courier I didn't pay handed it to me by mistake. I spent that night making calls I can never unmake. I bought his lease out from under him. I emptied his accounts. I burned the file in a bin behind this exact building." His voice stayed level, but his hand on the cane had gone white at the knuckle. "And then you came downstairs, and you looked at me, and for the first time in thirty-two years I didn't know what my face was doing. So I poured a drink. And you left. And I decided chasing you to the door would look like exactly what I was. A man who keeps things." The rain filled the pause. Somewhere below, the curry house kitchen clattered through a dinner rush, and the smell of cardamom rose with the steam. "That's not an apology," she said. "No. It's the thing I should have said at the door, six weeks ago, instead of nothing." He held out the folded page again. "This is the apology. Take it. Burn it. Frame it. I don't care. It's the only honest entry in the book." She took it. The paper was dry and warm from his pocket, and her fingers brushed his, and that was the end of her composure, six weeks of it gone in half a second of contact. He didn't close his hand. He let her pull away, let her hold the page against her sternum like a shield, and his mismatched eyes tracked every inch of her face the way they had the first night in his office, when she'd brought him a delivery she wasn't supposed to open and opened it anyway. "You're soaked," she said. "London in October." "You'll ruin Eva's rug." "Eva's rug has survived worse than me." "Lucien." "Carter." Her throat worked. There were more sentences behind her teeth, whole paragraphs, the ones she'd rehearsed on night buses and never delivered — that she'd read the ledger and believed the worst because believing the worst was safer than asking; that she'd missed him in the specific way you miss a load-bearing wall. She got as far as opening her mouth. He waited. He was good at waiting. It was the most infuriating thing about him and she'd once found it the most attractive, and neither of those facts had changed. "You came through the rain," she said finally, "with a page of paper and no umbrella, to a flat with three deadbolts, on the one night I was here alone." "Yes." "Why tonight?" "Because Eva drinks at the Golden Empress on Thursdays. Yu-Fei told me." A muscle moved in his jaw. "And because I've said nothing for six weeks, and nothing was the one deal I've ever regretted closing." She looked at the page. Not for sale. Whatever the cost. His handwriting, steady and certain, the same hand that had priced half the underworld and moved it around the board like weather. "Get in," she said, and stepped back, and pulled the door wide. "Before the curry house sees you and starts a betting pool." He crossed the threshold, dripping, close enough that rain came off him in a fine mist against her cheek. He stopped an inch away. Close enough to count. Not close enough to touch. "The rug," he said, "is going to be the least of Eva's concerns." "Lucien." "Carter." His mouth curved, barely. "Yes?" "Shut the door."
created_at"2026-09-24T14:11:05.718Z" 9/24/2026, 2:11:05 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said finally [finally]"
1"His mouth curved barely [barely]"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.404
leniency0.808
rawRatio0.095
effectiveRatio0.077
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1366
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
89.02% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1366
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"stomach"
2"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences71
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences102
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen94
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords6
totalWords1368
ratio0.004
matches
0"whatever the offer. whatever the cost."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions9
wordCount779
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.39
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory3
Lucien2
Moreau1
Traitor1
Eva1
Cream1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Eva"
4"Cream"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences39
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1368
matches(empty)
35.95% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount4
totalSentences102
matches
0"knew that cream"
1"hated that it"
2"delivered — that she'dasking; that she'd"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean24.43
std30.47
cv1.247
sampleLengths
021
160
23
31
423
515
635
74
818
913
1074
1129
1252
134
144
1593
169
1732
186
1913
206
213
2241
2321
2458
2553
267
272
2833
291
301
31173
3225
336
3445
353
3689
374
383
394
407
411
421
4361
4430
4530
461
472
4836
4933
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences71
matches
0"being placed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs138
matches(empty)
86.83% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences102
ratio0.02
matches
0"— not for sale."
1"There were more sentences behind her teeth, whole paragraphs, the ones she'd rehearsed on night buses and never delivered — that she'd read the ledger and believed the worst because believing the worst was safer than asking; that she'd missed him in the specific way you miss a load-bearing wall."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount778
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.03598971722365039
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.006426735218508998
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences102
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences102
mean13.41
std15.74
cv1.173
sampleLengths
021
114
29
328
49
53
61
76
817
915
1026
111
125
133
144
1518
1611
172
1813
1911
2031
215
2214
239
2420
2525
262
2714
2811
294
304
3183
3210
339
344
3528
362
374
3810
393
406
413
4226
4315
446
455
4610
477
486
4945
63.40% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.4215686274509804
totalSentences102
uniqueOpeners43
54.64% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences61
matches
0"Somewhere below, the curry house"
ratio0.016
3.61% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences61
matches
0"His platinum hair lay plastered"
1"She moved to shut the"
2"His cane caught the frame"
3"He peeled his collar away"
4"She crossed her arms and"
5"She kept her voice flat"
6"He reached into his breast"
7"Her stomach dropped before he"
8"She'd slept a floor away"
9"She stopped, breathing hard, and"
10"She didn't take it."
11"He shook it once, patient,"
12"He folded the page in"
13"Her voice cracked on it"
14"She hated that it cracked."
15"He wiped it with his"
16"He stepped closer, and the"
17"His voice stayed level, but"
18"He held out the folded"
19"She took it."
ratio0.541
33.77% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences61
matches
0"The third deadbolt gave with"
1"Water sheeted off the broken"
2"The charcoal suit had gone"
3"His platinum hair lay plastered"
4"She moved to shut the"
5"His cane caught the frame"
6"Ptolemy appeared between his ankles,"
7"Rory glared down at him."
8"He peeled his collar away"
9"She crossed her arms and"
10"Rain dripped off the landing"
11"Everything in its usual place."
12"Everything except the space where"
13"She kept her voice flat"
14"He reached into his breast"
15"Her stomach dropped before he"
16"She'd slept a floor away"
17"The words came out faster"
18"She stopped, breathing hard, and"
19"Lucien turned the page around"
ratio0.852
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"His handwriting, steady and certain, the same hand that had priced half the underworld and moved it around the board like weather."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.154
leniency0.308
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.5741%