Run: 2026-09-24-01M39W4CPHFGBRFHTM7N9E3GXX

Run Details

Duration:
2m 1s
Cost:
$0.009394
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain ticked against the windows of The Raven's Nest and the green sign above the door hummed its one flat note into the empty street. Silas Blackwood counted the till for the second time, more for the ritual than the arithmetic, his bad leg propped on the rail beneath the bar. The radio murmured shipping forecasts to an audience of drying glasses. The door swung open. Cold air, wet wool, the bell's dull clank. "Closed." The stranger crossed the room and took the corner stool, the one with sightlines to the door and the mirror behind the till. Her coat dripped onto the floorboards. She laid her gloved hands flat on the wood, fingers spread, and held them there, still as a dealt hand of cards. "What's the damage on a whiskey?" He reached for the bottle before he looked at her. When he did, the glass slipped in his grip and he caught it by the rim. The rain filled the silence. She pushed back her hood. Black hair, shoulder-length, darker than he remembered because memory had softened it. Bright blue eyes that found his and then went past him, cataloguing the room the way a Customs officer reads a face. A thin white line cut through her left eyebrow where no line had been. She peeled off one glove, and there on the left wrist sat the small crescent scar, pale as a fish bone. "Rory Carter." "Hello, Silas." He set the glass down without pouring. His thumb found the silver signet on his right hand and turned it once, twice. "You'll have a whiskey, then." "I'll have a whiskey." He poured two. His knee complained on the way around the bar and she watched the limp cross the floor, her jaw tight. "Prague still collecting rent?" "Every month. Never misses." He lowered himself onto the stool opposite hers, the one behind the till's end, his old sentry post. "You used to bite those nails down to the quick." She looked at her bare hand. The nails were short, filed, immaculate. "The quick grew back. Some things don't." He drank. She drank. Neither of them touched the four years sitting on the bar between them. "I was on the 38," she offered eventually. "Saw the sign. Got off three stops early and walked the long way round the block twice." "I did that in Prague once. A café in Vinohrady. Walked past it four times before I could make myself go in." He turned his glass on the wood. "The person I was meeting didn't recognise me either." "I recognised you from the street. Through the window." A corner of her mouth moved. "You still dry the glasses in the same stupid order." "You still order other people's drinks before you'll admit you want one." The laugh that came out of her was short and wrong, a sound borrowed from someone else, and he heard the moment she heard it too. She looked down at the bar. "Have you still got that cider? The Norman's." "Stopped stocking it." "When?" "A while back." She nodded slowly, and he watched her do the arithmetic, and he let her. "The photograph's still up," she said, tilting her head at the wall. Among the old maps of the Balkans and the grainy faces from a dozen dead operations hung one picture of the Nest's first night: a young woman behind the bar pulling a pint with both hands, laughing at something out of frame, an apron knotted twice around her waist because it wouldn't sit right. "The wall kept it. I never took it down." "You could have. Plenty of room for other things." "There was never plenty of room," he said. "There was exactly one space and it was spoken for." She turned her glass a quarter turn. Outside, a bus hissed past and its lights swept the ceiling like a searchlight, and he clocked the way her shoulders came up before the light arrived and eased after it had gone. He clocked the way she'd checked the window's reflection for the street before she sat down. "I taught you to sit facing the door." "You taught me that." "I didn't teach you to read the window. That you learned somewhere I didn't." "Tangier." She said it the way other people said Tuesday. "And before that Marseille. Yu-Fei's deliveries stopped being food somewhere around Calais and I stopped asking what I was carrying. After you, after—" She stopped. Started again. "There, I was Laila." "Here, you were always on the ledger. Never struck off." "That's a terrible way to keep a friend." "It's the only way I know. You learned it from me." "And look what it bought me." Her voice stayed level but her hands closed, the gloves crumpling in her fists. "You told me to let it go. That night. Evan, the letters, the man following me home from the Empress. You sat there with your maps of other people's wars and you told me to let it go." "I told you to let him go. There's a difference." "Not the night I needed one." He breathed out through his nose. Behind him the neon buzzed; in front of him the girl from the photograph sat with a stranger's stillness and an eyebrow scar and hands that no longer shook. He had imagined this meeting a hundred times over five years and in none of those versions had he been this quiet. "So you went to Cheung. And Cheung sent you across the water." "And the water kept going." She rubbed the crescent scar with her thumb, an old habit that had survived everything else. "I found him, Si. In Rotterdam, of all the grey little places. It took me two years and it cost—" Her hand flicked toward her eyebrow, toward the flat blue calm of her. "It cost what it cost. And you were right. That's the rotten joke of it. Letting go would have been cheaper. But you wouldn't help me, so I helped myself, and the person who did it isn't the person who used to pull pints under that photograph." "I know." "Do you?" "I did the same thing once. Prague." His voice caught on the city name and he let it. "Cut a whole network loose because I'd decided the kindest thing was to carry it alone. It bought me a knee and a bar. It didn't buy anyone else a thing." He looked at her. "I looked for you, that first year. Yu-Fei, the port, half the people who owe me. Then I stopped, because every road I could imagine you on was one I'd built for you myself." She was quiet for a long moment. "I posted nothing. I called no one. I told myself you'd be better off without whatever it was I'd turned into." She laughed her borrowed laugh again, softer this time. "We're a pair, we are. Same lesson, twice taught, both of us flunking." "Speak for yourself. I own a bar." "You own a ledger with my name still in it." His thumb went to the signet ring. Beside it, threaded on the same band, hung a small brass key, worn smooth at the shoulder. She saw it and went still in a new way. "That's mine." "Never found a lock it didn't fit." "Four years, Si." "Five in April." He worked the key off the ring — his fingers knew the motion, had rehearsed it in the dark hours more than he would ever say — and set it on the wood between them, next to the ring of water her glass had left. "The flat's still empty. Rent's unchanged since you left." She looked at the key. Her hand moved toward it and stopped, hovering above the brass, and the rain kept ticking at the windows, and the green sign hummed its one flat note into the empty street.
created_at"2026-09-24T14:11:54.72Z" 9/24/2026, 2:11:54 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she offered eventually [eventually]"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.246
leniency0.491
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.035
96.22% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1322
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
81.09% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1322
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"eyebrow"
count3
2
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"eyebrow"
2"flicked"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences57
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences57
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences100
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1324
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions8
wordCount764
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.26
worstName"Nest"
maxWindowNameDensity0.5
worstWindowName"Nest"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest2
Blackwood1
Customs1
Balkans1
Tuesday1
Started1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Blackwood"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1324
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs61
mean21.7
std23.32
cv1.074
sampleLengths
062
112
21
351
46
526
679
72
82
922
105
114
1223
134
1432
1512
167
1717
1825
1938
2025
2112
2232
238
243
251
263
2714
2866
299
309
3118
3256
338
344
3514
3641
3710
388
3911
4058
4110
426
4357
4412
45101
462
472
4887
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs119
matches(empty)
85.71% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences100
ratio0.02
matches
0"Behind him the neon buzzed; in front of him the girl from the photograph sat with a stranger's stillness and an eyebrow scar and hands that no longer shook."
1"He worked the key off the ring — his fingers knew the motion, had rehearsed it in the dark hours more than he would ever say — and set it on the wood between them, next to the ring of water her glass had left."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount763
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.02490170380078637
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.002621231979030144
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences100
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences100
mean13.24
std10.98
cv0.829
sampleLengths
025
126
211
34
48
51
623
76
822
96
1010
1116
125
135
1412
1522
1614
1721
182
192
207
2115
225
234
243
2520
264
2722
2810
296
306
317
322
332
3413
358
3617
3729
389
3915
4010
4112
4226
436
448
453
461
473
4814
4912
69.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.44
totalSentences100
uniqueOpeners44
64.10% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences52
matches
0"Bright blue eyes that found"
ratio0.019
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences52
matches
0"Her coat dripped onto the"
1"She laid her gloved hands"
2"He reached for the bottle"
3"She pushed back her hood."
4"She peeled off one glove,"
5"He set the glass down"
6"His thumb found the silver"
7"He poured two."
8"His knee complained on the"
9"He lowered himself onto the"
10"She looked at her bare"
11"she offered eventually"
12"He turned his glass on"
13"She looked down at the"
14"She nodded slowly, and he"
15"she said, tilting her head"
16"She turned her glass a"
17"He clocked the way she'd"
18"She said it the way"
19"Her voice stayed level but"
ratio0.635
36.92% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount44
totalSentences52
matches
0"Rain ticked against the windows"
1"Silas Blackwood counted the till"
2"The radio murmured shipping forecasts"
3"The door swung open."
4"The stranger crossed the room"
5"Her coat dripped onto the"
6"She laid her gloved hands"
7"He reached for the bottle"
8"The rain filled the silence."
9"She pushed back her hood."
10"A thin white line cut"
11"She peeled off one glove,"
12"He set the glass down"
13"His thumb found the silver"
14"He poured two."
15"His knee complained on the"
16"He lowered himself onto the"
17"She looked at her bare"
18"The nails were short, filed,"
19"Neither of them touched the"
ratio0.846
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
89.29% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Her voice stayed, the gloves crumpling in her fists"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.07
leniency0.14
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.035
87.4222%