Run: 2026-09-24-01M39W4R107P2ZW38QYYJ7QVRM

Run Details

Duration:
1m 38s
Cost:
$0.007729
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Frost had stiffened the bracken overnight, and Richmond Park wore its December grey like a held breath. Isolde led them off the path where no trail existed — no cairn, no gap in the hedge, only a change in the way the dead grass leaned. "Here?" Rory pulled her scarf up to her chin. "There's nothing here." "There is never nothing." Isolde crossed the frost on bare feet and left it unbroken behind her. "There is only what you were taught to overlook." Nyx kept pace at Rory's shoulder — or at the shoulder of her shadow, a darkness one shade deeper than the morning. When weak light filtered through the clouds they thinned to a smear; when the cloud closed again they bloomed solid, six feet of living night with two violet embers set where eyes belonged. "The boundary stands ahead." The whisper reached Rory as if the wind itself had learned to talk. "Old roots. Older stones." She saw them then. Eleven oaks in a rough ring, so vast and so ancient their bark had gone the colour and grain of granite, trunks wider than doorways, branches black and bare against the sky. They did not grow so much as stand, upright as menhirs, and the frost stopped dead in a perfect circle around them, drawn back like a tide that had forgotten to return. "You're telling me the door is trees." "I am telling you the door grew." Isolde stopped between two of the trunks and faced them, silver hair to her waist, lavender eyes pale as skimmed milk. "Listen once, for I will not repeat it, and the grove listens when I speak and grows jealous of repetition. It keeps its own hours. Eat nothing it offers. Drink nothing it pours. Do not sleep beneath its boughs. And if something calls your name, let it call twice before you answer." "Why twice?" "Once is curiosity. Twice is hunger." Nyx rippled like heat over tarmac. "She cannot lie, little one. But she prunes." "I prune because full truths wilt in cold air." Isolde stepped between the oaks, and the light took her the way water takes a dropped coin. Rory went in after her, and the air thickened around her body like walking into deep water. Pressure clamped her ears. The smell of London — diesel, frost, wet leaves — fell away and something else moved into its place: rain on hot stone, honey, and underneath it a green growing smell entirely out of season. She pushed through the last yard of resistance and the world turned over. Amber light. Sourceless, warm, the light of a late summer afternoon that came from everywhere and nowhere, though the sky beyond the branches held no sun she could find. The grove opened wider inside than eleven trees could possibly contain — a meadow rolling gently downhill toward a stream, and across every inch of it wildflowers in their tens of thousands. Harebells, vetch, and a bloom she had no name for, petals the deep blue of lake water, all of it flowering in open defiance of the calendar. The ground gave under her boots, springy and warm, moss over something that breathed. "I've walked into a painting." She crouched and pressed her palm flat against the grass. Warm. Faintly humming, like a wire carrying current. "It's December. None of this cares." "The grove does not care." Isolde waited a few paces off, hands folded. "That is rather the point of it." Nyx came through the threshold last and stopped dead at the edge, half of them still steeped in the shadow between the oaks. Violet eyes swept the meadow once, twice. "I do not care for this ground," they said. "It does not know shadow. It knows only itself." "Then walk beside mine." Rory stood. "Consider it a loan." Something that might have been a laugh moved through their silhouette. They slid free of the oaks and followed, feet making no sound at all. They went down the slope together. The flowers turned as they passed — not toward the light, but toward the three of them, thousands of small faces swivelling on their stems like an audience tracking a stage. Overhead, a hawthorn hung with leaves of thin glass, and when a wind that never reached the grass stirred high up, the leaves rang against one another, a chime like a hundred spoons in a hundred empty cups. "Beautiful," Rory said. "And listening." Isolde walked on. "Mind your adjectives." Birdsong started somewhere to their left. Bright, complex, a thrush's run of notes repeated and varied. Rory turned toward it and found no bird, no branch, no movement at all — only flowers, and the glass-leaved hawthorn, and the amber light. "Pay it no mind." Isolde didn't slow. "It is only the grove practising being a place." Rory's watch had stopped. No — not stopped. The second hand was crawling backward, unhurried, deliberate, ticking toward twelve from the wrong side. She held her wrist up. "I've lost about forty minutes since the stones." "You have gained them somewhere else. Spend them wisely." The stream cut across their path, clear water over clear stones, ordinary enough until Rory looked down into it and found the reflection wrong. The water mirrored a night sky — dense, glittering, hung with constellations she had never seen from any rooftop in Cardiff — while above the stream the true sky stayed amber and sourceless. She leaned closer. A fish moved through the reflected stars, silver-bellied, and left ripples that spread upward through the reflected dark instead of outward. "The water remembers other skies," Isolde said. "Do not drink. Do not touch. Looking is free, and free is rare here." They followed the stream to where a flat stone bridged it, and on the far bank Rory glanced back the way they had come. The slope rose to a ring of oaks. The wrong oaks. Farther off, differently spaced, their trunks a different shape, and between them no gap, no threshold, only unbroken wall of flowering hedge grown chest-high where a path had been. She stopped walking. "The way in is gone." Nyx flowed up beside her, form pulling tall and thin. "The grove has eaten your door." "Doors eaten are not doors lost." Isolde kept walking, bare feet silent on the moss. "It will give it back if it likes you. Behave accordingly." Heat bloomed against Rory's sternum. She pulled her collar open and drew out the pendant on its silver chain — the crimson stone glowing from within, pulsing, each beat stronger than the last, quick as a second heart trying to keep pace with the first. "Isolde. It's woken up." "The grove sits atop old roads. Some run up. Some run down." "Down to where?" "Down is a direction, not an address." The dagger at her belt answered before Isolde finished. Cold had been the blade's nature since the day it was given to her, but this was different — cold biting through the sheath, through leather and wool, and when she glanced down, frost had feathered across the moonsilver hilt in fine white ferns. Nyx's embers fixed on the blade. "Your knife has smelt something it does not like." "Then it has good taste in enemies." Rory let the pendant drop against her chest, where it went on beating, and drew the dagger free. Frost smoked off it into the warm amber air. The leaf-shaped blade caught the light and gave none of it back. The wildflowers thinned ahead. The ground rose into a low hill crowned with a ring of white stones, and above the stones the air itself lost its grip — a seam of shimmer hanging between two leaning hawthorns, like heat-haze in reverse, cold and hard-edged, a distortion in the shape of the world. Isolde raised one pale hand toward it. "There. Where the air forgets to be air." The pendant slammed against Rory's ribs hard enough to bounce. She tightened her grip on the frozen hilt and started up the hill.
created_at"2026-09-24T14:12:06.317Z" 9/24/2026, 2:12:06 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.366
leniency0.732
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.25% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1332
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
88.74% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1332
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"whisper"
count1
1
word"perfect"
count1
2
word"complex"
count1
highlights
0"whisper"
1"perfect"
2"complex"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences70
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences70
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences96
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen52
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1345
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount1049
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.24
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
December1
Isolde11
Nyx5
Rory13
London1
Warm1
Birdsong1
Cardiff1
Heat1
Frost2
persons
0"Isolde"
1"Nyx"
2"Rory"
3"Birdsong"
4"Heat"
5"Frost"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Warm"
4"Cardiff"
globalScore0.88
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.743
wordCount1345
matches
0"not toward the light, but toward the three of them, thousands of small faces swivellin"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean28.62
std24.06
cv0.841
sampleLengths
045
112
226
355
421
568
67
780
82
96
1014
1126
1269
1388
1414
1529
1620
1730
1818
1910
2025
2175
223
238
2441
2516
2628
278
289
2981
3021
3164
328
3316
3426
3545
364
3712
383
397
4053
4115
4246
4353
447
458
4623
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences70
matches
0"was given"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs159
matches
0"was crawling"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences96
ratio0.125
matches
0"Isolde led them off the path where no trail existed — no cairn, no gap in the hedge, only a change in the way the dead grass leaned."
1"Nyx kept pace at Rory's shoulder — or at the shoulder of her shadow, a darkness one shade deeper than the morning."
2"When weak light filtered through the clouds they thinned to a smear; when the cloud closed again they bloomed solid, six feet of living night with two violet embers set where eyes belonged."
3"The smell of London — diesel, frost, wet leaves — fell away and something else moved into its place: rain on hot stone, honey, and underneath it a green growing smell entirely out of season."
4"The grove opened wider inside than eleven trees could possibly contain — a meadow rolling gently downhill toward a stream, and across every inch of it wildflowers in their tens of thousands."
5"The flowers turned as they passed — not toward the light, but toward the three of them, thousands of small faces swivelling on their stems like an audience tracking a stage."
6"Rory turned toward it and found no bird, no branch, no movement at all — only flowers, and the glass-leaved hawthorn, and the amber light."
7"No — not stopped."
8"The water mirrored a night sky — dense, glittering, hung with constellations she had never seen from any rooftop in Cardiff — while above the stream the true sky stayed amber and sourceless."
9"She pulled her collar open and drew out the pendant on its silver chain — the crimson stone glowing from within, pulsing, each beat stronger than the last, quick as a second heart trying to keep pace with the first."
10"Cold had been the blade's nature since the day it was given to her, but this was different — cold biting through the sheath, through leather and wool, and when she glanced down, frost had feathered across the moonsilver hilt in fine white ferns."
11"The ground rose into a low hill crowned with a ring of white stones, and above the stones the air itself lost its grip — a seam of shimmer hanging between two leaning hawthorns, like heat-haze in reverse, cold and hard-edged, a distortion in the shape of the world."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1042
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.03262955854126679
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.007677543186180422
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences96
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences96
mean14.01
std11.55
cv0.824
sampleLengths
017
128
29
33
417
59
622
733
817
94
104
1132
1232
137
1428
1552
162
176
186
198
2026
2117
224
2335
2413
252
2627
2732
2827
2914
3015
311
327
336
3413
357
3623
377
389
399
406
414
4211
4314
446
4531
4638
473
485
493
69.79% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.46875
totalSentences96
uniqueOpeners45
52.08% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"Faintly humming, like a wire"
ratio0.016
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences64
matches
0"She saw them then."
1"They did not grow so"
2"She pushed through the last"
3"She crouched and pressed her"
4"They slid free of the"
5"They went down the slope"
6"She held her wrist up."
7"She leaned closer."
8"They followed the stream to"
9"She stopped walking."
10"She pulled her collar open"
11"She tightened her grip on"
ratio0.188
38.13% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences64
matches
0"Frost had stiffened the bracken"
1"Isolde led them off the"
2"Rory pulled her scarf up"
3"Isolde crossed the frost on"
4"Nyx kept pace at Rory's"
5"The whisper reached Rory as"
6"She saw them then."
7"They did not grow so"
8"Isolde stopped between two of"
9"Nyx rippled like heat over"
10"Isolde stepped between the oaks,"
11"Rory went in after her,"
12"Pressure clamped her ears."
13"The smell of London —"
14"She pushed through the last"
15"The grove opened wider inside"
16"Harebells, vetch, and a bloom"
17"The ground gave under her"
18"She crouched and pressed her"
19"Isolde waited a few paces"
ratio0.844
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Sourceless, warm, the light of a late summer afternoon that came from everywhere and nowhere, though the sky beyond the branches held no sun she could find."
1"The ground gave under her boots, springy and warm, moss over something that breathed."
2"A fish moved through the reflected stars, silver-bellied, and left ripples that spread upward through the reflected dark instead of outward."
58.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Isolde stepped, and the light took her the way water takes a dropped coin"
1"Isolde waited, hands folded"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.073
leniency0.146
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.4858%