| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 14 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1154 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 61.01% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1154 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "throbbed" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 99 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 55 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1164 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 1022 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 0.29 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Gate" | | discoveredNames | | Gate | 2 | | Robin | 1 | | Hood | 1 | | Rory | 3 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Thames | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | November | 1 | | Isolde | 3 | | Turn | 3 | | Silas | 1 | | One | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Gate" | | 1 | "Robin" | | 2 | "Hood" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Turn" | | 6 | "Silas" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Thames" | | 3 | "Hel" | | 4 | "November" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like losing an argument she couldn" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.859 | | wordCount | 1164 | | matches | | 0 | "not colder, exactly, but thinner, as though she'd walked from a heated room into one" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 30.63 | | std | 23.02 | | cv | 0.751 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 37 | | 1 | 57 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 54 | | 4 | 72 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 59 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 61 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 86 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 72 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 31 | | 21 | 65 | | 22 | 27 | | 23 | 30 | | 24 | 32 | | 25 | 54 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 47 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 40 | | 32 | 52 | | 33 | 25 | | 34 | 33 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 40 | | 37 | 21 |
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| 93.70% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "been used" | | 2 | "being watched" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 163 | | matches | | 0 | "was counting" | | 1 | "was widening" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 99 | | ratio | 0.101 | | matches | | 0 | "The Gate at Robin Hood Gate closed behind her at half past eleven, and Rory counted her steps into Richmond Park the way she counted money in her palm — one for each reason to turn back." | | 1 | "One moment the path curved through oaks; the next, six monoliths rose in a rough ring ahead of her, taller than doorways, their surfaces furred with moss that glowed faintly green where her torchbeam touched it." | | 2 | "Beyond them, wildflowers — real ones, cosmos and cornflower and things she had no names for — bloomed in a clearing that should have been brown and dormant in November." | | 3 | "The air changed temperature in the space of a single stride — not colder, exactly, but thinner, as though she'd walked from a heated room into one where the heat had been used up years ago." | | 4 | "The clearing was deeper than it had been in daylight — she remembered that much." | | 5 | "It always ached in the cold, but this was a different ache — deeper, rhythmic, in time with the pendant." | | 6 | "The sound again — closer, or from a different direction, she couldn't tell which." | | 7 | "She watched it spread — flower after flower shutting its face against the night, a slow wave of refusal moving outward from her feet." | | 8 | "Not a pulse — a burn, crimson light leaking through the neck of her jacket, throwing her shadow long and doubled across the flowers." | | 9 | "Turn, turn, turn — and underneath it, low and layered, something breathing through too many openings." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1018 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 29 | | adverbRatio | 0.02848722986247544 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004911591355599214 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 99 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 99 | | mean | 11.76 | | std | 10.87 | | cv | 0.924 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 37 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 31 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 36 | | 14 | 30 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 24 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 36 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 31 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 55 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 54.98% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.3917525773195876 | | totalSentences | 97 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere ahead, wind moved through" | | 1 | "Once, twice, then settled into" | | 2 | "Directly behind her now." |
| | ratio | 0.038 | |
| 90.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "It had been warm since" | | 1 | "she said to the dark" | | 2 | "Her breath hung in front" | | 3 | "Her voice came out flatter" | | 4 | "She stepped between the stones." | | 5 | "They turned the way faces" | | 6 | "It's a thing flowers do." | | 7 | "She kept walking, because the" | | 8 | "Her phone read 11:47." | | 9 | "It had read 11:47 when" | | 10 | "She checked it three more" | | 11 | "She stopped in the centre" | | 12 | "She stood with her fists" | | 13 | "She turned in a slow" | | 14 | "It always ached in the" | | 15 | "She made her voice hard" | | 16 | "It bent it." | | 17 | "She raised the torch and" | | 18 | "Her breath came out in" | | 19 | "she said, to herself, to" |
| | ratio | 0.325 | |
| 78.75% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 61 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "The Gate at Robin Hood" | | 1 | "The pendant hung against her" | | 2 | "It had been warm since" | | 3 | "Dymas had told her that" | | 4 | "she said to the dark" | | 5 | "Her breath hung in front" | | 6 | "The path underfoot was chalk-pale," | | 7 | "Oak trees leaned over it" | | 8 | "The standing stones appeared without" | | 9 | "The pendant throbbed." | | 10 | "Her voice came out flatter" | | 11 | "The grove said nothing, which" | | 12 | "Daytime visits came wrapped in" | | 13 | "Tonight the hum was gone." | | 14 | "Tonight the silence had texture," | | 15 | "She stepped between the stones." | | 16 | "The air changed temperature in" | | 17 | "The wildflowers turned with her." | | 18 | "They turned the way faces" | | 19 | "Flowers track the sun." |
| | ratio | 0.763 | |
| 62.50% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "Now the clearing stretched on," |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 23.81% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "One moment the path curved through oaks; the next, six monoliths rose in a rough ring ahead of her, taller than doorways, their surfaces furred with moss that g…" | | 1 | "The air changed temperature in the space of a single stride — not colder, exactly, but thinner, as though she'd walked from a heated room into one where the hea…" | | 2 | "The feeling had already arrived and settled on her shoulders like a coat: the absolute, animal certainty of being watched by something that had been watching fo…" | | 3 | "Still in the specific way of things that are only pretending to be still." | | 4 | "Not a pulse — a burn, crimson light leaking through the neck of her jacket, throwing her shadow long and doubled across the flowers." | | 5 | "In the silence that followed, from everywhere and nowhere, from inside the stones and under the flowers and in the hollow of her own skull, a voice answered." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 14 | | tagDensity | 0.214 | | leniency | 0.429 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |