Run: 2026-09-24-01M39W86QWJ59GB47ED0TQVHE4

Run Details

Duration:
33.1s
Cost:
$0.002580
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Gate at Robin Hood Gate closed behind her at half past eleven, and Rory counted her steps into Richmond Park the way she counted money in her palm — one for each reason to turn back. The pendant hung against her sternum, warm as a coin fresh from a dryer. It had been warm since she crossed the Thames. Warm meant close. Dymas had told her that much before he stopped answering his phone: the Heartstone pulses near a Hel portal, and portals don't open in daylight, and daylight was four hours gone. "Right," she said to the dark. Her breath hung in front of her and dissolved. "Right, okay." The path underfoot was chalk-pale, easy to follow even without the torch on her phone. Oak trees leaned over it from both sides, so old their bark had gone smooth and silver, like the flanks of sleeping animals. She walked. Somewhere ahead, wind moved through branches that she couldn't feel on her own skin. The standing stones appeared without ceremony. One moment the path curved through oaks; the next, six monoliths rose in a rough ring ahead of her, taller than doorways, their surfaces furred with moss that glowed faintly green where her torchbeam touched it. Beyond them, wildflowers — real ones, cosmos and cornflower and things she had no names for — bloomed in a clearing that should have been brown and dormant in November. The pendant throbbed. Once, twice, then settled into a rhythm that matched nothing in her chest. "Isolde?" Her voice came out flatter than she intended. "It's Rory. Carter. We need to talk about Dymas." The grove said nothing, which was the first wrong thing, because the grove had never been silent before. Daytime visits came wrapped in birdsong, in the drone of insects, in a hum she'd assumed was the wind finding gaps in the stones. Tonight the hum was gone. Tonight the silence had texture, like wet wool pressed against both ears. She stepped between the stones. The air changed temperature in the space of a single stride — not colder, exactly, but thinner, as though she'd walked from a heated room into one where the heat had been used up years ago. The wildflowers turned with her. Not in the wind. There was no wind. They turned the way faces turn to follow someone crossing a room. Don't be ridiculous. Flowers track the sun. It's a thing flowers do. The sun was not out. She kept walking, because the pendant kept pulsing, and because turning around felt like losing an argument she couldn't afford to lose. The clearing was deeper than it had been in daylight — she remembered that much. In daylight, Isolde's oak had stood at the far edge, a single massive trunk with a door-shaped hollow. Now the clearing stretched on, and the trees at its border had grown taller, or the ground had grown deeper, or the hour inside the stones had stretched like warm toffee. Her phone read 11:47. It had read 11:47 when she passed the second stone. She checked it three more times. 11:47. 11:47. The battery had not dropped. "Okay." She stopped in the centre of the clearing and spoke to the dark over the flowers. "Time works differently here. Fine. Noted. Isolde, if this is you being funny, it's not funny. Dymas is missing. His flat looked like something had eaten its way out of it, and the Heartstone led me here, so either you know where he is or you know what took him, and either way I need—" A sound stopped her. Behind the far trees. A wet, rhythmic sound, soft as a spoon in batter. Turn, turn, turn. "Hello?" The sound stopped. She stood with her fists at her sides and counted to thirty. The silence that answered was worse than the sound, because the silence had weight now, and direction, and patience. She turned in a slow circle with the torch up. The beam crossed oak trunks, fern banks, the pale teeth of the standing stones far behind her. Nothing moved. Nothing had to move. The feeling had already arrived and settled on her shoulders like a coat: the absolute, animal certainty of being watched by something that had been watching for longer than she'd been walking. The crescent scar on her wrist ached. It always ached in the cold, but this was a different ache — deeper, rhythmic, in time with the pendant. "Isolde." She made her voice hard. "I know you can hear me. The grove hears everything, you told me that yourself. So hear this: I'm not leaving without an answer." Turn, turn, turn. The sound again — closer, or from a different direction, she couldn't tell which. The dark out here didn't carry sound the way normal dark did. It bent it. She raised the torch and swept it left, and in the half-second before the beam caught the treeline, she saw it at the edge of her vision: a shape standing between two oaks where no shape had been. Tall. Wrong-shouldered. Still in the specific way of things that are only pretending to be still. The beam reached the spot. Two oaks. Empty ground. Ferns. Her breath came out in a white flag. "There's nothing there," she said, to herself, to the grove, to whatever was counting her words. "There's nothing—" The wildflowers nearest her had closed. Every petal in a three-metre ring had folded inward, tight as fists, and the ring was widening. She watched it spread — flower after flower shutting its face against the night, a slow wave of refusal moving outward from her feet. They're closing because it's cold. Her pendant flared. Not a pulse — a burn, crimson light leaking through the neck of her jacket, throwing her shadow long and doubled across the flowers. Two shadows. One hers. One standing behind her left shoulder, where nothing stood. She didn't turn around. Every nerve she owned screamed at her not to turn around, and for once she listened to them, because Isolde had told her once, laughing, wine-drunk, on the flat roof above Silas's bar: Never turn to look at it, Rory. The looking is how it gets your address. The wet sound started again. Directly behind her now. Turn, turn, turn — and underneath it, low and layered, something breathing through too many openings. "Isolde," Rory said, and her voice held, barely, a wire pulled to snapping. "I'm in your grove. Under your stones. Get out here and tell me what the hell is standing behind me." The breathing stopped. In the silence that followed, from everywhere and nowhere, from inside the stones and under the flowers and in the hollow of her own skull, a voice answered. It was not Isolde's voice. It was not one voice at all. "She's been asleep a long time, Laila. You woke the grove coming in. Now it knows your name is a lie."
created_at"2026-09-24T14:13:59.691Z" 9/24/2026, 2:13:59 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1154
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
61.01% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1154
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"throbbed"
count1
1
word"silence"
count4
2
word"rhythmic"
count2
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"throbbed"
1"silence"
2"rhythmic"
3"weight"
4"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences91
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1164
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount1022
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.29
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Gate"
discoveredNames
Gate2
Robin1
Hood1
Rory3
Richmond1
Park1
Thames1
Heartstone1
Hel1
November1
Isolde3
Turn3
Silas1
One3
persons
0"Gate"
1"Robin"
2"Hood"
3"Rory"
4"Isolde"
5"Turn"
6"Silas"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Thames"
3"Hel"
4"November"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like losing an argument she couldn"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.859
wordCount1164
matches
0"not colder, exactly, but thinner, as though she'd walked from a heated room into one"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences99
matches
0"remembered that much"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean30.63
std23.02
cv0.751
sampleLengths
037
157
217
354
472
516
618
759
85
961
1012
115
1286
1314
1413
1572
164
1717
181
193
2031
2165
2227
2330
2432
2554
2610
278
2818
2947
305
3140
3252
3325
3433
353
3640
3721
93.70% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences91
matches
0"was gone"
1"been used"
2"being watched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs163
matches
0"was counting"
1"was widening"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences99
ratio0.101
matches
0"The Gate at Robin Hood Gate closed behind her at half past eleven, and Rory counted her steps into Richmond Park the way she counted money in her palm — one for each reason to turn back."
1"One moment the path curved through oaks; the next, six monoliths rose in a rough ring ahead of her, taller than doorways, their surfaces furred with moss that glowed faintly green where her torchbeam touched it."
2"Beyond them, wildflowers — real ones, cosmos and cornflower and things she had no names for — bloomed in a clearing that should have been brown and dormant in November."
3"The air changed temperature in the space of a single stride — not colder, exactly, but thinner, as though she'd walked from a heated room into one where the heat had been used up years ago."
4"The clearing was deeper than it had been in daylight — she remembered that much."
5"It always ached in the cold, but this was a different ache — deeper, rhythmic, in time with the pendant."
6"The sound again — closer, or from a different direction, she couldn't tell which."
7"She watched it spread — flower after flower shutting its face against the night, a slow wave of refusal moving outward from her feet."
8"Not a pulse — a burn, crimson light leaking through the neck of her jacket, throwing her shadow long and doubled across the flowers."
9"Turn, turn, turn — and underneath it, low and layered, something breathing through too many openings."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1018
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.02848722986247544
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.004911591355599214
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean11.76
std10.87
cv0.924
sampleLengths
037
114
29
33
431
56
69
72
815
923
102
1114
126
1336
1430
153
1613
179
189
1918
2024
215
2212
235
2436
255
264
274
2812
293
304
315
325
3322
3415
3518
3631
374
3810
396
401
411
425
4317
4455
454
464
4710
483
491
54.98% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.3917525773195876
totalSentences97
uniqueOpeners38
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences80
matches
0"Somewhere ahead, wind moved through"
1"Once, twice, then settled into"
2"Directly behind her now."
ratio0.038
90.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences80
matches
0"It had been warm since"
1"she said to the dark"
2"Her breath hung in front"
3"Her voice came out flatter"
4"She stepped between the stones."
5"They turned the way faces"
6"It's a thing flowers do."
7"She kept walking, because the"
8"Her phone read 11:47."
9"It had read 11:47 when"
10"She checked it three more"
11"She stopped in the centre"
12"She stood with her fists"
13"She turned in a slow"
14"It always ached in the"
15"She made her voice hard"
16"It bent it."
17"She raised the torch and"
18"Her breath came out in"
19"she said, to herself, to"
ratio0.325
78.75% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences80
matches
0"The Gate at Robin Hood"
1"The pendant hung against her"
2"It had been warm since"
3"Dymas had told her that"
4"she said to the dark"
5"Her breath hung in front"
6"The path underfoot was chalk-pale,"
7"Oak trees leaned over it"
8"The standing stones appeared without"
9"The pendant throbbed."
10"Her voice came out flatter"
11"The grove said nothing, which"
12"Daytime visits came wrapped in"
13"Tonight the hum was gone."
14"Tonight the silence had texture,"
15"She stepped between the stones."
16"The air changed temperature in"
17"The wildflowers turned with her."
18"They turned the way faces"
19"Flowers track the sun."
ratio0.763
62.50% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"Now the clearing stretched on,"
ratio0.013
23.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"One moment the path curved through oaks; the next, six monoliths rose in a rough ring ahead of her, taller than doorways, their surfaces furred with moss that g…"
1"The air changed temperature in the space of a single stride — not colder, exactly, but thinner, as though she'd walked from a heated room into one where the hea…"
2"The feeling had already arrived and settled on her shoulders like a coat: the absolute, animal certainty of being watched by something that had been watching fo…"
3"Still in the specific way of things that are only pretending to be still."
4"Not a pulse — a burn, crimson light leaking through the neck of her jacket, throwing her shadow long and doubled across the flowers."
5"In the silence that followed, from everywhere and nowhere, from inside the stones and under the flowers and in the hollow of her own skull, a voice answered."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.214
leniency0.429
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.8248%