Run: 2026-09-24-01M39WADW5FQ435AAVD1SDT670

Run Details

Duration:
1m 34s
Cost:
$0.007508
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The order came through at 23:41, and Yu-Fei rang before Rory had finished zipping the insulated bag. "You're taking it?" The kettle hissed behind Yu-Fei's voice. "Triple fare. Cash on delivery." "Who orders congee at midnight?" "Same gentleman as before. Pen Ponds, Richmond Park, follow the oaks. He leaves coins in the till. Old ones. Silver. The bank takes them fine." A click as the kettle shut off. "Plain congee again. I send chilli oil every time. He never touches it." "Maybe he's boring." "Maybe." Yu-Fei's voice dropped to something meant for a smaller room. "Leave the moped at the gate, love. Don't ride it past the oaks." "Why not?" "Old habit." Rory hung up on the silence that followed and told herself the fare would cover two months of rent to Silas. The pendant under her collar had been warm since Kingston Bridge. Warm meant one thing, and she'd promised herself in daylight that she'd stop following it. Daylight made a lot of promises. The gates at Robin Hood were chained. She climbed, hid the moped behind the noticeboard, and walked in with the bag in one hand and her torch in the other. Richmond sat under the Heathrow flight path; planes came over every ninety seconds, dragging their noise across the sky. She counted her steps to the treeline and realised she hadn't heard a single one. No engines. No planes. No city hum at all, the way a room goes quiet when someone in the next room stops moving. The oaks stood out of the dark like pillars in a burnt house. Twelve of them, she noted, marking the gap she'd need on the way back. Bark grown smooth and grey as driftwood. Grass inside the circle green as April, though November had come through here with frost — frost on everything except a ring of ground that steamed faintly, as if the soil had a pulse. Poppies and snowdrops shared the same clump. She looked at that for a while and decided not to think about it. Signal showed four bars. She dialled the number on the order. One ring. "You've brought it." The voice was pleasant, unhurried, and placed its pauses in the wrong spots. "Set it down at the stones. Then go back the way you came." "Name for the receipt?" "Go back the way you came." "The gate's locked, I'll have to—" "Don't count the stones." The line stayed open. Breathing, slow and even, the way you'd breathe in your sleep. She hung up. The dark took the phone's glow and gave nothing back. Somewhere behind her, a twig snapped. Then another, in step with her heartbeat, which was faster than any twig deserved. "Deer," she said, because Richmond had deer, and deer were a thing the world still made. Deer didn't walk in rhythm with her. She took three steps. Three steps answered, a half-beat late, like a sound travelling back up a long corridor. She stopped. The echo took one more step and quit. She turned the torch on the treeline. The beam bent. Not much — a degree, two — the way light leans going through water, curving around one oak as if the trunk were thicker than it looked, or deeper. To her left, between two stones, stood a tall paleness. Not white. The colour the sky remembers after sunset. Her eyes slid to it and slid off, the way a nail slides off glass, and when she forced her head around to look full at the gap there was nothing there but trunks and the honest dark between them. She walked. The space between her and that gap shortened without anything in it moving. "Rora?" Her mother's Welsh, warm, from the kitchen years and years gone. "Dinner's on, cariad." Rory's grip tightened on the bag handle. Isolde had given her three rules once, laughing, as if they were a joke about tourists: never answer, never thank, never give your name. She pressed her lips shut and kept walking. Eva's laugh came next, from behind a stone to her right, at some joke from a night in a Cardiff pub that didn't exist anymore. Then — closer, from the direction she was heading, which was wrong in every way a direction could be wrong — Evan. "You left the door open, Rory." Her breath went shallow. Her hands went cold on the handles, and the bag's steam rose in a thin ribbon and drifted sideways, against the wind there wasn't, curling toward the oaks like something pouring into a mouth. She did not answer. She did not run. Running, she suspected, was a kind of answer. The torch dimmed to a brown ember. She checked her phone: 03:12. She'd checked it at the gate — 23:52. Twenty minutes of walking had eaten four hours, and the battery had gone from 84 to 9 percent, and the moon had crossed to the wrong quarter of the sky, and it was full when it should have been a nail-paring, and she laughed once at all of it, one short bark, and the laugh came back to her from four directions. She counted the stones as she turned for the gate. It steadied her, numbers, arithmetic, the small dry part of her brain that wrote legal briefs. Eleven. She'd entered through a gap between two of them. There should have been twelve. She counted again, slower, touching each trunk with her eyes. Thirteen. The new one stood between her and the way out. It hadn't grown; things that grow don't arrive. It simply occupied the path now, the way a moment occupies a second, and its bark carried a long vertical seam the colour of the inside of an eyelid, and the seam was wet. The pendant burned. Not warm now — hot, a coal on its chain against her sternum, dragging. It pulled toward the gap between two stones on the far side of the circle, where the dark sat deeper than the night had any right to stock, and as she watched, the dark bulged outward, gently, the way a curtain does when someone on the other side leans a palm against it. "Rory." Behind her. Close. Close enough that the word carried warmth against her ear. "You're late." She knew the voice. She heard it every morning of her life, saying her own name into the bathroom mirror. She turned around.
created_at"2026-09-24T14:15:12.533Z" 9/24/2026, 2:15:12 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.227
leniency0.455
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.31% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1065
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
81.22% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1065
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"echo"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"pulse"
2"echo"
3"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences80
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences96
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen63
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1072
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount950
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.32
worstName"Yu-Fei"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Yu-Fei"
discoveredNames
Yu-Fei3
Rory3
Silas1
Kingston1
Bridge1
Robin1
Hood1
Heathrow1
April1
November1
Richmond2
Deer1
Welsh1
Cardiff1
Evan1
persons
0"Yu-Fei"
1"Rory"
2"Silas"
3"Robin"
4"Hood"
5"November"
6"Deer"
7"Welsh"
8"Evan"
places
0"Kingston"
1"Bridge"
2"Richmond"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1072
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean23.82
std22.92
cv0.962
sampleLengths
017
114
25
345
43
524
62
72
853
987
1068
1121
1211
132
1429
154
166
176
184
1928
2020
2116
2236
2339
2459
2515
2615
2739
2847
296
3038
3116
3282
3326
341
3514
3610
371
3852
3970
401
4113
422
4320
443
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"were chained"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs151
matches
0"was heading"
1"wasn't, curling"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences96
ratio0.073
matches
0"Richmond sat under the Heathrow flight path; planes came over every ninety seconds, dragging their noise across the sky."
1"Grass inside the circle green as April, though November had come through here with frost — frost on everything except a ring of ground that steamed faintly, as if the soil had a pulse."
2"Not much — a degree, two — the way light leans going through water, curving around one oak as if the trunk were thicker than it looked, or deeper."
3"Then — closer, from the direction she was heading, which was wrong in every way a direction could be wrong — Evan."
4"She'd checked it at the gate — 23:52."
5"It hadn't grown; things that grow don't arrive."
6"Not warm now — hot, a coal on its chain against her sternum, dragging."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount948
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.0189873417721519
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0031645569620253164
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences96
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences96
mean11.17
std10.78
cv0.966
sampleLengths
017
19
25
35
432
513
63
711
813
92
102
1121
1211
1315
146
157
1623
1719
1815
192
202
2119
2213
2314
247
2534
267
2714
284
297
302
3116
3213
334
346
356
364
374
3811
393
4010
416
4214
4316
447
454
4615
472
488
497
68.40% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.4791666666666667
totalSentences96
uniqueOpeners46
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences70
matches
0"Somewhere behind her, a twig"
1"Then another, in step with"
2"Then — closer, from the"
ratio0.043
65.71% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences70
matches
0"She climbed, hid the moped"
1"She counted her steps to"
2"She looked at that for"
3"She dialled the number on"
4"She hung up."
5"she said, because Richmond had"
6"She took three steps."
7"She turned the torch on"
8"Her eyes slid to it"
9"Her mother's Welsh, warm, from"
10"She pressed her lips shut"
11"Her breath went shallow."
12"Her hands went cold on"
13"She did not answer."
14"She did not run."
15"She checked her phone: 03:12."
16"She'd checked it at the"
17"She counted the stones as"
18"It steadied her, numbers, arithmetic,"
19"She'd entered through a gap"
ratio0.386
67.14% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences70
matches
0"The order came through at"
1"The kettle hissed behind Yu-Fei's"
2"A click as the kettle"
3"Yu-Fei's voice dropped to something"
4"Rory hung up on the"
5"The pendant under her collar"
6"Daylight made a lot of"
7"The gates at Robin Hood"
8"She climbed, hid the moped"
9"Richmond sat under the Heathrow"
10"She counted her steps to"
11"The oaks stood out of"
12"Grass inside the circle green"
13"Poppies and snowdrops shared the"
14"She looked at that for"
15"Signal showed four bars."
16"She dialled the number on"
17"The voice was pleasant, unhurried,"
18"The line stayed open."
19"She hung up."
ratio0.786
71.43% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences70
matches
0"To her left, between two"
ratio0.014
79.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Grass inside the circle green as April, though November had come through here with frost — frost on everything except a ring of ground that steamed faintly, as …"
1"Not much — a degree, two — the way light leans going through water, curving around one oak as if the trunk were thicker than it looked, or deeper."
2"It steadied her, numbers, arithmetic, the small dry part of her brain that wrote legal briefs."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"The kettle hissed (hiss)"
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.091
leniency0.182
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.091
90.9682%