| 57.14% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rory said automatically [automatically]" | | 1 | "they said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.143 | |
| 76.09% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1464 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "sharply" | | 3 | "deliberately" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 69.26% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1464 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 95 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 108 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 44 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1482 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 18 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 89.76% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 41 | | wordCount | 1245 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.2 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Isolde | 10 | | Nyx | 8 | | December | 1 | | June | 1 | | Rory | 15 | | Heartstone | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Heartstone" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "December" |
| | globalScore | 0.898 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 63.79% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite" | | 1 | "sounded like water trying to hum a tune it" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1482 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 39 | | std | 32.32 | | cv | 0.829 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 86 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 45 | | 6 | 94 | | 7 | 60 | | 8 | 78 | | 9 | 27 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 55 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 120 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 65 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 58 | | 22 | 74 | | 23 | 48 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 36 | | 26 | 72 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 80 | | 30 | 38 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 66 | | 34 | 61 | | 35 | 86 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 62 |
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| 94.18% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "been steeped" | | 1 | "been defaced" | | 2 | "were gone" |
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| 61.11% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 192 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't blowing " | | 1 | "was going" | | 2 | "was like walking" | | 3 | "were remembering" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 18 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 16 | | totalSentences | 108 | | ratio | 0.148 | | matches | | 0 | "The seer walked ahead through the whitened grass, silver hair swinging at her waist, and where she stepped the frost lay unbroken — a trail of untouched rime curving behind nothing." | | 1 | "\"Your landlord,\" Nyx murmured, from somewhere just behind her left shoulder, \"is not three hundred years old.\" Their voice always arrived like a whisper carried on wind that wasn't blowing — she felt it at the back of her neck more than in her ears." | | 2 | "Ahead, in the last grey light, stood a ring of oaks — except they weren't oaks anymore, not quite." | | 3 | "They drifted past her — six feet of living darkness with two faint violet embers for eyes — and slid a hand into the trunk." | | 4 | "She stood at the gap between two of the stone oaks, and the light behind her had gone strange — a shimmer, like heat-haze rising off summer tarmac, except the air was cold enough to bite." | | 5 | "It was like walking through the surface of deep water — a pressure against her whole body, ears popping, the park's distant traffic noise cut off as cleanly as a door closing." | | 6 | "Light came from everywhere and nowhere — a low gold suffusion, as if the world after sunset had been steeped in honey." | | 7 | "Wildflowers ran to the treeline in every direction — she recognised some, bluebells and cowslips, and didn't recognise others at all, blooms like glass bells, like paper lanterns, like small open mouths." | | 8 | "The golden light pooled on its surface and did not reflect — or rather, it reflected imperfectly, the way a dream reflects a room." | | 9 | "She pulled it out into the light — the deep crimson gem glowing with its faint inner pulse, faster now, brighter, beating like a small trapped heart." | | 10 | "Isolde stood at the pool's edge, and for once she answered plainly — which frightened Rory more than any riddle." | | 11 | "Far down beneath the reflected boughs — deeper than the pool had any right to be — an amber glow seeped up through the dark, like sunset trapped under glass." | | 12 | "Her reflection leaned with her — a half-second late." | | 13 | "Where they touched, carvings surfaced in the stone-grey bark — spirals, and beneath them a motif repeated around the whole ring of the grove: a tree whose roots became doors, and beyond the doors, small carved figures walking out in single file." | | 14 | "They walked back the way they'd come, the glass-bell flowers chiming faintly at their passing, and the pressure met Rory again at the gap in the stone oaks — like surfacing." | | 15 | "But against her ribs, inside her coat, the moonsilver blade lay cold as a piece of winter that would never melt — and the Heartstone, quiet again, still pulsed once, softly, like something on the far side of a wall, knocking." |
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| 99.66% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1238 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 50 | | adverbRatio | 0.04038772213247173 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012924071082390954 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 108 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 108 | | mean | 13.72 | | std | 11.45 | | cv | 0.835 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 45 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 25 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 36 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 32 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 34 | | 44 | 32 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 82.10% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.5092592592592593 | | totalSentences | 108 | | uniqueOpeners | 55 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere ahead, water moved." | | 1 | "Deliberately, long ago." | | 2 | "Just dead trees now, fossil" |
| | ratio | 0.041 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "They were the colour and" | | 1 | "They drifted past her —" | | 2 | "Their arm vanished to the" | | 3 | "She stood at the gap" | | 4 | "Her heart was going harder" | | 5 | "She stepped through." | | 6 | "It was like walking through" | | 7 | "She looked up and found" | | 8 | "They nodded in a breeze" | | 9 | "Her breath didn't fog here." | | 10 | "It didn't sound like water," | | 11 | "It sounded like water trying" | | 12 | "they said softly" | | 13 | "She pulled it out into" | | 14 | "Her voice came out flat." | | 15 | "She'd meant it as a" | | 16 | "She leaned back sharply." | | 17 | "Her reflection leaned with her" | | 18 | "They walked back the way" |
| | ratio | 0.257 | |
| 61.35% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 59 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "The frost had taken Richmond" | | 1 | "Rory noticed within the first" | | 2 | "The seer walked ahead through" | | 3 | "Rory's own boots crushed the" | | 4 | "Nyx made no sound at" | | 5 | "Shadows didn't need to disturb" | | 6 | "Isolde glanced back, lavender eyes" | | 7 | "Nyx murmured, from somewhere just" | | 8 | "The trees thinned." | | 9 | "They were the colour and" | | 10 | "Rory put her palm against" | | 11 | "Grain ran through it in" | | 12 | "Wood that had decided, at" | | 13 | "They drifted past her —" | | 14 | "Their arm vanished to the" | | 15 | "She stood at the gap" | | 16 | "The distortion hung in the" | | 17 | "Rory said automatically" | | 18 | "Her heart was going harder" | | 19 | "She stepped through." |
| | ratio | 0.797 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 29.22% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Cold, yes, but a deep cold, like touching something that had been cold since before the idea of warmth." | | 1 | "Light came from everywhere and nowhere — a low gold suffusion, as if the world after sunset had been steeped in honey." | | 2 | "She looked up and found a canopy of living oaks, vast and silver-barked, and between their branches a sky the colour of late afternoon that stayed late afternoo…" | | 3 | "Rory filed that away under things to worry about later and followed the seer down a path that hadn't been visible until Isolde's unfootprinted feet touched it." | | 4 | "Nyx kept pace beside her, and she noticed they'd gone quiet in a way that wasn't their usual quiet." | | 5 | "When she turned it, the light slid along the moonsilver and the blade answered with a luminescence of its own, faint and patient, as if it were remembering a mo…" | | 6 | "But against her ribs, inside her coat, the moonsilver blade lay cold as a piece of winter that would never melt — and the Heartstone, quiet again, still pulsed …" |
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| 89.29% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde said, without turning" |
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| 78.57% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 14 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Rory repeated (repeat)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.143 | |