Run: 2026-09-24-01M39WGRYMGYVET8YJDC3FKS5C

Run Details

Duration:
3m 53s
Cost:
$0.012883
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The hoarding around Brackley Street station had been welded shut since 1992, and someone had cut a door in it overnight. Quinn ducked through, torch in hand, and took a maintenance stair that smelled of rust and wet chalk. A constable at the bottom lifted the tape for her. "Old south platform, ma'am. DS Ferro's got the lights rigged." "How far down are we?" "Sixty feet, give or take. No signal down here, so shout if you need anything." Her torch swept the platform edge, the dead escalators, adverts for cigarettes that had been illegal to advertise for two decades. Arc lamps hummed at the far end, and beneath them DS Ferro stood over a shape on the floor, chewing gum like it owed him money. "You're going to love this one," he called. "Or hate it. Fifty-fifty." She crossed the silted concrete. The man on his back had been fifty once. Now his skin clung to the architecture of his skull, and his hands lay curled around the air like he'd died reaching for something. "Fence, by the look of the coat. Camden junkies use the dead platforms for deals — it's practically a branch of Tesco down here." Ferro nudged the air two inches from the man's chest. "Single puncture, over the heart. Rigor's broken, lividity's fixed. He's been dead since around midnight." "Where's his blood?" "That's the kicker. There isn't any. Wound's seared shut, like someone went at him with a soldering iron. Hot spike, drano, whatever they're cooking with this month." Quinn crouched. The puncture was the width of a pencil and closed to a ridge of shiny scar-tissue that had no business on a man eight hours dead. She lifted the man's right hand. His fingers came with it, locked around a small brass compass, its casing green with verdigris, its face etched with fine sigils. The needle sat dead steady, pointing at the bricked-up arch at the end of the platform. "Camden Lock tat," Ferro offered. "Ten quid, comes with a free pouch." She set the compass on the man's chest and walked five paces back the way she'd come. The needle spun in lazy circles. She walked forward again, and it swung and settled, pointing at the arch. "His pockets?" "Token thing. Bone, drilled through. And a notebook." Ferro handed over an evidence bag. The last entry was two nights old, dated the full moon: Settle up. — B. "Dead since midnight." She turned the bag in the light. "Ledger last signed two nights back. And your pathologist will confirm the body weighs nothing, because the boys who carried the stretcher were walking like it was empty." "Fits. Junkies strip a body before we get to it." "Junkies don't take bone marrow through a pencil hole." Ferro stopped chewing. "It's a weird one. I'll give you that." She circled the body. Grey silt lay over everything down here, thick as flour, except for a clean swathe around the corpse, as though the man had been lowered from the ceiling and set down without a foot touching the floor. Two paces off, a ring of frost sat on the concrete. At its centre, one floor tile had fused to a black glass glaze. "That's condensation." "It's frost. It's the eighteenth of July." She held her palm over the ring. Cold climbed off it like water running backwards. "And it's two paces from your dead man. The only mark on this platform, and he isn't standing on it." Boots on the stair. Eva Kowalski came down sideways, satchel banging against the rail, hard hat two sizes too big over her red curls. Her round glasses fogged the moment she hit the tunnel air. Quinn had texted her photos of the tile an hour ago and said one word: come. Eva knelt at the glazed tile and went pale around the freckles. "This isn't chalk. The surface flowed and set. You'd need a kiln." "Acid does that," Ferro put in. "Acid etches. This melted." She pulled a loupe from her satchel and bent closer. "It's a toll-mark. I've seen the pattern in the restricted stacks — merchants stamp their scales with it." "The museum lot," Ferro muttered. "Right." "She consults." Quinn let that sit. "The compass. Look at the face." Eva took it without touching the needle. "Shade work. Those sigils aren't decoration, they're containment. The needle doesn't find north. It finds thin places. Doors." "It's pointing at a wall." "I know." Eva's hand went to her hair and she tucked it behind her left ear, twice. "The market moved two nights ago, on the full moon. It doesn't leave doors behind. It leaves debts." She turned the bone token over in her palm and frowned. "This is a real token. Issued, not bought. Spent tokens go cold and grey." "This one's warm as tea." "Then it was refused." Eva set it down fast, like it had bitten her. "Or it was never his." Ferro rubbed his jaw. "So we're doing this. A market. Under Camden. That moved. Two nights ago." "You've got a man with a sealed heart and no blood in him," Quinn said. "You were doing this the moment you called me down." She laid it out along the floor with her finger, pacing the distances. "He didn't die here. He died on the frost, over there, on the toll-mark. Then something picked him up — something that doesn't press its heels into the dust — carried him two paces and stood him against the arch, facing the wall, like luggage set down at the wrong platform." She crouched at the single trail of footprints that came out of the stairwell and crossed the silt. Bare feet. The toes ran long, the stride ran smooth, and the prints stopped at the brickwork as if the wall had accepted them. "One trail in. None out. And check his shoes — soles are clean. He never walked a step down here. The scene is dressed, Ferro. Someone wanted us to find a tidy body on a spooky mark. What they didn't count on was the frost sitting in the wrong place." "Or he crawled." "Crawlers disturb silt. And crawlers leave their shoes on." She stood. Her thumb found the worn leather strap of her watch and pressed. She'd photographed a glaze like that tile once before, three years back. That file lived in a shoebox at home, not the archive. Eva had gone quiet by the arch, loupe raised to the mortar. "Harlow. This pointing is fresh. Days old, at most. And it's warm." She flattened her hand against the brick, then pulled it away and tucked her hair behind her ear again. "Nothing under Camden should be warm. The ground's been cold since the ice." Quinn drew her penknife along the seam. The mortar curled away soft as candle wax, and inside the compass case the needle pressed so hard against the brass that it trembled. She tore a strip of evidence tape and sealed it across the brickwork where the bare footprints ended. "Scene's bigger than the body, Ferro. Get the drill team down here, and log that needle every time the case opens. I want to know if it moves between now and the next full moon."
created_at"2026-09-24T14:18:40.483Z" 9/24/2026, 2:18:40 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.362
leniency0.723
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1209
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
91.73% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1209
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"etched"
count1
1
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"etched"
1"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences58
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences58
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences88
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen68
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1215
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount670
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.19
worstName"Ferro"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Brackley1
Street1
Ferro8
Quinn6
Settle1
Cold1
Kowalski1
Eva6
Bare1
persons
0"Ferro"
1"Quinn"
2"Settle"
3"Cold"
4"Kowalski"
5"Eva"
places
0"Brackley"
1"Street"
globalScore0.903
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences43
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1215
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"let that sit"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean26.41
std25.12
cv0.951
sampleLengths
039
110
210
35
415
547
612
738
849
93
1027
1172
1212
1336
142
1529
1638
1710
189
1911
2065
212
2242
2351
2412
2512
266
2732
286
2912
3025
315
3260
335
3419
3517
3625
3713
38143
393
4046
4112
4244
4331
4418
4535
93.16% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences58
matches
0"been welded"
1"been lowered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs106
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences88
ratio0.011
matches
0"— B."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount671
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.022354694485842028
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences88
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences88
mean13.81
std10.89
cv0.789
sampleLengths
021
118
210
310
45
515
621
726
88
94
105
119
1224
1334
1415
153
1627
172
1826
196
2022
2116
225
237
2417
256
2613
272
2814
2913
302
3110
3228
3310
349
353
368
374
3837
3911
4013
412
4214
438
4420
454
4620
4711
4816
4912
87.50% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.5454545454545454
totalSentences88
uniqueOpeners48
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
ratio0
76.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences50
matches
0"Her torch swept the platform"
1"She crossed the silted concrete."
2"She lifted the man's right"
3"His fingers came with it,"
4"She set the compass on"
5"She walked forward again, and"
6"She turned the bag in"
7"She circled the body."
8"She held her palm over"
9"Her round glasses fogged the"
10"She pulled a loupe from"
11"She turned the bone token"
12"She laid it out along"
13"She crouched at the single"
14"Her thumb found the worn"
15"She'd photographed a glaze like"
16"She flattened her hand against"
17"She tore a strip of"
ratio0.36
10.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount45
totalSentences50
matches
0"The hoarding around Brackley Street"
1"Quinn ducked through, torch in"
2"A constable at the bottom"
3"Her torch swept the platform"
4"Arc lamps hummed at the"
5"She crossed the silted concrete."
6"The man on his back"
7"Ferro nudged the air two"
8"The puncture was the width"
9"She lifted the man's right"
10"His fingers came with it,"
11"The needle sat dead steady,"
12"She set the compass on"
13"The needle spun in lazy"
14"She walked forward again, and"
15"Ferro handed over an evidence"
16"The last entry was two"
17"She turned the bag in"
18"Ferro stopped chewing."
19"She circled the body."
ratio0.9
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences50
matches
0"Now his skin clung to"
ratio0.02
63.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Her torch swept the platform edge, the dead escalators, adverts for cigarettes that had been illegal to advertise for two decades."
1"The puncture was the width of a pencil and closed to a ridge of shiny scar-tissue that had no business on a man eight hours dead."
2"Grey silt lay over everything down here, thick as flour, except for a clean swathe around the corpse, as though the man had been lowered from the ceiling and se…"
95.59% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Eva's hand went, twice"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Ferro muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.064
leniency0.128
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.043
90.0269%