Run: 2026-09-24-01M39WGSVQ09F2DSYVSX6Y84KW

Run Details

Duration:
1m 16s
Cost:
$0.005316
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain came down in ropes, hammering the awnings along Old Compton Street and turning the road into a strip of moving mercury. Detective Harlow Quinn stood beneath the dead sign of a shuttered florist, collar up, hands buried in her coat, and watched the green neon of the Raven's Nest bleed its light across the puddles opposite. Twelve days of watching that door. Tonight it finally opened. Tomás Herrera stepped out at 11:47, hood up, a leather satchel crossed over his chest. He scanned the street left, then right, and his gaze snagged on the shadow beneath the florist's awning. Quinn stepped off the kerb. "Tomás Herrera. Metropolitan Police. I want a word." He ran. His boots threw water as he cut up Wardour Street, past a kebab shop still steaming from the night's trade. Quinn gave chase, her breath punching out in white rags, the worn leather of her watch biting into her wrist where the strap had gone stiff with damp. "Wrong night, detective!" he threw over his shoulder. "Then you know who I am. Saves us an introduction." "You don't want to do this." "Running says otherwise." He jinked into a service alley behind the restaurants, vaulted a stack of crates, sent a lid clattering into her path. She hurdled it, shoulder checking a fire door as she banked left. Kitchen steam rolled over her. Grease and onions and something sharper underneath — a chemical tang she couldn't place, the same tang she'd logged twice before at scenes she wasn't supposed to remember. Herrera burst out onto Charing Cross Road and threaded between a bus and a black cab, palm slapping the cab's bonnet as the driver leaned on the horn. Quinn took the same gap a half-second later, the horn chasing her across the lanes. "He's heading north!" she barked into her radio. Static answered. She hammered the transmit button again. Nothing but that dead-air hiss, like the weather had chewed through the signal. Ahead, Herrera ducked down a street lined with boarded shopfronts. Rain sheeted off a fire escape and caught him full across the back. He stumbled, righted himself, and the satchel swung around to his side — and for one stride the flap hung open and she saw the contents gleam: glass vials in foam slots, a steel case, things that had no business in any pharmacy she'd ever signed off. "Herrera! Stop and it goes easier!" "Nothing about this is easy!" His voice cracked with laughter or fury, hard to tell. "You want to know what your superintendent buried? Ask him how Morris really—" The rest drowned under the roar of a passing lorry. Quinn's legs went cold inside the chase. Morris. Three years. A sealed file, a riverbank, a superintendent who wouldn't meet her eyes. Her boot hit a pothole and she nearly went down, caught herself on a railing, wrenched herself back into motion. He was two hundred yards ahead now, a dark shape flowing through the traffic lights of Mornington Crescent, and the city was opening up around him the way it did for people who knew its veins. He crossed the canal at the locks, wood groaning under his feet, and Quinn's lungs burned like she'd swallowed the rain. Forty-one years old and eighteen years of chasing men through this city, and every one of them thought youth would save them. It never had. She gained on the straight of Camden High Street, close enough now to hear him gasping, to see the Saint Christopher medallion fly out from under his hood as he bent into the run. He cut right, down a service road beside a brick face she'd never noticed — dead windows, a faded roundel half-scraped from the wall, the ghost of a station name beneath layers of grime. Rusted gates stood ajar. Beyond them, a stairwell breathed warm air up out of the dark. Herrera took the stairs three at a time. Quinn hit the gates, flicked her torch, and followed. The beam found greenish tiles, a dead turnstile furred with rust, a corridor that sloped down and away. Her radio crackled once and died for good. The temperature dropped ten degrees, then climbed again, the air turning thick and mineral, like the inside of a cave. Light ahead. Torchlight, lamplight, something orange and living. She slowed at the mouth of a tiled hall. A booth stood where the ticket office had been, its grille thrown open, an oil lamp burning on the counter. Behind the grille sat a man built like a door, grey skin stretched over a heavy jaw, a ledger open before him and a bone-white cylinder resting in his palm. Herrera slapped a second token on the counter — carved bone, finger-length, worn smooth. The big man turned it over, nodded, and pushed a gate open in the far wall. Beyond it, stairs descended toward a glow the colour of embers, and a sound came up from below — voices, dozens of them, a market's murmur rising out of the earth. Quinn's torch beam hit Herrera square in the back. He stopped on the threshold but didn't turn. "Metropolitan Police," she called. "You're detained. Step away from the gate." The big man's eyes came around slow as tectonic plates. "Token," he said. "I'm police. This man is wanted in connection with—" "Token. Or the gate shuts and you keep the teeth you came with." "Listen to me—" "He paid. You haven't." Herrera turned then. Rain still dripped from him, plastering his curls flat, and the scar along his left forearm caught the lamplight where his sleeve had ridden up. He looked at her the way a man looks at a patient he's already decided is terminal. "You chased me twelve blocks in a storm for a word," he said. "So here it is for free. Your partner didn't drown, detective. He was taken somewhere that doesn't appear on any map you've ever read. Somewhere like this." He tipped his chin at the ember-glow below. "The report you were never allowed to see? It's true. All of it." "You're lying to save your skin." "Then come down and prove it. That's the point." He dug in his pocket, pulled out the second thing she'd watched him palm at the booth, and tossed it. It arced through her torch beam — bone, white, still warm from his hand. She caught it against her chest before it hit the wet tiles. "Consider that a statement of intent. I want you down there. I want you to see." The big man's hand hovered over the gate. "Moonset closes it," he rumbled. "Market moves. Door won't open again for you. In or out." Quinn's thumb found the watch on her wrist, pressed against the cracked leather. Morris's watch. The one thing the department had let her keep. Three years of a sealed file, a superintendent's shut door, a riverbank with no body of water nearby and no explanation that survived a second reading. Backup was a radio that didn't work. A warrant was a piece of paper for a place that moved every full moon. Everything she'd built her career on — procedure, chain of command, the clean bright line between the living city and whatever this was — stopped at that gate. "Quinn," Herrera said quietly. "Choose." She looked at the token in her hand. She looked at the stairs going down. She stepped through.
created_at"2026-09-24T14:18:41.413Z" 9/24/2026, 2:18:41 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Herrera said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.385
leniency0.769
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.077
95.94% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1233
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
91.89% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1233
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"flicked"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences78
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences94
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1241
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount1047
uniqueNames20
maxNameDensity0.86
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Old1
Compton1
Street3
Harlow1
Quinn9
Raven1
Nest1
Herrera8
Wardour1
Charing1
Cross1
Road1
Static1
Mornington1
Crescent1
Camden1
High1
Saint1
Christopher1
Rain3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Nest"
4"Herrera"
5"Static"
6"Saint"
7"Christopher"
8"Rain"
places
0"Old"
1"Compton"
2"Street"
3"Wardour"
4"Charing"
5"Cross"
6"Road"
7"Mornington"
8"Crescent"
9"Camden"
10"High"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1241
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences94
matches
0"watching that door"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean26.98
std26.11
cv0.968
sampleLengths
057
110
233
35
48
52
648
78
810
96
103
1166
1243
138
1421
1570
166
1728
1810
1942
20116
2150
228
2355
248
2559
2661
2717
2811
2910
303
319
3213
333
344
3545
3661
376
3871
398
4016
4150
4250
435
4415
453
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences78
matches
0"was — stopped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs173
matches
0"was opening"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences94
ratio0.074
matches
0"Grease and onions and something sharper underneath — a chemical tang she couldn't place, the same tang she'd logged twice before at scenes she wasn't supposed to remember."
1"He stumbled, righted himself, and the satchel swung around to his side — and for one stride the flap hung open and she saw the contents gleam: glass vials in foam slots, a steel case, things that had no business in any pharmacy she'd ever signed off."
2"He cut right, down a service road beside a brick face she'd never noticed — dead windows, a faded roundel half-scraped from the wall, the ghost of a station name beneath layers of grime."
3"Herrera slapped a second token on the counter — carved bone, finger-length, worn smooth."
4"Beyond it, stairs descended toward a glow the colour of embers, and a sound came up from below — voices, dozens of them, a market's murmur rising out of the earth."
5"It arced through her torch beam — bone, white, still warm from his hand."
6"Everything she'd built her career on — procedure, chain of command, the clean bright line between the living city and whatever this was — stopped at that gate."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1046
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.022944550669216062
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0038240917782026767
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean13.2
std9.81
cv0.743
sampleLengths
022
135
26
34
415
518
65
78
82
920
1028
118
1210
136
143
1521
1612
175
1828
1928
2015
218
222
236
2413
2510
2613
2747
286
2915
3013
3110
327
331
342
3512
3620
3736
3821
3922
403
4134
4234
434
4412
458
469
4718
488
4920
71.28% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.44680851063829785
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners42
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
ratio0
67.06% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences68
matches
0"He scanned the street left,"
1"His boots threw water as"
2"he threw over his shoulder"
3"He jinked into a service"
4"She hurdled it, shoulder checking"
5"she barked into her radio"
6"She hammered the transmit button"
7"He stumbled, righted himself, and"
8"His voice cracked with laughter"
9"Her boot hit a pothole"
10"He was two hundred yards"
11"He crossed the canal at"
12"It never had."
13"She gained on the straight"
14"He cut right, down a"
15"Her radio crackled once and"
16"She slowed at the mouth"
17"He stopped on the threshold"
18"He looked at her the"
19"He tipped his chin at"
ratio0.382
26.18% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences68
matches
0"Rain came down in ropes,"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stood beneath"
2"Tonight it finally opened."
3"Tomás Herrera stepped out at"
4"He scanned the street left,"
5"Quinn stepped off the kerb."
6"His boots threw water as"
7"Quinn gave chase, her breath"
8"he threw over his shoulder"
9"He jinked into a service"
10"She hurdled it, shoulder checking"
11"Kitchen steam rolled over her."
12"Grease and onions and something"
13"Herrera burst out onto Charing"
14"Quinn took the same gap"
15"she barked into her radio"
16"She hammered the transmit button"
17"Nothing but that dead-air hiss,"
18"Rain sheeted off a fire"
19"He stumbled, righted himself, and"
ratio0.868
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He was two hundred yards ahead now, a dark shape flowing through the traffic lights of Mornington Crescent, and the city was opening up around him the way it di…"
1"Three years of a sealed file, a superintendent's shut door, a riverbank with no body of water nearby and no explanation that survived a second reading."
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"His voice cracked, hard to tell"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she barked (bark)"
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.192
leniency0.385
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.077
84.2449%