Run: 2026-09-24-01M39WHRXW05G3T2SA6F7AMSAK

Run Details

Duration:
2m 52s
Cost:
$0.009296
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Frost had taken Richmond Park overnight, and dawn found it white and holding its breath. Rory's boots cracked the grass with every step, each crunch loud as a gunshot in the silence. Beside her, Nyx moved without sound at all, a tall ripple of dark gliding an inch above the frozen ground, leaving no trail where hers printed a line of broken crystals all the way from the gate. "You feel that?" Nyx's voice arrived the way wind moves a curtain — there, then gone. "Feel what? Aside from my fingers falling off." "The Veil. It thins before the solstice. Doors that stay shut all winter drift ajar." "And nobody thought to mention that before we crossed half of London in the dark." "You wanted the door. Doors keep their own hours." Rory blew into her cupped hands and kept walking. The oaks around them grew older with every yard — trunks widening, bark splitting into deep grey plates, roots arching out of the earth like the ribs of buried ships. Then the trees stopped, all at once, as if a line had been drawn. Inside the line stood a ring of stones. They were wrong in a way her brain took a moment to name. Each one carried the grain of wood — rings frozen in grey, knots and burrs turned to rock — as if the forest had once decided to become a cliff and changed its mind halfway through. One stone had split down the middle, and a living oak grew straight out of the wound, cradled in the stone's broken arms. Rory laid her palm against the nearest monolith. Cold, sure — but under the cold, a hum. Low, constant, like a note sung by something with no throat. "It's warm," she started to say, and corrected herself. "No. Alive. The stone's alive." "Wood remembers," Nyx whispered. "Even after it stops being wood." The dagger at her hip grew colder. Cold was its nature — moonsilver never warmed — but this was a different order of cold, frost feathering up the blade in white ferns while the morning air stayed still. She drew it an inch. The leaf-shaped steel threw off a glow like the memory of moonlight. Between two of the stones, the air shivered. Nyx raised an arm and pointed, and Rory squinted until her eyes watered. Nothing. A gap, frost on the grass beyond, ordinary park. "I can't see it." "You wouldn't. Look with the steel." She lifted the dagger and swept it left to right. Where the blade passed the gap between the stones, the air caught — a shimmer, thin as the skin on hot milk, bending the frost-glare behind it out of true. "There." The Heartstone pendant at her throat sat dark and quiet against her skin. "Not Hel, then. The stone's not so much as twitching." "No. The other side." Rory rolled her shoulders, stepped up to the gap, and walked through. The air resisted her — a curtain of cold water, a held note pressing on her eardrums, one long second where she existed nowhere at all — and then it let go, and she stood in green. December ended at the boundary. Inside the ring of stones it was late May, or some season that had never bothered to introduce itself to a calendar. Grass rose past her ankles, deep and springy, threaded with wildflowers in ranks of colour she had no words for — a blue that hummed at the edge of hearing, a yellow that made her think of brass instruments, a white so bright it left an afterimage. Bees moved among the blooms in slow, unhurried arcs. The light came from no single place. It pooled, sourceless and honey-warm, as if the whole grove were lit from within. The cold fell off her like a coat. Her breath stopped fogging. Somewhere ahead, water ran. "Right," she breathed, and the birdsong stopped — all of it, every branch, at once — until she finished the word. She looked up. A thrush sat in an oak above her, head cocked. It sang four notes. Somewhere behind her, another bird sang the same four notes. Then a third, further off, the same again, the pattern travelling away through the grove like a rumour. "Did you hear that? They're copying each other." "They are one thing," Nyx whispered, "singing to itself." Rory turned — and stopped. Nyx stood just inside the boundary, doubled forward, one hand pressed to where a stomach would be. Their edges were fraying. The clean line of shoulder and jaw had come apart into threads of smoke, and the grove pulled at those threads the way a tide pulls at loose sand, drawing wisps of them out and out toward the flowers. "Nyx!" She grabbed for their arm. Her hand met solid shadow, cold as riverbed stones. "It pulls." The whisper came ragged. "The grove sits between worlds. So do I. It wants to — file me. Put me where I belong." "Which is where?" "That is the question, isn't it." She kept her grip on their arm and walked them forward, one step, then another, until the fraying slowed and the edges of them knitted back together, thread by thread. Nyx straightened. Their violet eyes burned brighter than she'd ever seen them. "Deeper in," they whispered, "the pull weakens. Or strengthens. It has not decided about me." Nothing about that sentence made her feel better, so she filed it away and looked around instead. A stream cut through the grass ahead, running clear over pebbles of pale glass — and running uphill. She watched the water climb for a full minute before she trusted her eyes. Where the bank dipped, a small tree stood in blossom and fruit at the same time, white flowers and red fruit sharing the same branches without the least embarrassment. Every bloom they passed had turned to face them. Not the sun — them. A hundred small faces tracking their progress through the grass, petals open like watching eyes. And her shadow lagged. She noticed it when she lifted her arm to shield her eyes: the shadow copied her a half-beat late, a slow echo in the green light. She stamped her foot. The shadow stamped a moment after. "Nyx. My shadow's drunk." "Time pools here. It moves through the grove the way water moves through a reed bed — fast in some places, slow in others. Your shadow walks through a slow pool." "How long have we been inside?" "An hour." A pause. "Or a minute. The grove has not decided." Between two oaks ahead stood a woman who had not been there a breath before. Silver hair fell to her waist, catching the sourceless light. Her eyes were the colour of dawn on lavender, pale and ancient, and she stood with her hands folded as though she had been waiting all morning and all century. The grass lay unbent where she stood. The dew hadn't broken. "Two come in," the woman said, "and one of them is a hole in the world. The grove has not had such a visit since these oaks were saplings." "You're Isolde." Rory kept the dagger low at her side, its cold biting through her glove. "I am called that, in the tongue you brought with you." The seer's gaze slid past her. "And you, little dark one. Shadows belong to no realm and to every realm. The grove cannot decide about you. Neither, I think, can you." Nyx's smoke-edges stirred. "I have been undecided for three hundred years. It is the only thing I am certain of." Isolde's mouth curved, and she turned those lavender eyes on Rory, reading her the way the blade read wards. "And you, courier. The grove hears heartbeats the way you hear bells. Why have you come?"
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.353
leniency0.706
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1294
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
84.54% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1294
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count1
3
word"echo"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"stomach"
2"whisper"
3"echo"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences78
matches(empty)
87.91% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences78
filterMatches
0"think"
1"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1312
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount1014
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.79
worstName"Nyx"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Nyx"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Nyx8
Rory8
Heartstone1
May1
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1312
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean26.78
std22.38
cv0.836
sampleLengths
069
116
28
315
415
59
653
78
872
928
1014
1110
1255
1331
144
156
1640
1724
184
1912
2037
21104
2216
2321
2445
258
269
2765
2815
2925
303
316
3242
3315
3478
3529
3640
374
3831
396
4012
4115
4251
4329
4416
4542
4620
4719
4816
96.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences78
matches
0"been drawn"
1"were lit"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs162
matches
0"were fraying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount16
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences99
ratio0.121
matches
0"\"You feel that?\" Nyx's voice arrived the way wind moves a curtain — there, then gone."
1"The oaks around them grew older with every yard — trunks widening, bark splitting into deep grey plates, roots arching out of the earth like the ribs of buried ships."
2"Each one carried the grain of wood — rings frozen in grey, knots and burrs turned to rock — as if the forest had once decided to become a cliff and changed its mind halfway through."
3"Cold, sure — but under the cold, a hum."
4"Cold was its nature — moonsilver never warmed — but this was a different order of cold, frost feathering up the blade in white ferns while the morning air stayed still."
5"Where the blade passed the gap between the stones, the air caught — a shimmer, thin as the skin on hot milk, bending the frost-glare behind it out of true."
6"The air resisted her — a curtain of cold water, a held note pressing on her eardrums, one long second where she existed nowhere at all — and then it let go, and she stood in green."
7"Grass rose past her ankles, deep and springy, threaded with wildflowers in ranks of colour she had no words for — a blue that hummed at the edge of hearing, a yellow that made her think of brass instruments, a white so bright it left an afterimage."
8"\"Right,\" she breathed, and the birdsong stopped — all of it, every branch, at once — until she finished the word."
9"Rory turned — and stopped."
10"A stream cut through the grass ahead, running clear over pebbles of pale glass — and running uphill."
11"Not the sun — them."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1003
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.022931206380857428
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean13.25
std9.71
cv0.732
sampleLengths
015
117
237
316
48
515
615
79
89
930
1014
118
1213
1336
1423
158
169
1711
189
195
204
216
227
2331
245
2512
268
2713
281
299
304
316
3210
3330
3414
3510
364
3712
3837
395
4022
4147
429
437
4414
458
464
474
4821
493
75.42% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.46464646464646464
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners46
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences72
matches
0"Then the trees stopped, all"
1"Somewhere ahead, water ran."
2"Somewhere behind her, another bird"
3"Then a third, further off,"
ratio0.056
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences72
matches
0"They were wrong in a"
1"she started to say, and"
2"She drew it an inch."
3"She lifted the dagger and"
4"It pooled, sourceless and honey-warm,"
5"Her breath stopped fogging."
6"she breathed, and the birdsong"
7"She looked up."
8"It sang four notes."
9"Their edges were fraying."
10"She grabbed for their arm"
11"Her hand met solid shadow,"
12"She kept her grip on"
13"Their violet eyes burned brighter"
14"She watched the water climb"
15"She noticed it when she"
16"She stamped her foot."
17"Her eyes were the colour"
ratio0.25
85.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences72
matches
0"Frost had taken Richmond Park"
1"Rory's boots cracked the grass"
2"Nyx's voice arrived the way"
3"Rory blew into her cupped"
4"The oaks around them grew"
5"They were wrong in a"
6"Each one carried the grain"
7"Rory laid her palm against"
8"she started to say, and"
9"The dagger at her hip"
10"She drew it an inch."
11"The leaf-shaped steel threw off"
12"Nyx raised an arm and"
13"A gap, frost on the"
14"She lifted the dagger and"
15"The Heartstone pendant at her"
16"Rory rolled her shoulders, stepped"
17"The air resisted her —"
18"December ended at the boundary."
19"Grass rose past her ankles,"
ratio0.75
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
ratio0
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Grass rose past her ankles, deep and springy, threaded with wildflowers in ranks of colour she had no words for — a blue that hummed at the edge of hearing, a y…"
1"It pooled, sourceless and honey-warm, as if the whole grove were lit from within."
2"Her eyes were the colour of dawn on lavender, pale and ancient, and she stood with her hands folded as though she had been waiting all morning and all century."
83.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she breathed, and the birdsong stopped — all of it, every branch, at once — until she finished the word"
2.94% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she started (start)"
1"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
2"she breathed (breathe)"
3"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
4"they whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.176
leniency0.353
rawRatio0.833
effectiveRatio0.294
86.6250%