Run: 2026-09-24-01M39WJPJ6Z24YS19B73AM7BJR

Run Details

Duration:
3m 13s
Cost:
$0.010235
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The service gate at the bottom of the stairs had been chained shut since 1994. Someone had cut it that morning, and the severed links still gleamed bright against thirty years of rust. Harlow Quinn ducked under the incident tape and took the steps sideways, torch out, heels ringing off iron. The smell arrived first — standing water, dead air, the fossil breath of a million commuters. Then the light: three forensic floodlights blazing down the length of a platform that hadn't served a living passenger since before she'd joined the Met. "Down here, Boss." DS Ray Fenwick stood at the platform's edge, gum working in his cheek, hands buried in his coat. Behind him a man lay face down on filthy tiles in a wool overcoat worth more than Fenwick's monthly take-home. "Dr. Edmund Crane. Fifty-eight. Senior archivist at the British Museum, restricted collections. His cleaner raised the alarm yesterday. Some kids found him at six this morning, wandering where they shouldn't." Quinn swept her torch across the platform. Enamel advertisements for oat cereal and long-dead cigarette brands ran along the curved wall. Dust lay over everything like grey snow. "Tell me your theory." "Open and shut. Kids party down here — there's beer cans behind the stairs. Crane comes down, scores something cut with filth, heart gives out. Someone lifted his wallet on the way out." Fenwick shrugged. "Sad, but simple." Quinn crouched beside the body and held her torch low over the tiles. "Show me his footprints." "Come again?" "The dust down here is an inch thick. Every step your lot took is printed in it. The kids too. I count two trails, both from the stairs." She rose and walked a slow arc around the body. "Nothing under him. Nothing leading to him. Nobody walked Dr. Crane onto this platform." "Airflow. Thirty years of tunnels, the dust shifts—" "The dust shifted everywhere except a two-metre circle around this man." She pointed. Inside the ring the tiles sat bare and scoured, stripped to their original grey. Outside it, dust swallowed everything. She stepped into the circle and her breath fogged. She stepped out. It didn't. Fenwick leaned over for a look. "Underfloor heating fault." "In a station that's been dead since Majorca was popular? Ray, it's colder inside that ring than the tunnel behind you. Something scrubbed these tiles and it wasn't a broom." She gloved up, lifted the dead man's collar with two fingers, and studied the exposed jaw and neck. "Lividity's fixed along his spine. He's lying face down. He died on his back and somebody rolled him over afterwards — after rigor set in." "Or he had a fit and flopped." "Flops don't reposition arms." She crouched again and pressed the torch to the man's shoe soles. Clean. Factory-clean. "And he didn't walk here. No soot, no grit, no dust. He arrived on this platform the way the dust left it — without touching the ground." Fenwick stopped chewing. "You're doing the Morris thing." Quinn's thumb found the worn leather strap of her watch and pressed against it. "Morris's file stays open because the evidence didn't add up. Neither does this." "Three years, Harlow. You chased shadows through that whole case and the brass still brings you back junkie heart attacks in disused tunnels." "Then humour me." She bent to the body's throat. A cord hung there, singed at the clasp, holding a small white disc drilled through its centre. Bone, or something wearing bone's complexion. She turned it in the light. "Wallet's gone. Thieves took the wallet. They left this." "Souvenir. Festival tat." "And they left this." She drew a penlight and probed the right coat pocket, then worked her fingers in and out, careful of the fibres. Brass filled her palm — a compass the size of a pocket watch, its casing mottled green with verdigris, its face ringed with etched markings that belonged to no instrument she'd ever signed out of an evidence store. The needle shivered, swept a full circle, and locked. "Pointing north," Fenwick said. "Congratulations, it's a compass." Quinn held her phone beside it. The phone's needle settled toward the stairwell. The brass needle ignored it, straining toward the far end of the platform, where a tunnel mouth had been bricked over with concrete and riveted steel. "North is behind us. This thing disagrees with my phone, with your torch, and with the sun." She stood and followed the needle's line to the sealed wall. "It wants the tunnel that goes nowhere." The radio on Fenwick's shoulder crackled. He listened, rolling his eyes. "Sergeant says there's a woman at the top of the stairs. No warrant card, carrying half a library in a satchel. Says she's expected." "Bring her down." Footsteps echoed off the iron. A young woman came down sideways the same way Quinn had — red curls, round glasses fogging in the dead air, a leather satchel stuffed with books banging against her hip. Freckles. Green eyes. She took in the floodlights, the body, and stopped dead on the bottom step. "Edmund." The word came out flat, all the air pressed out of it. "You know him?" Fenwick pulled out his notebook. "I work with — worked." She swallowed. "Eva Kowalski. Research assistant, restricted archives. Dr. Crane was my supervisor." Her hand rose and tucked a curl behind her left ear, then did it again. Then her gaze snagged on Quinn's palm and stayed there. "Where did you find that?" "His coat pocket." Quinn turned the brass face toward her. "You recognise it." "Put it down." Eva came off the last step. "Not on the ground — in a bag, sealed, and don't let the needle touch the casing. Where is it pointing?" "The bricked-up tunnel." Eva's breath left her in a rush. She looked at the wall, then at the scoured circle, then at the disc on the cord around the dead man's neck, and the colour drained from her face below the freckles. "That's a bone token," she said. "Nobody buys those. They're given. You're invited, or you're not." "Invited to what, Ms. Kowalski?" "Last week Edmund signed a compass out of the archives and told me he'd found a market under London. He said it opens once a month and never in the same place twice, and that you needed one of those—" she pointed at the token, her finger shaking, "—to get through the door. I told him to log it and walk away. I told him—" Her voice cracked and she pressed her lips together. Quinn looked at the needle straining at the wall. At the swept circle and her own breath fogging inside it. At a man whose shoes had never touched the ground he died on. "The moon was full three nights ago." Fenwick threw up his hands. "Oh, come on. It's festival tat and a broken compass and a man who had a bad night." "A man who died on his back and was rolled over after rigor." Quinn slid the compass into an evidence bag; through the plastic, the needle held its line to the wall. "Whatever met Dr. Crane on this platform, it didn't come down the stairs, and it didn't leave the way we did." She turned to Eva. "You're coming to the station. Start from the beginning — every word he said about that market, and don't leave out the parts you think sound mad." Eva gripped her satchel strap with both hands. "And Ray." Quinn nodded toward the sealed tunnel. "Nobody touches that wall."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She crouched again [again]"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.039
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1253
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
88.03% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1253
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"etched"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"etched"
1"footsteps"
2"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences64
matches(empty)
98.21% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences64
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences96
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen75
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1261
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
70.17% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount689
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.6
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn11
Met1
Ray1
Fenwick9
Clean1
Brass1
Eva4
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Ray"
2"Fenwick"
3"Brass"
4"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.702
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1261
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean26.27
std20.63
cv0.785
sampleLengths
033
159
23
338
430
528
64
738
817
92
1052
118
1246
139
1430
1543
167
1745
188
1927
2023
2147
223
2372
248
2539
2635
2735
283
2953
3013
318
3233
3310
345
3513
3630
373
3839
3916
405
4174
4233
437
4423
4584
468
4712
94.30% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences64
matches
0"been chained"
1"been bricked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs116
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences96
ratio0.052
matches
0"The smell arrived first — standing water, dead air, the fossil breath of a million commuters."
1"Brass filled her palm — a compass the size of a pocket watch, its casing mottled green with verdigris, its face ringed with etched markings that belonged to no instrument she'd ever signed out of an evidence store."
2"A young woman came down sideways the same way Quinn had — red curls, round glasses fogging in the dead air, a leather satchel stuffed with books banging against her hip."
3"\"Last week Edmund signed a compass out of the archives and told me he'd found a market under London. He said it opens once a month and never in the same place twice, and that you needed one of those—\" she pointed at the token, her finger shaking, \"—to get through the door. I told him to log it and walk away. I told him—\" Her voice cracked and she pressed her lips together."
4"\"A man who died on his back and was rolled over after rigor.\" Quinn slid the compass into an evidence bag; through the plastic, the needle held its line to the wall."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount692
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.01878612716763006
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.001445086705202312
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences96
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences96
mean13.14
std11.4
cv0.868
sampleLengths
015
118
218
316
425
53
618
720
830
97
1014
117
124
1335
143
1513
164
172
1838
1914
208
2113
2214
235
249
253
262
276
283
2930
3018
3125
327
3316
341
351
3627
373
385
3914
4013
4123
429
4317
446
456
469
473
4825
4938
96.88% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.6458333333333334
totalSentences96
uniqueOpeners62
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences54
matches
0"Then the light: three forensic"
1"Then her gaze snagged on"
ratio0.037
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences54
matches
0"She rose and walked a"
1"She stepped into the circle"
2"She stepped out."
3"She gloved up, lifted the"
4"She crouched again and pressed"
5"She bent to the body's"
6"She turned it in the"
7"She drew a penlight and"
8"She stood and followed the"
9"He listened, rolling his eyes."
10"She took in the floodlights,"
11"Her hand rose and tucked"
12"She looked at the wall,"
13"she pointed at the token,"
14"She turned to Eva"
ratio0.278
34.07% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount46
totalSentences54
matches
0"The service gate at the"
1"Someone had cut it that"
2"Harlow Quinn ducked under the"
3"The smell arrived first —"
4"DS Ray Fenwick stood at"
5"Quinn swept her torch across"
6"Enamel advertisements for oat cereal"
7"Dust lay over everything like"
8"Quinn crouched beside the body"
9"She rose and walked a"
10"She stepped into the circle"
11"She stepped out."
12"Fenwick leaned over for a"
13"She gloved up, lifted the"
14"She crouched again and pressed"
15"Fenwick stopped chewing."
16"Quinn's thumb found the worn"
17"She bent to the body's"
18"A cord hung there, singed"
19"She turned it in the"
ratio0.852
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
74.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Then the light: three forensic floodlights blazing down the length of a platform that hadn't served a living passenger since before she'd joined the Met."
1"Brass filled her palm — a compass the size of a pocket watch, its casing mottled green with verdigris, its face ringed with etched markings that belonged to no …"
66.18% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she pointed, her finger shaking,"
1"Quinn slid, the needle held its line to the wall"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She drew (drew)"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.059
leniency0.118
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.039
87.4224%