"The Shade finished becoming solid — six feet and change of silhouette edged in violet, eyes like two coals banked in ash."
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"They were older than the park, older than the city, older than anything with a name she'd learned in school — great leaning oaks grown into stone, or stone grown into the shape of oaks, she'd never been able to decide."
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"It wasn't different, and Nyx knew it, and let it go with something that might have been a smile if shadow could smile — a shifting at the edges, a suggestion."
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"Rory touched the pendant at her throat through her scarf — the little crimson stone on its silver chain, warm-blooded and silent as always — and then the dagger at her hip, and its cold bit through glove and leather alike, a familiar ache."
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"Crossing felt like walking through a curtain of static electricity and cold water at the same time — a full-body shudder, a wrongness in her ears like a change in altitude, and then the pressure released and she was through, and December was gone."
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"Wildflowers ran in every direction under her feet, a low tide of color — white and blood-red and a blue so deep it looked wet — and the grass beneath them was thick and green as June."
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"The grove was not silent — there was birdsong somewhere, threads of it, notes in patterns that never resolved, and the sound of water, murmuring, constant — but the sound sat wrong against her ears, like music played a half-beat off from where the beat should be."
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"The light pooled thicker, golden and slow, and once Rory stopped and watched it move — actually move, drifting through the canopy like something liquid, gathering in the hollows of the land."
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"At first she thought it was her imagination — a bloom angled toward her here, a cluster facing her direction there — and then she stopped walking entirely and stood still for a ten-count, and every flower within twenty feet of her swiveled on its stem to keep her in view."
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"Faintly, a pale luminescence like the memory of moonlight, though there was no moon under the canopy — only that amber drift."
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"She was small — five-five at most — and Rory felt, absurdly, that she was the smaller of the two of them."
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"\"You ask the where before the what. That is your whole trouble, and it will save your life twice and end it once.\" She drifted closer — no footprints, no rustle — and her gaze dropped to Rory's throat, to the chain visible above her scarf."
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"\"One more thing,\" Isolde said, \"because you walked in wanting, and wanting earns a little more than falling does. When you go back through the stones, do not look behind you until you are through. The grove will show you the path you made. The path you made is not the path that is. If you see the difference too soon, you will try to correct it, and the grove will let you, and then you will belong to it.\" She lifted one hand, and in it — Rory never saw her take it out — lay a single white flower, closed tight as a fist."
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"Nyx came through a moment after, or a moment before; with them it was never clear."
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"It wasn't different, and Nyx knew it, and let it go with something that might have been a smile if shadow could smile — a shifting at the edges, a suggestion."
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"She stood in the center of a clearing where the golden light had gathered shin-deep, as if it were water and she were wading, silver hair falling to her waist, …"
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"Overhead, the solstice was eight days out, and the stars behind the slate were thinning like ice forming on a pond, and somewhere in Richmond Park a grove that …"