Run: 2026-09-24-01M39WMHBPVT4Z0ZX91609EWB9

Run Details

Duration:
1m 48s
Cost:
$0.008666
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt gave before she checked the peephole. Eva's rule — check twice, trust nothing — and Rory threw it out the window for a knock that sounded like knuckles and nothing else. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing with rain still clinging to the shoulders of his charcoal suit. The ivory cane rested against the doorframe. One eye caught the hall light, amber as lamplight through whiskey; the other swallowed it whole. Ptolemy poured off the bookshelf and wound around his ankles like a paid informant. "Eva's not here." "I know." Water dripped from his cuff and pooled on the boards. "The curry house below closes at eleven. Your light burns past two when you're reading something that matters." "You've been counting my lights." "I count everything, Carter. It's the job." "Then count this." She pushed the door. His cane tip caught the jamb with a click. "Mind the finish." "Mind the door." Ptolemy chose that moment to shoot between her ankles into the hall. She lunged, caught him by the scruff, and when she straightened Lucien had crossed the threshold and closed the door behind him, restoring the deadbolts one by one with the ease of a man who'd memorized them a year ago. "You don't get to do that. You don't get to walk back in." "Then throw me out." He set his cane against the wall, among the towers of books, like it belonged there. "You've had practice. You're excellent at doors, Rory. You've slammed more of them in my direction than anyone I've ever billed." Her fingers dug into Ptolemy's fur until the cat squirmed free and vanished under the table. On the table, open, the ledger. She moved to close it and he was faster — not grabbing, just resting two fingers on the page, and the sight of those fingers on that paper lit something in her chest that had been banked coals for thirteen months. "Paid in full," he read. "Bearer, L.M." "Put it down." "You left it open like an accusation. Hard not to read." He looked up. "When did you find it?" "Four months ago. In a broker's archive in Whitechapel, which I paid Eva's cousin three favors to reach." Her voice came out level, which cost her. "I spent a year believing you sold me, Lucien. That the extraction was a setup, that you fed my location to Evan's people the moment the invoice cleared. I changed my name again. I stopped sleeping with the window open. I learned to check peepholes." She snatched the ledger and held it against her chest. "And the whole time, the truth was one line in a ledger. You bought me." "You bought my contract" — no wait, that's her line. Correct: "You bought the paper on me. And you never said a word." "You were a debt, Laila. Evan's family held a claim on you older than your acquaintance with him — his grandfather sold a Carter promise to a broker in Avaros before your father was born. You weren't a woman to them. You were paper." He took off his coat, hung it on the hook Eva used for tea towels, and the domesticity of it made her throat hurt. "I burned the paper." "You bought it." "I bought it." "With what?" She stepped closer. The flat was four meters of books and scrolls and him suddenly occupying most of it. "Nobody buys a claim out of Avaros with money. What did it cost?" He turned toward the window. Below, Brick Lane threw its grease-colored glow up at the rain. "The broker wanted something rarer than coin. He wanted my name. Not an alias — the name my father gave me, the one that opens doors in the old country. I signed it over. Which means every door in Avaros is closed to me now, and every debt I carry is collectible by people who collect with knives." Rory's hand found the table's edge. "You signed away your own name. For me." "For the ledger's sake, yes. The claim couldn't transfer to a woman with no name attached. So I made you nameless and paid for it with the only name I had." He turned back. "And then I left. Because a man whose debts can be collected by Avaros makes poor company. Everyone I keep close becomes a lever. I'd already used you once as bait in Marseille and you forgave it. I wasn't going to hand them a second chance at you." "You let me hate you." "Yes." "You let me spend a year looking over my shoulder for a betrayal that never happened." "Yes." "Say something that isn't yes." He crossed the room. She didn't step back — that was the failure, or the victory, she couldn't tell which. He stopped close enough that she could see the rain had flattened a strand of his blond hair against his temple, that he'd lost weight, that the amber eye had a fleck of green in it she'd never noticed in a year of not looking at him. "You were never a job, Laila. The first week, maybe. After Marseille — after the thing in the canal, when you held the wound on my side closed for six hours and told me jokes about French healthcare — you stopped being a job." His voice dropped. "I left because staying would have killed you. I stayed away because every month I lasted was a month they spent looking for the woman I wouldn't sell." "You could have told me the truth and let me decide." "You'd have decided to stay." His mouth curved, humorless. "You're deciding it right now and I haven't even asked." "I hate that you know me that well." "I hate that I do." She reached for his wrist — the left, where his pulse sat under the French cuff — and turned her hand so the crescent scar on her own wrist lay against his skin. He went still. "You kissed this once," she said. "In the safehouse in Rotherhithe. You said, 'Whoever gave you that scar, I'll find them.' It was a fall off a garden wall when I was nine. There was nothing to find. You went looking anyway, didn't you." "For three weeks." "You're an idiot." "I'm thorough." She laughed and it broke in the middle and became something else, and his hand came up to her jaw, thumb along the hinge of it, asking. She answered by pulling him down by the lapels. The kiss tasted of rain and thirteen months of things neither of them had said, and Ptolemy yowled from under the table at the disturbance of books, and neither of them stopped. When she broke away, her forehead against his collarbone, she kept her fist twisted in his shirt. "You're not leaving this flat tonight." "No." "And tomorrow you're going to tell me everything — the broker, the marker, what they do to collect. All of it. Even the parts you think will make me run." "Especially those." "Good." She loosened her grip on his lapels, then didn't let go at all. "Then start talking. From the beginning."
created_at"2026-09-24T14:20:43.784Z" 9/24/2026, 2:20:43 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.259
leniency0.519
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.037
95.79% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1187
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
91.58% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1187
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences41
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences41
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences79
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen67
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1199
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount549
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.73
worstName"Ptolemy"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Ptolemy"
discoveredNames
Rory2
Moreau1
Lucien2
Ptolemy4
Correct1
Eva2
Brick1
Lane1
French1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Eva"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
60.71% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences28
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like knuckles and nothing else"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1199
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean24.47
std25.88
cv1.058
sampleLengths
034
140
214
33
430
55
67
716
83
93
1052
1113
1241
1363
147
153
1619
1796
1823
1972
203
213
2234
2374
2414
2582
265
271
2816
291
305
3167
3275
3311
3419
358
365
3736
3844
393
403
412
4268
4317
446
451
4630
472
4820
96.71% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences41
matches
0"been banked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs93
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences79
ratio0.063
matches
0"Eva's rule — check twice, trust nothing — and Rory threw it out the window for a knock that sounded like knuckles and nothing else."
1"One eye caught the hall light, amber as lamplight through whiskey; the other swallowed it whole."
2"She moved to close it and he was faster — not grabbing, just resting two fingers on the page, and the sight of those fingers on that paper lit something in her chest that had been banked coals for thirteen months."
3"She didn't step back — that was the failure, or the victory, she couldn't tell which."
4"She reached for his wrist — the left, where his pulse sat under the French cuff — and turned her hand so the crescent scar on her own wrist lay against his skin."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount544
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.02389705882352941
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.001838235294117647
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences79
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences79
mean15.18
std14.85
cv0.979
sampleLengths
09
125
217
37
416
514
63
712
818
95
107
117
129
133
143
1512
1640
1713
1820
1921
2016
216
2241
235
242
253
2614
275
2826
2955
3015
3110
3213
3368
344
353
363
375
3816
3913
405
4111
4258
436
448
4534
4648
475
481
4916
61.18% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4050632911392405
totalSentences79
uniqueOpeners32
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences38
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences38
matches
0"She pushed the door"
1"His cane tip caught the"
2"She lunged, caught him by"
3"He set his cane against"
4"Her fingers dug into Ptolemy's"
5"She moved to close it"
6"He looked up"
7"Her voice came out level,"
8"She snatched the ledger and"
9"He took off his coat,"
10"She stepped closer"
11"He turned toward the window."
12"He turned back"
13"He crossed the room."
14"She didn't step back —"
15"He stopped close enough that"
16"His voice dropped"
17"His mouth curved, humorless"
18"She reached for his wrist"
19"He went still."
ratio0.605
25.79% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount33
totalSentences38
matches
0"The third deadbolt gave before"
1"Eva's rule — check twice,"
2"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
3"The ivory cane rested against"
4"Ptolemy poured off the bookshelf"
5"Water dripped from his cuff"
6"She pushed the door"
7"His cane tip caught the"
8"Ptolemy chose that moment to"
9"She lunged, caught him by"
10"He set his cane against"
11"Her fingers dug into Ptolemy's"
12"She moved to close it"
13"He looked up"
14"Her voice came out level,"
15"She snatched the ledger and"
16"He took off his coat,"
17"She stepped closer"
18"The flat was four meters"
19"He turned toward the window."
ratio0.868
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences38
matches(empty)
ratio0
53.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences16
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She lunged, caught him by the scruff, and when she straightened Lucien had crossed the threshold and closed the door behind him, restoring the deadbolts one by …"
1"She moved to close it and he was faster — not grabbing, just resting two fingers on the page, and the sight of those fingers on that paper lit something in her …"
89.29% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"His mouth curved, humorless"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.019
leniency0.037
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.1537%