Run: 2026-09-24-01M39WXS1CG55VDSQ0SA9RYWRY

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1m 46s
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
I opened the door on the third knock, rolling pin already in hand. Lucien Moreau filled the corridor outside Eva's flat the way he filled every room, quietly, completely, as though the space had been reserved for him in advance. Charcoal suit. Ivory cane. Platinum hair slicked back without a single strand out of place. Blood had dried brown along his left cuff. Not his. A man who was leaking didn't stand that loose. "Rory." "Wrong flat." I pushed the door shut. His cane tip met the wood, gentle as a handshake. The door stopped an inch from his nose. "Thirty seconds before I test this on something softer than dough." "Twenty would be kinder." The amber eye crinkled. The black one stayed fixed on me, the way it always had, like it was reading a document the other eye couldn't be trusted with. "You look well. Yu-Fei's kitchen agrees with you." Eight months of nothing, and the first thing out of him was a review of my appetite. I shoved the door. It gave, then stopped again on his voice. "People are asking after you. In places where a name is currency." The pin lowered an inch. Traitor arm. "What kind of people?" "The kind I've spent eight months lying to." A pause. "May I come in before I ruin Eva's carpet with the rest of it?" I should have said no. I stepped back instead, and he crossed the threshold like the room had been expecting him and knew it. Eva's books climbed the walls in landslides, scrolls spilling off the sofa, research notes taped to the lampshade. The curry house below breathed cumin and cardamom up through the floorboards. Somewhere in the paper avalanche, Ptolemy woke, took one look at our guest, and vanished under the bookshelf with a sound like a torn cushion. "Your cat remembers me." "Cats are sensible." I kept the kitchen counter between us. "Start talking. The lie first. I want to hear how it tasted." He set the cane against the sofa and folded his hands over its ivory handle. "You were never supposed to open that ledger." "You mean the ledger with my name in it. One entry. Price paid. Sold to a man whose hobbies I'd rather not describe on an empty stomach." My knuckles ached. I looked down and realised I'd been strangling the rolling pin. "I carried your packages for a year, Luc. I bled for your ledgers. And when it came time to settle up, I was a line item." "You were a line item I bought." "Same ink." "Different intention." He moved along the counter, one slow step, and I matched him the other way. We orbited the till like two boxers who knew each other's tells too well. "The man holding your contract wanted you delivering until your feet fell off. I paid him. The entry you found was the receipt." "Then why did it read like a purchase?" "Because in that world, everything does." I laughed, and it came out wrong, jagged at the edges. "You could have told me that. One sentence. You had eight months of sentences and you spent them all on nothing." "Yes." Just that. No defence, no silk. The black eye held me and the amber one, for once, looked away. Ptolemy yowled from under the bookshelf. Lucien's attention slid to the sound, grateful for it, and I seized the gap. "Why are you actually here?" "Six weeks ago, a broker in Marseille paid four hundred thousand for a name." He watched me the whole time. "Not yours. Not Carter." "Whose, then?" "Malphora." The word landed in the room and stayed there. "That means nothing to me." "It means flame-mouth in a dialect nobody this side of the veil has spoken aloud in a century. It means someone in Avaros believes a piece of property has gone missing." He straightened from the counter. "It means show me your left wrist." My hand moved before my brain could veto it, sleeve dragged down over the scar. Small, crescent-shaped, a childhood accident, Da's words, a broken glass, nothing to fuss over. Except it had been warm for three days. Warm like a coin fresh from a pocket, and I'd told myself a hundred sensible lies about radiators and hot water bottles. "I know about the warm," Lucien said. "You don't know anything about my wrist." "I know it kept you up on Tuesday. And Wednesday. I know you ran it under the cold tap at Silas' bar until Marcus asked if you'd burned yourself on the coffee machine." He came around the counter. I let him, God help me, because my feet had made their decision somewhere south of my brain. "May I?" He didn't wait for permission. His fingers closed around my wrist, and eight months collapsed into the width of his thumb against my pulse. Cedar and smoke. His hands were still careful, still impossibly gentle for a man with dried blood on his cuff, and my body remembered all of it at once, every hour I'd spent telling myself I'd imagined the weight of them. The scar had changed. The crescent had silvered, edges dark as ink, and under his touch it pulsed. Once. Twice. Heat crawled up my forearm like water finding its level. "When," I said. My voice came out flat, which took effort. "When did you learn what this is?" "Rory." "When." "Before you left." The word went through me cleaner than any blade in that cane. I pulled my wrist free and put the counter back between us, and this time I was shaking. "You let me walk out of that bar believing I was sold." "Yes." "Say why." He looked at the ceiling, at Eva's research notes, anywhere but at me. Then, quieter than I'd ever heard him: "Because the man I paid keeps what he buys, and he keeps it by watching. A woman who ran from Lucien Moreau was a woman with a grudge. Believable. A woman who stayed beside me was a woman worth following home." His jaw worked. "And if I'd told you what you are, you'd have asked how I knew. The answer to that question would have put a second name in his ledger. Eva's." The heat in my arm spiked. I gasped, and the scar flared silver through my sleeve, and the room filled with the smell of a struck match. Smoke curled from my skin, thin and grey, writing something in the air that I couldn't read. Lucien swore in French, then Italian, then something that made Ptolemy scream and bolt deeper into the paper. "Lucien." "Take your hand off the counter." Below us, the curry house music stopped. Mid-song. Brick Lane did not go quiet at dinner hour, not for fire alarms, not for the police, not for anything. Then footsteps on the stairs. Except there was no weight to them, no creak on the seventh step, the step that creaked for everyone, every time, without exception. The footsteps stopped outside the door. "Lucien." "I see it." The blade slid from the cane with a whisper, thin and bright, and he stepped in front of me, one arm sweeping me back behind the line of his shoulders. "Behind me. Now." The first deadbolt turned.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"I'd ever [ever]"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.24
leniency0.48
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.04
95.90% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1220
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.11% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1220
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"silk"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"pulsed"
count1
5
word"footsteps"
count2
6
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"silk"
2"pulse"
3"weight"
4"pulsed"
5"footsteps"
6"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences73
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences110
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen51
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1220
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount778
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.51
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Eva3
Ptolemy3
Da1
God1
French1
Italian1
Lane1
Lucien4
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Da"
4"God"
5"Lucien"
places
0"French"
1"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1220
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences110
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean21.79
std22.26
cv1.022
sampleLengths
013
161
21
37
418
511
641
729
812
911
1024
1179
124
1322
1423
1567
167
172
1854
198
206
2132
221
2319
2420
255
2624
272
281
2914
3043
3159
327
337
3458
3565
3630
3718
381
391
403
4130
4212
431
442
4593
4644
4718
481
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"been reserved"
33.33% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs120
matches
0"was leaking"
1"was reading"
2"was shaking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences110
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount780
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.03717948717948718
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0038461538461538464
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences110
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences110
mean11.09
std9.53
cv0.859
sampleLengths
013
127
22
32
411
58
62
79
81
97
1010
118
1211
138
1425
158
1617
174
188
1912
205
212
224
2310
2414
255
2619
2718
2812
2925
304
3110
3212
3315
348
3530
3611
3726
387
392
4017
4114
4223
438
446
4511
4621
471
482
494
83.03% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.5363636363636364
totalSentences110
uniqueOpeners59
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences62
matches
0"Somewhere in the paper avalanche,"
1"Then, quieter than I'd ever"
2"Then footsteps on the stairs."
ratio0.048
52.26% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences62
matches
0"I opened the door on"
1"I pushed the door shut"
2"His cane tip met the"
3"I shoved the door."
4"It gave, then stopped again"
5"I should have said no."
6"I stepped back instead, and"
7"I kept the kitchen counter"
8"He set the cane against"
9"My knuckles ached"
10"I looked down and realised"
11"He moved along the counter,"
12"We orbited the till like"
13"I laughed, and it came"
14"He watched me the whole"
15"He straightened from the counter"
16"My hand moved before my"
17"He came around the counter"
18"I let him, God help"
19"He didn't wait for permission."
ratio0.419
40.65% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences62
matches
0"I opened the door on"
1"Lucien Moreau filled the corridor"
2"Platinum hair slicked back without"
3"Blood had dried brown along"
4"A man who was leaking"
5"I pushed the door shut"
6"His cane tip met the"
7"The door stopped an inch"
8"The amber eye crinkled"
9"The black one stayed fixed"
10"I shoved the door."
11"It gave, then stopped again"
12"The pin lowered an inch."
13"I should have said no."
14"I stepped back instead, and"
15"Eva's books climbed the walls"
16"The curry house below breathed"
17"I kept the kitchen counter"
18"He set the cane against"
19"My knuckles ached"
ratio0.839
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.04
leniency0.08
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.2761%