Run: 2026-09-24-01M39WZY38A1V2ER2S4QVQ8Z5J

Run Details

Duration:
6m 39s
Cost:
$0.028115
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain had stripped Frith Street down to its bones. Neon doubled itself in every puddle, and the green sign above the Raven's Nest bled its colour across the lot of them, so the pavement ran green all the way to the corner. Inside, the regulars kept their posts: two old men at the dartboard, a couple in the corner booth splitting a plate of chips and a silence. Old maps papered the walls, and black-and-white photographs, faces gone to grain. Silas stood at the till with the week's ledger open, the silver signet ring turning slow circles on his right hand while the numbers declined to cooperate. The door opened, and the rain came in with it. "Delivery for Blackwood. Golden Empress." The voice reached him before the face did. A Welsh vowel worn thin at the edges, sanded down by two years of London. He looked up from the ledger. Courier's jacket, rain-dark at the shoulders. Helmet under one arm. Black hair flattened and stuck at the jaw. She set the insulated bag on the bar and pulled the order slip free, and when she reached across for his pen, her sleeve rode back half an inch. A crescent scar, small and pale, left wrist. The ledger could wait. He watched her sign — L, then a surname that belonged to nobody — and had a glass in his hand before he'd decided anything at all. "Sit down. First drink's the house's. You're the first courier this month who hasn't tried to sell me a phone." "I'm working." "Your work just walked in with you." He poured the Irish — her father's brand, stocked all these years for reasons that had nothing to do with taste. "The road will keep. So will the food. It's paid for." She looked at the glass. Then the door. Then the two old men at the darts, the couple in the booth, the bookshelf at the back that never sat quite flush with the wall. She took the stool facing the entrance, both heels on the rail, and lifted the whiskey without ceremony. Neat. No flinch. At fifteen she'd drunk warm cider at her father's table and pulled a face like the cider had insulted her family. He came around the end of the bar, and his left knee lodged its usual objection; he let the limp have its way and took the stool two down from hers. "Laila." "That's what the slip says." "Slips say whatever people need them to." He turned his own glass a quarter-circle. "Your mother holds a glass like that. Thumb over the rim. Like it might go off." Her thumb stayed where it was. Her eyes came up — bright blue, the one thing this city hadn't managed to dim — and did the arithmetic on his face. The beard gone grey at the flanks. The hair matching. A bar where there used to be airports. "Do I know you?" "You told me once, at your father's kitchen table, that the law was just stories everyone had agreed to believe. You were going to write better ones." The glass stopped halfway to her mouth. For a heartbeat her mouth moved toward a shape it used to know — the first inch of a laugh — then she filed it away somewhere and it was gone. "Si." "Hello, Rory." "You got old." "You got careful." He nodded at her stool, at the door at her back. "You used to sit with the window behind you. Said the light was better for reading." "The light's better for exits now." "That scar came off a bicycle bell, if I remember. You were nine. The bike was stationary." "It was parked on a hill." A pause. "You remember that, and not how to use a phone." "I remember everything. The phone was the one thing I was asked to give up." Something crossed her face — he'd have called it guilt in a younger woman; now he didn't presume to name it. "Four months you've been up those stairs." Her glass came down. "You knew." "I know the weight of every foot in this building. Yours pauses on the third step. The board's been loose since March, and you've learned its rhythm." "I didn't know it was yours at first. The listing never said. Then I saw you through the window doing the till, and I—" She turned the glass a full rotation on the bar. "I stayed anyway. That has to count for something." "It counts for a staircase neither of us has climbed." The dartboard thudded. One of the old men cheered himself, and nobody joined him. "The lilies." Her voice had gone somewhere flat. "White ones. No card. My mother decided they were from a client. I decided they were from you. Nobody else from that part of his life still had our address." "I wasn't sure the door would be open to me." "It wouldn't have been. Doors open from both sides, Si." He took a drink to buy a second. Outside, a bus went past and dragged its light along the window. "And Prague happened, and you vanished. Dad stopped saying your name in the house. For years I thought he hated you. Then I read between the lines of the inquest coverage and decided he was protecting you. Then I decided it was the other way round." "It was both, some weeks." The signet ring turned once, full circle, under his thumb. "A man I was bringing home didn't make it to the plane. Your father spent the best part of a year making sure the people who came asking found nothing and no one. He paid for that in ways I wasn't permitted to watch. Afterward he asked me for one thing. That my work never touch his family again. Staying away was the promise." "And you kept it." "I kept it the way men keep promises that cost nothing. Right up until the cost arrived, and then I paid it in silence." He looked at the maps on the wall, the grain of old faces, anywhere else. "One of Cheung's girls mentioned a new courier six weeks after you moved in. Reads case law on her breaks. Sleeps with the window open in January. I did the maths on the address, and then I sat down here with a ledger and watched you carry boxes past my window for four months." Her jaw worked once. "Why?" "Because I'd promised him. Because a promise from me is what put your father—" He stopped. Started smaller. "Because I hadn't earned the stairs." The whiskey was gone. She set the glass down with the care of someone returning a borrowed weapon. The bag sat between them on the bar, and the smell of star anise and fried dough had gone from commerce to memory. "You watch hands now. You used to watch faces. You'd have made a hell of a barrister — you read a room like a brief." "Faces lie by arrangement. Hands are honest." He left that where it fell. Some doors you don't knock on twice in one night. "Jennifer still teaching?" "Retired. She thinks I'm in marketing." The dartboard thudded again. She looked at the rows of bottles the way she'd once looked at statute books — indexing, filing, finding nothing she wanted. "I had it all planned at fifteen. Called to the bar by twenty-six. Silk by fifty. A judgeship if the mood took me. Dad had the chambers picked out in his head. I'd argue my first case and he'd sit at the back like it was a school play." "You're twenty-five." "Give me a year to miss the deadline properly." "The girl at my kitchen table filled every silence in a room. You spend them like a miser now." "Silence is cheaper than it used to be." She pulled her gloves from her jacket pocket, put them back, took them out again. "I nearly swapped this shift three times this week." "Why didn't you?" "Because I wanted to know if you'd recognise me." The bright eyes held his and didn't blink. "You did. Inside six seconds. I haven't decided yet whether that's a comfort or an indictment." "Comfort." He let the word stand there on the bar between them, and didn't reach for it again. She looked at the door at the back, the one that opened on the stairs to the flat, then at him. "The third step's been loose since March. I kept meaning to fix it." "I fixed it." He looked at her. "Four months I've lived above a spy. You think I don't own a screwdriver?" A breath went out of her, long and unarmoured. "I fix things when nobody's watching. It's the watching I never learned."
created_at"2026-09-24T14:26:57.267Z" 9/24/2026, 2:26:57 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"The signet ring turned once [once]"
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.207
leniency0.414
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.034
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1463
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
79.49% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1463
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"silence"
count4
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"silk"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"weight"
2"silk"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences61
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences61
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences106
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen64
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1473
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions8
wordCount732
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.14
worstName"Frith"
maxWindowNameDensity0
worstWindowName(null)
discoveredNames
Frith1
Street1
Raven1
Nest1
Welsh1
London1
Irish1
Started1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
places
0"Frith"
1"Street"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1473
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs65
mean22.66
std21.27
cv0.939
sampleLengths
0108
110
25
329
447
58
631
720
82
939
1052
1124
1231
131
145
1530
1648
174
1827
1938
201
212
223
2330
246
2517
2618
2715
2821
297
306
3127
3243
3310
3414
3538
3610
3710
3820
3946
4079
414
4293
435
4424
4541
4625
477
4816
493
93.76% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences61
matches
0"was gone"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs114
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences106
ratio0.066
matches
0"He watched her sign — L, then a surname that belonged to nobody — and had a glass in his hand before he'd decided anything at all."
1"\"Your work just walked in with you.\" He poured the Irish — her father's brand, stocked all these years for reasons that had nothing to do with taste."
2"He came around the end of the bar, and his left knee lodged its usual objection; he let the limp have its way and took the stool two down from hers."
3"Her eyes came up — bright blue, the one thing this city hadn't managed to dim — and did the arithmetic on his face."
4"For a heartbeat her mouth moved toward a shape it used to know — the first inch of a laugh — then she filed it away somewhere and it was gone."
5"Something crossed her face — he'd have called it guilt in a younger woman; now he didn't presume to name it."
6"She looked at the rows of bottles the way she'd once looked at statute books — indexing, filing, finding nothing she wanted."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount727
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.027510316368638238
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.001375515818431912
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences106
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences106
mean13.9
std12.05
cv0.867
sampleLengths
010
133
226
312
427
510
65
78
815
96
106
114
128
1329
148
154
1627
1720
182
1928
2011
215
223
2326
2418
251
262
2721
2831
291
305
3114
3216
336
3424
357
363
378
384
3927
407
4131
421
432
443
4514
4616
476
4817
498
64.15% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.42452830188679247
totalSentences106
uniqueOpeners45
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences56
matches
0"Then the door."
1"Then the two old men"
ratio0.036
48.57% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences56
matches
0"He looked up from the"
1"She set the insulated bag"
2"He watched her sign —"
3"He poured the Irish —"
4"She looked at the glass."
5"She took the stool facing"
6"He came around the end"
7"He turned his own glass"
8"Her thumb stayed where it"
9"Her eyes came up —"
10"He nodded at her stool,"
11"Her glass came down."
12"She turned the glass a"
13"Her voice had gone somewhere"
14"He took a drink to"
15"He looked at the maps"
16"Her jaw worked once."
17"She set the glass down"
18"He left that where it"
19"She looked at the rows"
ratio0.429
40.36% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences56
matches
0"The rain had stripped Frith"
1"Neon doubled itself in every"
2"Silas stood at the till"
3"The door opened, and the"
4"The voice reached him before"
5"A Welsh vowel worn thin"
6"He looked up from the"
7"Courier's jacket, rain-dark at the"
8"Helmet under one arm."
9"She set the insulated bag"
10"A crescent scar, small and"
11"The ledger could wait."
12"He watched her sign —"
13"He poured the Irish —"
14"She looked at the glass."
15"She took the stool facing"
16"He came around the end"
17"He turned his own glass"
18"Her thumb stayed where it"
19"Her eyes came up —"
ratio0.839
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He watched her sign — L, then a surname that belonged to nobody — and had a glass in his hand before he'd decided anything at all."
83.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He looked, the grain of old faces, anywhere else"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.9889%