| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1347 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 36.90% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1347 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "footsteps" | | 3 | "echo" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "perfect" | | 6 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 101 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 101 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 104 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 57 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1360 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 19 | | wordCount | 1314 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 0.23 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Robin | 1 | | Hood | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Rory | 3 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 1 | | Heathrow | 1 | | Londoners | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Victorian | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Empress" | | 3 | "Londoners" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Victorian" |
| | places | | 0 | "Robin" | | 1 | "Hood" | | 2 | "Lane" | | 3 | "Golden" | | 4 | "Richmond" | | 5 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 75.37% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like wearing a compass needle that" | | 1 | "looked like closed eyes" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1360 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 42.5 | | std | 28.31 | | cv | 0.666 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 37 | | 1 | 122 | | 2 | 71 | | 3 | 58 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 74 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 65 | | 10 | 97 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 45 | | 15 | 45 | | 16 | 55 | | 17 | 50 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 72 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 31 | | 22 | 36 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 78 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 74 | | 27 | 25 | | 28 | 61 | | 29 | 34 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 44 |
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| 91.37% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "been chained" | | 1 | "were gone" | | 2 | "were cropped" | | 3 | "was gone " |
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| 63.95% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 196 | | matches | | 0 | "was keeping" | | 1 | "wasn't following" | | 2 | "was running" | | 3 | "wasn't looking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 104 | | ratio | 0.125 | | matches | | 0 | "Richmond sat under the flight path to Heathrow; planes dragged their sound across this grass all night, every night, a tide Londoners stopped hearing years ago." | | 1 | "Hundreds of them lived in the park — she'd startled white rumps out of the bracken a dozen times on night deliveries — and the meadows here were cropped close by their grazing." | | 2 | "Moss climbed their flanks in patterns too regular to be accidental — spirals, she thought, then made herself stop thinking it." | | 3 | "Pressure closed over her ears; she worked her jaw and it released, and then the cold was gone — gone entirely, replaced by a warmth that had no source, air the temperature of breath." | | 4 | "The codex — no." | | 5 | "And the silence after her voice was different from the silence before it — it had stopped being empty." | | 6 | "The shape returned — two stones to the left now." | | 7 | "Each one landed soft and vanished — no echo, no carry, sound falling dead an inch from her boot." | | 8 | "When she stopped, it stopped — after hers." | | 9 | "Its pulse had matched her own since the night it arrived — she'd noticed the sync without ever meaning to, stone and heartbeat keeping the same time like two clocks on a wall." | | 10 | "Then it wasn't following her at all; it was keeping time with the slower rhythm, the patient one, beating in perfect time with the thing that breathed between the oaks." | | 11 | "Cold flooded in from the ground up, and her next breath came out as fog — here, inside the ring, where winter wasn't supposed to reach — and the sweetness in the smell thickened until it lay on the back of her tongue." | | 12 | "She kept her eyes wide and fixed on it, and it stayed — a tall pallor in the dark, featureless at this distance, at any distance, and she understood with a calm that frightened her more than screaming would have that it only existed where she wasn't looking, and that it was running out of places to be." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1304 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 38 | | adverbRatio | 0.029141104294478526 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006134969325153374 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 104 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 104 | | mean | 13.08 | | std | 11.21 | | cv | 0.857 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 37 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 33 | | 4 | 32 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 34 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 33 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 34 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 30 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 59.87% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 15 | | diversityRatio | 0.44660194174757284 | | totalSentences | 103 | | uniqueOpeners | 46 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "Then it woke, and every" | | 1 | "Just wind through winter grass," | | 2 | "Then a full beat." | | 3 | "Then it wasn't following her" | | 4 | "Then the warmth drained out" |
| | ratio | 0.057 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "She noticed the silence before" | | 1 | "She said it out loud" | | 2 | "She stepped between the two" | | 3 | "Her phone read 11:52." | | 4 | "She pocketed it and walked" | | 5 | "Her voice came out flat" | | 6 | "She tucked the phone away" | | 7 | "It had the quality of" | | 8 | "She kept her eyes forward" | | 9 | "It didn't drift into view" | | 10 | "It arrived, the way a" | | 11 | "She stopped looking at them." | | 12 | "Her footsteps had been wrong" | | 13 | "She held her breath and" | | 14 | "Her own pulse." | | 15 | "Her thumb found the crescent" | | 16 | "Its pulse had matched her" | | 17 | "She hadn't seen it cross." | | 18 | "It had been on her" | | 19 | "She stopped blinking." |
| | ratio | 0.239 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 59 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "The gates at Robin Hood" | | 1 | "A coin of heat pressed" | | 2 | "The pendant had arrived eight" | | 3 | "She noticed the silence before" | | 4 | "Richmond sat under the flight" | | 5 | "Rory stood in the dark" | | 6 | "The deer were gone too." | | 7 | "Hundreds of them lived in" | | 8 | "Tonight the grass stood long" | | 9 | "She said it out loud" | | 10 | "The warmth in the pendant" | | 11 | "The sarsens bulged through the" | | 12 | "The trees were older than" | | 13 | "Moss climbed their flanks in" | | 14 | "The Heartstone flared against her" | | 15 | "She stepped between the two" | | 16 | "The air changed the way" | | 17 | "Pressure closed over her ears;" | | 18 | "The smell hit her next:" | | 19 | "Wildflowers covered the clearing." |
| | ratio | 0.67 | |
| 56.82% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 80.75% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "By the third it climbed whenever she faced south-west, and cooled when she turned away, until walking anywhere else felt like wearing a compass needle that want…" | | 1 | "The frost-free grass behind her stood upright and smooth, as if she'd never crossed it." | | 2 | "Then it wasn't following her at all; it was keeping time with the slower rhythm, the patient one, beating in perfect time with the thing that breathed between t…" | | 3 | "She kept her eyes wide and fixed on it, and it stayed — a tall pallor in the dark, featureless at this distance, at any distance, and she understood with a calm…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Her thumb found, the old ache anchoring her" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.167 | | leniency | 0.333 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |