Run: 2026-09-24-01M39X4D1BB3KF5YJ086Y5Z29Q

Run Details

Duration:
57.1s
Cost:
$0.004135
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory ducked under the low arm of the boundary oak and the city dropped away behind her like a lid settling over a pot. The clearing opened in front of her, silver-lit, though she couldn't have said where the light came from. No moon overhead, just a smear of cloud. Wildflowers ran to her knees across the whole hollow — foxglove and something she didn't recognize, pale as bone — blooming fat and open in the middle of November. The Heartstone pulsed against her sternum, quicker now, a second heartbeat layered under her own. "Okay." She said it out loud just to hear a voice that belonged to her. "I came. Whoever left this at the Empress, with my name on the box — Malphora, very funny — I'm here. Let's talk." The grove did not answer. It did something worse. It listened. Richmond Park sat inside London, and London never slept quiet. She should have heard the low drone of the A316, a plane peeling into Heathrow, a dog barking two counties over. Nothing reached her. Her boots pressed into the grass and the sound of each step lasted exactly as long as it should and no longer, as if the grove permitted it and then withdrew the permission. She pulled out her phone. 2:14 a.m., no signal. She thumbed the screen dark, raised it again. 2:14. The battery icon read full, then half, then full again while she watched it. "Great." She pocketed the phone and walked to the centre of the clearing, where the grass grew in a perfect ring of bare earth. The pendant burned hotter with every step. Whoever had left it on Yu-Fei's counter — wrapped in brown paper, tied with string, no note but her name — had wanted her to follow it here. Fine. She'd followed it. She was a big believer in confronting a problem before it grew roots. Something dripped, off to her left. A slow, deliberate drip, like water off a tap into tin. There was no stream in the grove. She'd been here in daylight, back in September, when the place had seemed like nothing more than a pretty hollow with too many flowers. She turned toward the sound. The drip stopped. She stood in the dark with her head cocked, counting seconds. At the tenth, it started again — three drops, evenly spaced, patient. Then it moved. Closer. Behind her right shoulder. Rory turned in a full circle, slow, fists up out of a habit she'd thought she'd buried with Evan. Nothing between her and the standing oaks but flowers. Nothing behind the flowers but darkness, and the darkness was the kind that had weight to it, the kind that sat against the eyes like a hand. One more step, she told herself. Then you leave. She took the step, and behind her, half a beat late, something took one too. She froze. It didn't. A single soft sound — grass compressing under weight — and then stillness, the way a person goes still when they realise they've given themselves away. "Hello?" Her voice cracked on the second syllable. She cleared her throat and tried again, steadier. "I can hear you. So let's skip the part where I stand here pretending I can't." The silence stretched. Somewhere in it, faint as a memory of a sound, someone began to hum. A lullaby. Four rising notes, four falling. Her mother used to hum it in the kitchen in Cardiff, back before everything. Rory had never told anyone in London that. She had never told anyone anything. The humming came from no direction. It came from the flowers. She looked down. The blooms nearest her feet had turned — every one of them, every pale open face, angled toward her. She lifted her left foot and stepped sideways, and the flowers moved with her, a slow ripple passing through the whole clearing as hundreds of small faces swung to keep her centred. Rory's mouth went dry. She walked backwards, fast, toward the boundary oaks, and the oaks did not come to meet her. She counted her strides. Twenty. Thirty. The nearest trunk stayed the same size against the dark, a coin held at arm's length. The clearing had grown around her the way a mouth grows around a held breath. Her watch — a cheap thing, analogue, never wrong — said she'd been inside for nine minutes. Her calves burned like she'd climbed a mountain. Her jacket stuck to her back. "Right." She stopped. Laughed, one short ugly syllable with nothing behind it. "Time's funny here. I know. I knew that coming in, didn't I? So that's fine. That's fine." The pendant flared. Not a pulse this time — a sustained burn, crimson light leaking through her fingers where she'd clutched it, and in that light she saw the edge of something at the border of her vision, between two of the standing oaks. A paleness. Tall. The suggestion of a shoulder, a tilt of head, cloth or skin or petal. She snapped her gaze to it and the space held nothing but the dark between the trunks. "I saw you." Her voice came out flat and small. "I saw you, so you can stop with the — the games. I'm not the one. Whatever you want, I'm not—" "Laila." The name arrived inside her ear, not at it, a whisper with the warmth of breath and none of the sound. Only one living person called her that. Eva's voice, but wrong — Eva's voice slowed down and stretched thin, like a recording played at half speed, like Eva's voice remembered second-hand by something that had only ever heard it through a wall. Rory ran. The grass grabbed at her ankles. The flowers turned faster than she could move, a wave of pale faces sweeping ahead of her, marking her path as though the grove had already decided where the path went. The Heartstone blazed through her shirt, and its warmth spread outward, down her arm, into her ribs, and with it came a feeling she had no name for — a recognition, a rightness, the grove and the stone and the dark agreeing about something, and her name, her other name, in that agreement. She hit the tree line where the oaks stood. Her palms slapped bark. She looked up into the branches, hunting the gap she'd ducked through, the crooked arm she'd used as a doorway. The branches overhead wove shut and seamless, a ceiling, a lid. Behind her, in the middle of the clearing, four notes rose and four notes fell. Then the humming stopped, and a voice she knew — her own voice, word for word, from minutes ago — said: "Okay. I came." "Laila." The whisper came from directly behind her this time, from the bark itself, from under her feet, from the pendant against her chest. "You kept it warm. We kept you warmer."
created_at"2026-09-24T14:29:23.64Z" 9/24/2026, 2:29:23 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.385
leniency0.769
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.63% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1143
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
56.26% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1143
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"perfect"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count2
6
word"warmth"
count2
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"perfect"
2"weight"
3"silence"
4"pulse"
5"whisper"
6"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences91
filterMatches
0"watch "
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen52
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1161
ratio0
matches(empty)
62.50% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"One more step, she told herself."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount1064
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.47
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
November1
Heartstone2
Park1
London3
Heathrow1
Yu-Fei1
September1
Evan1
Cardiff1
Laughed1
Eva3
Rory5
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Yu-Fei"
2"Evan"
3"Eva"
4"Rory"
places
0"Park"
1"London"
2"Heathrow"
3"September"
4"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.861
wordCount1161
matches
0"no note but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean32.25
std22.88
cv0.71
sampleLengths
024
170
238
311
467
532
61
775
817
936
103
1131
1255
139
1415
1530
1632
1717
1835
1911
2054
2158
2231
2329
2461
2517
2631
271
2863
292
3090
3133
3211
3336
343
3532
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs162
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount15
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences99
ratio0.101
matches
0"Wildflowers ran to her knees across the whole hollow — foxglove and something she didn't recognize, pale as bone — blooming fat and open in the middle of November."
1"Whoever had left it on Yu-Fei's counter — wrapped in brown paper, tied with string, no note but her name — had wanted her to follow it here."
2"At the tenth, it started again — three drops, evenly spaced, patient."
3"A single soft sound — grass compressing under weight — and then stillness, the way a person goes still when they realise they've given themselves away."
4"The blooms nearest her feet had turned — every one of them, every pale open face, angled toward her."
5"Her watch — a cheap thing, analogue, never wrong — said she'd been inside for nine minutes."
6"Not a pulse this time — a sustained burn, crimson light leaking through her fingers where she'd clutched it, and in that light she saw the edge of something at the border of her vision, between two of the standing oaks."
7"Eva's voice, but wrong — Eva's voice slowed down and stretched thin, like a recording played at half speed, like Eva's voice remembered second-hand by something that had only ever heard it through a wall."
8"The Heartstone blazed through her shirt, and its warmth spread outward, down her arm, into her ribs, and with it came a feeling she had no name for — a recognition, a rightness, the grove and the stone and the dark agreeing about something, and her name, her other name, in that agreement."
9"Then the humming stopped, and a voice she knew — her own voice, word for word, from minutes ago — said:"
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1052
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.030418250950570342
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005703422053231939
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean11.73
std10.08
cv0.859
sampleLengths
024
118
28
329
415
515
623
75
84
92
1010
1121
123
1333
145
154
168
171
1814
191
2023
217
2228
231
243
2513
266
2711
287
2924
305
313
3211
3312
343
351
364
3719
389
3927
406
413
4215
432
442
4526
468
478
4816
493
48.98% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.3673469387755102
totalSentences98
uniqueOpeners36
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences78
matches
0"Then it moved."
1"Then you leave."
2"Somewhere in it, faint as"
3"Only one living person called"
4"Then the humming stopped, and"
ratio0.064
66.15% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences78
matches
0"She said it out loud"
1"It did something worse."
2"She should have heard the"
3"Her boots pressed into the"
4"She pulled out her phone."
5"She thumbed the screen dark,"
6"She pocketed the phone and"
7"She'd followed it."
8"She was a big believer"
9"She'd been here in daylight,"
10"She turned toward the sound."
11"She stood in the dark"
12"She took the step, and"
13"Her voice cracked on the"
14"She cleared her throat and"
15"Her mother used to hum"
16"She had never told anyone"
17"It came from the flowers."
18"She looked down."
19"She lifted her left foot"
ratio0.385
62.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences78
matches
0"Rory ducked under the low"
1"The clearing opened in front"
2"Wildflowers ran to her knees"
3"The Heartstone pulsed against her"
4"She said it out loud"
5"The grove did not answer."
6"It did something worse."
7"Richmond Park sat inside London,"
8"She should have heard the"
9"Nothing reached her."
10"Her boots pressed into the"
11"She pulled out her phone."
12"She thumbed the screen dark,"
13"The battery icon read full,"
14"She pocketed the phone and"
15"The pendant burned hotter with"
16"She'd followed it."
17"She was a big believer"
18"Something dripped, off to her"
19"A slow, deliberate drip, like"
ratio0.795
64.10% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences78
matches
0"Whoever had left it on"
ratio0.013
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Eva's voice, but wrong — Eva's voice slowed down and stretched thin, like a recording played at half speed, like Eva's voice remembered second-hand by something…"
1"The flowers turned faster than she could move, a wave of pale faces sweeping ahead of her, marking her path as though the grove had already decided where the pa…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.077
leniency0.154
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.5394%