Run: 2026-09-24-01M39XANMKR6Q3T0TWJ4GBKCDK

Run Details

Duration:
1m 17s
Cost:
$0.005502
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain came down in ropes, hammering the awnings along Old Compton Street and turning the pavement into a mirror for the town's lights. The green neon above the Raven's Nest buzzed and bled its color across every puddle on the block, and under that smeared glow, Harlow Quinn stood in a doorway with her collar up and her eyes on the bar's side door. Three nights of surveillance had taught her the rhythm of the place. Deliveries came late, always late, always carried by the same man in a yellow rain mac. At 11:47 her watch confirmed the hour and the side door swung open and there he was, duffel bag slung crosswise over his chest, head down against the weather. She stepped out of the doorway. "Metropolitan Police. Stop right there." The courier looked up. Whatever he saw in her face — the cropped salt-and-pepper hair plastered dark with rain, the jaw set like a draught excluder rail — decided it for him. He ran. "Control, this is Quinn." She took off after him, boots slapping water off the cobbles. "Foot pursuit, male suspect, yellow mac, heading east on Frith Street. I need backup." "Quinn, Control. Copy your pursuit. Nearest unit is twelve minutes out." Twelve minutes. She'd lose him in four. He cut left through Golden Square, vaulted a flower bed that some council had planted to make the place look civil, and she came around the corner in time to see him shoulder through a gap in the hoarding around a building site. She followed, the plywood edge catching her shoulder, and came out onto a street she didn't bother to name. He was twenty meters ahead, then fifteen, then the gap widened again as he found a second wind. She was forty-one years old and eighteen years of desk coffee sat heavy in her knees, but she ran on the fuel that had kept her running for three years now, and that fuel didn't tire. "Who's the package for?" she shouted, lungs burning. "Herrera? Is that who's paying you?" The courier glanced back. Rain streamed off the hood and he laughed through it, a bright, ugly sound. "You should go home, Detective. This street doesn't go anywhere you want to be." "Then stop running and show me how wrong I am." He cut north on Tottenham Court Road, weaving through a knot of late-night drinkers outside a kebab shop, scattering them like pigeons. She kept the yellow mac fixed in her vision and let the city blur around it. "Control, Quinn. Suspect turning north, crossing into Camden. Where's my backup?" "Twenty minutes, Quinn. Traffic on Euston Road is gridlocked." Twenty minutes. She keyed off the radio and put her head down. He made a mistake at the canal. Or he made a choice — she never worked out which. He left the main road, ducked down a service lane behind the market stalls, and sprinted along a stretch of hoarding that stank of urine and wet creosote. At the end of it, where a chain-link fence should have stopped him, a section of the construction barrier hung open like a door, and beyond it concrete steps dropped into the dark beneath an old railway arch. A disused station. She'd walked past it a hundred times without once seeing the steps, and now she couldn't unsee them. He took them three at a time. She took them faster. At the bottom, a steel gate filled the mouth of a pedestrian tunnel, and beyond the gate, the tunnel ran straight into black. The courier pressed something small and pale against a padlock mounted where a keyhole should have been. The lock fell open with a sound like a knuckle cracking. He hauled the gate wide, squeezed through — and the thing he'd used slipped from his fingers, bounced once on the wet concrete, and skittered into a puddle. He didn't stop for it. The gate started to swing shut behind him and she caught it with her palm, the metal cold enough to sting, and stood there breathing hard while rain dripped off her chin and the tunnel breathed warm air back at her. The air smelled wrong. Tallow and ozone and something underneath it, fishy and mineral, like a market at dawn in a city she'd never visited. She crouched and fished the object out of the puddle. A token the size of a coin, carved from something dense and yellow-white, grained like bone. A human femur, maybe, or close enough that she wiped her hand on her coat. "Control, this is Quinn." Static. She tried again, closer to the mouth of the tunnel. "Control, do you copy? Quinn." The radio gave her nothing but a hiss that rose and fell like surf. Underground. No signal, no backup, no map reference she could give them even if they could hear her. From somewhere down the tunnel came a sound that stopped her hand halfway to her holster. Voices. Hundreds of them, layered over each other, men and women and things that were neither, speaking languages she half-recognized and some she didn't. A bell rang twice. Somewhere deeper, something sang — one long, clear note that no human throat should have held for so long. The courier had a twenty-meter head start and a destination. Backup had a twenty-minute ETA and no way through a gate that, when she pushed it, swung shut on its own and refused to open again until she pressed the bone token to the lock. She stood in the dark with the rain running off her shoulders and did the arithmetic she'd been avoiding since Frith Street. Wait, and the trail went cold and the gatekeeper — because there was always a gatekeeper — decided the pale woman with the radio wasn't welcome. Go in, and she went in alone, off the map, into a place that had swallowed three years of her life already without her ever knowing it existed. Morris's face came to her, the way it always did, in the photograph from the case file. The one taken outside a bar with a green neon sign. The one where the shadow behind him had more fingers than a shadow should. "Not this time," she told the photograph, and the tunnel, and herself. She keyed the radio one last time, knowing it was a dead letter, saying it anyway. "Quinn to Control. I'm entering an underground structure off Camden Lock, no map reference, tunnel mouth behind the construction hoarding on the service road. Send everybody. Send the army if you've got it." She clipped the radio to her belt. She fed the token to the padlock and the lock opened for her the way a hand opens, easy and eager, and warmth rolled up the steps and broke over her like water. The gate stood wide. The tunnel waited. Quinn checked the load on her weapon, set her jaw against the smell and the singing and the sound of the courier's footsteps already fading below, and took the stairs down into the noise.
created_at"2026-09-24T14:32:49.059Z" 9/24/2026, 2:32:49 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1175
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
87.23% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1175
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"structure"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"structure"
1"warmth"
2"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences67
matches(empty)
78.89% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences67
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"look"
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences76
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1182
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount1049
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.19
worstName"Street"
maxWindowNameDensity0.5
worstWindowName"Street"
discoveredNames
Old1
Compton1
Street2
Raven1
Nest1
Harlow1
Quinn2
Twelve1
Golden1
Square1
Tottenham1
Court1
Road1
Underground1
Frith1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Harlow"
3"Quinn"
4"Square"
places
0"Old"
1"Compton"
2"Street"
3"Golden"
4"Tottenham"
5"Court"
6"Road"
7"Frith"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1182
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"hoarding that stank"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean36.94
std31.69
cv0.858
sampleLengths
064
157
26
35
434
529
611
77
8116
914
1018
1114
1210
1338
1411
159
1612
17105
1811
19125
2025
2141
2252
2363
2445
2576
2642
2712
2816
2933
3047
3134
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs163
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences76
ratio0.066
matches
0"Whatever he saw in her face — the cropped salt-and-pepper hair plastered dark with rain, the jaw set like a draught excluder rail — decided it for him."
1"Or he made a choice — she never worked out which."
2"He hauled the gate wide, squeezed through — and the thing he'd used slipped from his fingers, bounced once on the wet concrete, and skittered into a puddle."
3"Somewhere deeper, something sang — one long, clear note that no human throat should have held for so long."
4"Wait, and the trail went cold and the gatekeeper — because there was always a gatekeeper — decided the pale woman with the radio wasn't welcome."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1051
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.029495718363463368
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0009514747859181732
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences76
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences76
mean15.55
std10.8
cv0.695
sampleLengths
023
141
212
316
429
56
65
74
828
92
1015
1114
1211
132
145
1543
1619
1718
1836
198
206
214
2214
2314
2410
2522
2616
2711
289
292
3010
317
3211
3328
3438
353
3618
377
384
3923
4017
4111
4228
435
4441
454
4621
4710
4816
4915
59.65% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.42105263157894735
totalSentences76
uniqueOpeners32
54.64% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences61
matches
0"Somewhere deeper, something sang —"
ratio0.016
56.07% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences61
matches
0"She stepped out of the"
1"She took off after him,"
2"She'd lose him in four."
3"He cut left through Golden"
4"She followed, the plywood edge"
5"He was twenty meters ahead,"
6"She was forty-one years old"
7"she shouted, lungs burning"
8"He cut north on Tottenham"
9"She kept the yellow mac"
10"She keyed off the radio"
11"He made a mistake at"
12"He left the main road,"
13"She'd walked past it a"
14"He took them three at"
15"She took them faster."
16"He hauled the gate wide,"
17"He didn't stop for it."
18"She crouched and fished the"
19"She tried again, closer to"
ratio0.41
41.97% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences61
matches
0"Rain came down in ropes,"
1"The green neon above the"
2"Deliveries came late, always late,"
3"She stepped out of the"
4"The courier looked up."
5"Whatever he saw in her"
6"She took off after him,"
7"She'd lose him in four."
8"He cut left through Golden"
9"She followed, the plywood edge"
10"He was twenty meters ahead,"
11"She was forty-one years old"
12"she shouted, lungs burning"
13"The courier glanced back."
14"Rain streamed off the hood"
15"He cut north on Tottenham"
16"She kept the yellow mac"
17"She keyed off the radio"
18"He made a mistake at"
19"He left the main road,"
ratio0.836
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"From somewhere down the tunnel came a sound that stopped her hand halfway to her holster."
1"Hundreds of them, layered over each other, men and women and things that were neither, speaking languages she half-recognized and some she didn't."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"She took off, boots slapping water off the cobbles"
1"she shouted, lungs burning"
78.57% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she shouted (shout)"
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.143
81.9008%