Run: 2026-09-24-01M39XGTTT5YC0T4X6K2MNMY22

Run Details

Duration:
2m 56s
Cost:
$0.015317
Provider:
AionLabs

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Frost silvered Richmond Park, and Isolde left no footprints in it. Rory checked twice. The grass behind the seer lay unbroken, every blade holding its rime of silver, while her own boots punched dark holes up the slope. Nyx kept pace beside her in solid form, six feet of shadow wearing a person's shape, wisps of dark peeling off their shoulders and sliding back like smoke with a memory. "How much farther?" Rory's breath tore apart in the wind. "Farther is a word for roads." Isolde didn't turn. Her hair reached her waist and moved without the wind's consent. "We are not on one yet." The stones rose out of the dark ahead. Seven monoliths of oak gone grey and hard as iron, each twice her height, lichen mapping their flanks in continents of green and gold. Spirals had been cut deep into every face, and beneath the spirals ran lines like writing — script that rearranged itself when she looked away. She laid a palm against the nearest stone. Warm. Blood-warm, on a December night that had turned her car doors into slabs. She snatched her hand back and wiped it on her coat. "They're alive." "They remember being." Isolde stopped between two of the monoliths and faced the gap. "Hold on to what I say next. Eat nothing. Drink nothing. And if the Grove offers you a gift, ask its price twice." "The first answer's a lure?" "The first answer is a courtesy. The second is the truth. Occasionally." Nyx halted at the line the stones drew across the earth. Their violet eyes dimmed, flared, dimmed again. "Look up, between them." The whisper arrived from everywhere at once and also, exactly, from their mouth. "The Veil hangs there. A shimmer, like heat off summer tarmac, stretched post to post. In June it will be a wall. Three nights short of the solstice, it is gauze. That is why the door opens for you tonight." Rory looked. She saw moon, branches, sky. Whatever the Shade saw stayed a Shade's secret. Nyx extended a hand, fingers unwinding like ribbon in water. "Your hand. I live between. This ground lives between. Two betweens can argue. Hold on to me and I keep my shape." She laced her fingers through theirs. Cool as a windowpane, and not entirely there. She stepped through. Pressure first — deep-water pressure, the kind that popped ears and squeezed behind the eyes — then every sound dropped away. The far hum of the A3. A plane dragging its lights toward Heathrow. Her own footsteps crunching frost. Gone, all of it, like a door swung shut on a party downstairs. For one stride she heard her own heartbeat. Then the Grove filled her ears with a hush like a held breath, and beneath the hush, a whisper of roots splitting stone. A forest's worth of growing, pressed thin. Warmth closed over her. December stayed somewhere behind her ribs; here the air tasted of honey and rain on hot stone, thick enough to chew. "Okay." She turned a full circle. "Okay. This is — okay." Grass glowed where she stepped. Each footfall pressed light out of the blades, a green-white flare that faded like the afterimage of a sparkler. Beyond her boots the meadow ran on and on, and it was blooming — in winter, under a winter moon — flowers in blues she had no names for, white ones with throats of gold, and every blossom in the nearest bed had turned to face her. All of them. As if the sun had come down and was wearing her coat. She checked her phone out of habit. 9:14. She blinked. 4:47. No signal. She put it away and did not take it out again. The moonsilver dagger at her hip had stopped being cold for the first time since Isolde had pressed it into her hands. Here it sat warm as a held palm. The Heartstone at her throat, by contrast, lay dark and silent against her skin. She pressed a thumb to it. "Pendant's asleep. Whatever's in here, it isn't Hel." "Fae soil." Nyx's edges had gone soft, bleeding shadow into the grass like ink into water. "Older than Hel's princes and twice as proud. Mind your manners. And keep your eyes on me. I am held together by attention in this place." "Then walk straight and stop being interesting." Isolde led them in. The trees were oaks here too, but oaks grown drunk on centuries — trunks wide as sheds, bark silvered and coiled into whorls that almost spelled something and never did. Light came from nowhere and everywhere at once, a moonless, sourceless glow, and motes of it drifted down through the branches with no wind to blame. Rory brushed a low-hanging stem studded with tiny white bells. They tolled. One clear note, then another, and the whole glade answered — harmonics rolling through the ground, up through her shins, into her teeth, a chord the size of a cathedral. She stood still until it faded. "Did you feel that?" "The Grove sings when it is pleased." Isolde touched a fern and it bowed. "It is rarely pleased. Do not let it go to your head." Deeper in, the oaks thinned around a clearing, and the tree at its center made the standing stones look like fence posts. The great oak's trunk could have swallowed a cottage. Its roots reared out of the earth and plunged back down like a wave frozen mid-break, and in its bark, at the height of Rory's eyes, knots had formed — dozens of them, arranged in rows, each one shaped like a closed eye. She turned to fix the way they'd come in her memory and found no stones, no gap, no frost-bright park. Only more grove, closing behind them like water behind a swimmer. "Where's the door?" Her voice cracked on the last word. "You did not lose it." Isolde's hand passed an inch above a root and cast no shadow. "The Grove borrows. It returns what it borrows, rested. Breathe." Rory breathed. Four counts in, four counts out, the way she'd taught herself in worse places than this. Between two roots, water. A basin of it, black and still, cupped in the wood like a held palm. Isolde stood at its edge and the water did not know she was there — no ripple, no reflection, though it gave back everything else. Rory leaned over. Stars looked back at her. The wrong stars. Her sky held one moon; the water held three, two white and one the colour of a bruise, hung over constellations no sailor had ever steered by. She was still counting moons when she saw the man. He stood beside her in the reflection, where Nyx stood beside her in the world. Grey-cloaked, hollow-cheeked, hair the brown of old paper, a beard gone ragged at the chin. Human. Exhausted. His eyes were closed, and even in still water, even in reflection, she could see the shape of the scars binding his wrists. "Rory." Nyx's whisper had lost its wind. "Why do you look at me like that?" She looked up — shadow, violet eyes, six feet of nothing solid. She looked down — the man, and beside him a woman in a winter coat with a crimson pendant at her throat, both lit by three moons. "Nyx." Her voice came out thin. "Look down." Nyx looked. Went still in the way shadow cannot hold stillness — every wisp of them frozen mid-drift, a photograph of smoke. "That man has been dead for three hundred years."
created_at"2026-09-24T14:36:10.985Z" 9/24/2026, 2:36:10 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Rory's breath tore apart [apart]"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.393
leniency0.786
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.071
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1258
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
76.15% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1258
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"whisper"
count3
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"footfall"
count1
highlights
0"whisper"
1"footsteps"
2"warmth"
3"footfall"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences88
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1271
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount1034
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.77
worstName"Isolde"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Isolde"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Isolde8
December2
Nyx7
Rory7
Shade2
Heathrow1
Grove1
Grass1
Heartstone1
Deeper1
persons
0"Isolde"
1"December"
2"Nyx"
3"Rory"
4"Shade"
5"Grove"
6"Grass"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Heathrow"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1271
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean28.24
std22.52
cv0.797
sampleLengths
011
158
210
326
457
533
62
737
85
912
1018
1157
1215
1332
1414
153
1690
1725
1811
1986
2024
2150
228
2342
247
2560
2642
276
284
2926
3074
3131
3210
3327
3418
3544
363
3735
3810
3955
4015
4139
428
4322
449
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
74.21% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs159
matches
0"was blooming "
1"was wearing"
2"was still counting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences105
ratio0.114
matches
0"Spirals had been cut deep into every face, and beneath the spirals ran lines like writing — script that rearranged itself when she looked away."
1"Pressure first — deep-water pressure, the kind that popped ears and squeezed behind the eyes — then every sound dropped away."
2"December stayed somewhere behind her ribs; here the air tasted of honey and rain on hot stone, thick enough to chew."
3"Beyond her boots the meadow ran on and on, and it was blooming — in winter, under a winter moon — flowers in blues she had no names for, white ones with throats of gold, and every blossom in the nearest bed had turned to face her."
4"The trees were oaks here too, but oaks grown drunk on centuries — trunks wide as sheds, bark silvered and coiled into whorls that almost spelled something and never did."
5"One clear note, then another, and the whole glade answered — harmonics rolling through the ground, up through her shins, into her teeth, a chord the size of a cathedral."
6"Its roots reared out of the earth and plunged back down like a wave frozen mid-break, and in its bark, at the height of Rory's eyes, knots had formed — dozens of them, arranged in rows, each one shaped like a closed eye."
7"Isolde stood at its edge and the water did not know she was there — no ripple, no reflection, though it gave back everything else."
8"Her sky held one moon; the water held three, two white and one the colour of a bruise, hung over constellations no sailor had ever steered by."
9"She looked up — shadow, violet eyes, six feet of nothing solid."
10"She looked down — the man, and beside him a woman in a winter coat with a crimson pendant at her throat, both lit by three moons."
11"Went still in the way shadow cannot hold stillness — every wisp of them frozen mid-drift, a photograph of smoke."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1031
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.03297769156159069
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.002909796314258002
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean12.1
std9.52
cv0.787
sampleLengths
011
13
224
331
410
59
611
76
88
924
1025
118
121
1313
1411
152
1614
1723
185
1912
2011
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2217
2340
242
255
268
2710
2822
296
308
313
3221
336
347
355
3613
378
3823
397
404
4121
426
435
445
4519
4647
473
4812
497
90.61% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.5728155339805825
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners59
86.58% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences77
matches
0"Then the Grove filled her"
1"Only more grove, closing behind"
ratio0.026
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences77
matches
0"Her hair reached her waist"
1"She laid a palm against"
2"She snatched her hand back"
3"Their violet eyes dimmed, flared,"
4"She saw moon, branches, sky."
5"She laced her fingers through"
6"She stepped through."
7"Her own footsteps crunching frost."
8"She turned a full circle"
9"She checked her phone out"
10"She put it away and"
11"She pressed a thumb to"
12"She stood still until it"
13"Its roots reared out of"
14"She turned to fix the"
15"Her voice cracked on the"
16"Her sky held one moon;"
17"She was still counting moons"
18"He stood beside her in"
19"His eyes were closed, and"
ratio0.299
63.90% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences77
matches
0"Frost silvered Richmond Park, and"
1"Rory checked twice."
2"The grass behind the seer"
3"Nyx kept pace beside her"
4"Rory's breath tore apart in"
5"Isolde didn't turn"
6"Her hair reached her waist"
7"The stones rose out of"
8"Spirals had been cut deep"
9"She laid a palm against"
10"She snatched her hand back"
11"Isolde stopped between two of"
12"Nyx halted at the line"
13"Their violet eyes dimmed, flared,"
14"The whisper arrived from everywhere"
15"She saw moon, branches, sky."
16"Whatever the Shade saw stayed"
17"Nyx extended a hand, fingers"
18"She laced her fingers through"
19"She stepped through."
ratio0.792
64.94% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences77
matches
0"As if the sun had"
ratio0.013
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Spirals had been cut deep into every face, and beneath the spirals ran lines like writing — script that rearranged itself when she looked away."
1"Blood-warm, on a December night that had turned her car doors into slabs."
2"Pressure first — deep-water pressure, the kind that popped ears and squeezed behind the eyes — then every sound dropped away."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
91.4768%