Run: 2026-09-25-01M3CKA7JSBBGXCND9QEGGXZ6Z

Run Details

Duration:
17.8s
Cost:
$0.016133
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest flickered once, twice, before settling into its usual hum. The door swung open, letting in a gust of damp London air and a woman who hesitated just inside the threshold. Rory brushed rain from her sleeves, her black hair slick with it, and scanned the room. The bar was quiet tonight—just a few regulars hunched over drinks, the low murmur of conversation swallowed by the crackle of the fireplace. She spotted Silas behind the counter, polishing a glass with slow, deliberate strokes. He looked up, nodded, and she returned it, making her way to her usual stool. The wood was worn smooth under her palms. Then she saw him. A man at the far end of the bar, his back to her, but the set of his shoulders was unmistakable. Broad, familiar. A laugh bubbled in her throat before she could stop it. “Evan?” The glass in Silas’ hand stilled. The man turned. Not Evan. Of course not. Evan was in Cardiff, or at least, that’s where he’d been the last time she’d checked. This man had the same build, the same dark hair, but his face was older, lined in ways she didn’t remember. His eyes—sharp, assessing—locked onto hers. “Rory?” Her breath caught. The voice was the same. Warm, rough around the edges. Daniel. Daniel Reeves. She hadn’t heard that voice in five years. He stood, the stool scraping against the floor. For a moment, neither moved. The distance between them felt like a chasm. “You look…” He trailed off, as if the words wouldn’t come. “Older?” she supplied, a half-smile tugging at her lips. “Different.” She laughed, but it was brittle. “So do you.” He did. The boy she’d known—all easy grins and reckless energy—was gone. This man wore a tailored coat, his posture rigid, like he was bracing against something. His hands were steady, though, as he lifted his drink and took a slow sip. Silas set a glass of whiskey in front of her without a word. She wrapped her fingers around it, the heat seeping into her skin. Daniel set his drink down. “I heard you left Cardiff.” “Heard correctly.” “And Evan?” Her fingers tightened around the glass. “Ancient history.” He exhaled, a sound that might’ve been relief. “Good.” She took a sip, the burn grounding her. “What brings you to London?” “Work.” He didn’t elaborate. She raised an eyebrow. “Still playing at being a journalist?” His jaw tightened. “Not playing.” The words hung between them. She remembered the way he’d talked about it back then—like it was a calling, not just a job. Like he’d change the world with his words. “You always were stubborn,” she said. “And you always were a coward.” The words hit like a slap. She flinched, the whiskey sloshing over the rim of her glass. Silas’ head snapped up, his gaze flicking between them. Rory shook her head slightly, a silent *I’m fine*. Daniel’s expression didn’t soften. “You just… disappeared. No word, no explanation. Just gone.” She set the glass down carefully. “You know why.” “Because of Evan?” His voice was low, controlled. “You could’ve told me. I could’ve helped.” “You were part of the reason I left.” That shut him up. His face went still, the colour draining from it. She shouldn’t have said it. But the words were out now, hanging between them like a blade. The silence stretched. The fire popped, sending a shower of sparks up the chimney. Daniel broke first. “You blamed me?” “You were his friend.” “And you were my—” He cut himself off, shaking his head. “Christ, Rory. I didn’t know. Not until it was too late.” She wanted to believe him. But the old hurt was a knot in her chest, tight and unyielding. “You were always too busy chasing the next big story to notice what was happening right in front of you.” His hand clenched around his glass. “That’s not fair.” “No?” She leaned forward. “Where were you when I needed you? When *she* needed you?” His breath hitched. Eva. Of course. Eva, who’d been the one to drag Rory out of Cardiff, who’d held her together when she was falling apart. Daniel’s voice was raw. “I didn’t know she was hurting either.” Rory’s throat tightened. She looked away, her gaze landing on the wall behind the bar. Old maps, yellowed with age, the edges frayed. Silas’ collection. She’d asked him once why he kept them. *Because some roads are worth remembering*, he’d said. She swallowed. “It doesn’t matter now.” “It does.” His voice was quiet but firm. “It matters because I spent years wondering what the hell happened. Wondering if I could’ve done something.” She wanted to tell him it wasn’t his fault. That Evan had been a master at hiding the bruises, the broken ribs, the way he’d made her feel small. That by the time she’d realised how bad it was, she’d been too ashamed to tell anyone. But the words stuck in her throat. Daniel’s fingers drummed against the bar. “I looked for you, you know. After you left.” She blinked. “What?” “I went to your flat. Your mum’s house. Even tracked down that bloody barrister father of yours.” A bitter laugh. “He wouldn’t even tell me if you were alive.” Her chest ached. She’d told no one where she was going. Not even Eva, not until she was already on the train to London. “Why?” she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. “Because I cared about you, Rory.” His eyes burned into hers. “Because I *loved* you, and you just—vanished.” The air left her lungs. She’d known, of course. She’d felt it too, back then. The way her stomach had flipped when he walked into a room, the way his laughter had made her feel light, like she could float away. But love had been a luxury she couldn’t afford. Not when Evan’s fists were a constant threat. She opened her mouth, but no words came. Daniel’s gaze dropped to her wrist, to the small crescent-shaped scar there. His brow furrowed. “What happened?” She pulled her sleeve down. “Childhood accident.” He didn’t look convinced, but he didn’t push. Silas slid a fresh glass toward Daniel, his expression unreadable. “You two need a minute?” Daniel didn’t take his eyes off Rory. “Yeah.” Silas nodded and moved to the other end of the bar, giving them the illusion of privacy. Rory traced the rim of her glass. “I’m sorry.” “For what?” “For leaving. For not telling you.” She met his eyes. “For blaming you.” He exhaled, long and slow. “I should’ve seen it.” “You weren’t there.” “Neither were you.” His voice was soft now, the edge gone. “Not after a while.” She flinched. It was true. She’d pulled away from everyone, not just him. Evan had made sure of that. Daniel’s hand twitched, like he wanted to reach for her. But he didn’t. “I’m not that reckless kid anymore, Rory.” “I can see that.” “And you?” He studied her, his gaze lingering on the dark circles under her eyes, the way her shoulders were always slightly tensed, like she was waiting for a blow. “You’re not the same either.” She laughed, but there was no humour in it. “No. I’m not.” The fire hissed, the embers glowing like dying stars. Daniel drained his drink and set the glass down. “I should go.” She wanted to tell him to stay. To ask him about the years she’d missed, about the stories he’d chased, the life he’d built. But the words wouldn’t come. He stood, his chair scraping against the floor. “It was good seeing you, Rory.” She nodded, her throat tight. He hesitated, then pulled a card from his pocket and set it on the bar. “If you ever want to talk. Or just… catch up.” She didn’t touch it. He gave her one last look, then turned and walked out. The door swung shut behind him, the neon sign flickering again, as if the building itself had exhaled. Silas appeared beside her, wiping down the bar. “Old friend?” She stared at the card. Daniel’s name, a London number. No title, no company. Just his name. “Something like that.” Silas grunted. “Some reunions are like fine wine. Others…” He poured her another whiskey. “Others leave a bitter taste.” She picked up the card, the edges sharp against her skin. Outside, the rain started again, a steady drumming against the windows.
created_at"2026-09-25T15:35:32.36Z" 9/25/2026, 3:35:32 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences65
tagDensity0.185
leniency0.369
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.90% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1418
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"carefully"
2"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
64.74% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1418
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"eyebrow"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"furrowed"
count1
8
word"unreadable"
count1
9
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"scanned"
2"familiar"
3"eyebrow"
4"silence"
5"whisper"
6"stomach"
7"furrowed"
8"unreadable"
9"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences135
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences135
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences187
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords10
totalWords1412
ratio0.007
matches
0"I’m fine"
1"she"
2"Because some roads are worth remembering"
3"loved"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount1092
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.19
worstName"Daniel"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Daniel"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
London3
Silas6
Evan5
Cardiff2
Reeves1
Rory6
Eva3
Daniel13
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Evan"
4"Reeves"
5"Rory"
6"Eva"
7"Daniel"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore0.905
windowScore0.833
86.71% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a chasm"
1"appeared beside her, wiping down the bar"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1412
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences187
matches
0"heard that voice"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs91
mean15.52
std13.02
cv0.839
sampleLengths
077
136
24
334
41
59
647
71
816
98
1021
1111
129
131
149
1542
1625
1710
182
192
208
219
2213
234
2410
255
2631
276
286
2917
3018
3113
329
3315
348
3513
3617
3714
386
394
4022
4118
4220
439
4415
4526
4611
4741
486
4925
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences135
matches
0"was gone"
76.54% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs216
matches
0"was bracing"
1"was falling"
2"was going"
3"was waiting"
81.74% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences187
ratio0.021
matches
0"The bar was quiet tonight—just a few regulars hunched over drinks, the low murmur of conversation swallowed by the crackle of the fireplace."
1"His eyes—sharp, assessing—locked onto hers."
2"The boy she’d known—all easy grins and reckless energy—was gone."
3"She remembered the way he’d talked about it back then—like it was a calling, not just a job."
81.27% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount342
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.06140350877192982
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences187
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences187
mean7.55
std5.39
cv0.714
sampleLengths
017
121
216
323
413
515
68
74
821
92
1011
111
126
133
142
153
1616
1721
185
191
203
215
225
231
242
258
268
275
288
2911
309
311
326
333
342
3510
3615
3715
3813
3912
405
415
422
432
446
452
468
471
488
495
42.51% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.26737967914438504
totalSentences187
uniqueOpeners50
81.30% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences123
matches
0"Then she saw him."
1"Of course not."
2"Just his name."
ratio0.024
31.38% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount58
totalSentences123
matches
0"She spotted Silas behind the"
1"He looked up, nodded, and"
2"His eyes—sharp, assessing—locked onto hers."
3"Her breath caught."
4"She hadn’t heard that voice"
5"He stood, the stool scraping"
6"He trailed off, as if"
7"she supplied, a half-smile tugging"
8"She laughed, but it was"
9"His hands were steady, though,"
10"She wrapped her fingers around"
11"Her fingers tightened around the"
12"He exhaled, a sound that"
13"She took a sip, the"
14"He didn’t elaborate"
15"She raised an eyebrow."
16"His jaw tightened."
17"She remembered the way he’d"
18"She flinched, the whiskey sloshing"
19"She set the glass down"
ratio0.472
37.24% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount104
totalSentences123
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"The door swung open, letting"
2"Rory brushed rain from her"
3"The bar was quiet tonight—just"
4"She spotted Silas behind the"
5"He looked up, nodded, and"
6"The wood was worn smooth"
7"A man at the far"
8"A laugh bubbled in her"
9"The glass in"
10"The man turned."
11"Evan was in Cardiff, or"
12"This man had the same"
13"His eyes—sharp, assessing—locked onto hers."
14"Her breath caught."
15"The voice was the same."
16"She hadn’t heard that voice"
17"He stood, the stool scraping"
18"The distance between them felt"
19"He trailed off, as if"
ratio0.846
81.30% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences123
matches
0"*Because some roads are worth"
1"To ask him about the"
ratio0.016
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The door swung open, letting in a gust of damp London air and a woman who hesitated just inside the threshold."
1"The door swung shut behind him, the neon sign flickering again, as if the building itself had exhaled."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"He trailed, as if the words wouldn’t come"
1"she supplied, a half-smile tugging at her lips"
2"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences65
tagDensity0.031
leniency0.062
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.4656%