| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.185 | | leniency | 0.37 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 90.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1000 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 5.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1000 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "shimmered" | | 5 | "etched" | | 6 | "tapestry" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "crystal" | | 9 | "glistening" | | 10 | "trembled" | | 11 | "fractured" | | 12 | "otherworldly" | | 13 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 106 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 4 | | totalWords | 995 | | ratio | 0.004 | | matches | | 0 | "is" | | 1 | "alive" | | 2 | "skin" | | 3 | "reacted" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 31.38% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 57 | | wordCount | 843 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 2.37 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Isolde | 12 | | Nyx | 10 | | December | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Rory | 20 | | London | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "December" | | 4 | "Rory" | | 5 | "Grove" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae-Forged" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "Fae" |
| | globalScore | 0.314 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "appeared ahead a gateway back to the familiar" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 2.01 | | wordCount | 995 | | matches | | 0 | "Not sun-warmed, but *alive*-warmed, like the pulse of a sleeping creature" | | 1 | "not wood, but *skin*" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 26.89 | | std | 19.71 | | cv | 0.733 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 59 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 55 | | 4 | 73 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 43 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 49 | | 14 | 48 | | 15 | 62 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 52 | | 18 | 44 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 42 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 42 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 58 | | 27 | 40 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 45 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 11 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 148 | | matches | | 0 | "was peeling" | | 1 | "was already retreating" |
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| 35.04% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 106 | | ratio | 0.038 | | matches | | 0 | "The scent of wildflowers—thick, sweet, impossible for December—wrapped around her." | | 1 | "A fox—no, not a fox." | | 2 | "\"And which one is that?\" She nodded toward the pool, where a figure in the reflection turned to look at them—a woman with Rory’s face, but older, her eyes hollow, her mouth moving in silent screams." | | 3 | "Their bark was peeling away in long strips, revealing something beneath—not wood, but *skin*." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 852 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.029342723004694836 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007042253521126761 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 106 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 106 | | mean | 9.39 | | std | 6.17 | | cv | 0.658 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 24 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 43.40% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.24528301886792453 | | totalSentences | 106 | | uniqueOpeners | 26 | |
| 41.67% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "Its faint pulse had guided" | | 1 | "She stepped forward, her bare" | | 2 | "She jerked her hand back." | | 3 | "Its fur was the colour" | | 4 | "It watched them with eyes" | | 5 | "She skidded to a halt" | | 6 | "She took a step back." | | 7 | "She knelt, dipping her fingers" | | 8 | "She rubbed her wrist absently." | | 9 | "She nodded toward the pool," | | 10 | "Their bark was peeling away" | | 11 | "She stumbled back." | | 12 | "She turned, her pulse hammering," | | 13 | "She didn’t slow until she’d" | | 14 | "She bent, bracing her hands" | | 15 | "She shot Isolde a glare." | | 16 | "Its warmth had faded, but" | | 17 | "She looked back at the" |
| | ratio | 0.225 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 77 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 1 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "Its faint pulse had guided" | | 3 | "Nyx shifted beside her, their" | | 4 | "Rory glanced at them." | | 5 | "A breeze stirred the silver" | | 6 | "She stepped forward, her bare" | | 7 | "The air shimmered as she" | | 8 | "Rory exchanged a look with" | | 9 | "The moment she passed the" | | 10 | "The scent of wildflowers—thick, sweet," | | 11 | "The trees here were taller," | | 12 | "The sky above was the" | | 13 | "Nyx’s voice dropped to a" | | 14 | "Isolde turned, her lips curling." | | 15 | "Rory’s fingers twitched toward the" | | 16 | "The cold metal was a" | | 17 | "Isolde’s laugh was the sound" | | 18 | "The ground beneath them was" | | 19 | "Rory crouched, brushing her fingers" |
| | ratio | 0.963 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The sky above was the wrong shade of blue, streaked with threads of gold, as if the heavens themselves were woven from some cosmic tapestry." | | 1 | "The ground beneath them was soft, spongy with moss that gave slightly underfoot, as if alive." |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped, her bare feet making no sound on the mossy ground" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.037 | | leniency | 0.074 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |