| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Her voice sounded too [too]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.222 | | leniency | 0.444 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.222 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1119 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 1.70% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1119 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "flickered" | | 10 | "wavering" | | 11 | "raced" | | 12 | "echoed" | | 13 | "flicker" | | 14 | "stark" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 127 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 127 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 134 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 23 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 11 | | markdownWords | 46 | | totalWords | 1114 | | ratio | 0.041 | | matches | | 0 | "no one goes into the Grove at night, not even the fae." | | 1 | "Midnight. The Grove. Come alone." | | 2 | "Just an animal." | | 3 | "midnight" | | 4 | "You’re imagining things." | | 5 | "“You shouldn’t have come.”" | | 6 | "“You know.”" | | 7 | "Protection." | | 8 | "“You carry the stone,”" | | 9 | "“But you do not know its price.”" | | 10 | "“Run, little moth. Run.”" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 47.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 33 | | wordCount | 1075 | | uniqueNames | 3 | | maxNameDensity | 2.05 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.477 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed closer than before, their shadows stretching unnaturally long" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1114 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 134 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 45 | | mean | 24.76 | | std | 16.08 | | cv | 0.649 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 76 | | 1 | 50 | | 2 | 44 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 36 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 50 | | 9 | 32 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 30 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 41 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 41 | | 19 | 34 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 32 | | 26 | 50 | | 27 | 27 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 30 | | 30 | 32 | | 31 | 35 | | 32 | 28 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 41 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 24 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 27 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 25 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 39 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 127 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 190 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 14.93% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 134 | | ratio | 0.045 | | matches | | 0 | "Eva had warned her—*no one goes into the Grove at night, not even the fae.* But the note had been clear: *Midnight." | | 1 | "Another sound—a rustle, a shift in the undergrowth." | | 2 | "Then she saw it—a figure, standing between the trees." | | 3 | "The ground rushed up to meet her, but before she could fall, something caught her—a hand, cold and smooth as polished stone." | | 4 | "Then, from the darkness behind it, came a sound—a low, guttural growl." | | 5 | "The whispers, the growls, the figure—gone." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 127 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 4 | | adverbRatio | 0.031496062992125984 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015748031496062992 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 134 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 134 | | mean | 8.31 | | std | 4.88 | | cv | 0.587 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 42.54% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.23880597014925373 | | totalSentences | 134 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 13 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the oaks, their bark" | | 1 | "*Just an animal.*" | | 2 | "Then came the whisper." | | 3 | "Maybe it was already past." | | 4 | "Then, from the darkness between" | | 5 | "Pale, luminous, like twin moons." | | 6 | "Just the oaks, their trunks" | | 7 | "Then she saw it—a figure," | | 8 | "Just stood, watching." | | 9 | "Then it spoke." | | 10 | "Then, from the darkness behind" | | 11 | "Then, from the darkness ahead," | | 12 | "Just trees and wildflowers and" |
| | ratio | 0.112 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "Its warmth pulsed faintly, a" | | 2 | "She wasn’t supposed to be" | | 3 | "They were warm, as if" | | 4 | "She stood, scanning the clearing." | | 5 | "She exhaled, her breath misting" | | 6 | "It slithered through the trees," | | 7 | "She spun, heart hammering." | | 8 | "Her voice sounded too loud," | | 9 | "She took a step back," | | 10 | "They didn’t so much as" | | 11 | "She turned on her heel," | | 12 | "*You’re imagining things.* But the" | | 13 | "She followed, her boots silent" | | 14 | "It was a vibration, a" | | 15 | "She stumbled back, her heel" | | 16 | "it hissed, the words slithering" | | 17 | "It recoiled, its hollow face" | | 18 | "She rolled to her feet" | | 19 | "Her lungs burned, her legs" |
| | ratio | 0.233 | |
| 50.52% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 95 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oaks loomed like" | | 1 | "Rory stepped over the last" | | 2 | "The air smelled of wet" | | 3 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 4 | "Its warmth pulsed faintly, a" | | 5 | "She wasn’t supposed to be" | | 6 | "Eva had warned her—*no one" | | 7 | "The wildflowers, vibrant even in" | | 8 | "Rory crouched, running her fingers" | | 9 | "They were warm, as if" | | 10 | "She stood, scanning the clearing." | | 11 | "The trees seemed closer than" | | 12 | "A twig snapped." | | 13 | "The sound had come from" | | 14 | "She exhaled, her breath misting" | | 15 | "It slithered through the trees," | | 16 | "She spun, heart hammering." | | 17 | "The Grove was empty." | | 18 | "Her voice sounded too loud," | | 19 | "The pendant’s warmth flared, a" |
| | ratio | 0.819 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled of wet moss and something older, something that prickled the hairs on her neck." | | 1 | "But the wildflowers at her feet were crushed, their petals dark with something that wasn’t dew." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "it hissed, the words slithering into her mind" |
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| 38.89% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.111 | | leniency | 0.222 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.222 | |