Run: 2026-09-25-01M3CKB3KDWGDRHS2SM0QEFST9

Run Details

Duration:
14.2s
Cost:
$0.013182
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient oaks loomed like sentinels, their gnarled branches twisting into the bruised twilight. Rory stepped over the last of the standing stones, her boots sinking into the damp earth of the Grove. The air smelled of wet moss and something older, something that prickled the hairs on her neck. She adjusted the strap of her bag, fingers brushing the Heartstone pendant beneath her shirt. Its warmth pulsed faintly, a slow, steady thrum against her skin. She wasn’t supposed to be here after dark. Eva had warned her—*no one goes into the Grove at night, not even the fae.* But the note had been clear: *Midnight. The Grove. Come alone.* The handwriting had been unmistakably Dymas’, though she couldn’t fathom how he’d known she’d need answers. The wildflowers, vibrant even in the dim light, swayed without wind. Rory crouched, running her fingers over the petals. They were warm, as if freshly kissed by sunlight. She stood, scanning the clearing. The trees seemed closer than before, their shadows stretching unnaturally long. A twig snapped. Rory froze. The sound had come from behind her, but when she turned, there was nothing. Just the oaks, their bark rough and dark. She exhaled, her breath misting in the cold air. *Just an animal.* Then came the whisper. It slithered through the trees, a voice like dry leaves skittering across stone. She spun, heart hammering. The Grove was empty. Or so it seemed. “Dymas?” Her voice sounded too loud, too sharp. No answer. The pendant’s warmth flared, a sudden heat against her collarbone. Rory’s fingers closed around it. The crimson gemstone’s glow seeped through her fingers, casting faint, bloody light onto the forest floor. She swallowed. The note had said *midnight*, but the Grove’s time was its own. Maybe it was already past. Another sound—a rustle, a shift in the undergrowth. Rory’s pulse spiked. She took a step back, her heel crushing a bed of wildflowers. They didn’t so much as bend beneath her weight. “Who’s there?” Silence. Then, from the darkness between the trees, a pair of eyes flickered open. Pale, luminous, like twin moons. Rory’s breath caught. The eyes blinked, slow and deliberate, then vanished. She turned on her heel, scanning the tree line. Nothing. Just the oaks, their trunks wide and unyielding. The air thickened, pressing against her skin like damp wool. A laugh bubbled up in her throat, nervous and brittle. *You’re imagining things.* But the pendant’s heat argued otherwise. Rory forced herself forward, toward the centre of the Grove where the note had implied she’d find answers. The wildflowers here grew taller, their stems twisting like serpents. The ground beneath her feet felt spongy, as if the earth itself breathed. Then she saw it—a figure, standing between the trees. Tall, cloaked in shadow, its form wavering like a mirage. Rory’s fingers tightened around the pendant. “Dymas?” The figure didn’t move. Didn’t speak. Just stood, watching. Rory took a step closer. The figure mirrored her, gliding backward into the darkness. She followed, her boots silent on the damp earth. The trees seemed to lean in, their branches knitting together overhead, blocking out the last of the twilight. The figure stopped. Rory did the same, her heart a drum in her chest. The distance between them stretched, then shrank. The figure’s face was a void, a hollow where features should have been. Then it spoke. The voice wasn’t a sound. It was a vibration, a hum in her bones, in her teeth. Rory’s knees nearly buckled. *“You shouldn’t have come.”* Rory’s throat went dry. “Who are you?” The figure tilted its head. The movement was wrong, too fluid, like oil sliding off a surface. *“You know.”* She didn’t. But the pendant burned against her palm, its glow now a steady, pulsing light. Rory’s mind raced. Dymas had given her the Heartstone for a reason. *Protection.* But against what? The figure took a step forward. The shadows around it writhed, twisting into shapes that made Rory’s eyes ache. She stumbled back, her heel catching on a root. The ground rushed up to meet her, but before she could fall, something caught her—a hand, cold and smooth as polished stone. Rory gasped, twisting free. The figure loomed over her, its void-face inches from hers. The stench of damp earth and something older, something rotten, filled her nose. *“You carry the stone,”* it hissed, the words slithering into her mind. *“But you do not know its price.”* Rory scrambled back, her fingers digging into the dirt. The pendant’s glow flared, casting jagged shadows across the figure’s form. It recoiled, its hollow face twisting as if in pain. Then, from the darkness behind it, came a sound—a low, guttural growl. The figure’s head snapped toward the noise, its body tensing. Rory didn’t wait. She rolled to her feet and ran. The trees blurred past her, their branches clawing at her clothes, her hair. The Grove seemed to stretch endlessly, the standing stones nowhere in sight. Her lungs burned, her legs ached, but she didn’t stop. Behind her, the growl swelled into a snarl, then a shriek. The figure’s voice echoed through the trees, a chorus of whispers now, overlapping, drowning each other out. *“Run, little moth. Run.”* Rory’s foot caught on a root. She went down hard, her palms scraping against the damp earth. The pendant flew from her grip, its chain snapping. The crimson glow spilled across the forest floor, illuminating the undergrowth in a hellish light. She lunged for it, her fingers closing around the chain. The moment she touched it, the whispers stopped. Silence. Rory’s breath came in ragged gasps. She clutched the pendant, its warmth now a brand against her skin. The Grove was still. Too still. Then, from the darkness ahead, a flicker of movement. Rory’s head snapped up. The standing stones stood in the distance, their ancient oak forms stark against the night. Beyond them, the world was normal. Safe. She didn’t hesitate. Rory ran, the pendant clutched tight in her fist. The trees thinned, the shadows retreating as she neared the boundary. She didn’t look back. The moment she crossed the last stone, the air changed. The weight on her chest lifted. The whispers, the growls, the figure—gone. Rory collapsed against the nearest oak, her body trembling. The pendant’s glow faded, its warmth cooling against her skin. She looked back at the Grove. It was just a clearing. Just trees and wildflowers and shadows. But the wildflowers at her feet were crushed, their petals dark with something that wasn’t dew. And the pendant, when she held it up, bore a new crack down its centre, as if something had tried to break it.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Her voice sounded too [too]"
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.222
leniency0.444
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.222
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1119
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
1.70% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1119
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"loomed"
count2
1
word"sentinels"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count4
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"scanning"
count2
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"weight"
count2
8
word"silence"
count2
9
word"flickered"
count1
10
word"wavering"
count1
11
word"raced"
count1
12
word"echoed"
count1
13
word"flicker"
count1
14
word"stark"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"sentinels"
2"warmth"
3"pulsed"
4"scanning"
5"whisper"
6"pulse"
7"weight"
8"silence"
9"flickered"
10"wavering"
11"raced"
12"echoed"
13"flicker"
14"stark"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences127
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences127
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences134
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans11
markdownWords46
totalWords1114
ratio0.041
matches
0"no one goes into the Grove at night, not even the fae."
1"Midnight. The Grove. Come alone."
2"Just an animal."
3"midnight"
4"You’re imagining things."
5"“You shouldn’t have come.”"
6"“You know.”"
7"Protection."
8"“You carry the stone,”"
9"“But you do not know its price.”"
10"“Run, little moth. Run.”"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
47.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount1075
uniqueNames3
maxNameDensity2.05
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Grove9
Heartstone2
Rory22
persons
0"Rory"
places
0"Grove"
globalScore0.477
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences86
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed closer than before, their shadows stretching unnaturally long"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1114
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences134
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean24.76
std16.08
cv0.649
sampleLengths
076
150
244
33
436
54
625
710
850
932
102
1130
1228
1319
1441
1525
161
179
1841
1934
203
2121
224
237
2419
2532
2650
2727
2819
2930
3032
3135
3228
334
3441
3518
361
3724
3813
3922
4027
4122
4225
4311
4439
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences127
matches
0"were crushed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs190
matches(empty)
14.93% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences134
ratio0.045
matches
0"Eva had warned her—*no one goes into the Grove at night, not even the fae.* But the note had been clear: *Midnight."
1"Another sound—a rustle, a shift in the undergrowth."
2"Then she saw it—a figure, standing between the trees."
3"The ground rushed up to meet her, but before she could fall, something caught her—a hand, cold and smooth as polished stone."
4"Then, from the darkness behind it, came a sound—a low, guttural growl."
5"The whispers, the growls, the figure—gone."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount127
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount4
adverbRatio0.031496062992125984
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.015748031496062992
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences134
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences134
mean8.31
std4.88
cv0.587
sampleLengths
014
119
217
315
411
58
622
72
818
911
108
119
125
1311
143
152
1614
178
189
193
204
2113
224
234
244
258
262
2710
285
2916
302
3112
325
338
343
3512
369
372
381
3913
405
413
428
439
441
458
4610
4710
489
4918
42.54% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.23880597014925373
totalSentences134
uniqueOpeners32
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount13
totalSentences116
matches
0"Just the oaks, their bark"
1"*Just an animal.*"
2"Then came the whisper."
3"Maybe it was already past."
4"Then, from the darkness between"
5"Pale, luminous, like twin moons."
6"Just the oaks, their trunks"
7"Then she saw it—a figure,"
8"Just stood, watching."
9"Then it spoke."
10"Then, from the darkness behind"
11"Then, from the darkness ahead,"
12"Just trees and wildflowers and"
ratio0.112
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences116
matches
0"She adjusted the strap of"
1"Its warmth pulsed faintly, a"
2"She wasn’t supposed to be"
3"They were warm, as if"
4"She stood, scanning the clearing."
5"She exhaled, her breath misting"
6"It slithered through the trees,"
7"She spun, heart hammering."
8"Her voice sounded too loud,"
9"She took a step back,"
10"They didn’t so much as"
11"She turned on her heel,"
12"*You’re imagining things.* But the"
13"She followed, her boots silent"
14"It was a vibration, a"
15"She stumbled back, her heel"
16"it hissed, the words slithering"
17"It recoiled, its hollow face"
18"She rolled to her feet"
19"Her lungs burned, her legs"
ratio0.233
50.52% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount95
totalSentences116
matches
0"The ancient oaks loomed like"
1"Rory stepped over the last"
2"The air smelled of wet"
3"She adjusted the strap of"
4"Its warmth pulsed faintly, a"
5"She wasn’t supposed to be"
6"Eva had warned her—*no one"
7"The wildflowers, vibrant even in"
8"Rory crouched, running her fingers"
9"They were warm, as if"
10"She stood, scanning the clearing."
11"The trees seemed closer than"
12"A twig snapped."
13"The sound had come from"
14"She exhaled, her breath misting"
15"It slithered through the trees,"
16"She spun, heart hammering."
17"The Grove was empty."
18"Her voice sounded too loud,"
19"The pendant’s warmth flared, a"
ratio0.819
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences116
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The air smelled of wet moss and something older, something that prickled the hairs on her neck."
1"But the wildflowers at her feet were crushed, their petals dark with something that wasn’t dew."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"it hissed, the words slithering into her mind"
38.89% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"it hissed (hiss)"
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.111
leniency0.222
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.222
76.5414%