| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 90.39% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1041 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 23.15% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1041 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "perfect" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "echoed" | | 10 | "searing" | | 11 | "loomed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "weight of words/silence" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 125 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 125 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 129 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 17 | | markdownWords | 22 | | totalWords | 1030 | | ratio | 0.021 | | matches | | 0 | "Focus." | | 1 | "You’re imagining things." | | 2 | "lack" | | 3 | "was" | | 4 | "wasn’t" | | 5 | "everywhere" | | 6 | "mind" | | 7 | "want" | | 8 | "Don’t engage. Don’t react." | | 9 | "speak" | | 10 | "earth" | | 11 | "wanted" | | 12 | "think" | | 13 | "absence" | | 14 | "home" | | 15 | "herself" | | 16 | "toward" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 17 | | wordCount | 1007 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 0.89 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Don" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 9 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Don | 5 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "as if acknowledging the threshold she’d just crossed" | | 1 | "as if warning her" | | 2 | "seemed farther away than they should have been" | | 3 | "something like hunger" | | 4 | "as if bracing for a storm" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.913 | | wordCount | 1030 | | matches | | 0 | "not from any direction but from *everywhere*, vibrating in her bones" | | 1 | "not in her ears but in her *mind*" | | 2 | "Not of wood or stone, but of *absence*" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 44 | | mean | 23.41 | | std | 18.02 | | cv | 0.77 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 55 | | 1 | 3 | | 2 | 47 | | 3 | 74 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 43 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 34 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 39 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 45 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 30 | | 17 | 36 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 31 | | 20 | 43 | | 21 | 45 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 27 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 39 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 44 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 29 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 46 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 44 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 40 | | 40 | 26 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 7 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 173 | | matches | | 0 | "was rearranging" | | 1 | "were closing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 129 | | ratio | 0.078 | | matches | | 0 | "The wildflowers—vibrant, impossible in the dim light—didn’t sway." | | 1 | "The silence wasn’t just the absence of sound; it was a presence, pressing against her eardrums." | | 2 | "The pendant had led her here, its glow intensifying with every step deeper into Richmond Park until she’d stumbled upon the standing stones—rough-hewn oaks, their surfaces carved with spirals that made her eyes ache if she stared too long." | | 3 | "Except—" | | 4 | "The grove was too bright—moonlight filtered through the canopy in silver shafts, illuminating the flowers in impossible hues." | | 5 | "Not a shadow—a *lack* of something." | | 6 | "The grove’s edge—the standing stones—seemed farther away than they should have been." | | 7 | "More shapes emerged, their forms shifting—tall, then short, then elongated, like reflections in disturbed water." | | 8 | "A hand—cold, too many fingers—brushed her shoulder." | | 9 | "Just the—" |
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| 92.92% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1019 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 49 | | adverbRatio | 0.04808635917566242 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004906771344455349 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 129 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 129 | | mean | 7.98 | | std | 6.2 | | cv | 0.777 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 39 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 33.72% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 21 | | diversityRatio | 0.26356589147286824 | | totalSentences | 129 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the same stillness, the" | | 1 | "Just the weight of the" | | 2 | "Too many voices layered together," | | 3 | "Then, the ground moved." | | 4 | "Just the grove." | | 5 | "Just the trees." |
| | ratio | 0.057 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "She exhaled, her breath curling" | | 1 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "She turned her head slowly," | | 3 | "*You’re imagining things.*" | | 4 | "She took a step forward." | | 5 | "It yielded like a carpet," | | 6 | "She spun, peering into the" | | 7 | "It didn’t step." | | 8 | "It didn’t walk." | | 9 | "It simply *was*, and then" | | 10 | "Her breath hitched." | | 11 | "She hadn’t walked that far" | | 12 | "She clapped her hands over" | | 13 | "she lied, forcing steel into" | | 14 | "She yanked it free, holding" | | 15 | "They didn’t approach." | | 16 | "They didn’t need to." | | 17 | "she said, the words tearing" | | 18 | "She glanced down." | | 19 | "She turned and ran." |
| | ratio | 0.238 | |
| 93.33% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 77 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "The oak door groaned shut" | | 1 | "She exhaled, her breath curling" | | 2 | "The Heartstone pendant at her" | | 3 | "Something was wrong." | | 4 | "The trees here stood too" | | 5 | "The wildflowers—vibrant, impossible in the" | | 6 | "The silence wasn’t just the" | | 7 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 8 | "The pendant had led her" | | 9 | "The moment she’d passed between" | | 10 | "A twig snapped." | | 11 | "The sound had come from" | | 12 | "She turned her head slowly," | | 13 | "*You’re imagining things.*" | | 14 | "She took a step forward." | | 15 | "The grass didn’t crunch underfoot." | | 16 | "It yielded like a carpet," | | 17 | "The pendant’s warmth flared, sharp" | | 18 | "A whisper slithered through the" | | 19 | "Aurora’s pulse spiked." |
| | ratio | 0.733 | |
| 47.62% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, the grove stretched before" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 57.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pendant at her throat pulsed once, faint and warm against her skin, as if acknowledging the threshold she’d just crossed." | | 1 | "The pendant had led her here, its glow intensifying with every step deeper into Richmond Park until she’d stumbled upon the standing stones—rough-hewn oaks, the…" | | 2 | "The pendant’s warmth flared, sharp and sudden, as if warning her." | | 3 | "The flowers at her feet began to tremble, their petals curling inward as if bracing for a storm." | | 4 | "In their place stood a single oak, its trunk split down the middle, the wood inside blackened as if by lightning." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she lied (lie)" | | 1 | "the voices hissed (hiss)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.571 | |