| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 56 | | tagDensity | 0.125 | | leniency | 0.25 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.85% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1206 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 50.25% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1206 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | word | "calloused fingers" | | count | 1 |
| | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "stomach" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "mosaic" | | 4 | "navigated" | | 5 | "familiar" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "calloused fingers" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "chill" | | 10 | "down her spine" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "stomach dropped" | | 1 | "sent a chill down" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 99 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 99 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 146 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 4 | | totalWords | 1197 | | ratio | 0.003 | | matches | | 0 | "wanted" | | 1 | "should" | | 2 | "really" | | 3 | "my" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 88.34% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 24 | | wordCount | 892 | | uniqueNames | 4 | | maxNameDensity | 1.23 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 2 | | Rory | 11 | | Lucien | 8 | | Ptolemy | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Lucien" | | 3 | "Ptolemy" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.883 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1197 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 146 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 72 | | mean | 16.63 | | std | 15.15 | | cv | 0.911 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 38 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 2 | | 3 | 76 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 46 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 30 | | 18 | 46 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 34 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 28 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 43 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 29 | | 34 | 32 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 67 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 48 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 25 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 157 | | matches | | |
| 5.87% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 146 | | ratio | 0.048 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien filled the frame, his heterochromatic gaze—amber and black—flicking over her face, her bare feet, the scar on her wrist." | | 1 | "Rory gestured to the chaos of the living room—the couch buried under a avalanche of books, the coffee table a mosaic of takeaway containers and yellowed notes." | | 2 | "Rory looked away first, her gaze landing on the half-unpacked box by the window—Eva’s things, still waiting to be sorted." | | 3 | "But the words stuck in her throat, tangled in the memory of his mouth on hers, the way his demon’s eyes had glowed in the dark when he—" | | 4 | "His hands were everywhere—her waist, her hair, the small of her back—pulling her against him like he was afraid she’d vanish." | | 5 | "Avaros—the demon realm." | | 6 | "But the look in his eyes—the raw, unguarded need—stopped her." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 902 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.02771618625277162 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0033259423503325942 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 146 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 146 | | mean | 8.2 | | std | 6.83 | | cv | 0.833 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 27 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 25 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 52.74% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.3493150684931507 | | totalSentences | 146 | | uniqueOpeners | 51 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "Too deliberate to be Eva," | | 1 | "Too early for the post." | | 2 | "Then the second." | | 3 | "Just the quiet certainty that" | | 4 | "Then his mouth was on" | | 5 | "Then his breath was hot" |
| | ratio | 0.071 | |
| 48.57% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 36 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "She set the pot down." | | 1 | "Her stomach dropped." | | 2 | "She unlatched the first deadbolt." | | 3 | "Her fingers lingered on the" | | 4 | "She turned the final lock" | | 5 | "She didn’t move as he" | | 6 | "He sighed, adjusting his cuffs." | | 7 | "He perched on the edge" | | 8 | "His jaw tightened." | | 9 | "She leaned against the doorframe," | | 10 | "He was in front of" | | 11 | "His thumb brushed the scar" | | 12 | "Her breath hitched." | | 13 | "His voice was rough" | | 14 | "She pulled away, but he" | | 15 | "His fingers slid to the" | | 16 | "Her name on his lips" | | 17 | "His grin was wicked." | | 18 | "His cane clattered to the" | | 19 | "His hands were everywhere—her waist," |
| | ratio | 0.429 | |
| 49.29% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 69 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "The knock came just as" | | 1 | "Rory froze, teapot hovering over" | | 2 | "She set the pot down." | | 3 | "The steam curled between them" | | 4 | "Rory exhaled through her nose," | | 5 | "Ptolemy, the tabby, uncoiled from" | | 6 | "The peephole offered a distorted" | | 7 | "The other hand was raised," | | 8 | "Her stomach dropped." | | 9 | "She unlatched the first deadbolt." | | 10 | "Her fingers lingered on the" | | 11 | "Lucien’s voice, smooth as aged" | | 12 | "She turned the final lock" | | 13 | "The door swung inward before" | | 14 | "Lucien filled the frame, his" | | 15 | "The scent of bergamot and" | | 16 | "Rory crossed her arms." | | 17 | "A smirk tugged at his" | | 18 | "She didn’t move as he" | | 19 | "Ptolemy hissed from the shadows," |
| | ratio | 0.821 | |
| 59.52% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 53.57% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 56 | | tagDensity | 0.089 | | leniency | 0.179 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.036 | |