Run: 2026-09-25-01M3CKBCGE4QT3FRCTEN0D6KZJ

Run Details

Duration:
15.1s
Cost:
$0.014364
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came just as the kettle began to whistle. Rory froze, teapot hovering over the chipped mug. Three sharp raps, then silence. Too deliberate to be Eva, who’d barge in without warning. Too early for the post. She set the pot down. The steam curled between them like a question. Another knock. Rory exhaled through her nose, wiped her hands on her jeans, and moved through the cluttered flat. Ptolemy, the tabby, uncoiled from his perch on the stack of grimoires by the door and slunk into the shadows as she approached. The peephole offered a distorted view: a man in a charcoal suit, his platinum hair slicked back, one hand resting on the ivory handle of his cane. The other hand was raised, poised to knock again. Her stomach dropped. She unlatched the first deadbolt. Then the second. Her fingers lingered on the third. “Open the door, Rory.” Lucien’s voice, smooth as aged brandy, seeped through the wood. No pleading, no apology. Just the quiet certainty that she would. She turned the final lock and stepped back. The door swung inward before she could pull it fully open. Lucien filled the frame, his heterochromatic gaze—amber and black—flicking over her face, her bare feet, the scar on her wrist. The scent of bergamot and something darker, like gunpowder after a storm, followed him inside. “You’ve lost weight,” he said. Rory crossed her arms. “And you’ve lost your manners.” A smirk tugged at his lips, but it didn’t reach his eyes. “I’ve missed you too.” She didn’t move as he shut the door behind him, the cane tapping once against the floor. Ptolemy hissed from the shadows, tail lashing. Lucien ignored the cat. “Aren’t you going to offer me a seat?” “Aren’t you going to explain why you’re here?” He sighed, adjusting his cuffs. “Must we do this standing up?” Rory gestured to the chaos of the living room—the couch buried under a avalanche of books, the coffee table a mosaic of takeaway containers and yellowed notes. “Be my guest.” Lucien navigated the obstacle course with the precision of a man who’d spent a lifetime avoiding trouble. He perched on the edge of the armchair, cane resting against his knee, and studied the room like it was a puzzle he could solve. “Still working for Yu-Fei?” “Still fixing other people’s messes?” His jaw tightened. “Some messes are worth fixing.” She leaned against the doorframe, arms still crossed. “Yours?” “Ours.” The word hung between them, heavy as a blade. Rory looked away first, her gaze landing on the half-unpacked box by the window—Eva’s things, still waiting to be sorted. “You didn’t answer my letters.” “I read them.” “Not the same thing.” Lucien stood abruptly, the cane thudding against the floor. “What did you want me to say, Rory? That I was sorry? That I should’ve stopped you from leaving?” “That you *wanted* me to stay.” He was in front of her before she could blink, his free hand cupping her face. His thumb brushed the scar on her wrist, the one she’d gotten as a child, the one he’d kissed a hundred times. “I did. Every damn day.” Her breath hitched. The heat of his palm seeped into her skin, familiar and infuriating. “Then why didn’t you?” “Because you needed to go.” His voice was rough. “Because I wasn’t what you needed.” Rory laughed, sharp and humourless. “And now?” “Now,” he said, “I’m here.” She pulled away, but he didn’t let go. His fingers slid to the back of her neck, tangling in the short strands of her hair. “Tell me to leave.” She should. She *should*. But the words stuck in her throat, tangled in the memory of his mouth on hers, the way his demon’s eyes had glowed in the dark when he— “Rory.” Her name on his lips was a command. A plea. She swallowed. “You’re an arse, Lucien.” His grin was wicked. “And you’re still terrible at goodbyes.” Then his mouth was on hers, hot and demanding, and for a second, she let herself forget. Forgot the months of silence, the letters she’d burned, the way her chest had ached when she’d realised he wasn’t coming after her. His cane clattered to the floor. His hands were everywhere—her waist, her hair, the small of her back—pulling her against him like he was afraid she’d vanish. She kissed him back, just as desperate. Just as angry. When they broke apart, his forehead rested against hers. “I’ve missed you.” Rory’s fingers curled into his shirt. “You’ve a funny way of showing it.” “Let me show you properly, then.” He didn’t wait for an answer. His lips trailed down her neck, teeth grazing the pulse point beneath her ear. She gasped, her head tilting back to give him better access. The stubble on his jaw scratched her skin, a delicious contrast to the softness of his mouth. “Lucien—” “Hmm?” “We’re not doing this.” “Aren’t we?” His hand slid under her shirt, calloused fingers mapping the dip of her spine. She shivered. “Not until you tell me why you’re *really* here.” He stilled. For a heartbeat, she thought he’d pull away. Then his breath was hot against her ear. “Fine. But not here.” Rory blinked. “What?” Lucien stepped back, though his hands lingered on her hips. “I need your help.” The words were a bucket of cold water. She extricated herself, putting distance between them. “My help.” “There’s a job. A dangerous one.” His eyes darkened. “And you’re the only one who can pull it off.” Rory crossed her arms again, the warmth of his touch already fading. “Flattery won’t work on me, Luc.” “It’s not flattery.” He bent to retrieve his cane, the movement fluid. “There’s a relic. An old one. Stolen from Avaros.” The name sent a chill down her spine. Avaros—the demon realm. His father’s realm. “And?” “And it’s in London. Hidden somewhere in the supernatural black market.” He met her gaze. “I need you to find it before someone else does.” She scoffed. “You’re a fixer. You’ve got connections, resources. Why me?” “Because,” he said, voice low, “the last person who tried to track it down ended up with their throat slit. And because, despite your many flaws, you’re the only one I trust to not get yourself killed.” Rory wanted to argue. Wanted to tell him to sod off, that she wasn’t his errand girl anymore. But the look in his eyes—the raw, unguarded need—stopped her. Ptolemy chose that moment to reappear, winding himself around Lucien’s legs with a purr. Traitor. She exhaled. “You’re lucky I’m bored.” Lucien’s smile was slow, triumphant. “I was hoping you’d say that.” “But,” she added, holding up a finger, “we do this *my* way. No secrets. No disappearing acts.” He inclined his head. “Agreed.” “And,” she said, poking him in the chest, “you’re buying me dinner first.” His laughter was a rich, dark sound. “Deal.” Rory turned towards the kitchen, but not before she caught the way his gaze lingered on her, the hunger in his eyes that had nothing to do with relics or black markets. She ignored the flutter in her chest. Business first. Always.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.125
leniency0.25
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.85% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1206
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.25% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1206
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"mosaic"
count1
4
word"navigated"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"calloused fingers"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"chill"
count1
10
word"down her spine"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"stomach"
2"weight"
3"mosaic"
4"navigated"
5"familiar"
6"pulse"
7"calloused fingers"
8"warmth"
9"chill"
10"down her spine"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
1"sent a chill down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences99
matches
0"was afraid"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences99
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences146
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords4
totalWords1197
ratio0.003
matches
0"wanted"
1"should"
2"really"
3"my"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
88.34% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount892
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity1.23
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva2
Rory11
Lucien8
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Lucien"
3"Ptolemy"
places(empty)
globalScore0.883
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1197
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences146
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs72
mean16.63
std15.15
cv0.911
sampleLengths
038
113
22
376
43
514
64
721
88
946
105
119
1216
1324
1412
158
1611
1730
1846
195
208
219
221
2334
243
254
2628
276
2843
2919
3015
317
325
3329
3432
351
3610
376
3810
3967
4010
4112
4213
436
4448
451
461
474
482
4925
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences99
matches
0"was raised"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs157
matches
0"wasn’t coming"
5.87% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences146
ratio0.048
matches
0"Lucien filled the frame, his heterochromatic gaze—amber and black—flicking over her face, her bare feet, the scar on her wrist."
1"Rory gestured to the chaos of the living room—the couch buried under a avalanche of books, the coffee table a mosaic of takeaway containers and yellowed notes."
2"Rory looked away first, her gaze landing on the half-unpacked box by the window—Eva’s things, still waiting to be sorted."
3"But the words stuck in her throat, tangled in the memory of his mouth on hers, the way his demon’s eyes had glowed in the dark when he—"
4"His hands were everywhere—her waist, her hair, the small of her back—pulling her against him like he was afraid she’d vanish."
5"Avaros—the demon realm."
6"But the look in his eyes—the raw, unguarded need—stopped her."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount902
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.02771618625277162
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0033259423503325942
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences146
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences146
mean8.2
std6.83
cv0.833
sampleLengths
010
18
25
310
45
55
68
72
817
923
1027
119
123
135
143
156
164
1710
184
197
208
2111
2220
2315
245
254
265
2712
284
2917
307
314
328
338
345
356
3627
373
3817
3925
404
415
423
435
448
451
461
479
4820
495
52.74% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3493150684931507
totalSentences146
uniqueOpeners51
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences84
matches
0"Too deliberate to be Eva,"
1"Too early for the post."
2"Then the second."
3"Just the quiet certainty that"
4"Then his mouth was on"
5"Then his breath was hot"
ratio0.071
48.57% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences84
matches
0"She set the pot down."
1"Her stomach dropped."
2"She unlatched the first deadbolt."
3"Her fingers lingered on the"
4"She turned the final lock"
5"She didn’t move as he"
6"He sighed, adjusting his cuffs."
7"He perched on the edge"
8"His jaw tightened."
9"She leaned against the doorframe,"
10"He was in front of"
11"His thumb brushed the scar"
12"Her breath hitched."
13"His voice was rough"
14"She pulled away, but he"
15"His fingers slid to the"
16"Her name on his lips"
17"His grin was wicked."
18"His cane clattered to the"
19"His hands were everywhere—her waist,"
ratio0.429
49.29% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences84
matches
0"The knock came just as"
1"Rory froze, teapot hovering over"
2"She set the pot down."
3"The steam curled between them"
4"Rory exhaled through her nose,"
5"Ptolemy, the tabby, uncoiled from"
6"The peephole offered a distorted"
7"The other hand was raised,"
8"Her stomach dropped."
9"She unlatched the first deadbolt."
10"Her fingers lingered on the"
11"Lucien’s voice, smooth as aged"
12"She turned the final lock"
13"The door swung inward before"
14"Lucien filled the frame, his"
15"The scent of bergamot and"
16"Rory crossed her arms."
17"A smirk tugged at his"
18"She didn’t move as he"
19"Ptolemy hissed from the shadows,"
ratio0.821
59.52% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"Just as angry."
ratio0.012
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he said, voice low,"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she added (add)"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.089
leniency0.179
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.036
86.8002%