| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 86 | | tagDensity | 0.186 | | leniency | 0.372 | | rawRatio | 0.063 | | effectiveRatio | 0.023 | |
| 93.75% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1600 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 62.50% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1600 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | word | "carried the weight" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "flicked" | | 4 | "unspoken" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "traced" | | 7 | "furrowing" | | 8 | "carried the weight" | | 9 | "tension" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 126 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.51% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 126 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 199 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 47 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 11 | | markdownWords | 31 | | totalWords | 1592 | | ratio | 0.019 | | matches | | 0 | "This is your stage now." | | 1 | "Old habits." | | 2 | "us" | | 3 | "I" | | 4 | "own" | | 5 | "Sorry I screamed at you. Sorry I grabbed your wrist. Sorry I made you feel small." | | 6 | "see" | | 7 | "this" | | 8 | "anyone" | | 9 | "mum" | | 10 | "are" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 22 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 38 | | wordCount | 1031 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.16 | | worstName | "Evan" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Evan" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Rory | 10 | | Silas | 8 | | Evan | 12 | | Cardiff | 3 | | Carter | 1 | | London | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Nest" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Evan" | | 5 | "Carter" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.918 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 84.21% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "something between amusement and disbelief" | | 1 | "as if reminding her that some things were always there, even when you weren’t looking" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1592 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 199 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 100 | | mean | 15.92 | | std | 13.61 | | cv | 0.855 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 61 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 41 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 36 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 32 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 1 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 57 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 39 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 29 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 33 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 38 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 32 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 210 | | matches | | |
| 42.35% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 199 | | ratio | 0.035 | | matches | | 0 | "Five years, and there it was—her name in his mouth, like she’d never changed it, never run." | | 1 | "But his eyes—those were the same." | | 2 | "Close enough that she could smell the faint scent of his cologne—something woodsy, expensive." | | 3 | "His signet ring glinted under the lamplight—a silver raven in flight." | | 4 | "But she’d spent too many nights practising this—how to be still, how to not let the past show on her face." | | 5 | "But the scars—physical and otherwise—didn’t fade that easily." | | 6 | "She studied him—the lines around his eyes, the way his shoulders carried the weight of something she couldn’t name." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 514 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 19 | | adverbRatio | 0.03696498054474708 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0019455252918287938 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 199 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 199 | | mean | 8 | | std | 6.57 | | cv | 0.821 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 26 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 47.24% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 16 | | diversityRatio | 0.3316582914572864 | | totalSentences | 199 | | uniqueOpeners | 66 | |
| 90.09% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "Dark, intense, the kind that" | | 1 | "Maybe he had changed." | | 2 | "Maybe time had sanded down" |
| | ratio | 0.027 | |
| 50.63% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 47 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "She slid onto a stool" | | 1 | "She rolled her shoulders, the" | | 2 | "She reached for the bowl" | | 3 | "She knew that voice." | | 4 | "She didn’t turn." | | 5 | "Her breath hitched." | | 6 | "she said, and it came" | | 7 | "He took a step forward," | | 8 | "She crossed her arms." | | 9 | "He moved to the bar," | | 10 | "He set the glass in" | | 11 | "She almost laughed." | | 12 | "He shook his head." | | 13 | "He swirled the whiskey" | | 14 | "She hadn’t ordered yet." | | 15 | "His fingers tightened around the" | | 16 | "She waited, but he didn’t" | | 17 | "She shook her head." | | 18 | "He poured it, sliding the" | | 19 | "His signet ring glinted under" |
| | ratio | 0.423 | |
| 59.10% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 89 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "The green neon sign of" | | 1 | "The bar’s usual hum of" | | 2 | "She slid onto a stool" | | 3 | "Silas looked up from polishing" | | 4 | "She rolled her shoulders, the" | | 5 | "A low chuckle rumbled from" | | 6 | "She reached for the bowl" | | 7 | "The bar’s walls, lined with" | | 8 | "The door swung open again," | | 9 | "Rory didn’t turn, but" | | 10 | "The voice was rough, edged" | | 11 | "Rory’s fingers stilled in the" | | 12 | "She knew that voice." | | 13 | "She didn’t turn." | | 14 | "The name settled in the" | | 15 | "Her breath hitched." | | 16 | "Evan stood just inside the" | | 17 | "The sharp angles of his" | | 18 | "she said, and it came" | | 19 | "He took a step forward," |
| | ratio | 0.802 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "The bar’s green sign flickered again, as if reminding her that some things were always there, even when you weren’t looking." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "She reached, her fingers brushing the crescent scar on her wrist" | | 1 | "Rory didn’t, but Silas’ posture shifted, his grip tightening on the glass" | | 2 | "Silas asked, his voice neutral" | | 3 | "She turned, her blue eyes catching the light" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 86 | | tagDensity | 0.081 | | leniency | 0.163 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |