Run: 2026-09-25-01M3CKF9RPPSBWN0ZW7KDD7EB2

Run Details

Duration:
22.8s
Cost:
$0.018330
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest flickered as Rory pushed through the door, the weight of the evening’s deliveries still clinging to her shoulders. The bar’s usual hum of low conversation and clinking glasses wrapped around her like a familiar coat. She slid onto a stool near the far end, where the light from the brass lamps barely reached. Silas looked up from polishing a glass, his hazel eyes sharp even in the dim. “Late shift?” “Yu-Fei’s nephew decided today was the day to test my patience.” She rolled her shoulders, the scent of soy and ginger still lingering on her jacket. “Threw a tantrum because I wouldn’t let him ride on the back of my bike.” A low chuckle rumbled from Silas. “Kid’s got spirit.” “Kid’s got a death wish.” She reached for the bowl of peanuts, her fingers brushing the crescent scar on her wrist. The bar’s walls, lined with yellowed maps and faded photos, seemed to lean in, listening. The door swung open again, letting in a gust of cold air. Rory didn’t turn, but Silas’ posture shifted, his grip tightening on the glass. “Well, I’ll be damned.” The voice was rough, edged with something between amusement and disbelief. Rory’s fingers stilled in the peanut bowl. She knew that voice. Knew the way it carried, even after all these years. Silas’ eyes flicked to her, then back to the door. “Evan.” She didn’t turn. Not yet. The name settled in the air like a dropped coin, spinning. “Rory?” Her breath hitched. Five years. Five years, and there it was—her name in his mouth, like she’d never changed it, never run. She turned. Evan stood just inside the door, his coat dusted with rain, his face older than she remembered. The sharp angles of his jaw had softened, his dark hair threaded with silver at the temples. But his eyes—those were the same. Dark, intense, the kind that had once made her feel like the only person in the room. “Evan,” she said, and it came out steadier than she felt. He took a step forward, then hesitated, as if unsure whether to close the distance. “I heard you were in London. Didn’t think I’d find you here.” “Here” being Silas’ bar. “Here” being the one place she’d thought he’d never set foot in. Silas set down the glass and wiped his hands on a cloth. “You two know each other?” Evan’s gaze didn’t leave Rory. “You could say that.” She crossed her arms. “We could. But we won’t.” A muscle in Evan’s jaw twitched. He moved to the bar, sliding onto the stool beside her. Close enough that she could smell the faint scent of his cologne—something woodsy, expensive. Not the cheap aftershave he’d worn in Cardiff. “What are you drinking?” Silas asked, his voice neutral. “Whiskey. Neat.” Silas poured, his movements deliberate. He set the glass in front of Evan, then stepped back, giving them space. The unspoken message was clear: *This is your stage now.* Evan took a sip, his throat working. “You look good, Rory.” She almost laughed. “Liar.” He shook his head. “Not lying. You’ve got… I don’t know. A hardness to you now. Like you’ve seen things.” “People change.” “Yeah.” He swirled the whiskey. “They do.” The silence stretched, thick as the smoke from the cigarettes Silas pretended not to notice. Rory traced the rim of her empty glass. She hadn’t ordered yet. Hadn’t planned on staying this long. “What brings you to London?” she asked. “Work.” He hesitated. “And… other things.” “Other things.” “Family. My sister’s here. Needed a break from Cardiff.” Cardiff. The word hung between them, heavy as a held breath. The city where they’d met. Where she’d loved him. Where she’d left him. “You still practising law?” she asked. His fingers tightened around the glass. “No. Not anymore.” She waited, but he didn’t elaborate. The Evan she’d known had been all ambition, all sharp suits and courtroom dreams. The man beside her now had shadows under his eyes and a quietness that hadn’t been there before. Silas cleared his throat. “You want a drink, Rory?” She shook her head. “Just water.” He poured it, sliding the glass toward her. His signet ring glinted under the lamplight—a silver raven in flight. She’d asked him about it once. He’d just smiled and said, *Old habits.* Evan watched the exchange, his brow furrowing slightly. “You two close?” Rory took a sip of water. “Silas is my landlord.” “And?” “And a friend.” Evan’s gaze flicked to Silas, then back to her. “He knows about us?” She stiffened. “There’s no *us*, Evan.” “There was.” “There was.” She set the glass down. “Past tense.” He exhaled, running a hand through his hair. “I looked for you, you know. After you left.” “Didn’t look very hard.” “I went to your flat. Your parents’ house. Even your bloody university.” “And?” “And nothing. You’d vanished. Like you’d never existed.” She almost flinched. Almost. But she’d spent too many nights practising this—how to be still, how to not let the past show on her face. “I needed to disappear.” “From me?” “From everything.” He leaned in, his voice dropping. “Was it that bad, Rory? Was *I* that bad?” The question hung there, raw and jagged. She could lie. Could say yes, could let him carry the guilt like she’d carried the bruises. But the words stuck in her throat. Silas’ limp was more pronounced as he moved to the far end of the bar, giving them the illusion of privacy. The maps on the walls seemed to watch them, silent witnesses to a history neither of them wanted to voice. “You were,” she said finally. “And you weren’t.” Evan’s breath came out sharp. “What the hell does that mean?” “It means I was young. And stupid. And in love with the idea of you more than the reality.” His face darkened. “That’s bullshit.” “Is it?” She turned to face him fully, her blue eyes catching the light. “You were charming, Evan. Brilliant. The kind of man who made me feel like I could be more than just… me. But then there was the other side. The side that didn’t like it when I disagreed. The side that thought love was something you could *own*.” He opened his mouth, then closed it. His fingers whitened around the whiskey glass. “I never meant to hurt you.” “But you did.” “And you never gave me a chance to make it right.” She laughed, a short, bitter sound. “You think an apology would’ve fixed it? A bouquet of flowers, maybe? *Sorry I screamed at you. Sorry I grabbed your wrist. Sorry I made you feel small.*” His face paled. “Rory—” “No.” She cut him off. “You don’t get to do that. Not now.” The bar’s hum seemed to fade, the other patrons melting into the background. It was just them, and the years, and the things they’d never said. Evan’s voice was rough. “I changed.” “Good for you.” “I did. After you left… I saw a therapist. Started volunteering at a women’s shelter. I *see* it now, Rory. What I was. What I did.” She wanted to believe him. Wanted to see the remorse in his eyes and know it was real. But the scars—physical and otherwise—didn’t fade that easily. “Why now?” she asked. “Why come here, to *this* bar, after all this time?” He looked down at his drink. “I heard about your dad. The stroke.” Her chest tightened. Brendan Carter, her father, had suffered a minor stroke six months ago. She’d gone back to Cardiff for a week, had sat by his hospital bed and held his hand while he raged at the injustice of a body that wouldn’t obey. She hadn’t told Evan. Hadn’t told *anyone* in London. “How did you—?” “Your mum. I ran into her at the supermarket. She mentioned you were in London, working deliveries. I… I put it together.” Rory’s fingers curled into her palms. “You talked to my *mum*?” “She didn’t know about us. About what happened. I didn’t tell her.” “Generous of you.” He flinched. “I’m not here to fight, Rory.” “Then why *are* you here?” “Because I needed to see you. To tell you I’m sorry. To tell you I’m not that man anymore.” She studied him—the lines around his eyes, the way his shoulders carried the weight of something she couldn’t name. Maybe he had changed. Maybe time had sanded down his edges, just like it had hers. But some wounds didn’t heal clean. Silas’ voice cut through the tension. “Last call in ten, folks.” Rory glanced at the clock. Nearly midnight. The bar’s green sign flickered again, as if reminding her that some things were always there, even when you weren’t looking. She stood, her stool scraping against the floor. “I should go.” Evan stood too, his chair nearly toppling. “Rory, wait—” She held up a hand. “I’m not running this time. I just… need to think.” He nodded, slow and reluctant. “Can I see you again? Tomorrow?” She hesitated. The old Rory would’ve said no. Would’ve walked out and never looked back. But the old Rory was gone. “Text me,” she said. “If you still have my number.” A ghost of a smile touched his lips. “I do.” She turned toward the door, her black hair swinging against her cheek. The cold air hit her as she stepped outside, the London night wrapping around her like a second skin. Behind her, the door swung shut. She didn’t look back.
created_at"2026-09-25T15:38:18.269Z" 9/25/2026, 3:38:18 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences86
tagDensity0.186
leniency0.372
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.023
93.75% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1600
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
62.50% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1600
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"flicked"
count2
4
word"unspoken"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"furrowing"
count1
8
word"carried the weight"
count1
9
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"weight"
2"familiar"
3"flicked"
4"unspoken"
5"silence"
6"traced"
7"furrowing"
8"carried the weight"
9"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences126
matches(empty)
97.51% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences126
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences199
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans11
markdownWords31
totalWords1592
ratio0.019
matches
0"This is your stage now."
1"Old habits."
2"us"
3"I"
4"own"
5"Sorry I screamed at you. Sorry I grabbed your wrist. Sorry I made you feel small."
6"see"
7"this"
8"anyone"
9"mum"
10"are"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount1031
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.16
worstName"Evan"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Rory10
Silas8
Evan12
Cardiff3
Carter1
London2
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
4"Evan"
5"Carter"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
globalScore0.918
windowScore0.833
84.21% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"something between amusement and disbelief"
1"as if reminding her that some things were always there, even when you weren’t looking"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1592
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences199
matches
0"knew that voice"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs100
mean15.92
std13.61
cv0.855
sampleLengths
061
117
241
39
436
525
64
732
811
916
101
1122
122
1357
1411
1527
1616
1717
189
199
2039
219
222
2329
2411
254
2620
272
287
2933
307
316
322
339
3424
356
369
3738
389
396
4032
4111
4210
431
443
4513
466
472
489
4917
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences126
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs210
matches
0"weren’t looking"
42.35% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences199
ratio0.035
matches
0"Five years, and there it was—her name in his mouth, like she’d never changed it, never run."
1"But his eyes—those were the same."
2"Close enough that she could smell the faint scent of his cologne—something woodsy, expensive."
3"His signet ring glinted under the lamplight—a silver raven in flight."
4"But she’d spent too many nights practising this—how to be still, how to not let the past show on her face."
5"But the scars—physical and otherwise—didn’t fade that easily."
6"She studied him—the lines around his eyes, the way his shoulders carried the weight of something she couldn’t name."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount514
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.03696498054474708
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0019455252918287938
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences199
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences199
mean8
std6.57
cv0.821
sampleLengths
026
117
218
315
42
526
615
76
83
921
1015
1112
1213
134
1411
157
164
1710
1810
191
203
212
2211
231
243
252
2617
272
2817
2917
306
3117
3211
3315
3412
354
3612
3712
385
395
404
414
425
436
4411
4514
468
479
482
495
47.24% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.3316582914572864
totalSentences199
uniqueOpeners66
90.09% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences111
matches
0"Dark, intense, the kind that"
1"Maybe he had changed."
2"Maybe time had sanded down"
ratio0.027
50.63% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount47
totalSentences111
matches
0"She slid onto a stool"
1"She rolled her shoulders, the"
2"She reached for the bowl"
3"She knew that voice."
4"She didn’t turn."
5"Her breath hitched."
6"she said, and it came"
7"He took a step forward,"
8"She crossed her arms."
9"He moved to the bar,"
10"He set the glass in"
11"She almost laughed."
12"He shook his head."
13"He swirled the whiskey"
14"She hadn’t ordered yet."
15"His fingers tightened around the"
16"She waited, but he didn’t"
17"She shook her head."
18"He poured it, sliding the"
19"His signet ring glinted under"
ratio0.423
59.10% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount89
totalSentences111
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"The bar’s usual hum of"
2"She slid onto a stool"
3"Silas looked up from polishing"
4"She rolled her shoulders, the"
5"A low chuckle rumbled from"
6"She reached for the bowl"
7"The bar’s walls, lined with"
8"The door swung open again,"
9"Rory didn’t turn, but"
10"The voice was rough, edged"
11"Rory’s fingers stilled in the"
12"She knew that voice."
13"She didn’t turn."
14"The name settled in the"
15"Her breath hitched."
16"Evan stood just inside the"
17"The sharp angles of his"
18"she said, and it came"
19"He took a step forward,"
ratio0.802
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The bar’s green sign flickered again, as if reminding her that some things were always there, even when you weren’t looking."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"She reached, her fingers brushing the crescent scar on her wrist"
1"Rory didn’t, but Silas’ posture shifted, his grip tightening on the glass"
2"Silas asked, his voice neutral"
3"She turned, her blue eyes catching the light"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences86
tagDensity0.081
leniency0.163
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.6903%