Run: 2026-09-25-01M3CKFR6Y65G3KCFBZC5W91FX

Run Details

Duration:
16.7s
Cost:
$0.016292
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came just as Rory was wiping grease from her hands onto her jeans. Three sharp raps, then a pause, then two more. A rhythm. A code. Her fingers stilled. Ptolemy lifted his head from the pile of books he’d been using as a pillow, ears twitching. The flat was too quiet, the kind of quiet that hummed in her bones. She hadn’t heard that knock in over a year. Another set of raps, this time faster. Insistent. Rory exhaled through her nose, tossed the rag onto the counter, and moved to the door. The deadbolts were already locked—old habit—but she double-checked them anyway before pulling the door open just enough to see who stood on the other side. Lucien Moreau filled the doorway, his charcoal suit immaculate, not a crease in sight. The hallway light caught the platinum in his hair, the sharp angle of his jaw. His amber eye gleamed, the black one unreadable. He leaned on his cane, but the grip was loose, casual. Like he hadn’t just crossed half of London to get here. “You’re late,” she said. A smirk tugged at his lips. “I’m right on time.” She didn’t step aside. “I wasn’t expecting you.” “No. You weren’t.” His voice was smooth, the kind of smooth that made her teeth ache. He shifted his weight, the cane tapping once against the floor. “Are you going to let me in, or do I have to bribe the cat?” Ptolemy chose that moment to slink between her legs, tail flicking against her ankle. He eyed Lucien with the same suspicion she felt. Rory stepped back, but only because the cat was already weaving around Lucien’s polished shoes. “Don’t let him fool you. He bites.” Lucien stepped inside, the scent of bergamot and something darker—gunpowder, maybe—filling the space between them. He shut the door behind him with a click, then turned to face her. The flat suddenly felt smaller. “You’ve redecorated,” he said, nodding at the stacks of books that had spilled from the shelves onto the floor. “You’ve been gone.” That wiped the smirk from his face. His fingers tightened around the cane. “I had business.” “In Marseille?” “Among other places.” She crossed her arms. “You could’ve called.” “You stopped answering.” The words hung there, sharp as the blade hidden in his cane. She looked away first, her gaze landing on the chipped mug on the counter, the half-eaten plate of takeaway. Evidence of a life he hadn’t been part of. “What do you want, Luc?” He exhaled, a sound like a man bracing himself. “To talk.” “About?” “Us.” The word was a punch to the gut. She turned, putting the counter between them. “There is no *us*.” “There was.” “There was a lot of things.” She grabbed the mug, rinsed it under the tap with more force than necessary. “Then you left.” “I had to.” “You *chose* to.” His jaw clenched. The cane thudded against the floor as he took a step forward. “You think I wanted to? You think I enjoyed walking away?” She set the mug down with a clatter. “I don’t know what you enjoyed. You never told me.” Silence. The kind that pressed against her skin, heavy and suffocating. Ptolemy chose that moment to leap onto the counter, tail swishing between them like a metronome. Lucien’s gaze dropped to the cat, then back to her. “You’re angry.” “No. I’m *indifferent*.” The lie tasted bitter. “Liar.” She flinched. Not at the word, but at the way he said it—soft, almost fond. Like he knew her better than she knew herself. He took another step forward, close enough that she could see the flecks of gold in his amber eye, the way his black eye seemed to swallow the light. “You’re still wearing the bracelet.” Her hand went to her wrist without thinking. The silver chain was thin, almost hidden beneath her sleeve. A gift. A mistake. She yanked her cuff down to cover it. “Old habit.” “Or an old hope.” She scoffed. “You’re the one who taught me hope’s a fool’s game.” His expression darkened. “I taught you a lot of things.” “And I taught you a few.” Her voice was low, dangerous. “Like how to walk away.” The air between them crackled. His free hand flexed at his side, like he was fighting the urge to reach for her. “I came back.” “And?” “And I’m not leaving again.” She laughed, but there was no humour in it. “That’s not how this works. You don’t get to waltz in here after a year and declare that like it’s a promise.” “It’s not a declaration. It’s a fact.” “Facts don’t change the past.” “No.” His voice was rough. “But they can change the future.” She wanted to hit him. Wanted to kiss him. Wanted to scream. Instead, she grabbed the plate from the counter and scraped the leftover food into the bin. The clatter of the fork against the ceramic was too loud. “You’re delusional.” “And you’re stubborn.” “Says the man who just showed up unannounced after twelve months of radio silence.” He was quiet for a long moment. Then, “I was in Avaros.” The words hit her like a physical blow. Avaros. The demon realm. His father’s domain. She turned slowly, her back pressing against the counter. “You went *home*?” His nod was barely perceptible. “I had to settle things.” “And did you?” “Enough.” She pushed off the counter, her pulse hammering in her throat. “What the hell does that mean?” “It means I’m not running anymore.” “You were never running. You were *hiding*.” His cane hit the floor hard enough to make Ptolemy bolt. “And you were never honest about why it hurt so much when I did.” The truth of it burned. She opened her mouth, then shut it. The flat was too warm, the walls too close. She needed air. Needed space. Needed *him* to stop looking at her like he could see straight through her. She turned towards the window, yanked it open. The sounds of Brick Lane—distant laughter, the hum of traffic, the clink of glasses from the pub below—flooded in. She gripped the sill, her knuckles white. Behind her, his footsteps were silent. She didn’t turn, but she felt him stop just short of touching her. His breath was warm against the back of her neck. “Tell me to leave,” he murmured. She closed her eyes. The scar on her wrist throbbed, old pain flaring to life. “I should.” “But you won’t.” Her fingers dug into the wood. “No. I won’t.” A beat. Then his hand was on her shoulder, turning her gently. She let him. His touch was familiar, electric. His thumb brushed the crescent scar on her wrist, the one she’d had since she was a child. The one he’d kissed a hundred times. “Why now, Luc?” His other hand cupped her face, his thumb tracing the line of her jaw. “Because I couldn’t stay away anymore.” She wanted to pull away. Wanted to lean in. Wanted to pretend this didn’t matter. But the look in his eyes—raw, desperate—shattered the last of her resolve. “You broke my trust,” she whispered. “I know.” His voice was rough. “Let me earn it back.” Her breath hitched. The old wounds ached, but beneath them, something else stirred. Something dangerous. Something hopeful. She didn’t answer. Not with words. Instead, she reached up, her fingers curling into the lapels of his suit, and pulled him down until their lips met. It wasn’t gentle. It wasn’t sweet. It was a collision, a reckoning, a year’s worth of anger and longing poured into a single, searing kiss. He responded like a man starved, his cane clattering to the floor as his arms wrapped around her, pulling her flush against him. The kiss deepened, desperate and hungry, and for the first time in a year, she felt *whole*. When they finally broke apart, his forehead rested against hers, his breathing ragged. “Was that a yes?” She exhaled, her lips still tingling. “That was a *maybe*.” A slow, triumphant smile spread across his face. “I’ll take it.” Ptolemy chose that moment to leap onto the windowsill between them, tail flicking in disapproval. Lucien chuckled, low and warm. “Even the cat’s jealous.” Rory rolled her eyes, but she didn’t pull away. “He’s just smart enough to know trouble when he sees it.” Lucien’s grin turned wicked. “Then he’s in good company.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences70
tagDensity0.1
leniency0.2
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.41% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1416
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"slowly"
2"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.56% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1416
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"unreadable"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"jaw clenched"
count1
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"footsteps"
count1
6
word"throbbed"
count1
7
word"familiar"
count1
8
word"electric"
count1
9
word"tracing"
count1
10
word"shattered"
count1
11
word"resolve"
count1
12
word"searing"
count1
highlights
0"unreadable"
1"weight"
2"jaw clenched"
3"silence"
4"pulse"
5"footsteps"
6"throbbed"
7"familiar"
8"electric"
9"tracing"
10"shattered"
11"resolve"
12"searing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences126
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences126
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences185
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans8
markdownWords8
totalWords1407
ratio0.006
matches
0"us"
1"chose"
2"indifferent"
3"home"
4"hiding"
5"him"
6"whole"
7"maybe"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount1076
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.65
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rory4
Moreau1
London1
Lucien7
Ptolemy5
Brick1
Lane1
Wanted4
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Ptolemy"
places
0"London"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences78
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.711
wordCount1407
matches
0"Not at the word, but at the way he said it"
94.59% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount4
totalSentences185
matches
0"heard that knock"
1"chose that moment"
2"chose that moment"
3"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs84
mean16.75
std13.71
cv0.818
sampleLengths
031
140
28
341
459
54
610
78
842
923
1022
1134
1219
133
1416
152
163
177
183
1940
205
2111
221
231
2419
252
2623
273
283
2926
3018
3127
3212
337
341
3524
3634
3732
384
3912
4010
4116
4225
431
445
4531
467
475
4811
4941
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences126
matches(empty)
96.91% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs194
matches
0"was wiping"
1"was already weaving"
2"was fighting"
65.64% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences185
ratio0.027
matches
0"The deadbolts were already locked—old habit—but she double-checked them anyway before pulling the door open just enough to see who stood on the other side."
1"Lucien stepped inside, the scent of bergamot and something darker—gunpowder, maybe—filling the space between them."
2"Not at the word, but at the way he said it—soft, almost fond."
3"The sounds of Brick Lane—distant laughter, the hum of traffic, the clink of glasses from the pub below—flooded in."
4"But the look in his eyes—raw, desperate—shattered the last of her resolve."
99.58% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1087
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.040478380864765406
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005519779208831647
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences185
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences185
mean7.61
std5.47
cv0.719
sampleLengths
015
19
22
32
43
517
614
79
87
91
1016
1125
1214
1315
148
1511
1611
174
186
194
204
214
2216
2311
2415
2514
269
2715
287
2915
3014
315
3219
333
347
356
363
372
383
394
403
413
4212
4319
449
455
469
472
481
491
42.43% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.2810810810810811
totalSentences185
uniqueOpeners52
91.74% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences109
matches
0"Instead, she grabbed the plate"
1"Then his hand was on"
2"Instead, she reached up, her"
ratio0.028
21.83% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount54
totalSentences109
matches
0"Her fingers stilled."
1"She hadn’t heard that knock"
2"His amber eye gleamed, the"
3"He leaned on his cane,"
4"She didn’t step aside."
5"His voice was smooth, the"
6"He shifted his weight, the"
7"He eyed Lucien with the"
8"He shut the door behind"
9"he said, nodding at the"
10"His fingers tightened around the"
11"She crossed her arms."
12"She looked away first, her"
13"He exhaled, a sound like"
14"She turned, putting the counter"
15"She grabbed the mug, rinsed"
16"His jaw clenched."
17"She set the mug down"
18"He took another step forward,"
19"Her hand went to her"
ratio0.495
33.39% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount93
totalSentences109
matches
0"The knock came just as"
1"Her fingers stilled."
2"Ptolemy lifted his head from"
3"The flat was too quiet,"
4"She hadn’t heard that knock"
5"Another set of raps, this"
6"Rory exhaled through her nose,"
7"The deadbolts were already locked—old"
8"Lucien Moreau filled the doorway,"
9"The hallway light caught the"
10"His amber eye gleamed, the"
11"He leaned on his cane,"
12"A smirk tugged at his"
13"She didn’t step aside."
14"His voice was smooth, the"
15"He shifted his weight, the"
16"Ptolemy chose that moment to"
17"He eyed Lucien with the"
18"Rory stepped back, but only"
19"Lucien stepped inside, the scent"
ratio0.853
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He responded like a man starved, his cane clattering to the floor as his arms wrapped around her, pulling her flush against him."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences70
tagDensity0.057
leniency0.114
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.057
86.2032%