| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.1 | | leniency | 0.2 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.91% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1352 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "cautiously" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 14.94% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1352 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "vibrated" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "unreadable" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "reminder" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "resonated" | | 9 | "depths" | | 10 | "sentinels" | | 11 | "etched" | | 12 | "echoes" | | 13 | "pulse" | | 14 | "could feel" | | 15 | "amiss" | | 16 | "flickered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 106 | | matches | | |
| 88.95% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 106 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 133 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 26 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 4 | | totalWords | 1343 | | ratio | 0.003 | | matches | | 0 | "present" | | 1 | "alive" | | 2 | "shows" | | 3 | "hungry" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 70.91% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 56 | | wordCount | 1138 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.58 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 18 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Isolde | 16 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 3 | | Gluttony | 1 | | Nyx | 9 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Blade" | | 4 | "Nyx" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.709 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 83.33% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "something like curiosity" | | 1 | "symbols that seemed to writhe when looked at too long" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 2.978 | | wordCount | 1343 | | matches | | 0 | "no longer moss but" | | 1 | "not green but a deep, shifting blue, like the heart of a flame" | | 2 | "not the sky above but a swirling mass of stars, as if the cosmos itself had been c" | | 3 | "neither warm nor" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 51 | | mean | 26.33 | | std | 19.57 | | cv | 0.743 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 63 | | 1 | 34 | | 2 | 42 | | 3 | 39 | | 4 | 55 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 57 | | 8 | 43 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 63 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 52 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 36 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 32 | | 21 | 54 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 31 | | 24 | 54 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 53 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 64 | | 29 | 25 | | 30 | 41 | | 31 | 24 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 56 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 45 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 43 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 42 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 95.33% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "was woven" | | 1 | "been captured" | | 2 | "was—vanished" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 199 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 133 | | ratio | 0.053 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled different here—thicker, sweeter, as if the very breeze carried the scent of blooming things that had no name in the mortal world." | | 1 | "Wildflowers—violet, crimson, and gold—swayed in a breeze that didn’t stir the leaves above." | | 2 | "The moment she crossed, the air pressed against her skin like a lover’s touch—warm, insistent." | | 3 | "The trees here were different—taller, their trunks twisted into spirals, their bark shimmering faintly, as if dusted with starlight." | | 4 | "The stars within its depths swirled faster, forming shapes—a city skyline, a face she didn’t recognise, a blade flashing in the dark." | | 5 | "The vision—if that’s what it was—vanished, the pool returning to its still, starry depths." | | 6 | "The stars within it swirled again, faster this time, forming a shape—a doorway, arched and dark, its edges lined with fire." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1152 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.029513888888888888 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004340277777777778 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 133 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 133 | | mean | 10.1 | | std | 6.4 | | cv | 0.634 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 25 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 43.23% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.2631578947368421 | | totalSentences | 133 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she stepped onto the" | | 1 | "Then the path opened into" | | 2 | "Then, for a heartbeat, her" |
| | ratio | 0.031 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "they murmured, their voice like" | | 1 | "She pulled back, flexing her" | | 2 | "She didn’t walk so much" | | 3 | "She exhaled, watching her breath" | | 4 | "She crouched, running her fingers" | | 5 | "It was warm, almost feverish," | | 6 | "She reached out, plucking one." | | 7 | "It dissolved into motes of" | | 8 | "It tilted its head, regarding" | | 9 | "It paused at her feet," | | 10 | "She didn’t like debts." | | 11 | "She didn’t trust Isolde." | | 12 | "Its surface reflected not the" | | 13 | "She knelt, dipping her fingers" | | 14 | "She jerked back." | | 15 | "She turned back to the" | | 16 | "She could feel it in" | | 17 | "She ignored them, stepping closer" | | 18 | "Her breath caught." | | 19 | "She knew that door." |
| | ratio | 0.208 | |
| 12.08% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 86 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 1 | "Aurora stepped forward, her boots" | | 2 | "The air smelled different here—thicker," | | 3 | "Nyx shifted beside her, their" | | 4 | "they murmured, their voice like" | | 5 | "Aurora reached out, her fingers" | | 6 | "A faint hum vibrated beneath" | | 7 | "The crescent-shaped scar on her" | | 8 | "She pulled back, flexing her" | | 9 | "Isolde moved ahead, her silver" | | 10 | "She didn’t walk so much" | | 11 | "Wildflowers—violet, crimson, and gold—swayed in" | | 12 | "The colours were too vivid," | | 13 | "Aurora’s breath hitched." | | 14 | "The Heartstone pendant at her" | | 15 | "Nyx’s form solidified, their violet" | | 16 | "Isolde turned, her pale lavender" | | 17 | "Aurora ignored the question, stepping" | | 18 | "The moment she crossed, the" | | 19 | "The sounds of the park" |
| | ratio | 0.896 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 50.26% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stepped forward, her boots sinking slightly into the damp moss that carpeted the forest floor." | | 1 | "The air smelled different here—thicker, sweeter, as if the very breeze carried the scent of blooming things that had no name in the mortal world." | | 2 | "Nyx shifted beside her, their form flickering between solid and shadow, as if the grove itself tested their nature." | | 3 | "The trees here were different—taller, their trunks twisted into spirals, their bark shimmering faintly, as if dusted with starlight." | | 4 | "The light they emitted cast shifting patterns on the ground, as if the earth itself danced." | | 5 | "Around it, standing like sentinels, were more of the ancient oaks, their bark etched with symbols that seemed to writhe when looked at too long." | | 6 | "The Fae blade at her hip felt heavier, as if it, too, sensed something amiss." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.067 | | leniency | 0.133 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.067 | |