Run: 2026-09-25-01M3CKG3PHD8C17Z0RDRWBSEDB

Run Details

Duration:
16.0s
Cost:
$0.015331
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came just as Rory was wiping grease from her hands onto her jeans. Three sharp raps, then a pause, then two more. Too deliberate to be a mistake. She froze, the dishcloth still dangling from her fingers. Eva never knocked like that. Neither did Silas. Another knock. Insistent. Rory exhaled through her nose and tossed the cloth onto the counter. The flat was a mess—takeaway containers littered the coffee table, a half-empty bottle of wine sat open on the kitchen side, and Ptolemy had knocked over a stack of Eva’s research notes, scattering them like confetti. She didn’t have time for this. She padded to the door, the wooden floorboards creaking under her socks. The peephole showed a distorted, fish-eye view of the hallway—empty. Too tall for Eva, too broad for Silas. A shadow shifted. “Who is it?” No answer. Just the faint scuff of a shoe against the worn carpet. Rory rolled her eyes and undid the first deadbolt. “If this is another one of your pranks, Eva, I swear—” She pulled the door open. Lucien Moreau stood there, one hand resting on the head of his cane, the other tucked into the pocket of his tailored charcoal suit. The hallway light caught the platinum strands of his slicked-back hair, turning them almost white. His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—flickered over her with an intensity that made her skin prickle. “You’ve been avoiding my calls.” Rory’s fingers tightened around the door handle. Six months. Six months since she’d last seen him, since she’d walked out of that dimly lit bar in Soho without a word. Six months since she’d let herself think about the way his voice dropped when he was amused, or the way his cane tapped against the floor when he was impatient. “Yeah, well. Funny how that works.” He tilted his head, just slightly. “May I come in?” She should’ve slammed the door in his face. Should’ve told him to piss off, that whatever they’d had—whatever half-finished, half-broken thing it was—was over. But the words stuck in her throat. Instead, she stepped back, pressing her palm against the door to keep it open. Lucien didn’t wait for a second invitation. He stepped inside, the scent of bergamot and something darker, something like gunpowder, trailing after him. His gaze swept the room, taking in the chaos with a single, unreadable glance. “Eva’s not here.” “I know.” Rory crossed her arms. “Then why are you here?” He turned to face her, the cane tapping once against the floor. “We have unfinished business.” “No, we don’t.” “You left my jacket at the bar.” She blinked. “That’s it? You tracked me down for a bloody jacket?” A smirk tugged at the corner of his mouth. “Among other things.” Rory’s jaw clenched. She knew that tone. Knew the way his mind worked—layered, deliberate. He wasn’t here for a jacket. Not really. She gestured sharply to the armchair, the only clear surface in the room. “Sit. If you’re going to be a pain, you can at least do it comfortably.” Lucien moved with the grace of a man who knew exactly how much space he took up. He settled into the chair, the cane resting against his knee, his long fingers steepled. Ptolemy, who had been watching from the top of the bookshelf, let out a low, suspicious mrrow and slunk out of sight. Rory leaned against the kitchen counter, putting the width of the room between them. “Say what you came to say.” He studied her for a long moment, his gaze lingering on the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—old, faded, but still visible. “You look tired.” “Flattery won’t get you anywhere.” “It wasn’t meant to be flattery.” His voice was smooth, unruffled. “You’ve been working too much. Deliveries, the bar, Eva’s… projects. You’re spreading yourself thin.” Rory’s nails dug into her palms. “Since when do you care?” Lucien’s fingers twitched, just once. “Since always.” The words hung between them, heavy and unyielding. Rory looked away, her throat tight. She remembered the way he’d looked at her the night they’d met—like she was a puzzle he was determined to solve. Remembered the way his hands had felt, warm and sure, when he’d pulled her close in the back of that jazz club, his breath hot against her ear. And she remembered the way he’d looked at her the night she’d left. Like she’d betrayed him. “You could’ve called,” she said finally. “I did.” “You know what I mean.” He sighed, shifting in his seat. The cane’s ivory handle gleamed under the lamplight. “You didn’t answer.” “Because I didn’t want to talk.” “And now?” Rory pushed off the counter, pacing the small space between the couch and the coffee table. The floorboards groaned under her weight. “Now you’re here. In my flat. So talk.” Lucien’s gaze followed her, dark and assessing. “I need your help.” She stopped mid-step. “My help?” “There’s a job. Something… delicate.” Rory let out a sharp laugh. “Delicate. Right. And you came to me because?” “Because you’re the only one I trust to do it without getting caught.” The words hit her like a punch to the gut. She turned away, her fingers curling into fists. “That’s rich, coming from you.” “Rory.” She whirled back around. “No. You don’t get to just waltz in here, drop that like it’s nothing, and expect me to—” “Expect you to what?” His voice was low, dangerous. “Forgive me? Forget?” “You’re the one who lied.” Lucien’s jaw tightened. “And you’re the one who ran.” Silence. The kind that crackled, that pressed in on her chest until she could barely breathe. She wanted to scream. Wanted to throw something. Wanted to demand answers, to make him hurt the way he’d hurt her. But all she said was, “What’s the job?” A muscle in his cheek twitched. “There’s a relic. An old one. Stolen from a collector in Paris. It’s in London now, and it’s causing… problems.” “What kind of problems?” “The kind that involves dead bodies and missing persons.” Rory exhaled sharply. “And you want me to steal it back.” “No.” He stood, the cane tapping once against the floor as he straightened. “I want you to help me find it. Before someone else does.” She studied him—the way his suit jacket pulled slightly across his shoulders, the way his heterochromatic eyes gave nothing away. He was beautiful, infuriating, impossible. And he was standing in her flat, asking for her help like it was the most natural thing in the world. “Why me?” Lucien took a step forward. Then another. Close enough that she could see the flecks of gold in his amber eye, the way his dark eye seemed to swallow the light. “Because you’re the only one who ever saw me for what I am.” Rory’s breath caught. She wanted to look away, but she couldn’t. Not when he was looking at her like that—like she was the only thing in the world worth seeing. “And what’s that?” she whispered. His hand lifted, his fingers brushing a strand of her black hair away from her face. His touch was light, barely there, but it sent a shiver down her spine. “Someone worth fighting for.” The air between them was electric, charged with something she couldn’t name. Something she’d tried to bury. Rory’s pulse pounded in her ears, her skin burning where he’d touched her. She should’ve pushed him away. Should’ve told him to leave, to never come back. But the words died in her throat. Instead, she reached up, her fingers curling around his wrist. His skin was warm, his pulse steady beneath her grip. “You’re a bastard, Lucien Moreau.” His lips quirked, just slightly. “And yet, here you are.” She wanted to hate him. Wanted to hold onto the anger, the hurt. But standing there, with his hand still tangled in her hair, his breath warm against her forehead, she couldn’t remember why she’d ever tried to walk away.
created_at"2026-09-25T15:38:44.823Z" 9/25/2026, 3:38:44 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.075
leniency0.151
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.038
77.63% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1341
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count3
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"sharply"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
2"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
55.26% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1341
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"intensity"
count1
2
word"unreadable"
count1
3
word"jaw clenched"
count1
4
word"determined"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"down her spine"
count1
8
word"electric"
count1
9
word"charged"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count2
highlights
0"flickered"
1"intensity"
2"unreadable"
3"jaw clenched"
4"determined"
5"weight"
6"silence"
7"down her spine"
8"electric"
9"charged"
10"pulse"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
1"sent a shiver down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences104
matches(empty)
87.91% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences104
filterMatches
0"think"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences151
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1332
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
81.24% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount1018
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.38
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory14
Silas2
Ptolemy2
Eva3
Moreau1
Soho1
Lucien7
Six3
Wanted3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Silas"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Eva"
4"Moreau"
5"Lucien"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore0.812
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something like gunpowder, trailing after him"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1332
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences151
matches
0"knew that tone"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs71
mean18.76
std16.21
cv0.864
sampleLengths
047
13
254
333
43
513
620
75
855
95
1060
116
1210
1345
1437
153
162
179
1816
193
207
2112
2212
2322
2428
2554
2620
2725
285
2925
3011
317
3263
3317
346
352
365
3717
386
392
4030
4111
425
435
4414
4513
4623
471
4822
4912
95.14% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences104
matches
0"was amused"
1"was—was"
2"was determined"
90.71% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs183
matches
0"was wiping"
1"was standing"
2"was looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences151
ratio0.06
matches
0"The flat was a mess—takeaway containers littered the coffee table, a half-empty bottle of wine sat open on the kitchen side, and Ptolemy had knocked over a stack of Eva’s research notes, scattering them like confetti."
1"The peephole showed a distorted, fish-eye view of the hallway—empty."
2"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—flickered over her with an intensity that made her skin prickle."
3"Should’ve told him to piss off, that whatever they’d had—whatever half-finished, half-broken thing it was—was over."
4"Knew the way his mind worked—layered, deliberate."
5"He studied her for a long moment, his gaze lingering on the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—old, faded, but still visible."
6"She remembered the way he’d looked at her the night they’d met—like she was a puzzle he was determined to solve."
7"She studied him—the way his suit jacket pulled slightly across his shoulders, the way his heterochromatic eyes gave nothing away."
8"Not when he was looking at her like that—like she was the only thing in the world worth seeing."
89.23% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1034
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"half-finished, half-broken thing"
adverbCount47
adverbRatio0.045454545454545456
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.012572533849129593
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences151
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences151
mean8.82
std6.48
cv0.734
sampleLengths
015
19
26
39
45
53
62
71
812
936
106
1112
1210
138
143
153
162
1711
189
1911
205
2124
2215
2316
245
257
262
2721
2830
296
306
314
328
3316
347
3514
367
3716
3814
393
402
414
425
4312
444
453
467
472
4810
499
56.29% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3576158940397351
totalSentences151
uniqueOpeners54
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences95
matches
0"Too deliberate to be a"
1"Too tall for Eva, too"
2"Just the faint scuff of"
3"Instead, she stepped back, pressing"
4"Instead, she reached up, her"
ratio0.053
76.84% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences95
matches
0"She froze, the dishcloth still"
1"She didn’t have time for"
2"She padded to the door,"
3"She pulled the door open."
4"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
5"He tilted his head, just"
6"She should’ve slammed the door"
7"He stepped inside, the scent"
8"His gaze swept the room,"
9"He turned to face her,"
10"She knew that tone."
11"He wasn’t here for a"
12"She gestured sharply to the"
13"He settled into the chair,"
14"He studied her for a"
15"His voice was smooth, unruffled"
16"She remembered the way he’d"
17"she said finally"
18"He sighed, shifting in his"
19"She stopped mid-step."
ratio0.358
86.32% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences95
matches
0"The knock came just as"
1"She froze, the dishcloth still"
2"Eva never knocked like that."
3"Neither did Silas."
4"Rory exhaled through her nose"
5"The flat was a mess—takeaway"
6"She didn’t have time for"
7"She padded to the door,"
8"The peephole showed a distorted,"
9"A shadow shifted."
10"Rory rolled her eyes and"
11"She pulled the door open."
12"Lucien Moreau stood there, one"
13"The hallway light caught the"
14"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
15"Rory’s fingers tightened around the"
16"He tilted his head, just"
17"She should’ve slammed the door"
18"Lucien didn’t wait for a"
19"He stepped inside, the scent"
ratio0.747
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—flickered over her with an intensity that made her skin prickle."
1"Ptolemy, who had been watching from the top of the bookshelf, let out a low, suspicious mrrow and slunk out of sight."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He stood, the cane tapping once against the floor as he straightened"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.057
leniency0.113
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.038
82.1077%