Run: 2026-09-25-01M3CKGBT3C9XDJEJ2VQ8ZMGAZ

Run Details

Duration:
19.0s
Cost:
$0.017130
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest flickered as Rory pushed through the door, the hinge groaning like an old man clearing his throat. The bar smelled of aged wood and something sharper—whiskey, maybe, or the ghost of a thousand half-finished conversations. She shook rain from her jacket, the droplets scattering across the worn floorboards. The place was near empty, save for a few hunched figures nursing their drinks in the dim light. Silas looked up from polishing a glass, his hazel eyes catching hers in the mirror behind the bar. He gave a slow nod, the kind that said he’d been expecting her, though she’d never told him she was coming. She slid onto a stool, the wood smooth under her palms. “Quiet tonight.” “Or early.” He set the glass down, the clink sharp. “You’re not on shift.” “Day off.” She tapped her fingers against the bar, the crescent scar on her wrist catching the light. “Yu-Fei said I looked like I needed one.” Silas wiped his hands on a cloth, the signet ring on his right hand glinting. “And do you?” She exhaled through her nose, a half-laugh. “Don’t start.” The door swung open again, letting in a gust of cold air. Rory didn’t turn, but the hair on the back of her neck prickled. Footsteps—hesitant, like someone testing the ground before committing to it. “Christ,” a voice said, rough with disuse. “I thought I’d walked into the wrong place.” Rory turned. The man in the doorway was tall, his coat damp at the shoulders, his face lined in ways she didn’t remember. But the eyes—bright, sharp, like a bird of prey’s—were the same. She’d know them anywhere. “Evan.” He froze, as if the name had physically struck him. Then his mouth twisted, not quite a smile. “Rory.” Silas’ gaze flicked between them, his expression unreadable. He reached for a bottle, poured two fingers of amber liquid into a glass, and slid it toward her without a word. Evan stepped forward, shedding his coat. The years had carved him leaner, his once-broad shoulders now slightly stooped, as if the weight of something unseen pressed down on him. His hair, once dark as hers, was threaded with silver at the temples. “Didn’t expect to see you here,” he said. “Funny. I was about to say the same.” He glanced at Silas, then back at her. “You know the owner?” “Something like that.” Silas cleared his throat, low and deliberate. “I’ll give you two a moment.” He limped toward the far end of the bar, the slight hitch in his step more pronounced tonight. Evan watched him go, then took the stool beside Rory. The wood creaked under his weight. “You look…” He trailed off, as if the words had dissolved before he could shape them. “Older?” she supplied. A ghost of a laugh. “I was going to say the same.” She took a sip of her drink, the whiskey burning a path down her throat. “What brings you to London?” “Work.” He rubbed his thumb along the rim of an empty glass. “Consulting. Security stuff.” “Right.” She nodded, as if that explained everything. As if it explained why he was here, in this bar, in this city, after all this time. He exhaled, long and slow. “I heard about your dad. The stroke.” Her fingers tightened around the glass. “News travels.” “I’m sorry.” She shrugged. “He pulled through. Mostly.” Evan’s jaw worked, like he was chewing on words he couldn’t quite spit out. “I should’ve reached out.” “Yeah.” She didn’t look at him. “You should’ve.” The silence between them stretched, thick as the dust on the old maps lining the walls. Outside, the rain tapped against the window like an impatient finger. “You ever think about Cardiff?” he asked. “Every damn day.” The words slipped out before she could stop them. She took another drink, the liquid steadying her. “The university. The flat on Cathedral Road. The way the river looked at dusk.” His hands stilled. “I remember you used to drag me down to the bay. Said the salt air cleared your head.” “It did.” “Still does, for me.” She finally turned to face him, really face him. The years had etched lines around his mouth, his eyes. But there was something else—something brittle, like a man who’d spent too long holding his breath. “You left,” she said, quiet. “No note. No call. Just… gone.” He flinched, just slightly. “I know.” “Why?” Evan’s fingers curled into a fist, then relaxed. “I was a mess, Rory. You know that.” “So you ran.” “So I ran.” His voice was raw. “But I didn’t stop thinking about you. Not once.” She wanted to laugh. Or cry. Or throw her glass at the wall. Instead, she said, “That’s not the same as being there.” He opened his mouth, then closed it. The air between them was charged, like the moment before a storm breaks. “I know.” Silas returned, his presence a quiet anchor. He set a fresh glass in front of Evan, the liquid sloshing slightly over the rim. “On the house.” Evan nodded his thanks, but his eyes never left Rory’s. “I’m not the same person I was back then.” “Neither am I.” “No.” His gaze flicked to her wrist, to the scar she’d had since she was ten, when she’d fallen off her bike and scraped it against a rusted fence. “Some things don’t change.” She pulled her sleeve down, covering it. “People do.” He took a drink, his throat working as he swallowed. “I heard about Evan.” Her breath hitched. Of all the things he could’ve said, that wasn’t the one she’d expected. “What?” “Your ex. The one you left Cardiff for.” His voice was careful, like he was stepping through a minefield. “I ran into Eva last year. She told me.” Rory’s stomach twisted. Eva, her oldest friend, the one who’d helped her pack her bags and flee to London. The one who’d known the truth of what Evan had done. “And what else did she tell you?” “That he hurt you.” His knuckles whitened around the glass. “That you had to get out.” She looked away, her jaw clenched so tight it ached. “Why are you bringing this up?” “Because I need you to know I’m not him.” His voice cracked, just a little. “I never was. And I sure as hell ain’t now.” She wanted to believe him. God, she wanted to. But the past was a shadow that stretched long and dark between them. “You don’t get to decide that. Not after all this time.” He nodded, as if he’d expected that. As if he’d known, all along, that this was how it would be. “I just… I needed to see you. To say I’m sorry. For everything.” The words hung there, heavy and inadequate. She wanted to reach out. To scream. To pretend none of it had ever happened. But the years had built walls inside her, brick by brick, and she didn’t know how to tear them down. Silas’ voice cut through the tension, low and gravelly. “Last call.” Rory blinked, as if surfacing from deep water. The bar was emptier now, the other patrons long gone. The rain had stopped, leaving the streets slick and shining under the lamplight. Evan downed the rest of his drink and stood, his chair scraping against the floor. “I should go.” She didn’t stop him. At the door, he paused, his hand on the frame. “I’m at the Marriott on Park Lane. Room 712.” He didn’t turn around. “If you ever… want to talk.” Then he was gone, the door swinging shut behind him with a soft click. Silas wiped down the bar, his movements slow, deliberate. “You alright?” Rory stared at the empty glass in her hand. The whiskey had left a ring on the wood, a faint stain where the liquid had been. “I don’t know.” He nodded, as if that was answer enough. “He’s not staying long. Left his bags at the hotel. Flight to New York day after tomorrow.” She looked up, sharp. “How do you know that?” Silas’ lips twitched, just a little. “I know things.” Of course he did. The Spymaster. Always watching, always listening. She set the glass down. “I should go.” “Or you could stay.” He gestured to the ceiling. “Your flat’s upstairs.” She hesitated. The weight of the night pressed down on her, the ghost of Evan’s voice, the way his eyes had looked when he said her name. Silas didn’t push. He never did. Rory stood, her legs unsteady beneath her. “I’ll see you tomorrow, Silas.” He gave a single nod. “Tomorrow, then.” She made it to the door before she stopped, her hand hovering over the handle. Outside, the street was quiet, the neon sign buzzing softly overhead. She didn’t turn around. Didn’t look back. But for the first time in years, she wondered what might’ve been. And that was enough to keep her standing there, caught between the past and the present, for a long, long time.
created_at"2026-09-25T15:38:53.142Z" 9/25/2026, 3:38:53 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"His knuckles whitened around [around]"
1"His voice cracked just [just]"
dialogueSentences78
tagDensity0.244
leniency0.487
rawRatio0.105
effectiveRatio0.051
83.53% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1518
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count3
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.59% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1518
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"glinting"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"flicked"
count2
4
word"unreadable"
count1
5
word"weight"
count3
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"etched"
count1
8
word"charged"
count1
9
word"stomach"
count1
10
word"jaw clenched"
count1
11
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"glinting"
2"footsteps"
3"flicked"
4"unreadable"
5"weight"
6"silence"
7"etched"
8"charged"
9"stomach"
10"jaw clenched"
11"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences117
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences117
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences177
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1514
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount1122
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.8
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Rory9
Silas7
Evan9
London1
Spymaster1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
4"Evan"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
57.41% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences81
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"not quite a smile"
1"quite spit out"
2"as if surfacing from deep water"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1514
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences177
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs82
mean18.46
std13.03
cv0.706
sampleLengths
074
139
213
314
426
518
69
735
815
92
1036
111
1219
1330
1442
158
168
1712
183
1931
2032
213
2212
2320
2415
2526
2612
278
282
296
3018
318
3227
337
3434
3521
362
374
3846
396
401
4116
423
4316
4423
4522
4626
4719
483
4933
99.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences117
matches
0"was threaded"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs208
matches
0"was coming"
1"was stepping"
78.29% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences177
ratio0.023
matches
0"The bar smelled of aged wood and something sharper—whiskey, maybe, or the ghost of a thousand half-finished conversations."
1"Footsteps—hesitant, like someone testing the ground before committing to it."
2"But the eyes—bright, sharp, like a bird of prey’s—were the same."
3"But there was something else—something brittle, like a man who’d spent too long holding his breath."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount480
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.025
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0020833333333333333
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences177
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences177
mean8.55
std5.81
cv0.679
sampleLengths
025
118
213
318
418
521
611
72
810
94
1018
118
1215
133
147
152
1612
1713
1810
197
208
212
2221
2311
244
251
2610
278
281
298
3022
316
3223
3313
348
358
368
374
383
397
4024
4110
426
4316
443
455
467
4715
485
4912
49.72% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3220338983050847
totalSentences177
uniqueOpeners57
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences108
matches
0"Then his mouth twisted, not"
1"Instead, she said,"
2"Then he was gone, the"
3"Of course he did."
4"Always watching, always listening."
ratio0.046
38.52% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences108
matches
0"She shook rain from her"
1"He gave a slow nod,"
2"She slid onto a stool,"
3"He set the glass down,"
4"She tapped her fingers against"
5"She exhaled through her nose,"
6"She’d know them anywhere."
7"He froze, as if the"
8"He reached for a bottle,"
9"His hair, once dark as"
10"He glanced at Silas, then"
11"He limped toward the far"
12"He trailed off, as if"
13"She took a sip of"
14"He rubbed his thumb along"
15"She nodded, as if that"
16"He exhaled, long and slow."
17"Her fingers tightened around the"
18"She didn’t look at him"
19"She took another drink, the"
ratio0.454
52.59% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount88
totalSentences108
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"The bar smelled of aged"
2"She shook rain from her"
3"The place was near empty,"
4"Silas looked up from polishing"
5"He gave a slow nod,"
6"She slid onto a stool,"
7"He set the glass down,"
8"She tapped her fingers against"
9"Silas wiped his hands on"
10"She exhaled through her nose,"
11"The door swung open again,"
12"Rory didn’t turn, but the"
13"Footsteps—hesitant, like someone testing the"
14"a voice said, rough with"
15"The man in the doorway"
16"She’d know them anywhere."
17"He froze, as if the"
18"He reached for a bottle,"
19"Evan stepped forward, shedding his"
ratio0.815
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences108
matches
0"As if it explained why"
1"As if he’d known, all"
2"To pretend none of it"
ratio0.028
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He gave a slow nod, the kind that said he’d been expecting her, though she’d never told him she was coming."
1"The years had carved him leaner, his once-broad shoulders now slightly stooped, as if the weight of something unseen pressed down on him."
46.05% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"He trailed, as if the words had dissolved before he could shape them"
1"She nodded, as if that explained everything"
2"she said, quiet"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences78
tagDensity0.064
leniency0.128
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.5322%