Run: 2026-09-25-01M3CKH4YBRS7DW1T5GWBGWXCG

Run Details

Duration:
16.6s
Cost:
$0.015466
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came just as the kettle began to whistle. Rory froze, the chipped mug halfway to her lips. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, uncurled from his spot on the windowsill, ears twitching. The flat was too quiet for visitors at this hour—past midnight, the curry house below long since closed, the street outside a hush of flickering lamplight and distant footsteps. Another knock. Firmer this time. She set the mug down. The tea inside sloshed, untouched. Three deadbolts stood between her and whoever was on the other side. She wasn’t expecting anyone. “Who is it?” Silence. Then, a voice—smooth, accented, unmistakable. “Open the door, Rory.” Her breath hitched. The mug slipped from her fingers, clattering against the counter. Lucien. She hadn’t heard that voice in six months. Not since the night she’d walked out of his office, his last words still ringing in her ears: *You’re making a mistake.* She pressed her palm against the door, as if she could feel him through the wood. “Go away.” “Not without talking to you.” Ptolemy wound between her legs, tail flicking. She scooped him up, more for her own steadying than his. The cat purred, oblivious. “There’s nothing to talk about.” A beat. Then, the doorknob rattled. Not forced—just tested, as if he were weighing his options. “You’re lying. To me. To yourself.” She clenched her jaw. Damn him. Damn that infuriating, knowing tone. She set Ptolemy down and marched to the door, flipping the first deadbolt with more force than necessary. The second followed, then the third. The door swung open before she could change her mind. Lucien stood there, impeccable as ever in a charcoal suit, the collar of his shirt undone just enough to suggest he’d been in a hurry. His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—locked onto hers. The cane was absent, but she knew it was there, hidden in the folds of his coat. Rain glistened on his slicked-back platinum hair, the scent of ozone and something darker, something like burnt sugar, clinging to him. He didn’t smile. Didn’t move. Just stood there, filling the doorway with his presence. “You look tired,” he said. She wanted to slam the door in his face. Wanted to. But her body betrayed her, leaning into the frame instead. “What do you want, Luc?” His gaze flicked over her shoulder, into the flat. “To come in.” “No.” “Rory.” “No.” She crossed her arms. The scar on her left wrist itched. Old habit—Evan’s grip had always been tightest there. Lucien exhaled through his nose, a sound like a man running out of patience. “Fine. We’ll do this in the hallway.” He stepped forward, crowding her space. She didn’t retreat. The heat of him seeped through her thin pyjama top, the scent of him wrapping around her like a memory she’d tried to bury. “You’re dripping on my floor,” she said. He glanced down at the puddle forming at his feet, then back at her. “Invite me in.” “Or what?” “Or I’ll stand here until you do.” She should’ve known he’d be stubborn. Lucien Moreau didn’t give up. Not on a deal. Not on a debt. And, apparently, not on her. With a sharp inhale, she stepped back, gesturing him inside with a sweep of her arm. “Five minutes.” He didn’t wait for the invitation to be repeated. He moved past her, his shoulder brushing hers, sending a jolt through her that she refused to acknowledge. The flat felt smaller with him in it, the walls pressing in. He took in the chaos—the books stacked on every surface, the scrolls pinned to the walls with knife-thin precision, the half-empty teacup on the counter. “Still living like a scholar with a hoarding problem,” he remarked. “Still dressing like a man who’s compensating for something,” she shot back. That earned her the ghost of a smirk. “You always did have a way with words.” She didn’t return the smile. “Clock’s ticking.” He turned to face her, the amusement fading. “I need your help.” The words hung between them, heavy. She’d expected a lot of things—apologies, accusations, maybe even a confession—but not this. Not a request. Lucien didn’t ask for help. He traded for it. He manipulated. He never *needed*. “My help?” she echoed. “There’s a job. Something… delicate.” His fingers twitched at his sides, as if he were resisting the urge to reach for her. “I can’t do it alone.” She barked a laugh. “Since when do you need a partner?” His jaw tightened. “Since the last one got me shot.” The humour drained from her. “What?” “A minor inconvenience.” He waved a hand, but the way his left arm favoured his side told another story. “The point is, I need someone I can trust. Someone who won’t stab me in the back the second things go sideways.” “And you think that’s me?” “I *know* it’s you.” She turned away, rubbing her temples. The flat was too warm, the air too thick. “You’ve got a funny way of showing it.” “Rory.” She whirled back. “No. You don’t get to waltz in here after six months of radio silence and expect me to just—what? Fall in line? Pretend nothing happened?” “Nothing *did* happen.” “Bullshit.” The word was out before she could stop it. Ptolemy, sensing the tension, slunk under the sofa. “You kissed me. Then you pushed me away. Then you *let me walk out that door* like it was nothing. Like *I* was nothing.” His eyes darkened. “You think I didn’t want to stop you?” “You didn’t.” “I *did*.” His voice was low, rough. “Every damn day since.” The admission hit her like a physical blow. She stumbled back, her hip catching the edge of the counter. “Then why the hell didn’t you?” “Because you were right to leave.” He took a step forward, then another, until he was close enough that she could see the flecks of gold in his amber eye, the way his black eye seemed to swallow the light. “Because I’m not good for you, Rory. Because the life I lead—it’s not one you should be part of.” “That’s not your decision to make.” “It is when I’m the one who’ll get you killed.” She wanted to argue. Wanted to scream. But the raw edge in his voice, the way his hands clenched at his sides like he was stopping himself from touching her—it stole the fight from her. “So what’s changed?” she asked quietly. “Nothing.” His throat worked. “And everything.” The silence stretched, thick with everything they weren’t saying. The rain outside had stopped, leaving only the distant hum of the city and the sound of their breathing. Finally, she sighed, running a hand through her hair. “What’s the job?” Lucien’s shoulders relaxed, just a fraction. “There’s a relic. An old one. Stolen from a collector in Whitechapel. I need to get it back before it ends up in the wrong hands.” “And you need me because…?” “Because it’s warded. Heavy magic. The kind that’ll fry anyone who touches it without the right counter-spells.” He tilted his head. “And you, *chérie*, are the only one I know who can read the damn things.” She wanted to refuse. Wanted to tell him to find someone else, to walk out that door and never look back. But the truth was, she’d missed this—the thrill of the hunt, the puzzle of ancient magic, the way her mind raced when she was up against something no one else could solve. And, God help her, she’d missed *him*. “Fine,” she said at last. “But I’m not doing this for free.” A slow, knowing smile spread across his face. “Wouldn’t expect you to.” She should’ve known he’d have an answer for that. Should’ve known he’d be ready for her. But as she looked at him—really looked at him, at the shadows under his eyes, the tension in his shoulders—she realised something else. He wasn’t just here for the job. And neither was she.
created_at"2026-09-25T15:39:18.869Z" 9/25/2026, 3:39:18 PM
model"mistralai/mistral-medium-3.5-20260430"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency854
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time16507
tokens_prompt1004
tokens_completion2073
native_tokens_prompt971
native_tokens_completion1868
native_tokens_completion_images(null)
native_tokens_reasoning0
native_tokens_cached0
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
num_fetches(null)
web_search_engine(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"stop"
service_tier"default"
usage0.0154665
router(null)
user_agent"langchainjs-openai/1.0.0 ((node/v24.21.0; linux; x64))"
http_referer(null)
request_id"req-1790350758-3cwQeHe79OLS7N7FBx7q"
session_id(null)
preset_id(null)
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1790350758-C6jilwLYD4LQw26vh13w"
upstream_id"11d6f5b5a7fd44e382bff14afe7e914a"
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"38ef23a9-5cb3-46fa-85ec-7aed174f04eb"
id"11d6f5b5a7fd44e382bff14afe7e914a"
is_byokfalse
latency834
model_permaslug"mistralai/mistral-medium-3.5-20260430"
provider_name"Mistral"
status200
total_cost0.0154665
cache_discount(null)
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"Mistral"
response_cache_source_id(null)
data_region"global"
workspace_id"97e315e5-d303-487d-83c1-83180e8a13d4"

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she asked quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.254
leniency0.508
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.034
96.27% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1341
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
62.71% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1341
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"footsteps"
count1
1
word"silence"
count3
2
word"could feel"
count1
3
word"flicked"
count1
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"tension"
count2
6
word"raced"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"silence"
2"could feel"
3"flicked"
4"echoed"
5"tension"
6"raced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her jaw"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences110
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences110
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"tried to"
2"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences153
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans9
markdownWords17
totalWords1326
ratio0.013
matches
0"You’re making a mistake."
1"needed"
2"know"
3"did"
4"let me walk out that door"
5"I"
6"did"
7"chérie"
8"him"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Finally, she sighed, running a hand through her hair."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount959
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.63
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Ptolemy"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy4
Evan1
Moreau1
God1
Lucien6
Wanted3
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Evan"
2"Moreau"
3"God"
4"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something like burnt sugar, clinging to him"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1326
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences153
matches
0"heard that voice"
1"out that door"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs70
mean18.94
std17.35
cv0.916
sampleLengths
061
15
226
33
46
54
644
718
85
922
105
1122
1245
1371
1414
155
1626
1712
181
191
2020
2154
227
2317
242
257
2624
2718
2864
2911
3012
3116
327
3312
3436
354
3627
3711
3810
396
4041
415
424
4323
441
4528
463
4742
4811
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences110
matches(empty)
11.68% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs177
matches
0"wasn’t expecting"
1"were weighing"
2"were resisting"
3"was stopping"
4"weren’t saying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences153
ratio0.065
matches
0"The flat was too quiet for visitors at this hour—past midnight, the curry house below long since closed, the street outside a hush of flickering lamplight and distant footsteps."
1"Then, a voice—smooth, accented, unmistakable."
2"Not forced—just tested, as if he were weighing his options."
3"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—locked onto hers."
4"Old habit—Evan’s grip had always been tightest there."
5"He took in the chaos—the books stacked on every surface, the scrolls pinned to the walls with knife-thin precision, the half-empty teacup on the counter."
6"She’d expected a lot of things—apologies, accusations, maybe even a confession—but not this."
7"But the raw edge in his voice, the way his hands clenched at his sides like he was stopping himself from touching her—it stole the fight from her."
8"But the truth was, she’d missed this—the thrill of the hunt, the puzzle of ancient magic, the way her mind raced when she was up against something no one else could solve."
9"But as she looked at him—really looked at him, at the shadows under his eyes, the tension in his shoulders—she realised something else."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount975
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.03487179487179487
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.005128205128205128
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences153
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences153
mean8.67
std7.22
cv0.834
sampleLengths
010
19
213
329
42
53
65
75
812
94
103
111
125
134
143
1510
161
178
1822
1916
202
215
227
2311
244
255
262
274
2810
296
304
312
325
3318
346
3510
3625
378
3817
3921
403
412
429
435
449
452
4610
475
489
493
48.37% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3333333333333333
totalSentences153
uniqueOpeners51
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences98
matches
0"Then, a voice—smooth, accented, unmistakable."
1"Then, the doorknob rattled."
2"Just stood there, filling the"
3"Finally, she sighed, running a"
ratio0.041
40.41% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount44
totalSentences98
matches
0"She set the mug down."
1"She wasn’t expecting anyone."
2"Her breath hitched."
3"She hadn’t heard that voice"
4"She pressed her palm against"
5"She scooped him up, more"
6"She clenched her jaw."
7"She set Ptolemy down and"
8"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
9"He didn’t smile."
10"She wanted to slam the"
11"His gaze flicked over her"
12"She crossed her arms"
13"He stepped forward, crowding her"
14"She didn’t retreat."
15"He glanced down at the"
16"She should’ve known he’d be"
17"He didn’t wait for the"
18"He moved past her, his"
19"He took in the chaos—the"
ratio0.449
82.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences98
matches
0"The knock came just as"
1"Rory froze, the chipped mug"
2"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, uncurled"
3"The flat was too quiet"
4"She set the mug down."
5"The tea inside sloshed, untouched."
6"She wasn’t expecting anyone."
7"Her breath hitched."
8"The mug slipped from her"
9"She hadn’t heard that voice"
10"She pressed her palm against"
11"Ptolemy wound between her legs,"
12"She scooped him up, more"
13"The cat purred, oblivious."
14"She clenched her jaw."
15"She set Ptolemy down and"
16"The second followed, then the"
17"The door swung open before"
18"Lucien stood there, impeccable as"
19"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
ratio0.755
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences98
matches
0"And, apparently, not on her."
1"And, God help her, she’d"
ratio0.02
95.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She pressed her palm against the door, as if she could feel him through the wood."
1"He moved past her, his shoulder brushing hers, sending a jolt through her that she refused to acknowledge."
91.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"His fingers twitched, as if he were resisting the urge to reach for her"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.068
leniency0.136
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.6263%