| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.273 | | leniency | 0.545 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.71% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1206 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 25.37% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1206 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 108 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 108 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 123 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1196 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 54 | | wordCount | 1028 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 2.33 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Tube | 1 | | Camden | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 24 | | Kowalski | 1 | | God-knew-what-else | 1 | | Eva | 17 | | Morris | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Market | 6 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Camden" | | 1 | "Harlow" | | 2 | "Quinn" | | 3 | "Kowalski" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Morris" | | 6 | "Market" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.333 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 68.03% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if searching for something just out of reach" | | 1 | "And, apparently, to those who stumb" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.836 | | wordCount | 1196 | | matches | | 0 | "Not after the case that had taken him and left her with nothing but questions" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 123 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 29.9 | | std | 22.66 | | cv | 0.758 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 90 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 70 | | 3 | 75 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 62 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 37 | | 9 | 49 | | 10 | 29 | | 11 | 60 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 58 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 45 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 54 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 58 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 37 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 41 | | 27 | 33 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 33 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 33 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 44 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 22 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 46 |
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| 82.52% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | 0 | "been dropped" | | 1 | "was frozen" | | 2 | "was etched" | | 3 | "were lined" | | 4 | "was hushed" | | 5 | "been moved" | | 6 | "was disturbed" | | 7 | "been dragged" |
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| 10.61% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 176 | | matches | | 0 | "was holding" | | 1 | "was bulging" | | 2 | "were glowing" | | 3 | "were closing" | | 4 | "was standing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 123 | | ratio | 0.065 | | matches | | 0 | "The beam of her torch cut through the gloom, illuminating the peeling posters on the walls—faded advertisements for long-forgotten plays and products, their edges curled like dead leaves." | | 1 | "But it wasn’t the body that made Quinn’s pulse spike—it was the lack of blood." | | 2 | "She tucked a strand behind her left ear—a nervous habit Quinn had come to recognize—and adjusted the strap of her worn leather satchel." | | 3 | "Eva’s “things” were usually the kind that made Quinn’s skin crawl—supernatural, unexplainable." | | 4 | "The needle swung wildly, then settled, pointing directly at a section of the wall that looked no different from the rest—just more peeling posters, more grime." | | 5 | "Quinn had heard whispers of it—an underground black market for the supernatural, moving locations every full moon, accessible only to those who knew how to find it." | | 6 | "The dust was disturbed, as if something—or someone—had been dragged." | | 7 | "The last thing she saw before the torch died was the compass needle, quivering, as if something had just stepped out of the rift—and it was standing right behind her." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1043 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 41 | | adverbRatio | 0.039309683604985615 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011505273250239693 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 123 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 123 | | mean | 9.72 | | std | 7 | | cv | 0.719 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 1 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 32 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 42.28% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.3170731707317073 | | totalSentences | 123 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 69.44% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a man, dead, with" | | 1 | "Then it stopped." |
| | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the worn leather" | | 1 | "She rounded the corner, her" | | 2 | "His face was frozen in" | | 3 | "She tucked a strand behind" | | 4 | "She gestured to the body" | | 5 | "She glanced up at Eva" | | 6 | "She reached into it and" | | 7 | "It twitched, restless, as if" | | 8 | "She stood, the compass still" | | 9 | "It couldn’t be." | | 10 | "Her mind raced." | | 11 | "She crouched, running her fingers" | | 12 | "She picked it up, turning" | | 13 | "She didn’t have to." | | 14 | "She looked down." |
| | ratio | 0.156 | |
| 69.38% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 75 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "The abandoned Tube station beneath" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over" | | 2 | "The beam of her torch" | | 3 | "She adjusted the worn leather" | | 4 | "Something was wrong here." | | 5 | "The call had come in" | | 6 | "Uniform had already secured the" | | 7 | "The station was too quiet." | | 8 | "She rounded the corner, her" | | 9 | "The body lay sprawled on" | | 10 | "A man, mid-thirties, dressed in" | | 11 | "His face was frozen in" | | 12 | "Eva Kowalski stood a few" | | 13 | "She tucked a strand behind" | | 14 | "The satchel was bulging, as" | | 15 | "Quinn said, her voice clipped" | | 16 | "Eva shrugged, freckles standing out" | | 17 | "She gestured to the body" | | 18 | "Quinn crouched beside the corpse," | | 19 | "She glanced up at Eva" |
| | ratio | 0.781 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "As if the place itself" | | 1 | "And, apparently, to those who" |
| | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 12.99% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "A man, mid-thirties, dressed in a rumpled suit that might have once been expensive." | | 1 | "But it wasn’t the body that made Quinn’s pulse spike—it was the lack of blood." | | 2 | "Not after the case that had taken him and left her with nothing but questions and a cold, gnawing certainty that the world was far stranger than she’d ever want…" | | 3 | "It twitched, restless, as if searching for something just out of reach." | | 4 | "The needle swung wildly, then settled, pointing directly at a section of the wall that looked no different from the rest—just more peeling posters, more grime." | | 5 | "The air that rushed out was cold, stale, and carried the faint scent of something metallic and old." | | 6 | "The shadows were closing in, the Market’s stalls fading into the dark." | | 7 | "The last thing she saw before the torch died was the compass needle, quivering, as if something had just stepped out of the rift—and it was standing right behin…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn said, her voice clipped" | | 1 | "Quinn’s skin crawl, unexplainable" |
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| 59.09% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Eva continued (continue)" | | 1 | "Eva pressed (press)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.136 | | leniency | 0.273 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.182 | |